【写作专栏】高中英语写作提升训练：劝告信（写作步骤+套用公式）讲义-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习作文专项

【写作专栏】高中英语写作提升训练：劝告信（写作步骤+套用公式） 任务呈现 假定你是李华，你得知好友Eric经常吃垃圾食品，有时甚至会以垃圾食品代替正餐。请你根据以下要点给他写封邮件，劝他远离垃圾食品：1. 了解到Eric的问题；2. 垃圾食品的危害；3. 表达希望与祝愿。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 写作步骤 1、 任务分析 1. 审题：确定文章的人称和时态根据写作任务可知，李华的好友Eric经常吃垃圾食品，李华需要写封邮件劝说他远离垃圾食品，故人称以第一人称和第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。 2. 确定文章结构此劝告信的正文可以分为三段。第一段：表明写信目的；第二段：介绍垃圾食品的危害；第三段：表达希望与祝愿。 二、词语、句子罗列1. 词语 (1) 垃圾食品 junk food (2) 以……代替…… replace … with …  (3) 最好做某事 had better do sth.  (4) 远离…… keep away from …  (5) 富含…… be high/rich in … (6) 体重增加；发胖 gain/put on weight (7) 随着时间的推移 over time  (8) 导致 lead to/result in (9) 在某人看来 in one’s opinion/view 3. 句子 (1) 我得知你经常吃垃圾食品，有时甚至用它代替正餐。’ ●I’ve learned that you often eat junk food, and sometimes even replace main meals with it.  (2) 垃圾食品通常都是高糖、高盐、高脂。如果你吃太多垃圾食品，你的体重很容易迅速增加。 ●Junk food is often high in sugar, salt and fat. It will be easy to gain weight quickly if you eat too much of it. (3) 此外，吃太多垃圾食品会影响你的大脑发育。 ●Besides, eating too much junk food can affect your brain development. (4) 在我看来，你最好多吃水果蔬菜。你也可以吃一些健康的零食。 ●In my opinion, you’d better eat more fruit and vegetables. And you can also eat some healthy snacks. (5) 我希望你能认识到吃垃圾食品的坏处，作出改变并拥有健康的生活方式。 ●I hope that you can realize the bad effects of eating junk food, make a change and live a healthy lifestyle.  三、扩充要点，连句成文Dear Eric,  I’ve learned that you often eat junk food, and sometimes even replace main meals with it. I think you’d better keep away from junk food.  Junk food is often high in sugar, salt and fat. It will be easy to gain weight quickly if you eat too much of it. Over time it will lead to obesity, which may result in high blood pressure and heart disease. Besides, eating too much junk food can affect your brain development. In my opinion, you’d better eat more fruit and vegetables. And you can also eat some healthy snacks. I hope that you can realize the bad effects of eating junk food, make a change and live a healthy lifestyle.  Yours, Li Hua 知识储备 劝告信常用句式劝告信开头段 ●Learning/Knowing that …, I’m writing to persuade you to do/into doing … ●I’m sorry to hear that you … I’m writing to share some advice on … with you. ●Worried about …, I’m writing to persuade you to do/into doing … ●I’m writing to express my view concerning/on … ●Here I’d like to give my opinion/view on … ●After reading your email, I’m sorry to learn that … 劝告信主体段 ●First of all, I feel it would be better/more beneficial if you … ●In my opinion/view, you should/may as well/had better … ●As far as I’m concerned, why not …？ ●It makes sense to do … ●As for me, it would be wise to … ●It would be a good idea … ●Considering (that) …, it’s time for you … ●When it comes to …, I suggest that you … ●If I were you, I would … 劝告信结尾段 ●I strongly hope that you can …  ●Please take my advice into account/consideration and make a final decision.  ●I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.  ●I (do) hope that you will find the advice/suggestions useful/helpful/practical.  ●If you have more problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.  ●I’m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$