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host two TV shows
be popular among the audience
show great interest in...
graduate from college/university
become a success
love for ancient Chinese poetry
accept a job happily
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the perfect image of the modern women
because of her devotion to work
earn sb the name
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人物传记是记叙文的一种,主要介绍名人或伟人的生平、事迹、影响等。因此,写人物传记时,要依据事实,抓住其出生年月、主要事迹、人们的评论等进行写作,以记叙为主,有时也可以适当地插入议论。
课文展示
Iron Hammer
Lang Ping is one of China's most recognised athletes.She has been a volleyball star for more than thirtyfive years and has contributed greatly to the sport,which has made her the most popular figure in China's volleyball history.[which引导的非限制性定语从句,which指代前面的整个句子。]
Lang Ping played on China's national volleyball team during the 1980s.Her strong and powerful playing style earned her the name “Iron Hammer”.Lang was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics, the 1982 World Championship and the 1981 and 1985 World Cups.Lang Ping became a star in China because of her success, her positive attitude and her ability to take on challenges.
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After retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.However, Lang Ping's commitment to Chinese volleyball brought her back home.In 1995,she returned to become the coach of the women's national team when the team was struggling.Under her leadership, the team came back to the top, winning the 2015 World Cup.
That year, Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards.She was also named “Touching China Personality” of 2016.She is loved not only because of her devotion to her career,but also because of her huge influence on the sport of volleyball.[本句包含“not only...but also...”结构,该结构连接两个并列的原因状语。]
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【文章结构】
1.人物介绍类文章属于应用文的一种,通常采用第三人称。
2.人物介绍需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、教育背景、工作经历、专业、爱好、主要事迹或成就等。
3.写作时对题目所给信息进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。
4.文章通常分为三段。
第一段:总体介绍人物的状况(本文介绍郎平的总体状况)。
第二段:介绍人物经历和主要事迹和成就。(本文的二、三自然段分别从运动员和教练两个角度描写)
第三段:对人物进行简短总结,并适当进行评价。(本文第四自然段总结了郎平所获得的各种荣誉)
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【相关词句】
1.生日及出生地
...was/were born in(出生地)/on(日期)
2.家庭背景
①His/Her family was so poor that...
他家/她家如此贫穷以至于……
②With the help of his parents,he/she was able to...
在父母的帮助下他/她得以……
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③His/Her father/mother was very strict with him/her...
父母对他/她很严格……
④As a child/when he/she was a child/during his/her childhood,he/she used to...
小时候,他/她常常……
⑤live a happy/hard/bitter life 过着幸福/艰难/悲苦的生活
3.教育情况
①He/She graduated from(...department of)...university
他/她毕业于某所大学(某个系)
②When at college,he/she majored in...
上大学时,他/她主修……专业
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③He/She received a doctor's degree at the age of...
在……岁时,他/她获得博士学位
④He/She went aboard for further study after he/she...
在……之后他/她出国深造
4.主要事迹
①He/She is interested in/has interest in/has a passion for/is crazy about/is keen on/is fond of...
他/她喜欢……/对……感兴趣(痴迷)。
②He/She has a gift/talent for...他/她有……天赋。
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③He/She devotes his/her lifetime to...
他/她一生都致力于……
④He/She did research in/into sth with great determination and perseverance.他/她以极大的毅力及坚持不懈从事……研究。
⑤He/She is strict with himself/herself/in sth.
他/她对自己/某事十分严格。
⑥He/She has a particular way of doing...
他/她有着独特的方式做……
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⑦He/She gave up a lot/his (her) spare time time for/to fight for...他/她放弃了很多/自己的业余时间去……
⑧He/She won a prize in...他/她获得……奖项。
⑨He/She made rapid progress in...
他/她在……方面取得快速进步。
⑩He/She set a new world record of...
他/她创造了……世界纪录。
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5.人物评价及影响
①His/Her story spread quickly and has an important influence on...
他/她的事迹迅速传播开来,对……产生了重要的影响。
②He/She is regarded/honored as one of the most...in the world.他/她被公认为/尊敬为世界上最……的人物之一。
③People have come to love him/her as an inspiring leader.
人们开始喜欢他/她作为一个鼓舞人心的领导。
④He/She has been praised for...他/她因……而受到赞扬。
⑤People speak highly of...and all respect...
人们高度赞扬……并对……尊重有加。
【注意事项】
1.人物介绍类文章的时态通常使用一般过去时,介绍人物的成长过程;如果该人物健在,在结尾部分的终结段,适当使用一般现在时或现在完成时。
2.在写人物介绍类文章时,注意相关信息的添加,使文章羽翼丰满。
3.注意使用过渡句,使文章连贯流畅,读起来朗朗上口。
4.句式要多样化。在文章中恰当地使用一些复合句、并列句、倒装句、虚拟语气、强调句型和非谓语等来调节文章的节奏。
5.一般要求在结尾对文章进行总结,可使用in a word,in short,briefly,generally speaking,finally,at last等总结性的词或短语。
6.写完后,一定要通读全文,并进行“四问”:
(1)是否遗漏了要点?
(2)语句是否正确通顺?
(3)每段是否围绕中心展开?有没有中心句?结构安排是否合理?
(4)有没有过渡不太自然的地方?能否在此添加过渡词句?
请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文,简要介绍一下央视著名主持人董卿,可适当增加细节。
1.出生于上海,从小就热爱中国传统文化。大学毕业后从事电视主持人工作。
2.2015年出国留学之际受邀主持《中国诗词大会》(Chinese Poetry Conference)。在此期间,由她制作并主持的《朗读者》(Readers)也大获成功。同年,获得“有突出贡献中青年专家”称号(Young and Middleaged Experts with Outstanding Contributions)。
3.她是一位优秀女性的典范。
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[审题谋篇]
体裁
人物传记
人称
第三人称为主
时态
一般现在时/一般过去时为主
框架
首段:概括介绍董卿为观众所熟悉的两档电视节目
中段:教育背景及详细介绍受邀主持《中国诗词大会》的情况;《中国诗词大会》和《朗读者》均大获成功,她为此得到的荣誉
尾段:被观众所喜爱的原因并进行评价
[词汇热身]
1._________________主持两场电视节目
2._____________________________ 受观众喜爱
3._________________________ 对……显示出极大兴趣
4.________________________________大学毕业
5.________________获得成功
6._______________________________对中国古诗词的热爱
7.____________________欣然热爱一份工作
8._____________________________________现代妇女的完美形象
9._______________________________因为她对工作的忠心
10.________________ 为某人赢得了……的名字
[连词成句]
1.出生于……,×××显示出……
Born in...,×××showed...
2.毕业后,×××一直是……
×××has been...since graduation from(×××graduated from...)
3.If was...that...就是……(强调句)
4.People like...not only because of...but also because of...
人们喜爱……不仅仅因为……而且还因为……
5.×××is honored as...
×××被誉为……
[组句成篇]
Dong Qing,a famous hostess,is now hosting two culture shows,Chinese Poetry Conference and Readers, both of which are popular.
Born in shanghai,she showed great interest in Chinese traditional culture and studied hard at school and college.In 2015,she was about to go abroad when she was invited to host Chinese Poetry Conference.It was her deep love for ancient Chinese Poetry that made her accept the job happily.The show has become more and more popular,which earn her the name “Young and Midaged Experts with outstanding contributions”.The show Readers has also become a success.
Dong Qing,is the perfect image of the modern women.The audience loves her not only because of her beauty,but also her devotion to her work.
假定你是李华,你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会,介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.做出的贡献;
3.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以根据所提供的要点进行适当发挥。
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【参考范文】
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese medical scientist.
Determined to help those suffering from malaria, Tu Youyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure. Luckily, her efforts paid off. In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.
So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspired by her story, I decide to study harder so as to realize my dream.
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