Unit 5 写作 2024-2025学年人教版（2024）七年级英语上册

2024人教七上英语写作 Unit 5 Fun Clubs 单元话题分析 【课标话题】 人与自我-多彩,安全,有意义的学校生活 本单元以“有趣的俱乐部”为话题,要求学生写一封申请信/邮件,申请加入自己喜欢的俱乐部。写作过程中需要阐明自己想要加入的俱乐部名称,想要加入的原因以及介绍自己的优势等。学生需要掌握和俱乐部相关的词汇,申请加入俱乐部的句式和介绍自己优势的句式等。 【写作题目】 为使学校课后托管服务更加丰富多彩,营造“互帮互学”的英语学习氛围,你校决定成立英语俱乐部(English club)。假设你是David,想申请加入该俱乐部。请根据以下所给信息,给英语俱乐部负责人王老师写一封自荐信。 Name David Age 13 Birthday November 2nd Class 702 Hobbies(爱好) Read books; … Favorite subject English Reasons to apply(申请理由) Speak English well; … 注意: (1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (2)短文须包含表中的所有信息,可适当发挥; (3)至少补充一个爱好和一条申请理由; (4)词数:不少于60词(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Mr. Wang, I really want to join the English club in our school. Now let me tell you something about myself. _ _ 写作思路 【审题】 审主题、审体裁:主题为申请加入俱乐部;体裁为申请信/邮件; 审人称、审时态:通常以第一人称为主,若以他人视角写作,则用对应的第三人称;时态以一般现在时态为主;(本题以第一人称为主) 审要点:本题要求写一封申请加入俱乐部的自荐信,学生需要按照表格中的提示信息完成自荐信的书写。表格信息中包含自我介绍,比如姓名、年龄、生日、班级、爱好以及最喜欢的科目。除此之外,还包括想要加入俱乐部的原因。题目中要求除了表格中的信息之外,还需要补充一条爱好和一条申请理由。 【写作过程】 开头部分:引入主题,表明自己想要加入俱乐部的意向 I would like to join the . I want to join the . I’d love to join the . Now let me tell you something about myself. Now let me introduce myself to you. 主体部分:首先,做自我介绍,包括姓名,年龄,出生日期,所在班级,爱好和最喜欢的科目;其次说明自己想要加入俱乐部的原因,原因可以从自己的优势,未来的打算,期待获得自我的提升入手。 结尾部分:点名主题,表明自己希望成为其中一名并得到回复 I hope I will be one of you. I hope I will join the . I’m looking forward to your reply. 【实用表达】 介绍申请加入俱乐部的意向 I would like to join the . I want to join the . I’d love to join the . Now let me tell you something about myself. Now let me introduce myself to you. 介绍自己 My name is . I’m years old. I was born . My birthday is on . I’m in Class , Grade . My hobby is . My hobbies are . I’m interested in . I like/love . I’m fond of . My favourite subject is . 介绍理由 I can . I’m good at . I do well in . I want to improve . I hope I can get improvement. I hope I can make great progress in . Because English is widely used in the world. Because it’s useful and interesting. 介绍期待获得回复 I hope I can be one of you. I hope I can join the . I’m looking forward to your reply. I believe I will bring out my best in . 【词汇储备】 介绍俱乐部 art club艺术俱乐部 English club英语俱乐部 science club科学俱乐部 drama club 戏剧俱乐部 music club 音乐俱乐部 chess club 国际象棋俱乐部 ping-pong club 乒乓球俱乐部 sport club 运动俱乐部 dance club 舞蹈俱乐部 介绍理由 be interested in 对...感兴趣 be fond of喜爱... improve my listening and speaking 提升我的听力和口语 learn about western history and culture了解西方的历史和文化 make new friends 结交新朋友 learn a lot from others从别人那学到很多 be good at/do well in 擅长... 【小试牛刀】 1. 我想加入英语俱乐部。 I to join the English club. 2. 现在让我来介绍一下我自己。 Now let me myself. 3. 因为我对英语很感兴趣。 Because I’m English. 4. 我想提升我的听力和口语。 I want to my listening and speaking. 5. 我很擅长英语。 I’m English. 6. 我想了解西方的历史和文化。 I want to western history and culture in English classes. 7. 我想结交很多新朋友。 I want to . 8. 我将来想成为一名英语老师。 I an English teacher in the future. 9. 我希望我能够成为你们中的一员。 I hope I will be . 10. 期待你们的答复。 I’m your reply. 【答案解析】 1. I would like to join the English club. 2. Now let me introduce myself. 3. Because I’m interested in English. 4. I want to improve my listening and speaking. 5. I’m good at English. 6. I want to learn about western history and culture in English classes. 7. I want to make many new friends. 8. I want to be an English teacher in the future. 9. I hope I will be one of you. 10. I’m looking forward to your reply. 写作范例 为使学校课后托管服务更加丰富多彩,营造“互帮互学”的英语学习氛围,你校决定成立英语俱乐部(English club)。假设你是David,想申请加入该俱乐部。请根据以下所给信息,给英语俱乐部负责人王老师写一封自荐信。 Name David Age 13 Birthday November 2nd Class 702 Hobbies(爱好) Read books; … Favorite subject English Reasons to apply(申请理由) Speak English well; … 注意: (1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (2)短文须包含表中的所有信息,可适当发挥; (3)至少补充一个爱好和一条申请理由; (4)词数:不少于60词(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Mr. Wang, I really want to join the English club in our school. Now let me tell you something about myself. _ _ 【优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Wang, I really want to join the English club in our school. Now let me tell you something about myself. My name is David. I’m 13 years old. My birthday is on November 2nd. I’m in Class Two, Grade Seven. In my free time, I like reading books and playing sports with my friends. Of all the subjects, English is my favourite one. I want to join the English club because I’m good at English. I can speak very well. Besides, I want to learn more about western history and culture and make new friends. I hope I will be one of you. I’m looking forward for your reply. 【亮点词汇】 in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间=in one’s spare time be good at擅长...=do well in... besides除此之外 learn about 了解 western history and culture西方历史和文化 make friends(with) 交朋友 look forward to期待 【高分句型】 Of all the subjects, English is my favourite one. 在所有的科目中,英语是我最喜欢的。 Besides, I want to learn more about western history and culture and make new friends. 除此之外,我想了解更多关于西方历史和文化。 I hope I will be one of you. 我希望我能成为你们中的一员。 I’m looking forward for your reply. 我期待收到你的回复。 写作练习 假如你是阳光中学七年级五班的学生 Wendy,你看到了英语校刊 Sunshine Weekly 发布的一则俱乐部招新启事。请你根据启事的内容与要求,用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。 JOIN A CLUB! Do you want to make friends, learn something new, or have fun? Here are three clubs for you! Which one do you want to join? Write an email to tell us: Your name, age, ... The club you want to join Why you want to join it Your hope (希望): Please send your email to sunshineweekly@126.com. We hope you enjoy yourself in our clubs. 要求:1.参考方框中的内容,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息; 4.词数:不少于50词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Wendy from Class Five, Grade Seven. _ _ 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$