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第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱
目 录
出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗
亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底
课时作业评价
主题写作 命题热点·追根教材
句子高级·表达脱俗
出彩句式
1.while引导状语从句
(1)while用作从属连词,引导让步状语从句,意为“尽管”。一般放在句首,而不放在句末。
(2)while用作从属连词,引导时间状语从句,意为“当……时候”。从句谓语动词必须是延续性的动词。
(3)while用作从属连词,引导条件状语从句,意为“只要”。
(4)while还可以用作并列连词,意为“而,然而”,表示前后意义上的对比或转折。
①The Internet is of great help to us.But I don't think it is a good idea to spend too much time on it.
→ , I don't think it is a good idea to spend too much time on it.
先学通
(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
While the Internet is of great help to us
②Every day we have the choice of building a fence or a bridge.One leads to separation and anger.The other leads to openness and friendship.
→Every day we have the choice of building a fence or a bridge.One leads to separation and anger .
while the other leads to openness and friendship
③只要我们紧密地团结在一起,就一定能克服这些困难。
We can surely overcome these difficulties .
④尽管我们不能预测未来会发生什么,但我们可以用决心和爱指引自己。
, we can guide ourselves with determination and love.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
while we are closely united
While we can't predict what will happen in the future
⑤当我们正在河中游泳时,看见一条鱼跃出了水面。
, we saw a fish jump out of the water.
While we were swimming in the river
2.It is believed that ...“人们认为……/据信……”
(1)It is said that ... 据说……
It is reported that ... 据报道……
It is hoped that ... 人们希望……
It is thought that ... 人们认为……
It is well-known that ... 众所周知……
(2)“It be+过去分词+that从句”可以改写为“从句主语+be+过去分词+不定式”。
①People think everyone should form good habits when they are still young.
→ everyone should form good habits when they are still young.
②It is believed that the invention will benefit the world.
→The invention benefit the world.
先学通
(通过句子变换把握句式特点)
It is thought that
is believed to
③人们认为保持均衡的饮食对我们的健康有好处。
It is believed/thought that keeping a balanced diet is beneficial to our health.
④据说,中国的汉字是仓颉(Cang Jie)发明的。
It is said that Cang Jie created the Chinese characters.
再写美
(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)
语段优美•彰显功底
亮点写法
1.赏用词之美
New ideas and values gradually replaced old ones from the Middle Ages.As a result, painters concentrated less on religious themes.They began to adopt a more humanistic attitude to life.
写法领悟:本段运用了gradually, replace, concentrate on, religious, adopt, humanistic, attitude等词汇,描述了画家们思想和创作主题的变化。首句和后两句构成因果关系,短语as a result的使用使得本段文字行文更加连贯。
2.赏结构之美
While painters as early as Da Vinci had used oil, this technique reached its height with Rembrandt (1606-1669), who gained a reputation as a master of shadow and light.
写法领悟:本句使用了While引导的让步状语从句,表达了尽管早在达·芬奇时代一些画家就使用油彩绘画,但伦勃朗将这种技艺发挥到了极致,强调伦勃朗在油彩绘画领域所取得的成就。who引导的非限制性定语从句,突出了伦勃朗的地位。两种从句的运用增加了句式的灵活性。
3.赏修辞之美
This painting, showing high mountains, trees, and houses covered in snow, was made with extraordinary skill.Though it is over 500 years old, it looks as fresh and full of life as the day it was created.
写法领悟:本段文字运用非谓语动词短语showing high mountains, trees, and houses covered in snow作定语,形象生动地说明了这幅画的内容,展示出这幅画的美以及所运用的高超的技巧。第二句运用了比喻的修辞手法,进一步对这幅画进行说明,表明了这幅画虽然历史悠久,但是依然鲜明如初,充满生机。
① , they kept moving forward, without anyone stopping.They were the ones , believing that hard work would lead to success.
尽管他们感到疲倦,但他们还是继续前行,谁也没有停下来。他们是那些为梦想奋斗的人,相信努力会带来成功。
针对练笔
(依据提示补全语段)
While they were tired
who fought for their dreams
② , it turned colder, and they were wearing thick coats in the chilly winter, with rosy cheeks.Their breath turned into white mist due to the cold, they were breathing out steam.
结果,天更冷了。他们在寒冷的冬天穿着厚外套,脸颊通红。他们呼出的气体由于寒冷而变成了白色的薄雾,看起来好像他们在呼出蒸汽。
As a result
looking as if
命题热点•追根教材
主题写作
本单元主题是“艺术”,属于人与社会的主题语境。高考在设题时通常以通知、邀请信、投稿等载体考查绘画艺术、画展推介、绘画摄影展、艺术家介绍等内容,旨在引导学生了解艺术的价值和意义、学会欣赏艺术作品,体会艺术的魅力,激发学生对艺术的热爱,让艺术滋养他们的心灵,培养他们的艺术审美能力。
命题导向
(一)艺术的重要性
1.enrich the spiritual world 丰富精神世界
2.develop critical thinking 培养批判性思维
3.feel the unique beauty of Chinese paintings
感受中国画独特的美
构建语义场
4.improve the ability to understand and appreciate painting
提高理解和欣赏绘画的能力
5.have a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting
通晓中国传统绘画
6.The creation of art can inspire empathy, understanding, and connection between people of different backgrounds and perspectives.
艺术创作可以激发不同背景和视角的人之间的同理心、理解和联系。
7.Learning Chinese paintings, you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture and improve your drawing skills.
学习中国画,你可以更好地了解中国文化,提高自己的绘画技巧。
(二)艺术作品介绍
1.depict vivid scenes 描绘逼真的景色
2.have/with a history of over 1,000 years
有一千多年的历史
3.make a tremendous visual impact
造成巨大的视觉冲击
4.The colors of the painting look gentle.
这幅画的颜色看起来很柔和。
5.The Qingming Scroll provides a comprehensive look at life then, which appears peaceful and cheerful.
《清明上河图》提供了一个全面的视角来看待当时的生活,那时的生活显得平静而愉快。
6.Chinese New Year paintings consist of a variety of subjects, such as historical stories, harvests, flowers and birds.
中国的年画题材丰富多彩,如历史故事、丰收、花鸟等。
7.The paintings reflect traditional Chinese culture, the theme of which is the harmony between human and nature.
这些画反映了中国传统文化,主题是人与自然的和谐共处。
8.This painting, showing high mountains, trees, and houses covered in snow, was made with extraordinary skill.Though it is over 500 years old, it looks as fresh and full of life as the day it was created.
这幅画作运用非凡的技巧,展现了被白雪覆盖的高山、树木和房屋。虽然它已经有500多年的历史了,但它看起来仍然与它诞生之日一样栩栩如生、充满生机。
(三)艺术展/比赛的介绍
1.range ...from ...to 范围从……到……
2.traditional Chinese painting contest
中国画比赛
3.trace the development of the art history
追溯艺术史的发展
4.submit entries 提交参赛作品
5.sign up for the exhibition 报名参加展览
6.With the Chinese New Year approaching, an exhibition on Chinese paintings will be held in the Art Museum of our city next weekend.
随着中国新年的临近,下周末我市美术馆将举办一场中国画展览。
7.A famous artist will be invited to teach Chinese painting skill, after which many students will submit their works and exchange ideas.
将邀请一位著名艺术家教授中国画技巧,之后许多学生将提交他们的作品并交换意见。
(四)艺术家
1.make a significant breakthrough in his paintings
他的绘画有重大的突破
2.an influential painter 一位有影响力的画家
3.have a good reputation 有好名声
4.one of outstanding representative of contemporary artists
当代艺术家的一位杰出代表
5.bring his paintings to life 使他的绘画鲜活起来
6.a master of both oils and Chinese ink
一位精通油画和水墨画的大师
7.create a new form of art 创造一种新的艺术形式
8.Besides, Zhang Zeduan's precise brushwork is perhaps the most impressive.
此外,张择端的工笔也许是最令人印象深刻的。
写作任务——基础写作的建模训练
[题目] 为了激发交换生对中国传统文化的学习热情,你校将组织校内交换生参观中国画展。假定你是学生会主席李华,请用英语写一则通知,告知具体事项。要点如下:
1.展览的时间、地点;2.展览的内容;3.注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
平时勤练笔
[构思与要点表达]
第一部分:通知参观中国画展
[头脑风暴] 通知类写作开头句的不同表达:
为了弘扬中国传统文化,我们学校将组织交换生参观中国画展。
①_________________________________________, our school is _________________________________________________the Chinese Painting Exhibition.(in order to; organize)
In order to promote traditional Chinese culture
to organize the exchange students to pay a visit to
②_________________________________________, our school is __________________________________________the Chinese Painting Exhibition.(aim to; arrange)
Aiming to promote traditional Chinese culture
to arrange for the exchange students to visit
第二部分:展览的时间、地点及内容
要点1:展览的时间和地点
[从教材中学] “From Shang to Qing: Chinese Art Through the Ages” will run until November 25.Opening hours are from 9:00 a.m.to 5:00 p.m., from Tuesday to Sunday (the museum is closed on Mondays).
[到写作中用] 展览将于2月20日至3月20日在艺术博物馆举行,它坐落于我们城市的中心。
The exhibition will run from February 20 to March 20 in the Art Museum, which is located in the center of our city.
要点2:展览的内容
[从教材中学] The highlight of this exhibition is the painting Clearing After Snow on a Mountain Pass, one of the great works of Tang Yin (1470-1524).
[到写作中用] 这次的展览最精彩的部分是宋朝的水墨画,很值得欣赏。它们会让你们对中国传统文化有深入的了解。
is the ink wash paintings from the Song Dynasty, .They will allow you to traditional Chinese culture.
The highlight of the exhibition
which are well worthy to be appreciated
have a deep insight into
第三部分:注意事项
[从教材中学] No photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
[到写作中用] 我们将于2月25日下午2点在学校门口集合,校车将把我们送到那里。请记住,博物馆内禁止拍照、携带食物和饮料。
We are at 2:00 p.m., February 25 and the school bus will take us there._____________________________ _____________________________________.
to gather at the school gate
Keep in mind that no photos or
food and drink are allowed in the museum
[衔接与逻辑成篇]
运用补加、过渡与衔接,将上述语句连接成篇
Notice
In order to promote traditional Chinese culture, our school is to arrange for the exchange students to visit the Chinese Painting Exhibition.
The exhibition will run from February 20 to March 20 in the Art Museum, which is located in the center of our city.The highlight of the exhibition is the ink wash paintings from the Song Dynasty, which are well worthy to be appreciated.They will allow you to have a deep insight into traditional Chinese culture.
We are to gather at the school gate at 2:00 p.m., February 25 and the school bus will take us there.Keep in mind that no photos or food and drink are allowed in the museum.
The Students' Union
主题表达升格训练
课时作业评价
Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子
1.(完成句子)The whole meal was good and __________________ ____________(尤其是汤极好).
2.(完成句子)His father (喜欢) hunting and fishing while his mother liked literature.
3.(完成句子)Exceptional gifts (使他与众不同) other sculptors of his generation.
the soup in particular
was fond of
set him apart from
was excellent
4.(完成句子)This new service economy (被赋予生命) by a combination of people, data and technology.
5.(完成句子)Even though our ages and backgrounds seem very different, (不可能) stop our friendship.
6.(完成句子) (即使我习惯于) traveling for business, I still get homesick if I am away from my home for more than a week.
is brought to life
it is impossible to
Even though/if I am accustomed to
7.(完成句子) (虽然它以美丽的风景而闻名), parts of the mountain are facing a problem: rubbish.
8.(完成句子)All through his life and aim was __________________ ______(创造更加美好的世界).
9.(句型转换)The water resource on the earth is believed to be limited.
→ the water resource on the earth is limited.
While it is famous for its beautiful views
to make a better
It is believed that
world
10.(同义句转换)In brief, my hometown is a good place, which is worth visiting.
→In brief, my hometown is a good place, which is .(worthy)
worthy to be visited/of being visited
Ⅱ.语法填空
(2024·娄底高三统考) While there are many painters I like, I would have to say that Wu Guanzhong is my personal favourite.There is something about his style that sets him apart from other 1 (paint).
Wu Guanzhong's painting style can be described 2 a mix of Western and Chinese painting traditions. 3 , his style is very modern; many of his paintings are 4 (strike) simple, but also very elegant.
Wu Guanzhong mastered the use of white space.My favourite painting is this one, 5 (call) Zhou Village, in 6 he used this technique very effectively.Like many of his other works, it's very stylish.Wu used 7 striking combination of black strokes and white space 8 (picture) traditional Chinese buildings in a water town.There is something beautiful and strange about the whitewashed houses in the painting:
they rise up like mountains.Perhaps he wanted to create an 9 (impress) landscape painting to represent a simple small-town scene.The river is in the foreground, and at its centre 10 (be) a small bridge.When you look at the painting, it is as if you were about to cross the bridge and enter another world.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。作者喜欢吴冠中的绘画,讲述了吴冠中的绘画风格和作品的独特的风格。
1.painters 考查名词。空处作介词from的宾语,应用名词;又因为other修饰复数名词,故填painters。
2.as 考查介词。be described as“被描绘成……”,是固定短语,故填as。
3.However 考查副词。根据语境可知,此处是转折关系,有逗号和主句隔开时用however;位于句首,首字母要大写,故填However。
4.strikingly 考查副词。修饰形容词用副词作状语,strikingly“显著地”符合语境。
5.called 考查非谓语动词。call与this one(指代painting)是被动关系,应用过去分词短语作后置定语,故填called。
6.which 考查定语从句。空处引导定语从句,修饰Zhou Village,作介词in的宾语,指物,应用关系代词which。
7.a 考查冠词。根据句意可知,此处泛指“一种醒目的组合”,用不定冠词修饰, striking的发音以辅音音素开头,故填a。
8.to picture 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构并结合句意可知,空处为不定式作目的状语,故填to picture。
9.impressive 考查形容词。修饰名词landscape用形容词作定语,故填impressive。
10.is 考查时态和主谓一致。and连接并列句,由前文的is和上下文语境可知,讲述客观事实用一般现在时;“at its center”置于句首,句子全部倒装,主语是a small bridge,故填is。
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣。你校将举办一场介绍中国艺术的讲座,请写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.讲座内容(介绍中国画、剪纸和京剧);
3.准备工作(简要了解一下相关知识)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Tom,
Here comes a piece of good news.
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Tom,
Here comes a piece of good news.A lecture on Chinese arts is going to be held in our school.Since you're obsessed with Chinese culture, I'd like to inform you of the detailed information.
The lecture is scheduled to be held at the Students' Hall at 2 p.m.this Friday.It covers a wide variety of topics on Chinese arts, including Chinese paintings, paper cutting and Peking Opera.I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from this lecture.By the way, knowing briefly about these topics on the Internet in advance would be quite helpful.
If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
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