选择性必修第二册 Unit 4 Journey Across a Vast Land 第2课时（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（人教版2019）

第2课时——强化表达功·写作短板的专项补弱 目 录 出彩句式 句子高级·表达脱俗 亮点写法 语段优美·彰显功底 课时作业评价 主题写作 命题热点·追根教材 句子高级·表达脱俗 出彩句式 (2)rather than为并列连词，表示选择，意为“而不是”。它通常用在平行结构中，连接两个并列的句子成分，即rather than 前后两部分在成分和形式上应该保持一致。 (3)rather than连接两个名词或代词作主语时，谓语动词的数与rather than前面的名词或代词在数上保持一致，即语法一致原则。 (单句语法填空) ①Most people would agree that nuclear science should be developed to benefit human beings rather than (harm) them. ②Lucy is fond of going shopping rather than (stay) at home on weekends. ③You, rather than your colleague, (be) to blame for the accident. 先学通 (通过题点训练把握用法规则) harm staying are ④当你面临挑战时，试着把注意力集中在实际问题上，而不是你对它的感受。 When you're facing a challenge, try to focus on the actual problem . 再写美 (通过句子仿写做到运用自如) rather than how you feel about it ⑤尽管面对许多巨大的困难，但我宁愿失败也不愿放弃。 →In spite of many massive difficulties, _______________________ ________. →In spite of many massive difficulties, _______________________ ________. →In spite of many massive difficulties, _______________________ _____________. I would rather fail than I would fail rather than I preferred to fail rather give up give up than give up 2．It is/was not until ... that ... (1)“not until ...” 结构常用于强调句型中，其结构为“It is/was not until ... that ...”。 (2)not until引导时间状语从句置于句首时，从句用陈述语序，主句用倒装语序。 ①I didn't notice the boy could see nothing until then. → the boy could see nothing.(倒装句) → the boy could see nothing. (强调句) 先学通 (通过句子变换把握句式特点) Not until then did I notice It was not until then that I noticed ②直到那时我才松了一口气，筋疲力尽但是十分快乐。 I breathed a sigh of relief, exhausted but delighted. 再写美 (通过句子仿写做到运用自如) It was not until then that ③直到最近，我才知道，一只小宠物可以成为一位无助母亲的一个很有帮助的助手。 Not until a little pet can be such a helpful assistant to a helpless mom. recently have I known that 语段优美•彰显功底 亮点写法 1．赏结构与用词之美 When the train arrived at the station, they took a taxi to Lake Louise, where the blue water literally took their breath away with its exceptional beauty. 写法领悟：本句运用了when引导的时间状语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句，两个从句的运用增加了句式的灵活性。同时运用了literally, took their breath away 以及exceptional等高级词汇，描写了“湛蓝的湖水美丽异常，摄人心魄”，强调了路易斯湖之美。 2．赏场景描写与结构之美 Looking at the beautiful scenery, they both agreed that it was the most awesome journey they had ever taken.In addition to seeing spectacular mountain peaks and forests，one highlight of their trip was being able to see many different creatures, including deer, mountain goats, and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. 写法领悟：作者运用了the most awesome journey，spectacular mountain peaks and forests，different creatures等词汇，描绘了她们所看到的美景——欣赏了壮丽的山峰和森林，看到了种类繁多的动物。同时，此处的描写中Looking ...scenery是非谓语动词作状语，agreed后的that引导的是宾语从句，they had ever taken是省略了关系词的定语从句。句式丰富，灵活多变，增强了表达效果。 ①I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, __________________________and visit a friend. 我在距离俄克拉荷马城约50英里的加油站停了下来，我计划在那里停下来拜访一位朋友。 针对练笔 (依据提示完成句子) where I was planning to stop ②Sometimes, only a little kindness can light something shining, . 有时候，只要一点点仁慈就能照亮一些闪光的东西，使世界更加美丽和谐。 making the world more beautiful and more harmonious 命题热点•追根教材 主题写作 本单元围绕“旅行”展开，属于人与社会主题语境。高考在应用文写作时通常以投稿、建议信、咨询信等载体考查景点介绍、旅游经历、导游推荐、旅游好处、旅行计划等内容，引导青少年不仅要读万卷书，还要行万里路，鼓励他们走进社会和大自然，深入了解客观世界和人类社会，磨炼意志，体味人生，在旅途中探求自我价值和人生意义。 命题导向 (一)景点位置、气候、面积 1．pleasant climate　　　　　 宜人的气候 2．be located at/in 坐落在 3．cover an area of 占地面积为 4．safe and comfortable environment 安全又舒适的环境 5．magnificent scenery 壮丽的景色 构建语义场 6．an awesome sight 惊人的景象 7．convenient transportation 便利的交通 8．The next day was clear and mild, and they were pleased to see the beautiful mountains looking out over the city. 第二天，天气晴朗，温度适宜，她们看到壮美的群山俯瞰着整座城市，甚是欣喜。 (二)名胜景观、特产特色、文化 1．special snacks　　　　　　　 特色小吃 2．delicious dishes 美食 3．numerous famous scenic spots 众多著名景点 4．a famous historical and cultural city 历史文化名城 5．be famous/known for 因……而出名 6．places of interest/tourist attractions 名胜古迹 7．traditional cultures and customs 传统文化和风俗 8．There's no denying that Wenchang chicken is a must-taste dish. 不可否认，文昌鸡是一道必尝之菜。 9．It enjoys great popularity around the world, not only for its good taste but also due to its rich nutrition. 它在世界各地广受欢迎，不仅因为它的味道好，还因为它的营养丰富。 10．Renowned as Paradise on Earth, Hangzhou is an elegant city with natural diversity and depth of history. 杭州被誉为“人间天堂”，是一座优雅的城市，具有自然的多样性和深厚的历史底蕴。 (三)旅游活动 1．take a pleasant hike　　 进行快乐的远足 2．take a boat ride 泛舟 3．see spectacular mountain peaks and forests 欣赏壮丽的山峰和森林 4．one highlight of their trip 他们旅行的一大亮点 5．pay a visit to 参观 6．Learning about your intention to go sightseeing in Hangzhou next week, I'm delighted to recommend some must-see sights to you. 得知你打算下周去杭州观光，我很高兴向你推荐一些必看景点。 (四)旅游评价 1．take visitors' breath away 令游客惊叹 2．leave a deep impression 留下深刻的印象 3．attract thousands of tourists 吸引了成千上万的游客 4．be bound to be an joyful trip 一定是场愉快的旅行 5．It would be a feast for the eyes. 将大饱眼福。 6．And among all the scenic spots, Yalong Bay is well worth visiting.Its brilliant landscape and fresh air will make you unwilling to leave. 在所有的景点中，亚龙湾非常值得一游。它灿烂的风景和清新的空气会让你不愿意离开。 写作任务——基础写作的建模训练 [题目]　假定你是李华，你的美国网友Nancy打算今年暑假来安徽黄山旅游，来信询问一些黄山的基本情况。请你给她写封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．黄山位于安徽省南部，闻名中外； 2．黄山以奇松、怪石等著称； 3．黄山是中国画和文学的常用主题之一。 平时勤练笔 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：黄山 Mount Huangshan；奇松 uniquely shaped pine trees；怪石 breathtaking rocks Dear Nancy， ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua  [构思与要点表达] 第一部分：点明写邮件目的 [从教材中学]　Looking at the beautiful scenery, they both agreed that it was the most awesome journey they had ever taken. [到写作中用]　听说你将在暑假期间游览黄山，我真的很荣幸能向你简要介绍一下。 Mount Huangshan during the summer holiday, I feel literally honored to briefly introduce it to you. Hearing that you'll pay a visit to 第二部分：介绍黄山的情况 要点1：黄山的地理位置 [从教材中学]　Seen from the train window, the mountains and forests of Canada looked massive. [到写作中用]　黄山位于安徽省南部，是世界著名的旅游景点。 ，Mount Huangshan is a well-known tourist attraction worldwide. Located in the south of Anhui Province 要点2：黄山的著名景点 [从教材中学]　 1．It was not until 9：30 a m. that they finally reached the capital of Ontario, Toronto. 2．In addition to seeing spectacular mountain peaks and forests, one highlight of their trip was being able to see many different creatures, including deer, mountain goats, and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. [到写作中用]　正是奇松和奇石，使它闻名世界，具有吸引力。此外，你还可以在那里欣赏其他壮观的自然景象，包括令人惊叹云海和温泉。 ________________________________________________________make it world-famous and attractive. you can also ___________________________________there, the awesome sea of clouds and hot springs. It is uniquely shaped pine trees and breathtaking rocks that In addition enjoy other spectacular natural scenery including 要点3：与黄山有关的文化 [从教材中学]　There was frost on the ground, confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada． [到写作中用]　它是中国传统绘画和文学中最受欢迎的主题之一，赢得了国内外艺术家的高度赞誉。 It is one of the most popular subjects of traditional Chinese painting and literature, . winning high praise from artists both at home and abroad 第三部分：表达祝愿和期望 [从教材中学]　All in all, their trip from Vancouver to Toronto had taken a duration of four days. [到写作中用]　总之，黄山的美丽会让你叹为观止。我预计你一定会度过一段愉快的时光。 _________, the beauty of Mount Huangshan will_______________ ______. I anticipate that you______________________________. All in all take your breath away are bound to have a pleasant time [衔接与逻辑成篇] 运用补加、过渡与衔接，将上述语句连接成篇 Dear Nancy， Hearing that you'll pay a visit to Mount Huangshan during the summer holiday, I feel literally honored to briefly introduce it to you. Located in the south of Anhui Province, Mount Huangshan is a well-known tourist attraction worldwide.It is uniquely shaped pine trees and breathtaking rocks that make it world-famous and attractive.In addition, you can also enjoy other spectacular natural scenery there, including the awesome sea of clouds and hot springs.It is one of the most popular subjects of traditional Chinese painting and literature, winning high praise from artists both at home and abroad. All in all, the beauty of Mount Huangshan will take your breath away.I anticipate that you are bound to have a pleasant time. Yours， Li Hua 主题表达升格训练 课时作业评价 Ⅰ.根据要求完成下列句子 1．(完成句子)The ancient crafts often ___________________ (令我们惊叹)． 2．(完成句子)There (必定) be changes when the new system is introduced. 3．(完成句子)If I have improved in any way,__________________ (我把这全归功于你)． take our breath away are bound to I owe it all to you 4．(完成句子)He would like his son to be strong, _________________(而不是感到) that the illness was beating him. 5．(完成句子)He lies there,_________________________________ (眼睛望着窗户)． 6．(完成句子) (早晨向窗外看去), I found a world of silver white. rather than feel with his eyes looking at the window Looking out of the window in the morning 7．The children were deeply moved by the story and began to cry.(用分词作状语升级句式) → , the children began to cry. Deeply moved by the story 8．(句式升级)He didn't taste authentic Chinese cuisine until he came to China. → authentic Chinese cuisine.(升级为倒装句) → he tasted authentic Chinese cuisine.(升级为强调句) Not until he came to China did he taste It was not until he came to China that Ⅱ.读后续写 (2024·鞍山模拟)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Dad got me to play football when I studied in high school.I did enjoy throwing the ball around with friends, but I never thought I had what it took to play on a team.“I'm not a football player，” I told my dad. “You'll never know what you are able to achieve unless you give it a try, Sam，” he told me.So, I did.It gave me a strong sense of belonging and some confidence.I still remember how proud he was when I won some awards and the hug be gave me after I received my congratulation letter.There was no such game where Dad wasn't on the sidelines, cheering me on. Four years' pre-season football camps finally came down to my last game.I asked my dad to bring our video camera． I waved at my parents before the opening kick-off, and then put on my face seriously.I grabbed at the clothes of the opposing team's running back (跑卫) and dragged him to the field.Aloud cheer came from the sidelines.There was my dad with the camera, cheering crazily.By the end of the game, I had stopped seven players and a sacking (擒杀) — my best performance ever.I ran into my dad's arms.I was sweaty and smelly, but he hugged me anyway.I couldn't wait to watch the tape to experience every moment again. As soon as we got home, I took the tape out of the camera and played it on the TV screen.My dad, mum, sister and I sat down in the living room together in front of TV.I pressed the “Play” button, and the video started.The two teams, lined up before the game, then the running back taking the handoff(传球), running up to the line, me reaching out, and then ... the sky and clouds! I could hear my dad screaming “Way to go, Sam！” as images of the sky shook up and down on the screen. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 I moved forward closer to the screen to see the next big play.　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The tape ended and Dad was quiet.　________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： I moved forward closer to the screen to see the next big play.Strangely the sky and clouds kept rooted on the screen, but the noise on the field and the cheering shouts from my dad continuously ran through my ears.Suddenly I realized that Dad must have cheered so crazily that he dropped the video camera to the ground without noticing it.The final “Ya-hoo！” came as he gave me a big hug.Watching the sky and clouds, I just silently listened, and closed my eyes with my mind picturing what happened then. The tape ended and Dad was quiet. As Dad was uncomfortably shifting, I sensed the guilt in his heart.“I'm sorry，” he said.“I failed to record the whole game for you.” “No, it was your cheers that fueled my courage in that fierce football game.And it's the most precious part of the video.” I answered.Hearing my words, he smiled wider than ever before.During the incomplete tape, I found the haunting melody of the football game and my entire life. 1．rather than连接并列成分 (1)rather than常用的句型： 宁愿做某事而不愿做某事 $$