必修第一册 Unit 2 Section Ⅱ 句式、语篇与主题写作（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2025年高考英语一轮总复习（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅱ　句式、语篇与主题写作 目 录 课前晨背 多积词汇•强基扩容 课堂精析 聚焦重难•深化学习 好句好段•增分写作 课前晨背 Ⅰ. 教材经典句式的活用背诵 1．rather than ...“而不是……” 教材原句 I prefer to play sports with friends rather than exercise by myself, so football is perfect for me! 我更喜欢和朋友一起运动而不是自己锻炼，因此，足球是最适合我的！ 推荐佳句 ①(2023·全国甲卷书面表达)He cared most about the prosperity of his country rather than his own honor. 他最关心的是国家的繁荣，而不是自己的荣誉。 推荐佳句 ②(人教版选择性必修2佳句)Rather than travel by commercial airline all the way, they decided to fly to Vancouver and then take the train. 她们没有一路乘坐商业航班，而是决定先飞到温哥华，然后再乘坐火车。 2．This is because ...“这是因为……” 教材原句 This is all because I exercise quite regularly. 这全是因为我经常锻炼。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·全国乙卷书面表达)This is because I think mastering some basic living skills is important for us to prepare for our future life. 这是因为我认为掌握一些基本的生活技能对我们为未来的生活做好准备很重要。 推荐佳句 ②(人教版必修3佳句)This is because people believe in the importance of carrying on space exploration despite the huge risks. 这是因为尽管风险巨大，人类还是坚信太空探索极为重要。 3．It is/was time to do sth.“到了做某事的时间了” 教材原句 It's your time to shine. 你发光发亮的时刻到了。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·浙江1月高考写作)The evening glow spreading across the farm, it was time for us to say goodbye so we went to the parking lot together. 夜晚的光芒遍布整个农场，我们该说再见了，所以我们一起去了停车场。 推荐佳句 ②(外研版必修3佳句)And now, it's time to get up close and personal with one of history's greatest artists — Rembrandt！ 现在，是时候近距离接触历史上最伟大的艺术家之一 ——伦勃朗了！ 4．关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句 教材原句 As people often say, any exercise is better than none, but long-distance running in particular has a lot of benefits. 正如人们常说的，运动总比不运动好，特别是长跑有很多益处。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·全国甲卷书面表达)As we all know, Fan Zhongyan is one of the most influential figures in recognized Chinese historical figures. 众所周知，在公认的中国历史人物中，范仲淹是最具影响力的人物之一。 推荐佳句 ②(译林版必修1佳句)As Lao-Tzu wisely said，“A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.” 正如老子睿智的箴言所说的那样：“千里之行，始于足下。” 5．There are times when ...意为“有……时候” 教材原句 There will be times when you want to give up. 你会有很多次想放弃的念头。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·浙江1月高考写作)There are times when almost none of us know the plants before us. 有时，我们几乎谁都不了解我们面前的植物。 推荐佳句 ②No matter how bright a talker you are, there are times when it's better to remain silent. 不管你多么健谈，有时候还是保持沉默为好。 6．“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级含义 教材原句 Nothing gives one more satisfaction than realising that all the sweat and hard work were worth it in the end. 当你最终发现，所有汗水和辛劳都是值得的，没什么比这更令人满足了。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)To begin with, it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together intentionally rather than at random. 首先，如果不同英语水平的学生可以被有意而不是随机地组合在一起就再好不过了。 推荐佳句 ②(人教版必修3佳句)To a person nothing is more precious than their life, and if they entrust me with that life, how could I refuse that trust, saying I'm cold, hungry, or tired? 对一个人来说，生命是最宝贵的，如果他们把生命托付给我，我怎么能拒绝这种信任，说我冷、我饿、我累？ 7．with复合结构 教材原句 ... with the finishing line in sight all the cyclists began to speed up to cross it. ……随着终点线就在眼前了，所有的骑行者开始加速冲刺。 推荐佳句 ①(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face, he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance. 他立刻咯咯笑着，脸上露出灿烂的笑容，告诉我说他为我出色的表现感到骄傲。 推荐佳句 ②(人教版选择性必修3佳句)With so many different forms of poetry to choose from, you may eventually want to write poems of your own. 有这么多不同的诗歌形式可供选择，你可能最终会想要写你自己的诗。 Ⅱ. 单元主题佳句的集约背诵 对接单元主题——运动与健康 1．In order to be in good shape, a proper amount of regular exercise is quite necessary. 为了良好的健康状况，有规律的适量锻炼是相当必要的。 2．I recommend you to practice Tai Chi, a traditional Chinese sport, for practicing it regularly will help you stay healthy physically and mentally. 我建议你练中国传统运动——太极，因为定期练太极能帮助你保持身心健康。 3．Don't eat too much junk food, which does great harm to your health. 不要吃太多的垃圾食品，这对你的健康有很大害处。 4．The key to keeping fit is to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly. 保持健康的关键是健康饮食和定期运动。 5．Having realized the importance of doing sports, most of us begin to take a series of effective steps, thus bringing some positive changes. 意识到进行锻炼的重要性后，我们当中的大多数人开始采取一系列有效的措施，由此带来了一些积极的变化。 6．Sports teach us to accept challenges and face difficulties with determination. 体育运动教会我们接受挑战，坚定地面对困难。 7．Do more exercise and have enough sleep, and you will feel relaxed and energetic. 多加锻炼，保证充足的睡眠，你就会感到放松和精力充沛。 8．Not only does cycling build up our bodies but it also enriches our school life. 骑自行车不仅锻炼了我们的身体，还丰富了我们的学校生活。 Ⅲ. “续写”精彩语段的唯美背诵 “续写”系列背诵(一) 人物描写之神态描写 All of us stood there staring at the wonderful machine before us. None of us knew what to think of it. We all respected and admired the scientist, but this was something too impossible to believe. I looked over at Filby, who knew the scientist better than any of us, and was surprised to see him smiling. He turned to me and started to shake his head, saying softly, “What if he really has done it? What if this is all for real? Think about it！” 本段中的“staring at, respected, admired, looked over at, smiling, turned to, shake his head, saying softly”等动词(词块)，形象地刻画出了不同人物的神态和心理状态。其中“looked over at, turned to, shake his head”尤其表现出了“我”与菲尔比之间默契无声的传神交流。 高分悟道 常见的与“神态描写”相关的高分词块有： light up　　　　　　　 　 喜气洋洋 wear a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容 flush with embarrassment 尴尬地脸红 throw a curious glance 好奇地瞥了一眼 高分有招 “续写”系列背诵(二) 形体描写之“面” After a while, I felt something awaking me from sleep. It was warm breath hitting me right in the face. I slowly opened my eyes and saw a sweet-looking face covered in white and gold fur. Its pink nose was breathing on me, and its big, brown eyes were looking at me with love. I smiled and said, “Hello, Fluffy.” Suddenly my face was covered in dog kisses. I hugged his neck, petted his head, scratched his belly and laughed as he continued to shower me with his love. 本段中从“face, eyes, nose”等与面部相关的部位进行描述，形象地刻画了主人和宠物狗之间的温馨互动画面。同时，作者也运用了触觉、视觉、嗅觉和听觉等各种感官进行生动地描写。 高分悟道 常见的与“面部”相关的高分词块有： deep-set eyes　　　　　　 眼睛深陷 a hooked nose 鹰钩鼻 a double chin 双下巴 even teeth 整齐的牙齿 高分有招 发掘教材•强化表达 课堂赏析 1．It is/was time to do sth.“到了做某事的时间了” (1)It is/was time for sth./for sb.to do sth.意为“到了……的时间了/到了某人做某事的时间了”。 (2)It is/was (high) time that ...should do/did sth.意为“到了做某事的时间了”，相当于It is/was time for sb.to do sth.。 (3)It/This/That＋is (was)＋the first/the second/... time that ...表示“某人第一次/二次/……次做某事”。(注意：从句的谓语动词常用现在完成时或过去完成时，is与has/have done对应，was与had done对应) |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 ①It was time for David to prove his determination and courage. →It was time that David_______________________________________ . ②This is my first time to invite you to attend our program — “Talk and Talk”． →This is the first time that — “Talk and Talk”． proved/should prove his determination and I have invited you to attend our program courage |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③(2022·全国甲卷书面表达)现在，是时候呼吁我们周围的人们采取行动了，我相信我们的海洋将会更干净。 Now, , and I believe we will have cleaner oceans. it is time to call on people around us to take action ④由于这是这些孩子第一次亲自做实验体验科学，他们既兴奋又紧张。 As an experiment to experience science themselves, they were nervous as well as excited. it/this was the first time that these children had done (3)rather than用于连接两个并列成分；连接两个名词或代词作主语时，谓语动词应与rather than前面的名词或代词在人称和数上保持一致。rather than 放句首接不定式时通常省略to。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 (用rather than改写) ①In fact, humans are to blame for the damaged ocean environment instead of other animals. →In fact, for the damaged ocean environment. humans rather than other animals are to blame ②We want to experience a new lifestyle instead of living in the same way as our parents. →We prefer in the same way as our parents. to experience a new lifestyle rather than live |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③他没有责备我而是表扬了我的诚实，然后鼓励我向我们的邻居道歉。 , he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor. Rather than scolded me ④与待在家里无所事事相比，我更愿意在社区当一名志愿者。(一句多译) →I prefer at home doing nothing. →I would at home doing nothing. →I would rather at home doing nothing. to work as a volunteer in communities rather than stay work as a volunteer in communities rather than stay work as a volunteer in communities than stay 3．This is because ...“这是因为……” (1)This/That is because ...“这/那是因为……”，because引导表语从句，表示原因。 (2)This/That is why ...“这/那就是为什么……”，why 引导表语从句，表示结果。 (3)The reason why ...is/was that ...“……的原因是……”，表语从句常用that 引导。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 ①I prefer to learn English online, because there are plenty of materials online to help learn English. →I prefer to learn English online. _______________________________ . This is because there are plenty of materials online to help learn English ②None of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team.That was the reason. → none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. That was why |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)这是因为我经常被鼓舞人心的故事所感动，并从激动人心的消息中获得快乐。 by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news. ④那就是越来越多的人对中国传统文化感兴趣的原因。 more and more people are interested in traditional Chinese culture. This is because I often get touched That's why/That's the reason why 4．关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句 (1)as引导非限制性定语从句时，代替整个主句，对其进行说明，一般用于肯定句。 (2)as在非限制性定语从句中作主语、表语或宾语，且引导的从句位置比较灵活，可位于句首或句末，也可置于主句中间，通常均由逗号将其与主句隔开。as有“正如……，就像……”之意，当后面出现被动语态时可省略be动词，常用于以下句式中： as we all know/as is well known to all　　　众所周知 as is often the case 这是常有的事，通常 as is said/mentioned above 如上所述 as can be seen 可以看出 as is/was expected 按预期 as we expect 如我们所料 (3)as引导限制性定语从句时，常构成the same ... as ..., such ...as ..., so/as ...as ...等结构，在从句中既可以指人、物，也可以指整个句子。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 ①From the chart, we can see 18% of the students prefer to read English books. → , 18% of the students prefer to read English books. As can be seen from the chart ②Henry often forgot to bring his pen with him, which annoyed his teacher. →Henry forgot to bring his pen with him, , which annoyed his teacher. as was often the case |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③(2023·浙江1月高考写作)正如我们所预料的那样，一位植物专家被邀请来帮助我们认识周围的植物。 , an expert in plants was invited to help us get to know the plants around us. ④正如上面你提到的，我们应更进一步地关注产品的质量。 , we should further pay attention to the quality of products. As we had expected As you mentioned above 5．There are times when ...“有……时候” (1)在There are times when ...句型中，when引导定语从句，修饰先行词times。 (2)类似“表示时间”的句型还有： ①There/It was a time when ...“曾经一度(那时)……”； ②It be＋时间点＋when从句，表示“某个时间发生了某事”； ③It is/was＋时间状语＋that ...是强调句型，对时间状语进行强调； ④It be＋时间段＋since从句，表示“从某事发生以来有多久了”； ⑤It＋would be/will be＋时间段＋before从句，表示“还有多久某事会发生”。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 ①If this works, there may come a time and the number of monarch butterflies increases once again then.(改为定语从句) →If this works, the number of monarch butterflies increases once again. there may come a time when ②Our school is going to hold a speaking competition in five days.(强调时间状语) →__________________________________________________________ It is in five days that our school is going to hold a speaking competition. |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③你还需要一段时间才能感受到锻炼带来的好处。 you feel the benefit that exercise brings you. ④我清楚地记得，曾经有一段时间，湛蓝的天空、鸟儿的歌唱、月光和鲜花从来没有让我如此着迷过。 I can well remember that a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound. It will be some time before there was a time when 6．“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级含义 “否定词＋比较级”结构表示最高级含义，意为“没有比……更……的了；没有像……一样……的了”。常用的否定词有no, not, never, nothing, nobody, hardly等。英语中可表示最高级含义的结构还有： (1)否定词＋so/as＋形容词/副词原级＋as ...； (2)never/not＋enough/too ...“再……也不过分；越……越好”。 |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 　(用“否定词＋比较级”升级) ①This is the most glorious sunrise that I have ever seen. → _____________________________________________ ②We do believe that you are the most suitable for this competition. →We do believe that there is for this competition. I have never seen a more glorious sunrise than this. no one more suitable than you ③It is the best time to start taking positive action right now. → __________________________________________________________ There is no better time to start taking positive action than right now. |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ④我深信没有什么像勤奋和毅力一样对成功那么有价值。 I am greatly convinced that____________________________________ diligence and persistence. ⑤爸爸建议我们沿着这条河走，这条河可能会把我们带到农舍，看起来没有比这更好的选择了。 Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and . nothing is as valuable to success as nothing seemed better than this |先|学|通|(通过句子变换把握句式特点)　 (用with复合结构改写) ①As the College Entrance Examination is approaching，we are busy making full preparations for it. → , we are busy making full preparations for it. With the College Entrance Examination approaching ②I had no choice but to keep still and tightly close my eyes, listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin. →I had no choice but to keep still , listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin. with my eyes tightly closed |再|写|美|(通过句子仿写做到运用自如)　 ③随着越来越多的树木被砍伐，一些动物正面临着灭绝的危险。 , some animals are facing the danger of dying out. With more and more trees cut down ④(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷写作)听到我的话，大卫颤抖地转向我，泪水流出了眼睛，表示他已经下定决心完成越野赛跑。 Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly________________ _____________and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. ⑤所有的家务都需要做，我不能出去与朋友们一起玩耍。 I can't go out to play with my friends . with tears spilling with all the housework to do out of his eyes 1．赏结构之美 We loved basketball and were both huge fans of the NBA. When we weren't playing on the court which was next to our building, we were watching a game on TV. My favourite player was LeBron James. Paul's favourite player was Tyrone Bogues, a guy who played for the Charlotte Hornets, although we actually agree that they are both champions. 写法领悟：本段在第二句中使用了when引导的时间状语从句，其中含有which引导的定语从句修饰先行词court；第四句中a guy是Tyrone Bogues的同位语，补充说明他的身份，who引导定语从句，修饰a guy; although引导让步状语从句，其中还含有that引导的宾语从句。这几处的巧妙运用增加了句式的灵活性，使表达重点突出，表现了他们极其热爱篮球。 2．赏场景与用词之美 Paul jumped up and rushed onto the court. And clearly, all the extra hours that he'd spent practising alone paid off. The other team just couldn't keep up with his energy and speed. He made shot after shot, and the crowd couldn't stop clapping and cheering. 写法领悟：本段使用了jumped up, rushed onto the court, paid off, keep up with, made shot after shot, couldn't stop clapping and cheering等一系列动作描写，再现了一个精彩的篮球比赛的场景。 针对练笔 (补全语段并体会其中的动作描写) The players dribbled, ① , and ② with precision, their movements swift and flexible. The crowd ③ as the ball swished through the net. The scoreboard displayed a close score, adding to the intensity of the game. 球员们运球、传球和投篮都非常精准，他们的动作迅捷灵活。当球穿过篮筐时，观众们兴奋地欢呼。得分板上显示比分接近，增加了比赛的紧张感。 passed shot cheered with excitement [命题导向] 本单元主题是“运动与健康”，属于人与自我的主题语境，是高考写作常考的主题语境之一。高考在设题时通常以建议信、新闻报道、投稿、说明文等为载体考查学生理解和评价运动与健康的关系、谈论对运动的热爱以及对健康的理解等内容，引导学生理解运动对于身心健康的重要性，积极参加体育运动，学会与人合作，勇于承受压力和失败，树立生命在于运动的意识。　　 构建语义场 (一)运动对健康的重要性 1．be of great importance　　　　 非常重要 2．keep healthy 保持健康 3．remain energetic 保持精力充沛 4．enjoy the life 享受生活 5．be beneficial to the physical and mental health 对身心健康有益 6．As we all know, exercising on a regular basis can energize our body, so that our learning efficiency can be improved. 众所周知，定期锻炼可以使我们的身体充满活力，从而提高我们的学习效率。 (二)不良的身体状况 1．in bad shape　　　　　　　　 健康状况不佳 2．unhealthy eating habits 不健康的饮食习惯 3．lack energy/short of energy 精力不足 4．frequent muscle aches 频繁肌肉疼痛 5．disappoint sb./let sb. down 使某人失望 6．I once got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks and didn't take exercise regularly. 我曾经养成了吃很多垃圾食品和零食的习惯，并且不经常锻炼。 (三)健康的生活方式 1．enough sleep 充足的睡眠 2．exercise regularly 定期锻炼 3．lose weight 减肥 4．strengthen the muscle 强健肌肉 5．I will keep on exercising and have a healthy lifestyle. 我会坚持锻炼，保持健康的生活方式。 平时勤练笔 写作任务——基础写作的建模训练 [题目]　假定你是李华，学校网站的英语专栏正在开展“我的运动故事”主题征文活动。你打算投稿，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。 1．过去的身体状况； 2．改变的原因及现在的运动习惯。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 My sports story [构思与要点表达] 第一部分　介绍自己过去的身体状况 [头脑风暴]　表达过去的身体状况的词块： 1．花大部分空闲时间上网 _____________________________________________ 2．频繁肌肉疼痛　 ____________________ 3．精力不足 _________________________ spend most of one's spare time surfing the Internet frequent muscle aches lack energy/short of energy [连词成句]　I used to_________________________________________ on my phone rather than take exercise outdoors. I was troubled by . Besides, I was also . 我曾经宁愿花大部分空闲时间躺在沙发上用手机上网，也不愿在户外锻炼。我经常受到肌肉疼痛的困扰，而且精力不足。 prefer to spend most of my spare time surfing the Internet frequent muscle aches short of energy 第二部分　做出改变的原因 [从教材中学]　 1．The team gathered around, looking worried. 2．It's your time to shine. [到写作中用]　 1．我的老师发现我情绪低落，所以他和我交谈，给我一些关于如何保持健康的建议。 My teacher found me feeling down, so he talked with me,____________ . offering me some advice on how to keep fit 2．我意识到现在是时候做出改变并养成经常锻炼的好习惯了。 I realized that ________________________________________________ . it was time for me to make a change and get into the good habit of regular exercise 第三部分　介绍现在的健康状况 [从教材中学] 1．This is all because I exercise quite regularly. 2．...with the finishing line in sight all the cyclists began to speed up to cross it. [到写作中用]　 1．这是因为它不仅能促进身体健康，而且可以减轻我的压力。 2．在老师的指导和帮助下，我做到了。 This is because it can not only strengthen my health, but also relieve my stress. With my teacher guiding and helping me, I made it. [衔接与逻辑成篇] 运用补加、过渡与衔接，将上述语句连接成篇 My sports story I used to prefer to spend most of my spare time surfing the Internet on my phone rather than take exercise outdoors. I was troubled by frequent muscle aches. Besides, I was also short of energy. One day, my teacher found me feeling down and fed up with life, so he talked with me, offering me some advice on how to keep fit. I realized that it was time for me to make a change and get into the good habit of regular exercise.This is because it can not only strengthen my health, but also relieve my stress. With my teacher guiding and helping me, I made it. 2．rather than ...“而不是……” (1) 宁可做某事而不愿做某事 (2)other than 不同于；除了……外 or rather 更确切地说 more than 多于；不仅仅；非常 less than 少于 7．with复合结构 with复合结构的构成： with＋宾语＋宾补 注意：with复合结构在句中可作定语或状语。 $$