专题07 如何升华结尾- 【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语读后续写技巧与训练（通用版）

专题07 如何升华结尾 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 主题 话题 2024 2024新课标I&II卷 人与社会 诚信回报陌生司机相助 2023 2023新课标I&II卷 人与自我 写作比赛逆袭获奖 2022 2022新课标I&II卷 人与自我 残疾男孩参加越野跑 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 在英语高考题型的读后续写中，结尾部分起到了至关重要的作用。它不仅是对前文内容的总结、强调主题，在必要更是对主题的升华，给读者留下思考和启示。 1.灵魂顿悟式从此以后，某人意识到……​ 强调句：It was+被强调的部分+that+其他成分 It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart.正是这次独特的经历使我明白了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。 It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它。 ​ It hit/ struck/ occurred to/ dawned on sb. that…某人突然想到……​ It hit/ struck/ occurred to/ dawned on them that they could make breakfast for Mother to celebrate Mother's Day.他们突然想到他们可以给妈妈做早餐庆祝母亲节。​ 2.余音绕梁式：每每想起此事，某人… ​ Looking back to the story, sb. still felt it+adj., thinking of the saying that+主旨当再回想起此事，某人感到它很……，让他再次想起那个名言……​ Looking back to the story, she still felt it warm, thinking of the saying that never should anyone judge a book by its cover.​回想起这个故事，她仍然觉得很温暖，想起了那句谚语：任何人都不能以貌取人。​ 3.情景交融式：伴随着风和日丽，某人…… With the sunlight greeting sb. gently and warmly, sb. did…阳光温暖又温柔地笼罩着某人, sb. did…​ With the sunlight greeting her gently and warmly, she raised up her head, wearing a shining smile on her face.阳光温暖又温柔地笼罩着她，她抬起头，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。 Feeling the warm sunlight breaking into the window, sb. did…​温暖的阳光照进窗里，sb. did…​ Feeling the warm sunlight breaking into the window, my mother and I hugged each other tightly.温暖的阳光照进窗里，我和妈妈紧紧拥抱在一起。​ 【写作方法】 1. 表示经历和教训的万能升华句 1.What a significant lesson for sb and sb felt it deep in one’s heart. 2.But now, he wasn’t drowned in the sorrows and loneliness any more. Instead, he realized the true spirit of life. 3.She made a resolution in her heart that from the day on she would never be careless and swore to be a kind and thoughtful person like Mrs. Willow. 4.Interestingly, the man’s words still lingered in my mind even now. 有趣的是，那个人的话现在还在我的脑海里徘徊。 5.The narrow escape made Mac realize how precious life is. 这次死里逃生的经历让Mac明白了生活多么珍贵。 6.It gradually dawned upon me that ...我逐渐意识到... 7.The special experience enlightened him with the fact that...这段经历让他明白... 2. 表示爱、善意、勇气的主题万能升华句 1.It is sth（love, courage, kindness) makes the world go round and sb made up one’s mind to pass on sth（love, courage, kindness) to others. 例句：It is love makes the world go round and he made up his mind to pass on “love” to others.正是爱让世界运转，他下定决心将“爱”传递给他人。 2.Indeed，only when we open up the door of our heart, can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love and care.实际上，只有我们打开心门，我们才能沐浴在明媚的阳光之下，享受爱和呵护的温暖。 3.It’s true that giving is receiving. When one is giving, not only does it make a difference in the lives of those who receive the gifts, but it also makes a difference in the lives of the givers themselves. 4.He was overwhelmed by the fact that his neighbors cared about his wellbeing, and said having us over for company was the best gift we could have given him. 5.Where there is life , there is hope.哪里有da生活，哪里就有希望。 6.Kindness is like a ray of sunshine, which can brighten/ light up our life. 7.True love is the most invaluable thing in the world. 8.Say goodbye to the past and embrace the present. 9.It dawned on me(我突然意识到） that we should always be an honest person whatever situation we are in. 10.I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous. 11.All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect, dignity and warmth. 12.No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. 13.It was no exaggeration to say/utter that sth（friendship, love, courage) was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of one’s memories.毫不夸张地说，sth 就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在某人记忆的长河里。 14.Feeling the warm sunlight breaking through the window, the whole family hugged in happiness. 感受着透过窗户照射进来的温暖阳光，全家人幸福地拥抱在一起。 15.You can never ignore the power of love. It’s a fire once lit, may burn forever. 3. 表达积极态度、坚定信念的主题万能升华句 1.It’s important to be grateful for the things we have in our life and never cry for what we don’t have. 2.Happiness doesn’t mean perfection, but a heart to appreciate the beauty of surroundings, which give you mental satisfaction. 3.The truth of happiness is holding our dream tightly but never failing to enjoy the fascinating scenery around us. 4.Belief is a great guide of human life. 5.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 6.Whether you regard yourself as a towering tree or a table of grass, or whether you think you are a high mountain or small stone, you represent a state of nature that has its own reason of existence. If you truly admire yourself, you will be courageous. 7.As long as we hold on with a strong perseverance, we will surely live our life beyond our limits. 8.It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts. 9.Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end 10.As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible. 11.Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal. 4. 表示人与自然和谐相处的升华句 1.From then on, we always keep away from wild animals, hoping to maintain the harmony of the ecology. (人与动物和谐相处）[句型：From then on, sb always do sth, hoping to...] 2.From then on, we always keep away from wild animals. Only in this way could we maintain the harmony of the ecology. [句型：From then on, sb always do sth. Only in that way could sb do sth.] 3.We human beings should in every way live in peace with Nature. 4.It is the duty of every one of us to protect the natural environment. 5.We will be punished by Nature for our destruction of its environment. 6.Improve the environmental awareness, take care of flowers and trees, protect wild animals, protect public facilities, promote the harmonious development of man and man, man and society, man and nature. *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2024新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【升华结尾】 We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 【2023新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【升华结尾】 Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing. 【2022新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.” I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【升华结尾】 To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【河北省沧衡名校联盟2023-2024学年高三下学期4月期中】 As we stepped off the plane in Pucón, the lively atmosphere of the town immediately lifted our spirits after the long flight from New York. The contrast between the freezing Big Apple and the warmth of Pucón was striking. The climate was delightful, which was a welcome change from the busy New York City. “Feel that?” my friend said proudly, bathed in the gentle sunshine. “This is what I call a vacation!” Our guide, Herman, was waiting for us with a broad smile. His English was limited, but his enthusiasm was boundless. He greeted us with heartiness, “Welcome to Pucón! I have everything ready for you.” We spent our first day settling into the luxurious house he had arranged for us. The unique design of the house deeply attracted us. The house was a combination of modern luxury and traditional charm, neat and tidy, with tall windows framing the greenery outside. Herman insisted on taking care of our every need. He would not even let us lift a finger in the house, which was above and beyond his duties. One evening, as we wandered along the beach, the sky transformed into a canvas (画布) of rich colors. We were placed in a world of wonder. My friend turned to me, eyes sparkling, and said,“This is why we travel, isn’t it? Moments like these make everything else fade away.” As we planned to go to another town to admire the unique architecture, something unexpected happened. I got a fever. Our explorations were cut short. Lying in bed, I could hear my friend pacing outside my room, worried. And our travel plans were put on hold as there was no choice but to rest in the hope that I would recover soon. The next morning, my fever worsened. Being new to the area and struggling with the language barrier, we felt helpless. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just then, Herman appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With Herman’s help, I began to recover. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2024届湖北省八市4月高考调研模拟】 I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I'd had to be at the theatre for the audition (试演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I could go home. “I am very sorry,”he said,“but your voice isn't quite right for the part.”It had been a similar story at all the auditions that I'd done over the past few weeks. It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or Mamma Mia, so I'd taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a part in a show. I'd been really pleased when I'd managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next morning. It was a show I'd have loved to be in — but really, what was the point? Someone I knew had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it seemed like a much more sensible thing to do. I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing.Quite quickly I found myself belting out (大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of the pavement below, looking up at me. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next day I went to the eleventh audition. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07 如何升华结尾 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 主题 话题 2024 2024新课标I&II卷 人与社会 诚信回报陌生司机相助 2023 2023新课标I&II卷 人与自我 写作比赛逆袭获奖 2022 2022新课标I&II卷 人与自我 残疾男孩参加越野跑 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 在英语高考题型的读后续写中，结尾部分起到了至关重要的作用。它不仅是对前文内容的总结、强调主题，在必要更是对主题的升华，给读者留下思考和启示。 1.灵魂顿悟式从此以后，某人意识到……​ 强调句：It was+被强调的部分+that+其他成分 It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart.正是这次独特的经历使我明白了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。 It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它。 ​ It hit/ struck/ occurred to/ dawned on sb. that…某人突然想到……​ It hit/ struck/ occurred to/ dawned on them that they could make breakfast for Mother to celebrate Mother's Day.他们突然想到他们可以给妈妈做早餐庆祝母亲节。​ 2.余音绕梁式：每每想起此事，某人… ​ Looking back to the story, sb. still felt it+adj., thinking of the saying that+主旨当再回想起此事，某人感到它很……，让他再次想起那个名言……​ Looking back to the story, she still felt it warm, thinking of the saying that never should anyone judge a book by its cover.​回想起这个故事，她仍然觉得很温暖，想起了那句谚语：任何人都不能以貌取人。​ 3.情景交融式：伴随着风和日丽，某人…… With the sunlight greeting sb. gently and warmly, sb. did…阳光温暖又温柔地笼罩着某人, sb. did…​ With the sunlight greeting her gently and warmly, she raised up her head, wearing a shining smile on her face.阳光温暖又温柔地笼罩着她，她抬起头，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。 Feeling the warm sunlight breaking into the window, sb. did…​温暖的阳光照进窗里，sb. did…​ Feeling the warm sunlight breaking into the window, my mother and I hugged each other tightly.温暖的阳光照进窗里，我和妈妈紧紧拥抱在一起。​ 【写作方法】 1. 表示经历和教训的万能升华句 1.What a significant lesson for sb and sb felt it deep in one’s heart. 2.But now, he wasn’t drowned in the sorrows and loneliness any more. Instead, he realized the true spirit of life. 3.She made a resolution in her heart that from the day on she would never be careless and swore to be a kind and thoughtful person like Mrs. Willow. 4.Interestingly, the man’s words still lingered in my mind even now. 有趣的是，那个人的话现在还在我的脑海里徘徊。 5.The narrow escape made Mac realize how precious life is. 这次死里逃生的经历让Mac明白了生活多么珍贵。 6.It gradually dawned upon me that ...我逐渐意识到... 7.The special experience enlightened him with the fact that...这段经历让他明白... 2. 表示爱、善意、勇气的主题万能升华句 1.It is sth（love, courage, kindness) makes the world go round and sb made up one’s mind to pass on sth（love, courage, kindness) to others. 例句：It is love makes the world go round and he made up his mind to pass on “love” to others.正是爱让世界运转，他下定决心将“爱”传递给他人。 2.Indeed，only when we open up the door of our heart, can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love and care.实际上，只有我们打开心门，我们才能沐浴在明媚的阳光之下，享受爱和呵护的温暖。 3.It’s true that giving is receiving. When one is giving, not only does it make a difference in the lives of those who receive the gifts, but it also makes a difference in the lives of the givers themselves. 4.He was overwhelmed by the fact that his neighbors cared about his wellbeing, and said having us over for company was the best gift we could have given him. 5.Where there is life , there is hope.哪里有da生活，哪里就有希望。 6.Kindness is like a ray of sunshine, which can brighten/ light up our life. 7.True love is the most invaluable thing in the world. 8.Say goodbye to the past and embrace the present. 9.It dawned on me(我突然意识到） that we should always be an honest person whatever situation we are in. 10.I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous. 11.All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect, dignity and warmth. 12.No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. 13.It was no exaggeration to say/utter that sth（friendship, love, courage) was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of one’s memories.毫不夸张地说，sth 就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在某人记忆的长河里。 14.Feeling the warm sunlight breaking through the window, the whole family hugged in happiness. 感受着透过窗户照射进来的温暖阳光，全家人幸福地拥抱在一起。 15.You can never ignore the power of love. It’s a fire once lit, may burn forever. 3. 表达积极态度、坚定信念的主题万能升华句 1.It’s important to be grateful for the things we have in our life and never cry for what we don’t have. 2.Happiness doesn’t mean perfection, but a heart to appreciate the beauty of surroundings, which give you mental satisfaction. 3.The truth of happiness is holding our dream tightly but never failing to enjoy the fascinating scenery around us. 4.Belief is a great guide of human life. 5.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 6.Whether you regard yourself as a towering tree or a table of grass, or whether you think you are a high mountain or small stone, you represent a state of nature that has its own reason of existence. If you truly admire yourself, you will be courageous. 7.As long as we hold on with a strong perseverance, we will surely live our life beyond our limits. 8.It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts. 9.Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end 10.As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible. 11.Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal. 4. 表示人与自然和谐相处的升华句 1.From then on, we always keep away from wild animals, hoping to maintain the harmony of the ecology. (人与动物和谐相处）[句型：From then on, sb always do sth, hoping to...] 2.From then on, we always keep away from wild animals. Only in this way could we maintain the harmony of the ecology. [句型：From then on, sb always do sth. Only in that way could sb do sth.] 3.We human beings should in every way live in peace with Nature. 4.It is the duty of every one of us to protect the natural environment. 5.We will be punished by Nature for our destruction of its environment. 6.Improve the environmental awareness, take care of flowers and trees, protect wild animals, protect public facilities, promote the harmonious development of man and man, man and society, man and nature. *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2024新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【升华结尾】 We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 【答案】 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 【2023新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【升华结尾】 Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing. 【答案】 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew you’d win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher. I said, “It’s you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher. Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn’t have written this article. Again thank you very much!” I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. My teacher was waiting for me. Holding my hands, he said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.” “You know I didn’t like writing before, but now I am crazy about it! I will try my best to create good works.” I said seriously. Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing. 【2022新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.” I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【升华结尾】 To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. 【答案】 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. I said gently and quietly, “No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others’ thoughts.” He sat still with a deep breath. “You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. His coach heard what David said and gave me a look—the kind that was more determined than anyone else’s. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a heart disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didn’t take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【河北省沧衡名校联盟2023-2024学年高三下学期4月期中】 As we stepped off the plane in Pucón, the lively atmosphere of the town immediately lifted our spirits after the long flight from New York. The contrast between the freezing Big Apple and the warmth of Pucón was striking. The climate was delightful, which was a welcome change from the busy New York City. “Feel that?” my friend said proudly, bathed in the gentle sunshine. “This is what I call a vacation!” Our guide, Herman, was waiting for us with a broad smile. His English was limited, but his enthusiasm was boundless. He greeted us with heartiness, “Welcome to Pucón! I have everything ready for you.” We spent our first day settling into the luxurious house he had arranged for us. The unique design of the house deeply attracted us. The house was a combination of modern luxury and traditional charm, neat and tidy, with tall windows framing the greenery outside. Herman insisted on taking care of our every need. He would not even let us lift a finger in the house, which was above and beyond his duties. One evening, as we wandered along the beach, the sky transformed into a canvas (画布) of rich colors. We were placed in a world of wonder. My friend turned to me, eyes sparkling, and said,“This is why we travel, isn’t it? Moments like these make everything else fade away.” As we planned to go to another town to admire the unique architecture, something unexpected happened. I got a fever. Our explorations were cut short. Lying in bed, I could hear my friend pacing outside my room, worried. And our travel plans were put on hold as there was no choice but to rest in the hope that I would recover soon. The next morning, my fever worsened. Being new to the area and struggling with the language barrier, we felt helpless. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just then, Herman appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With Herman’s help, I began to recover. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Just then, Herman appeared. After he figured out what was going on, his face was marked by worry and concern. He sat beside me and took my hand. “I will take you to the doctor.” he said in simple words, and his determination gave us both comfort. At the clinic, Herman stayed by my side, translating and explaining the doctor’s instructions. His patience and care finally put me at ease. As I lay on the clinic bed, I whispered to him, “Thank you, Herman. I don’t know what we would do without you.” With Herman’s help, I began to recover. Each day, he would visit me, bringing fresh fruit and updates on the town. As my health improved, we continued our plans, visiting local markets and trying new foods. Each experience was richer because of Herman’s presence. Before leaving Pucón, I thanked Herman with all my heart. “You’ve been more than a guide; you’ve been an angel. I will never forget your kindness.” The journey wasn’t just the memory of the beautiful scenery, but also the warmth of Herman’s friendship and the reminder that sometimes, a small act of kindness can make a big difference. 【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友在Pucón旅行的经历。在导游Herman的陪伴下，他们享受了迷人的气候和友好的氛围，然而，作者突然发烧，旅行计划被迫中断。在病中，作者感受到了Herman的照顾和帮助，让他很是感激的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“就在这时，Herman出现了”可知，第一段可描写“Herman对我的担心，病陪伴我去看医生以及我对Herman的感激之情”的相关细节。 ②由第二段首句内容“在Herman的帮助下，我开始康复。”可知，第二段可描写“Herman每天为我带来新鲜的水果和镇上的最新消息，我好转以后继续我们的旅行计划，我衷心地感谢Herman给我们带来的美好体验”的相关细节。 2.续写线索：Herman带我就医——我感到放心——感谢Herman——我康复了——继续旅行——再次感谢Herman——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①坐：sit/seat oneself ②感谢：thank/appreciate 情绪类 ①使某人舒适自在：put sb at ease/make sb feel at home ②忧虑：concern/anxiety 【点睛】[高分句型1] I don’t know what we would do without you.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] As my health improved, we continued our plans, visiting local markets and trying new foods. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句) 【2024届湖北省八市4月高考调研模拟】 I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I'd had to be at the theatre for the audition (试演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I could go home. “I am very sorry,”he said,“but your voice isn't quite right for the part.”It had been a similar story at all the auditions that I'd done over the past few weeks. It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or Mamma Mia, so I'd taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a part in a show. I'd been really pleased when I'd managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next morning. It was a show I'd have loved to be in — but really, what was the point? Someone I knew had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it seemed like a much more sensible thing to do. I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing.Quite quickly I found myself belting out (大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of the pavement below, looking up at me. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next day I went to the eleventh audition. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. I was taken aback by her unexpected gesture of appreciation. Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” The unexpected support from a stranger was like a beacon of light in the midst of my doubts and disappointments. I felt a surge of confidence and determination washing over me. With renewed spirit, I made up my mind to go all out for the audition the next day. The next day I went to the eleventh audition. As I walked into the theatre, I felt a newfound sense of purpose and self-assurance. The director greeted me with a warm smile, and this time, as I sang my heart out, I could feel the magic in the air. When I finished, there was a moment of silence before the room erupted into applause. The director’s eyes were shining with excitement as he said, “You’ve got the part! Welcome to the show!” It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself. 【导语】本文人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公一直梦想能够参演像《音乐之声》或《妈妈咪呀》这样的著名音乐剧，为此接受了歌唱和舞蹈课程。然而，她在过去几周的十次试演中都遭遇失败。回到公寓后，她开始怀疑是否值得参加第十一次试演。在孤独的公寓里，她放声唱歌，想让自己振作起来，意外听到了来自陌生人的掌声的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“她向我伸出双臂，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写老人对主人公的歌声的赞美，主人公感到很意外，但陌生人的支持给了主人公力量，主人公下定决心全力以赴参加第二天的试镜。 ②由第二段首句内容“第二天我去参加了第十一次试演。”可知，第二段可描写主人公带着自信去试镜，得到了导演的欢迎，观众爆发出了阵阵掌声，导演让主人公出演主人公梦寐以求的角色，主人公意识到要实现梦想需要勇敢和信心。 2.续写线索：陌生人的赞美——主人公充满信心——决定参加第十一次试演——取得成功——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①闪烁：sparkle/glitter ②大声叫：shout/cry ③停止：stop/cease 情绪类 ①赞赏：appreciation/admiration ②兴奋地：with excitement/excitedly 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” (使用了as引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2] It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself. 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