专题07 书面表达(2010-2023年天津高考真题)-备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(天津专用)

备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(天津专用) 第一期 专题07 书面表达(2010-2023天津高考真题) 1．（2023·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信： (1)申请参加本次活动； (2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解； (3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。 参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Workshop 中华美食 Chinese cuisine 手工艺 handicraft 书法 calligraphy 注意： (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity. The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine. I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Jin 【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：(1)申请参加本次活动；(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。 【详解】1.词汇积累 举办：hold→host 参加：take part in→participate in 有助于：be conducive to→contribute to 促进、推动：promote→facilitate 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句： I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. 拓展句：I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语) 【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首引起的部分倒装) 2．（2023·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件： (1)解释“活雷锋”的意思； (2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子； (3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。 参考词汇：活雷锋 a living Lei Feng 注意： (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, Happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours; Li Jin 【答案】Dear Chris, Happy to hear from you. I'm glad that you're interested in the expression “活雷锋”. In Chinese, “活雷锋” means a person who is kind, helpful, and selfless, just like the legendary hero Lei Feng. This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return. To give you an example, let me introduce you to Zhang Jian, a student from our school. Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need. Whether it's helping a classmate with their studies, assisting a teacher with classroom duties, or volunteering for community services, Zhang Jian is always there to lend a hand. I encourage you to continue your study of Chinese language. I wish you all the best in your studies and hope to hear more from you soon. Sincerely yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。 【详解】1.词汇积累 期待：expect→anticipate 提供帮助：lend a hand→give a hand 高兴的：glad→delighted 继续：continue→carry on with 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need. 拓展句：Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers because he is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return. (运用了who引导定语从句) [高分句型2] He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.(运用了when引导时间状语从句) 3．（2022·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿： (1)向同学们发出入社邀请； (2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)； (3)分享本人入社以来的收获。 注意：(1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers. The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable. The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends. Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。 【详解】1.词汇积累 机会：chance →opportunity 参加：participate in →take part in →join in 愉快的：enjoyable →joyful 激发：stimulate →motivate →activate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The club activities have benefited me a lot. 拓展句：The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We are looking forward to having you in the club!（运用了动名词作宾语） 【高分句型2】I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends. （运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构） 4．（2021·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： (1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)； (2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)； (3)你对该地方的印象和感受。 注意：(1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 A Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：说明文 时态： 一般现在时 结构：总分法 第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。 要求： 1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点 ①四川的地理位置：中国西南部 ②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程 2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程 ① 九寨沟是自然保护区 ②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物 ③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用 3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by 第三步：连词成句 (1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. (2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. (3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. (4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. (5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys. (6) There are many species of rare plants protected here. (7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. (8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago. (9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today. (10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 1.表递进关系：what is more 2.表转折关系：however 3.表示列举：such as, like 【点睛】[高分句型1] What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what引导的主语从句） [高分句型2] Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.（现在分词作状语） 5．（2020·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括: (1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像)； (2)对活动的感受； (3)对自己未来的展望。 注意: (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯； (3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony 新冠脑炎 COVID-19 Dear Chris, I’m so glad to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear Chris, I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic. Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work. Best wishes！ Yours, Li Jin 【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。 【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。 第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.； 第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. 第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however. 第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。 【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 6．（2020·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿： （1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点） （2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法 （3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。 注意： （1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 【答案】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English. Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end, I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于如何利用网络学习英语的发言稿。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点） （2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法 （3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） resource; be related to; in real-time; native speaker; instance messaging; video calling; online forum; a great way; identify; wrong information; share。 第三步：连词成句 There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English. Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】 范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文句式复杂，如：the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.这句话既运用了现在分词做方式状语，又使用了which引导的非限定性定语从句； learning English online is really a great way for English learners.使用了动名词做主语；But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right使用了部分否定。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 7．（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:   ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear Chris,   I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation. When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。 【详解】1.词汇积累 做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech 提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth. 机会：opportunity→chance 采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. 拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 8．（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括： （1）推荐书籍的类型及特点； （2）推荐的理由。 参考词汇： 科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy 传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science 注意： （1）词数不少于 100； （2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围； （3）内容充实、行文连贯； （4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。 March 22, 2019 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By Li Jin 【答案】March 22, 2019 Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books. The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand. This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant. I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you'll like it !Enjoy reading ! By Li Jin 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英语征文；假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introduce a book to you（给你推荐一本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books…in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials；不定式I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.；宾语从句I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.；强调句I do hope you'll like it!全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 9．（2018·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言： （1）鼓励他来中国留学； （2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）； （3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。 注意： （1）词数不少于 100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Hi Chris， I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education. I encourage you to come to China for further education for the following reasons. First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. In addition to this, you can appreciate the fascinating scenery of China in your holidays, which will leave an unforgettable impression on you. Should you need any more help, please don’t hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.                                                                        Yours WangJin 【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写给 Chris 留言。 【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言： （1）鼓励他来中国留学； （2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）； （3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，鼓励他来中国留学。第二段，说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第三段，表达期望。 第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: benefit, unforgettable impression, encourage sb to do sth,  appreciate the fascinating scenery of China, hesitate to do sth . 第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education. 第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First, In addition to, Finally. 第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。 【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 10．（2018·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。 （1）比赛的时间、地点； （2）邀请他的原因； （3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。 注意：（1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin 【答案】略 【详解】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。 11．（2017·天津·高考真题）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。 （1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活； （2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）； （3）希望她有机会重访天津。 注意： （1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：第十三届全运会  the 13th National Games Dear Mrs. Green, I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear Mrs Green,__ I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. Yours Li Jin 【分析】本文为提纲类作文。 【详解】这是李津给Mrs. Green的一封电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称，基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。 首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含: (1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。 其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句；非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。 第三,要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。 最后，要注意一下卷面整洁， 书写工整。 【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑, 本文要点齐全，适当增加了细节，选择使用了高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量短语,为文章增色不少,如: make great progress取得很大的进步，build up增强。还使用了定语从句，如As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.，又如I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.和宾语从句、条件状语从句，如I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。 12．（2017·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语，他得知“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出，非常感兴趣，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。 （1）简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响； （2）介绍了解中国文化的途径（如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等）； （3）表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。 注意：（1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition Dear Chris, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear Chris, I’m glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell you something you are interested in. Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been successfully held on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry. In your letter, you mentioned that you were eager to know about Chinese culture. I think the best way to learn about it is to read some relevant books. I’d like to recommend a book to you. The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. The poems in the book reflect the Chinese history and culture，many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese. And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry. I think the book is a good choice for you. I believe you will understand the poems easily and efficiently. Wish you to enjoy the book and have a better understanding of China.                                                                  Yours, Li Jin 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Chris写一封信，向他介绍“中国诗词大会”的相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。 【详解】1.词汇积累 吸引：appeal→attract 说：speak/state→mention 被命名为：named→entitled 推荐：introduce→recommend 2.句式拓展 简单句变复杂句 原句：The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. 拓展句：The book which entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been successfully held on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] In your letter, you mentioned that you were eager to know about Chinese culture. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 13．（2016·天津·高考真题）假设你是某高中的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿: ① 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； ② 谈谈收获或感想； ③ 表达祝愿与期望。 注意：① 词数不少于100； ② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Dear friends， _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Thank you. 【答案】Dear friends，      How time flies！Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings.      As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists’ works.     In my opinion, everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope we’ll get together again next year.     Thank you. 【分析】本文是一篇应用文写作。 【详解】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。 【点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。范文流畅，使用了高级句型：定语从句As scheduled；状语从句的省略While visiting the art exhibition；短语on behalf of；participate in；get together也为文章添彩不少。 14．（2015·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 （1）自我介绍； （2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等； （3）询问对方的其他需求。 注意： （1）词数不少于100； （2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear Chris,      I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School, the sister school of your school in Tianjin.      It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture. We will prepare books of many different kinds, such as poetry, fiction, and so on. The 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July.      As monitor of the Chinese Class, what other sorts of books do you think will be needed? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国友好交流学校的中文班班长Chris写一封邮件，告知向该校中文班捐赠图书事宜。 【详解】1.词汇积累 为了：in order to→so as to 帮助：help→assist 了解：understanding→knowledge 到达：arrive→reach 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We will prepare books of many different kinds, such as poetry, fiction, and so on. 拓展句：We will prepare books of many different kinds, which include poetry, fiction, and so on. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture.（运用了that引导的同位语从句） 【高分句型2】The 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 15．（2014·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件： (1) 表示欢迎       (2) 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等） (3) 介绍本班情况   (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊 注意： (1) 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。    (2) 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。 词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 (1) 参考词汇：   交换生  exchange student Dear Chris, I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. 【答案】One possible version: Dear Chris，     I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcome to our class in China. I'm glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other. So if you join us, I'm sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too.      The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so don't forget to bring different kinds of clothes with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like.     As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And we’ll exchange our different lives and cultures together then. looking forward to your coming! Yours Li Jin 【分析】本文是一封书信。假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请根据提示， 给他写封邮件。 【详解】本文要求写一封Email。本文包括了四个要点。1. 表示欢迎。2. 介绍班级情况。3. 注意事项。4. 希望Chris做的事。应该用一般现在时。 【点睛】范文要点齐全，全文连贯。运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句；not only…but also 连接词；用了get along well with，make friends with，as well as， instead of， it is convenient to you等短语和固定句型。 16．（2013·天津·高考真题）假设你是某大学的学生李津。你学校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。 个人优势介绍（如性格、特长等）； 组织校内活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）； 组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）； 表达当选的愿望。 注意： 1. 词数不少于100； 2. 请勿提及真实学校名称； 3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 副主席  vice president 竞选  run for Good afternoon, my dear friends. My name is Li Jin. ___________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】Good afternoon, my dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’m outgoing, and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I am skilled in organizing all kinds of activities. I’d like to run for the vice president of the English club in our school. I know, as the vice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. Also, to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests. I hope all of you will vote for me. Thank you. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生假设你是某大学的学生李津。你学校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 外向的：outgoing→extraverted 各种各样的：all kinds of→a variety of 组织，举办：organize→hold 打算：intend to do=plan to do 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I will try to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. 拓展句：I will try to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities which are organized by the club. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Also, to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests. (运用了不定式用作目的状语) [高分句型2] I hope all of you will vote for me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了引导词that) 17．（2012·天津·高考真题）假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。 *提出邀请并简述原因； *提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等） *请求对方回复 注意： 1.请使用规范英语，词数不少于100； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 越剧：Shaoxing Opera                   《梁山伯与祝英台》 Butterfly Lovers 天津大剧院Tianjin Grand Theater Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you.___________________________________________________ Yours,                                                                               Li Jin 【答案】Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. A Shaoxing Opera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater, which was just completed, at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th. It is because I know you like the culture of China, especially drama, that I would like to invite you to admire it. As we all know, Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama, telling about two young person’s moving love story. After watching it, shall we visit some places nearby, such as the art museum, in which lots of rich art will appeal to you enormously? I would be very glad if you come. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。内容包括：提出邀请并简述原因；提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）；请求对方回复。人称使用第一、三人称，时态使用一般现在时、一般将来时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be on show（上演），was just completed（新落成的），at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th（8月5日下午2：00），because（因为），the culture of China（中国文化），the art museum（艺术博物馆），Looking forward to your early reply.（期待您的早日回复）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如A Shaoxing Opera （过去分词）named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater,（非限定性定语从句）which was just completed, at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th.；（强调句）It is （原因状语从句）because I know you like the culture of China, especially drama, that I would like to invite you to admire it.； As we all know, Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama,（现在分词）telling about two young person’s moving love story.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 18．（2011·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。 1. 上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）； 2. 中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）； 3. 下午与我校学生游览海河。 注意： 1. 次数不少于100； 2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。 参考词汇： 海河 the Haihe River Dear Mr Smith I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. __ 此处不能答题 ________ Yours sincerely Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,     I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. We’re pleased to hear that your US School Delegation will pay a visit to our school in Tianjin, China. With the commission of our school headmaster, I’m fully responsible for your one-day tour to our school and our city. The following are our preliminary arrangements for your review and comments.      Students from both countries will hold a discussion in the morning to enhance their understanding. The topics to be discussed include but not limited to campus life, culture differences and so on. American students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us; the main courses are our local food, including Chinese noodles and dumplings. In the afternoon, after a short rest, we will visit Haihe River by boat, seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of Haihe, witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during the past few years.      Please feedback whether you’re satisfied with this schedule, and we will make changes as per your opinion in due course. Yours sincerely, LiHua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，介绍美国学生访问团的活动计划。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：pleased→happy/glad 热情地：cordially→enthusiastically 根据：as per→according to 完全地：fully→totally 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：American students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us; the main courses are our local food, including Chinese noodles and dumplings. 拓展句：American students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us, of which the main courses are our local food, including Chinese noodles and dumplings. 【点睛】[高分句型1] In the afternoon, after a short rest, we will visit Haihe River by boat, seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of Haihe, witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during the past few years.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的定语从句） [高分句型2] Please feedback whether you’re satisfied with this schedule, and we will make changes as per your opinion in due course.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句） 19．（2010·天津·高考真题）第二节：书面表达 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信： ● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等） ●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等） ●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等） 注意： 1.词数不少于100； 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 参考词汇： 晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. _______________________________________________________________________________­_______________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sir or Madam， I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits． I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity． My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．                                                 Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【分析】本文是书信类作文。 【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等 【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： As far as I am concerned据我所知，be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句， My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$