Unit4 Section4 Writing(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing 社会现象类说明文 社会现象类说明文指的是针对某种社会现象进行说明的文体，强调时效性、针对性、准确性、说理性和思想性，文章往往从正反两个方面加以说明。写作时可按如下结构安排布局： 首段：提出一种现象； 中段：针对这种现象做出正反两个方面的对比； 尾段：得出结论，说明肯定哪一种观点、或者说出自己的观点。 ●首段：引入讨论话题 ①As for non­cash payments, different people have different opinions. ②With the development of economy, non­cash payments have been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. ③Mobile phones are everywhere and sometimes they can be very annoying. ④It is recognized that shopping online is becoming more and more popular. ●中段：列举正反方观点及其理由 ①As you know, there are both advantages and disadvantages of non­cash payments. ②a.70% of the people(who were) surveyed are satisfied with the non­cash payments. b．Those who are satisfied with the non­cash payments account for 70% of the people surveyed. ③a.There are some people who think that cash payments are safer than non­cash payments. b．There are some people thinking that cash payments are safer than non­cash payments. ④However, every coin has two sides.Paying by credit card also has its disadvantages. ⑤In a word, we should make the best of its advantages and meanwhile try to avoid its disadvantages. ●尾段：得出结论或发表个人观点 ①I believe with the development of non­cash payments, our life will be more convenient. ②Non­cash payments have greatly changed people's lives in China. ③With artificial intelligence, travelling in China will be an unforgettable experience. 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jenny正在做一份关于中国的移动支付(mobile payment)的问卷调查，你是她的重点采访对象，请你给她写封信，内容包括： 1．你或身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况； 2．移动支付带来的好处； 3．你的看法。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 二维码　QR　code Dear Jenny， How is your survey on mobile payment going？ I hope my explanation can be of some help to you.Wish you good luck. Yours faithfully， Li Hua [审题构思] 体裁 应用文 人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主 内容 第一部分：询问问卷调查的进展， 表示乐意帮忙； 第二部分：自己和身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况，移动支付带来的好处以及个人观点； 第三部分：表达希望和祝愿 [遣词造句] 1．人们普遍认为，中国是全球最大的移动支付市场。 It's generally believed that　China is the largest mobile payment market globally. 2．我们大多数人习惯了扫描二维码来为我们买的任何东西付钱。 Most of us are used to scanning QR codes to pay for　whatever we purchase　. 3．随着移动支付的广泛使用，我们根本不需要带钱包或现金。 With the widespread use of mobile payment, we don't　need to carry　a purse or cash at all. 4．我们永远不会担心得到假钞或不得不数零钱。 We will never worry about getting fake notes or having to　count change　. 5．在中国，移动支付极大地改变了人们的生活。 Mobile payment has greatly　changed people's life　in China. 6．我个人认为应该鼓励移动支付。 Personally, I think mobile payment　should be encouraged　. 7．它因方便而赢得了消费者的支持。 It has　won over　consumers with its convenience. 8．另一个优势是，如果你使用移动支付，经常会有折扣，因为主要的在线支付平台都在竞争，以吸引更多的消费者使用它们的服务。 Another advantage is that there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms　are competing　to have more consumers take advantage of their service. [句式升级] 9．用倒装句改写句4 　Never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.　 [连句成篇] One possible version： Dear Jenny，　 How is your survey on mobile payment going？ I'm glad I can help with it. It's generally believed that China is the largest mobile payment market globally.Most of us are used to scanning QR codes to pay for whatever we purchase. With the widespread use of mobile payment, we don't need to carry a purse or cash at all.Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.In short, mobile payment has greatly changed people's life in China. Personally, I think mobile payment should be encouraged.First, it has won over consumers with its convenience.Another advantage is that there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing to have more consumers take advantage of their service. I hope my explanation can be of some help to you.Wish you good luck.　 　Yours faithfully，　 　Li Hua　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$