内容正文:
Unit 1 Back to school
单元写作深度指导
Write a proposal(写提案)
单元话题
考题展示
写提案(倡议/提议)
2024·四川成都·高三模拟预测
本单元的写作主题是提案。提案(proposal)是一种正式的建议或计划,它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与计划。一份好的提案,应该把握三点:
1.明确提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等;
2.为了使提案易于阅读,需要对不同类型的信息进行分类;
3.提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式;表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。
假如你是李华,你校学生会拟成立一个中国文化相关社团,请你写一篇短文,提出你的看法和建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
考向分析
1.贴近学生生活与社会热点:近年来,英语应用文倡议(提议)的命题趋势越来越贴近学生的学习生活和社会热点。这类命题要求学生结合自身生活经验,创造性地解决情境设置中的问题,同时强调“五育并举,立德树人”的方向,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,增强文化自信。
2.体裁形式灵活多变:应用文的体裁形式在考试中呈现灵活多变的特点。除了传统的倡议书外,还可能涉及通知、演讲稿、报道等其他应用文类型。这种多样性要求学生在备考过程中,不仅要熟悉各种应用文的写作格式和技巧,还要具备灵活运用这些技巧的能力。
3.强调逻辑思维和语言运用能力:英语应用文倡议的命题往往要求学生具备良好的逻辑思维和语言运用能力。在撰写倡议书时,学生需要清晰地陈述倡议的背景、原因、具体内容和呼吁行动,同时要注意语言的准确性和流畅性2。
4.注重文化意识和跨文化交流:随着全球化的不断深入,英语应用文倡议的命题也越来越注重文化意识和跨文化交流能力的培养。学生需要在写作过程中,对比中西方文化差异,展现出对不同文化的理解和尊重。
5.开放性和创新性增强:命题的开放性和创新性在逐年增强。这意味着学生在写作过程中将有更多的发挥空间,但同时也要求他们具备更强的创新能力和独立思考能力。
6.结合时事热点:高考英语作文的话题通常与社会热点紧密相关。因此,英语应用文倡议的命题也可能围绕当前的社会热点进行,如环境保护、科技发展、文化传承等。
应对策略
广泛阅读,积累素材:通过阅读各类文章,积累丰富的素材和语言表达,为写作打下基础。熟悉各类应用文写作格式和技巧:通过反复练习,掌握不同类型应用文的写作格式和技巧。加强逻辑思维训练:通过解题、讨论等方式,提高自己的逻辑思维能力。关注社会热点和文化差异:了解当前的社会热点和文化差异,以便在写作中能够灵活运用。多写多练,注重反馈:通过多写多练,发现自己的不足之处,并及时寻求反馈和改进。
提案是劝说读者接受建议的行动计划的书面文件。提案具有说服力, 它试图说服读者相信某一行动的适宜性。提案的长短因事而异。一般包括: 目的, 背景, 需求, 详细计划, 资质问题, 请求批准, 以及相关附件等。
例如:成立俱乐部的提案要点包括如下几个方面:
(1)Purpose of starting a new club
(2)Type of the club
(3)The name of the club
(4)The time the club will meet every week
(5)The organization of the club
(6)Materials needed
(7)What help from the school or teachers
(8)The future development of the club
【模板构建1】
【模板构建2】
假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神,你打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部,安排学生每周六上午到市人民公园打扫卫生、给游客指路等。现请你写一份关于成立青年志愿者俱乐部的提案,上报给学校。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.提案格式已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:弘扬 carry forward; 扫帚 broom
[要点结构]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:_____________________________________________________________________
Club leader:_____________________________________________________________________
Meeting time:___________________________________________________________________
Club aims:_____________________________________________________________________
Club activities:__________________________________________________________________
Materials needed:________________________________________________________________
Plan for finding new members:_____________________________________________________
Signed:________________________________________________________________________
[写作示例]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:Youth Volunteer Club
Club leader:Li Hua
Meeting time:Saturday morning
Club aims:
●To lead the students to help others;
●To serve the society;
●To carry forward the spirit of helping others.
Club activities:Arrange for students to go to the People's Park in the city to do some voluntary work, such as helping clean up parks or giving directions to visitors.
Materials needed: A broom and a cup for each student
Plan for finding new members:
●Make posters and put them up around the school;
●Put a notice in the school newspaper and on the school website;
●Call on club members to persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
Signed:Li Hua
[要点分析]
审题
人称:第一人称、第二人称
时态:以一般现在时为主
谋篇
提案类型(Type):Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club;
提案目的(Aim):多使用动词不定式来表达;
活动计划(Plan):常使用祈使句来表达;
事项提醒(Reminder):使用名词或名词性短语A broom for each student ...;
招募方式(Measures):常使用祈使句Make posters...; Put up a notice ...
【素材积累】
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.club n.俱乐部
2.set up 创立;建立;设立
3.Basketball Club 篮球俱乐部
4.put up 张贴
5.discuss vt.讨论
6.make friends 交友
7.programme n.节目
8.improve v.提高;改善
9.exchange vt.交流;交换
10.gather v.聚集;集合
11.communicate vi.交流
12.attend vt.参加;出席
13.inform v.告知
14.satisfy/meet one's needs 满足某人的需要
15.on the website 在网站上
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.To help the students to know about more plants, we decide to set up a Nature Club.
为了帮助学生了解更多的植物,我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。
2.To provide a good opportunity to make friends, we decide to set up a Football Club.
为了提供一个交友的好机会,我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。
3.To improve reading and writing skills, a Book Lover Club is set up by our teacher.
为了提高阅读和写作技能,我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。
4.Read a short story that we like each Saturday afternoon.
每周六下午读一篇我们喜欢的短篇小说。
5.In the club gatherings, we'll have a football match and exchange our opinions together.
在俱乐部聚会时,我们将举行一场足球比赛,并一起交换意见。
6.There are many literary clubs started by the students in our campus.
我们校园里有许多由学生创办的文学俱乐部。
7.Meet on weekends to communicate with each other in English.
周末见面,互相用英语交流。
8.In the club meetings, learn football playing skills from each other.
在俱乐部聚会时,互相学习踢足球的技巧。
【写作指导】
为了丰富同学们的课外活动, 校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club), 现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。
1. 自行车俱乐部的目的;
2. 俱乐部的主要活动内容: 每周一次的基础训练, 有教师辅导, 安排在课外体育活动时间;
3. 其他事项: 器材自备, 俱乐部的宣传等。
注意: 1. 建议应包括以上所有信息, 可适当发挥;
2. 词数80个左右。
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【语篇布局】
【句式建构】
I.完成句子
1. 很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。
______________ has decided to set up ______________.
2. 我写信提出我的建议。
______________
3. 它应该每周提供一次基础培训。
It should ______________.
4. 基础培训将由老师指导。
______________
5. 我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。
We should ______________ to make our club known by all students.
II.句式升级
6. 用非谓语动词升级句1和句2
______________
7. 用定语从句升级句3和句4
______________
8. 用被动语态升级句5
______________
【连句成篇】
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、单句翻译
1.为引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神, 我们打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部。
lead the students to help others, serve the society, the spirit of helping others,we are going to set up a Youth Volunteer Club.
2.安排学生到市人民公园做一些志愿工作。
to go to the People's Park in the city .
3.我们将帮助打扫公园或给游客指路等。
We'll or give directions to visitors.
4.每个学生带一把扫帚和一个水杯。
Each student will .
5.我们将制作海报,张贴在学校周围。
around the school.
6.在校报和学校网站上张贴通知。
in the school newspaper and .
7.呼吁俱乐部成员说服他们身边的朋友加入我们的青年志愿者俱乐部。
persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
二、语篇翻译
(24-25高一上·全国·单元测试)高中生活对很多人都不容易。许多挑战会使我们倍感压力,但是一切取决于我们自己。我们要保持冷静,全力以赴并且永不放弃。敞开心扉并尽可能参与到活动中。当别人遇到麻烦事,帮他们一把。这样我们会交到朋友,而且充分利用高中的时光。现在,做好准备迎接我们的最后考验吧。
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三.书面表达
(20-21高一上·江苏镇江·阶段练习)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校将举行以“创办京剧俱乐部”为主题的倡议活动。请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书,内容要点如下:
1.该活动的意义;
2.具体措施:组织丰富的活动;购买相关书籍;观看京剧录像。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Peking opera京剧 video录像
Proposal for Peking Opera Club
Good news! Our school is going to set up a new club named Peking Opera Club.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone is welcome to sign up for the club and join in our activities.
(2024·河北张家口·高三模拟预测)假定你是李华,为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节,你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你的献策;
2.献策理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival
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Unit 1 Back to school
单元写作深度指导
Write a proposal(写提案)
单元话题
考题展示
写提案(倡议/提议)
2024·四川成都·高三模拟预测
本单元的写作主题是提案。提案(proposal)是一种正式的建议或计划,它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与计划。一份好的提案,应该把握三点:
1.明确提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等;
2.为了使提案易于阅读,需要对不同类型的信息进行分类;
3.提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式;表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。
假如你是李华,你校学生会拟成立一个中国文化相关社团,请你写一篇短文,提出你的看法和建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
考向分析
1.贴近学生生活与社会热点:近年来,英语应用文倡议(提议)的命题趋势越来越贴近学生的学习生活和社会热点。这类命题要求学生结合自身生活经验,创造性地解决情境设置中的问题,同时强调“五育并举,立德树人”的方向,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,增强文化自信。
2.体裁形式灵活多变:应用文的体裁形式在考试中呈现灵活多变的特点。除了传统的倡议书外,还可能涉及通知、演讲稿、报道等其他应用文类型。这种多样性要求学生在备考过程中,不仅要熟悉各种应用文的写作格式和技巧,还要具备灵活运用这些技巧的能力。
3.强调逻辑思维和语言运用能力:英语应用文倡议的命题往往要求学生具备良好的逻辑思维和语言运用能力。在撰写倡议书时,学生需要清晰地陈述倡议的背景、原因、具体内容和呼吁行动,同时要注意语言的准确性和流畅性2。
4.注重文化意识和跨文化交流:随着全球化的不断深入,英语应用文倡议的命题也越来越注重文化意识和跨文化交流能力的培养。学生需要在写作过程中,对比中西方文化差异,展现出对不同文化的理解和尊重。
5.开放性和创新性增强:命题的开放性和创新性在逐年增强。这意味着学生在写作过程中将有更多的发挥空间,但同时也要求他们具备更强的创新能力和独立思考能力。
6.结合时事热点:高考英语作文的话题通常与社会热点紧密相关。因此,英语应用文倡议的命题也可能围绕当前的社会热点进行,如环境保护、科技发展、文化传承等。
应对策略
广泛阅读,积累素材:通过阅读各类文章,积累丰富的素材和语言表达,为写作打下基础。熟悉各类应用文写作格式和技巧:通过反复练习,掌握不同类型应用文的写作格式和技巧。加强逻辑思维训练:通过解题、讨论等方式,提高自己的逻辑思维能力。关注社会热点和文化差异:了解当前的社会热点和文化差异,以便在写作中能够灵活运用。多写多练,注重反馈:通过多写多练,发现自己的不足之处,并及时寻求反馈和改进。
提案是劝说读者接受建议的行动计划的书面文件。提案具有说服力, 它试图说服读者相信某一行动的适宜性。提案的长短因事而异。一般包括: 目的, 背景, 需求, 详细计划, 资质问题, 请求批准, 以及相关附件等。
例如:成立俱乐部的提案要点包括如下几个方面:
(1)Purpose of starting a new club
(2)Type of the club
(3)The name of the club
(4)The time the club will meet every week
(5)The organization of the club
(6)Materials needed
(7)What help from the school or teachers
(8)The future development of the club
【模板构建1】
【模板构建2】
假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神,你打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部,安排学生每周六上午到市人民公园打扫卫生、给游客指路等。现请你写一份关于成立青年志愿者俱乐部的提案,上报给学校。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.提案格式已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:弘扬 carry forward; 扫帚 broom
[要点结构]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:_____________________________________________________________________
Club leader:_____________________________________________________________________
Meeting time:___________________________________________________________________
Club aims:_____________________________________________________________________
Club activities:__________________________________________________________________
Materials needed:________________________________________________________________
Plan for finding new members:_____________________________________________________
Signed:________________________________________________________________________
[写作示例]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:Youth Volunteer Club
Club leader:Li Hua
Meeting time:Saturday morning
Club aims:
●To lead the students to help others;
●To serve the society;
●To carry forward the spirit of helping others.
Club activities:Arrange for students to go to the People's Park in the city to do some voluntary work, such as helping clean up parks or giving directions to visitors.
Materials needed: A broom and a cup for each student
Plan for finding new members:
●Make posters and put them up around the school;
●Put a notice in the school newspaper and on the school website;
●Call on club members to persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
Signed:Li Hua
[要点分析]
审题
人称:第一人称、第二人称
时态:以一般现在时为主
谋篇
提案类型(Type):Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club;
提案目的(Aim):多使用动词不定式来表达;
活动计划(Plan):常使用祈使句来表达;
事项提醒(Reminder):使用名词或名词性短语A broom for each student ...;
招募方式(Measures):常使用祈使句Make posters...; Put up a notice ...
【素材积累】
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.club n.俱乐部
2.set up 创立;建立;设立
3.Basketball Club 篮球俱乐部
4.put up 张贴
5.discuss vt.讨论
6.make friends 交友
7.programme n.节目
8.improve v.提高;改善
9.exchange vt.交流;交换
10.gather v.聚集;集合
11.communicate vi.交流
12.attend vt.参加;出席
13.inform v.告知
14.satisfy/meet one's needs 满足某人的需要
15.on the website 在网站上
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.To help the students to know about more plants, we decide to set up a Nature Club.
为了帮助学生了解更多的植物,我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。
2.To provide a good opportunity to make friends, we decide to set up a Football Club.
为了提供一个交友的好机会,我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。
3.To improve reading and writing skills, a Book Lover Club is set up by our teacher.
为了提高阅读和写作技能,我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。
4.Read a short story that we like each Saturday afternoon.
每周六下午读一篇我们喜欢的短篇小说。
5.In the club gatherings, we'll have a football match and exchange our opinions together.
在俱乐部聚会时,我们将举行一场足球比赛,并一起交换意见。
6.There are many literary clubs started by the students in our campus.
我们校园里有许多由学生创办的文学俱乐部。
7.Meet on weekends to communicate with each other in English.
周末见面,互相用英语交流。
8.In the club meetings, learn football playing skills from each other.
在俱乐部聚会时,互相学习踢足球的技巧。
【写作指导】
为了丰富同学们的课外活动, 校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club), 现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。
1. 自行车俱乐部的目的;
2. 俱乐部的主要活动内容: 每周一次的基础训练, 有教师辅导, 安排在课外体育活动时间;
3. 其他事项: 器材自备, 俱乐部的宣传等。
注意: 1. 建议应包括以上所有信息, 可适当发挥;
2. 词数80个左右。
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【语篇布局】
【句式建构】
I.完成句子
1. 很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。
I know with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club.
2. 我写信提出我的建议。
I am writing to offer my proposals.
3. 它应该每周提供一次基础培训。
It should offer basic training once a week.
4. 基础培训将由老师指导。
The basic training will be guided by teachers.
5. 我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。
We should make the most of various ways to make our club known by all students.
II.句式升级
6. 用非谓语动词升级句1和句2
Having known/Knowing with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club, I am writing to offer my proposals.
7. 用定语从句升级句3和句4
It should offer basic training once a week which will be guided by teachers.
8. 用被动语态升级句5
Various ways should be made the most of to make our club known by all students.
【连句成篇】
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【参考范文】
Dear President,
I am Li Hua. Having known with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club, I am writing to offer my proposals.
First of all, I think the purpose of the club is to help us students keep fit and relax ourselves. Besides, as for its activities, I think it should contain the following parts. It should offer basic training once a week which will be guided by teachers. It can be arranged during the time of after-class physical activities. There should be an outdoor cycling trip if possible. By the way, club members should get the equipment ready by the students themselves. Last but not least, various ways should be made the most of to make our club known by all students.
At last, I hope my proposals can be of some help for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、单句翻译
1.为引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神, 我们打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部。
lead the students to help others, serve the society, the spirit of helping others,we are going to set up a Youth Volunteer Club.
2.安排学生到市人民公园做一些志愿工作。
to go to the People's Park in the city .
3.我们将帮助打扫公园或给游客指路等。
We'll or give directions to visitors.
4.每个学生带一把扫帚和一个水杯。
Each student will .
5.我们将制作海报,张贴在学校周围。
around the school.
6.在校报和学校网站上张贴通知。
in the school newspaper and .
7.呼吁俱乐部成员说服他们身边的朋友加入我们的青年志愿者俱乐部。
persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
参考答案: 1.In order to;and carry forward 2.Arrange for students;to do some voluntary work 3.help clean up parks 4.take a broom and a cup 5.We'll make posters and put them up 6.Put a notice;on the school website 7.Call on club members to
二、语篇翻译
(24-25高一上·全国·单元测试)高中生活对很多人都不容易。许多挑战会使我们倍感压力,但是一切取决于我们自己。我们要保持冷静,全力以赴并且永不放弃。敞开心扉并尽可能参与到活动中。当别人遇到麻烦事,帮他们一把。这样我们会交到朋友,而且充分利用高中的时光。现在,做好准备迎接我们的最后考验吧。
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【参考范文】
High school life is not easy for many people. Many challenges can be stressful, but it’s up to us. We need to stay calm, give it our all and never give up. Open your mind and get involved as much as possible. When someone is in trouble, help them out. We’ll make friends and make the most of high school. Now, get ready for our final test.
【要点解析】考查句子翻译。根据句意可知,本句时态可用一般现在时来表示经常性动作。“高中生活对很多人都不容易。”中可用短语be not easy for表示“对……不容易”,本句英文表达为High school life is not easy for many people;“许多挑战会使我们倍感压力,但是一切取决于我们自己。”中可用情态动词can表示“会”,即客观上的可能性,用短语be up to sb.表示“取决于某人”,本句英文表达为Many challenges can be stressful, but it’s up to us;“我们要保持冷静,全力以赴并且永不放弃。”中用固定短语stay calm表示“保持冷静”,用固定短语never give up表示“永不放弃”,本句英文表达为We need to stay calm, give it our all and never give up;“敞开心扉并尽可能参与到活动中。”是祈使句,可用动词open开头表示“敞开”,用短语get involved表示“参与”,本句英文表达为Open your mind and get involved as much as possible;“当别人遇到麻烦事,帮他们一把。”可用when引导的时间状语从句来表示,in trouble (处于困境),help sb. out (帮助某人摆脱困境),英文表达为When someone is in trouble, help them out;“这样我们会交到朋友,而且充分利用高中的时光。”中可用固定短语make friends表示“交朋友”,make the most of (充分利用),且用一般将来时表将来动作,本句英文表达为We’ll make friends and make the most of high school;“现在,做好准备迎接我们的最后考验吧。”也是祈使句,同短语get ready for表示“为……做好准备”,本句英文表达为Now, get ready for our final test。故答案为High school life is not easy for many people. Many challenges can be stressful, but it’s up to us. We need to stay calm, give it our all and never give up. Open your mind and get involved as much as possible. When someone is in trouble, help them out. We’ll make friends and make the most of high school. Now, get ready for our final test.
三.书面表达
(20-21高一上·江苏镇江·阶段练习)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校将举行以“创办京剧俱乐部”为主题的倡议活动。请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书,内容要点如下:
1.该活动的意义;
2.具体措施:组织丰富的活动;购买相关书籍;观看京剧录像。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Peking opera京剧 video录像
Proposal for Peking Opera Club
Good news! Our school is going to set up a new club named Peking Opera Club.
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Everyone is welcome to sign up for the club and join in our activities.
【参考范文】
Proposal for Peking Opera Club
Good news! Our school is going to set up a new club named Peking Opera Club.
The club aims to increase the popularity of Peking Opera among students and make them learn more about it . There are a wide variety of activities. For example, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera delivered by a famous artist and there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera. What’s more, We will buy books and watch videos about Beijing Opera.
Everyone is welcome to sign up for the club and join in our activities.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书。
【要点解析】第一步:审题。
体裁:倡议书
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主
要点:1.该活动的意义;
2.具体措施:组织丰富的活动;购买相关书籍;观看京剧录像。
第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)
如:aim to do sth.,popularity,a variety of,a live performance,be welcome to等.
第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)
第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result;
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步:润色修改。
【核心提示】本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了许多高级句型和用法,如There are a wide variety of activities.使用了there be句型;For example, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera delivered by a famous artist and there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera.使用了非谓语动词,高级句型和用法的使用,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。
(2024·河北张家口·高三模拟预测)假定你是李华,为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节,你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你的献策;
2.献策理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival
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My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival
As a great fan of science and technology, I am excited about the festival approaching next month. At the festival, I expect to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities. I believe the students will get inspirations from their brilliant insights into fields like AI and biological engineering. Besides, I believe it will be a great idea to hold an exhibition of the students’ projects and a speech contest, which can give the students opportunities to share their points of view on the development and social value of science and technology.
I am anticipating this meaningful festival and will be delighted to be part of it.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节,学校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。要求考生以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【要点解析】1. 词汇积累
激动的:excited→thrilled
接近:approach→draw near
期望:expect→anticipate
获得:get→gain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At the festival, I expect to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities.
拓展句:At the festival, what I expect is to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities.
【高分句型1】Besides, I believe it will be a great idea to hold an exhibition of the students' projects and a speech contest, which can give the students opportunities to share their points of view on the development and social value of science and technology. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe the students will get inspirations from their brilliant insights into fields like Al and biological engineering. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
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