Unit 6 Section Ⅳ WRITING（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅳ　WRITING 写一篇影评 [对应学生用书P148] 影视评论为评论性文章，常使用夹叙夹议的写作方法来介绍电影的相关信息并作出自己的评价。 [写作技巧] 1.介绍电影的相关信息常用第三人称，发表评论可用第一人称； 2.文章时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主； 3.三段布局文章结构。 [典例剖析] 假如你是李华，假期期间看了电影《长津湖》，请写一篇影评。 [词块积累] 1.put down 放下 2.return to 回到 3.retire from 退出 4.tidy up 整理 5.set out 出发 6.are willing to 愿意 7.neither ...nor ... 既不……也不…… 8.from generation to generation 代代相传 9.persist to 持续到 [连词成句] 1.看了电影《长津湖》，我想我真的懂了。 After watching the film The Battle at Lake Changjin, I think I really understand it. 2.当千里放下碗筷时，他接受命令返回队伍。 When Qianli put down his dishes and chopsticks, he accepted the order to return to the army. 3.当无数战士愿意牺牲自己的生命与敌人作斗争时，他们是最勇敢的战士，值得我们尊敬和爱戴的英雄。 When countless soldiers are willing to sacrifice their lives to fight the enemy, they are the bravest soldiers and the heroes worthy of our respect and love. 4.只有军人的光荣。 There are only the glory of soldiers. 5.这种勇气和奉献精神流淌在一代又一代中国人的血液中。 It is the courage and dedication flowing in the blood of Chinese people from generation to generation. [句式升级] 用非限定性定语从句连接句4和句5 There are only the glory of soldiers, which is the courage and dedication flowing in the blood of Chinese people from generation to generation. [连句成篇] 【参考范文】 Why are Chinese People's Volunteer soldiers the most lovely people? After watching the film The Battle at Lake Changjin, I think I really understand it. When Qianli put down his dishes and chopsticks, he accepted the order to return to the army, when Mei Sheng rode a few dozen kilometers to report for duty although he could retire from the army, when Qianli seconds understood the anxiety in his comrades' eyes and said that he would tidy up his equipment immediately and set out five minutes later, when the snow covered the soldiers, they did not move to avoid investigation, when they bit the scorched hard potatoes, when countless soldiers are willing to sacrifice their lives to fight the enemy's, they are the bravest soldiers and the heroes worthy of our respect and love. There are no heroes who can neither freeze nor fight. There are only the glory of soldiers, which is the courage and dedication flowing in the blood of Chinese people from generation to generation. They don't want to be heroes, they don't want to win. Their blood is sprinkled on the battlefield, and their fearless spirit is always condensed in the hearts of the Chinese people. If we don't fight this war, our next generation will fight ... Even if there is only one person left, we must persist to the end. I'm really in tears. May the country be prosperous and strong, peaceful and peaceful! 假如你是李华，春节期间上映了电影《你好，李焕英》，在众多电影中你选择了看《你好，李焕英》，请根据你的所看和所感写一篇影评。 【参考范文】 We can learn something useful from movie Hi, Mom. It can guide me to solve the problems in our lives. By watching Hi, Mom which is closely relative to our lives, we are able to get some lessons from the ways to solve problems between mother and child. The greatest significance of Hi, Mom is to alert every child. No matter how good a movie you make, no matter how famous you are, no matter how many remedies you make, if those who lost relatives, the issue was that none of the dots had any meaning what so ever.The meaning of life is far greater than success. All in all, the advantages of watching movies are not limited in relaxing and entertaining, but also in other aspects. Therefore, we should think about what we have learned from the movie after watching it. 读后续写——寻求帮助 [对应学生用书P149] 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I always wonder how people will react if I want a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a crowded station.I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I was rushing around. Yesterday I was stuck in such a hopeless situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger. I was in a busy shopping mall(中心) buying a large piece of luggage.After the purchase in one of the large，fancy，expensive shops，I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot but my phone was dead. I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage，which was not cheap at all，if she could help me telephone my driver.She replied，still all smiles，“I'm sorry，sir，but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.” As I was wondering what kind of policy that was，I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me.Remembering my wife's interesting theory(理论) that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you're in trouble，I thought I might have a chance.But before I could say a word，he walked past me.It turned out he simply didn't see me. I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me.Disappointed and tired，I got out of the shop to the busy street in front.I stood there with people rushing by，looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness on their faces.I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. Paragraph 2： Finally a man wearing a cheap Tshirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. 第一步：文章信息提取 时空线： Yesterday I was stuck in such a hopeless situation ... → After the purchase ... → I then requested the shop assistant → As I was wondering what kind of policy that was ... → I waited a bit longer in the mall ... → I began wondering ... 情感线：陷入无助的境地 (I was stuck in such a hopeless situation)→ 想办法寻求帮助(I then requested ...; As I was wondering what kind of policy ...; Remembering my wife's interesting theory ...)→ 没有寻找到人帮助后的失望与疲惫 (Disappointed and tired ...) 第二步：语篇要点审读 Who：the author,the driver，the shop assistant，a nicelooking teenage boy When：yesterday Where：in a busy shopping mall What：The author was stuck in a hopeless situation and wanted to ask for help. Why：The author's phone was dead and couldn't telephone his driver. 第三步：续写方向猜想 续写段首1：At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.(提示句表明“就在那时，我遇见了一位带着两个孩子的母亲。”第一段可以描写作者向一位母亲求助的经过。) 猜想1：What did the author say to the young mother? 猜想2：What did the young mother say to the author? ... 续写段首2：Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. (提示句表明“终于，一个穿着廉价T恤和脏牛仔裤的男人似乎注意到了我。”第二段可描写作者向一位看上去很贫穷的人求助时遇到的情况。) 猜想1：What did the author say to the man? 猜想2：What did the author do? 猜想3：Why did the man notice the author? ... 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids. I thought that a beautiful woman with charming blue eyes must be willing to help me.So，with great expectation，I walked towards her with an appropriate smile on my face，and requested if she could be kind enough to make a phone call for me.However，without a word，she pulled her kids to escape from me，as if scared by a murderer.I stood there，hopeless，with a blank face and a sinking heart. Paragraph 2： Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I squeezed a smile and requested him the same thing.Unexpectedly，he took out his mobile phone for me without hesitation.Dancing in his eyes was the real kindness that I had been struggling to look for so long.From that day on，I began helping other strangers in trouble，just like the poor-looking but kind man，with the aim of passing kindness and melting the ice in many people's hearts. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$