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Section Ⅳ Writing
描写自然的诗歌
本单元的写作任务是写一首诗歌。诗歌是一种文学体裁,要按照一定的音节、声调和韵律的要求,用凝练的语言、充沛的情感来高度集中地表现社会生活和人的精神世界。由于诗歌不是叙述生活而是歌唱生活,因此感情就是诗歌的主要内容,抒情美是诗歌的内容本质,感情要有所依托。诗歌的篇幅一般短小精悍、语言精练、感情强烈,在格式上,英语诗歌同汉语诗歌一样讲究押韵。英语诗歌的押韵是指通过重复元音或辅音以达到一定的音韵效果,一首诗的押韵具有规律性的一致性,尤其是在诗句的末尾,称尾韵。
1.The trumpet of a prophecy! Oh, the wind, if winter comes, can spring be far behind?
去唤醒沉睡的大地吧! 西风啊,如果冬天来了,春天还会远吗?
2.Autumn, you are more prosperous than the spring scene, you are more colourful than the colour of the spring.
秋天,你比春天更富有欣欣向荣的景象,你比春天更富有绚丽的色彩。
3.The arrival of autumn, so that fruit trees mature.Look, they're laughing apple red, like in autumn aunt let them mature thanks.
秋天的到来,让果树成熟了。看,苹果们个个都笑得红通通的,像在感谢秋姑姑让它们成熟了。
4.Autumn! Like a young girl dressed in golden clothes, gentle and kind, who always brings benefits to people!
秋天!就像一位身穿金色衣服的年轻姑娘,她温柔善良,总会给人们带来好处!
5.A creek twines the vast green field just like the blue colour satin ribbon, a distant place modelling is being plain, colour harmonious hut, a school of beautiful moving rural scenery!
一条条小河宛如蓝色的缎带缠绕着一望无际的绿色田野,远处一座座造型古朴、色彩和谐的小屋,一派美丽动人的田园风光!
为了丰富校园文化,提高学生学习英语的兴趣,学校组织英文诗歌比赛,假设你是高二学生李华,请你写一首描写自然的诗歌参加比赛。
注意:1.以写景为主;
2.注意押韵和节奏;
3.自由体诗,大胆创新,联想丰富。
[审题构思]
1.确定体裁: 诗歌
2.确定人称: 第三人称
3.确定时态: 一般现在时
4.确定内容:
开头:点名主题
中间:描述大自然
结尾:抒发情感
[遣词造句]
1.大自然有一群自己的孩子。
Mother Nature has her own kids .
2.他们会编写自己的故事。
They compose their own stories .
3.风弄散了雨水的头发。
Wind loosens the hair of rain .
4.雨水照看着土豆在泥土里长大。
Rain watches potatoes growing bigger in the earth.
5.每一棵树都沐浴在阳光下,昆虫们也会在不同的地方找到可口的食物。
All trees bathe in the sunshine, insects enjoy foods in different sites.
6.把所有大自然的孩子们画在一张纸上,他们便会展现明媚的微笑。
Portray all kids of Mother Nature on a sheet of paper ,then we'll see their smiles so wonderful.
[句式升级]
A.用定语从句合并升级句1和句2
Mother Nature has her own kids, who compose their own stories.
B.用定语从句合并升级句3和句4
Wind loosens the hair of rain, who watches potatoes growing bigger in the earth.
[连句成篇]
One possible version:
Mother Nature
Mother Nature has
Her own kids
Who compose
Their own stories.
Wind loosens
The hair of rain
Who watches potatoes
Growing bigger in the earth.
All trees bathe
In the sunshine
Insects enjoy foods
In different sites.
Portray all kids
Of Mother Nature
On a sheet of paper
Then we'll see
Their smiles
So wonderful.
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