读后续写 心灵的蜕变：Jack的网络与现实之旅 讲义-辽宁省沈阳市省重点中学五校联考2023-2024学年高二下学期7月期末英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Oh, no!” Jack shouted while looking at the likes and comments on his recent TikTok video. “Why aren’t people reacting to my content as they used to?” Jack was a 19-year-old strong and muscular man addicted to the gym. He loved recording exercise videos and posting them on his TikTok account. Initially, his video logs (vlogs) were popular, but his posts’ reach soon decreased. Jack wondered why people had stopped sharing and liking his videos, “Maybe my audience is tired of watching me work out in the gym,” he thought, determined to change the location of his videos. The following day, Jack went to the neighborhood park and began filming while walking on the track.“Hi, guys! How about we shake things up a little? I’m to work out in the park today!” he said excitedly, looking into the camera lens (镜头). “Let’s look for a good spot to warm up,” he said as he walked towards a bench(长椅), on which sat an elderly lady. Jack thought the bench was the perfect place to film his video because of the light. He put his tripod stand (三脚架) on the bench and set the camera, but he felt like he needed the full bench. He wanted to place his camera where the lady sat, so he gestured to her to move, but the woman didn’t seem to understand. “Get out of my way!” he yelled.“Can’t you see I’m filming a video? You old fool!” Looking him up and down in surprise, the old lady didn’t argue over his disrespectful attitude and quietly walked towards another bench. Jack set his camera up, pressed the record button and waved at his followers, ready to demonstrate exercises. Suddenly, he tripped on a loose stone, lost balance and fell down, his head striking the bench and bleeding heavily. Crying in pain, Jack tried to get up, but he didn’t have the strength to rise. He collapsed on the ground, screaming desperately for help. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 There was nobody around but the elderly lady. _____________________________________________________________ To Jack’s joy, a net friend sent a message saying where the lady lived. ———————————————————————————————— 【文本呢解析】 【导语】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了作者担心抖音视频粉丝点赞数下降，拍视频的时候对一个老年人无礼，后来不小心受伤失去知觉的故事。 在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写提供了线索： 1. Jack的失望：Jack对于视频反响不佳感到失望，这为他的行动和决定埋下了伏笔。 2. 观众疲劳：Jack自己猜测观众可能厌倦了看他在健身房锻炼，这暗示了他可能会改变视频内容或地点。 3. 更换地点：Jack决定改变视频拍摄地点，从健身房换到公园，这是他尝试解决问题的行动。 4. 长椅上的冲突：Jack与坐在长椅上的老太太发生冲突，这个事件为后续可能的情节发展提供了基础。 5. Jack的跌倒：Jack在公园跌倒并受伤，这个突发事件为续写中的救援和反思提供了机会。 在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应： 1. Jack的失望：续写中Jack通过改变视频拍摄地点来应对失望，显示了他试图解决问题的决心。 2. 观众疲劳：Jack在公园的新尝试是对观众可能疲劳的直接回应，他试图通过提供新鲜感来重新吸引观众。 3. 更换地点：Jack在公园的尝试，尽管遭遇了挫折，但他的这一行动体现了他适应变化和创新的意愿。 4. 长椅上的冲突：老太太在Jack受伤后提供帮助，这一行为反转了之前的冲突，为Jack提供了反思和成长的机会。 5. Jack的跌倒：Jack的跌倒和受伤成为了故事转折点，促使他从错误中学习，并在续写中通过向老太太道歉和感激来展示他的成长。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“除了那位老太太，周围没有其他人”可知，第一段可描写作者失去知觉后，老太太打了急救电话并精心护理它，等作者醒来的时候老太太已经悄然离开。作者决定找到老人表示歉意，于是在网上发布视频寻找老人。           ②由第二段首句内容“令杰克高兴的是，一位网友发了一条信息，说出了这位女士的住址”可知，第二段可描写作者在网友的帮助下找到老人，当面致歉并被原谅，老人告诉作者要善待他人。           2.续写线索：旁边只有老人——救护——醒来后感到愧疚——决心找到老人——网上发视频——当面致歉——被原谅——感悟           主旨升华句 Respect and Understanding: Jack's story teaches us that respect and understanding are the keys to building a harmonious society, both online and offline. Change and Growth: Through this painful lesson, Jack realizes that change is not just about innovating content, but also about personal attitude and behavior growth. The Power of Community: Jack's experience demonstrates the power of community, where even a simple act of help or a message can build bridges between people. Kindness and Compassion: The story emphasizes the importance of kindness and compassion, which can open hearts and promote reconciliation even after conflicts and misunderstandings. Positive Influence: Jack decides to transform this experience into positive action, spreading messages of respect and compassion through his videos, inspiring his followers to do the same, showing that personal influence can be used to promote positive social change. 【参考答案】One possible version There was nobody around but the elderly lady. She hurried to him and bent down to check his injury. “God!” she gasped. “Don’t move. I’ll help you, son.” Looking at her kind face, Jack gradually lost consciousness. Having called an ambulance, the lady tended to his wounds carefully. Not until Jack came to and found himself and his belongings in an emergency room did he learn that the lady had contacted his family and quietly left. Overwhelmed by her virtue, Jack was desperate to find her. Fortunately, the rescue scene was wholly recorded by his camera. He posted the video online, requesting clues so that he could say thanks and sorry to her.     To Jack’s joy, a net friend sent a message saying where the lady lived. With gifts, Jack headed for the lady’s home. Answering the door, the lady was surprised but immediately got aware of what was going on. She gave Jack a hug, saying smilingly, “So glad to see you well, son.” “Sorry, I came for apologies. I behaved so rudely … and thanks for your help. Otherwise…” Jack choked, ashamed and grateful. “Treat others as you’d like to be treated. Everything will change for the better. I have faith in you,” she comforted the young man affectionately. The incident dramatically transformed Jack, who became helpful, friendly and popular. 下水文1 There was nobody around but the elderly lady. She looked at Jack with a mix of concern and disappointment. Despite his rudeness, she approached him slowly, her eyes filled with sympathy. "Young man, are you alright?" she asked gently, as she reached out a hand to help him. Jack, realizing the gravity of his situation and the irony of his earlier actions, felt a wave of shame wash over him. He took her hand, and with her help, he managed to sit up, his head still throbbing with pain. The elderly lady fetched some tissues from her bag and pressed them against his wound to stop the bleeding. In that moment, Jack learned a hard lesson about respect and the importance of kindness, regardless of one's circumstances. To Jack’s joy, a net friend sent a message saying where the lady lived. Touched by her compassion, Jack decided to make amends. He visited her home the next day, carrying a bouquet of flowers and a heartfelt apology. The lady welcomed him with a warm smile, accepting his apology and the flowers with grace. This encounter not only mended their relationship but also inspired Jack to incorporate a message of respect and empathy into his future videos. He realized that his online presence could be a platform for positive change, and he resolved to use it to spread kindness and understanding, hoping to inspire his followers to do the same. 下水文2 There was nobody around but the elderly lady. She stood a few steps away, her gaze fixed on Jack, who lay sprawled on the ground. The pain etched on his face seemed to soften her earlier hurt. With a sigh, she walked back towards him, the same bench that had been the source of their conflict now a silent witness to their unexpected connection. "Let me help you up," she said, her voice steady but kind. Jack, in his vulnerability, nodded, accepting the assistance that just moments ago he had scorned. As she helped him to his feet, he winced but managed a weak smile, acknowledging the kindness he had so rudely rejected. To Jack’s joy, a net friend sent a message saying where the lady lived. This small act of community support reminded him of the power of connection beyond the virtual world. It also served as a stark contrast to his earlier behavior, prompting him to reflect on the impact of his actions on real people. Inspired by the elderly lady's grace and the support from his online friend, Jack decided to visit her to express his gratitude and apologize for his earlier outburst. He brought with him a small token of appreciation, a gesture that symbolized his newfound understanding of the importance of respect and community. This incident became a turning point for Jack, not just in his approach to content creation but also in his approach to life, as he resolved to be more mindful and considerate in his interactions with others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$