Unit3 Section4 Writing(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing 推荐中国的旅游城市 本单元的写作话题是给外国朋友推荐一个中国的旅游城市，写作时，要注意以下几点： 1．时态多用一般现在时； 2．方位词运用要准确，过渡词使用要恰当； 3．遣词造句要简洁明确，不要模棱两可或故意渲染； 4．段落结构：第一段引出话题；第二段重点介绍推荐理由，即介绍推荐城市的优势；第三段总结全文。 ●首段：引入话题 ①I've learned that you're planning to visit Beijing, so I, as a local, am writing to put forward my suggestions about your tour. ②I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to my hometown Beijing. ③Since you're going to travel in China, I'd like to recommend you to visit my hometown Yangzhou. ④I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you're coming to China.I'm writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome. ●中段：介绍推荐的景点并说明推荐原因 ①The first reason why I recommend the Great Wall is that it is one of the new seven wonders in the world. ②The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best­preserved royal garden in China. ③Besides, it's a charming city with rich culture and a long history, where you can enjoy various caves and carvings. ●尾段：表达愿望或希望对方接受建议 ①I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account. ②I hope you will be interested in it. ③I'm looking forward to your arrival in Beijing! ④May you have an unforgettable tourist experience! 假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校交换生Jim 打算寒假出京旅游，发来邮件请你推荐一座中国历史文化名城。请给他回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1．你推荐的城市； 2．推荐理由； 3．食宿建议。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， Yours， Li Hua [审题构思] 体裁 应用文 人称 以第一、三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主 内容 第一段：引出推荐的城市； 第二段：写出推荐的理由及食宿等方面的建议； 第三段：总结 [遣词造句] 1．我了解到你打算去另一个城市旅行。 I have learnt that you are　planning to　travel to another city. 2．这个城市是中国悠久的历史和丰富的文化的证明。 The city is　testimony　to the long history and rich culture　of China. 3．它被证实曾是13个朝代的都城。 It was　proved　to be the capital city　of 13 dynasties. 4．在这里你可以接触到无数的历史遗迹，如兵马俑和大雁塔。 You can　be exposed to　countless historic relics　here, such as the Terra cotta Warriors and the Dayan Pagoda. 5．西安还是一个非常奇妙的地方，它赋予了东方迷人的艺术和文化生命力。 Xi'an is also a wonderland，　which brings　the fascinating art and culture of the East to life　. [句式升级] 6．将句1和句2合并为含有定语从句的句子 　I have learnt that you are planning to travel to another city which is testimony to the long history and rich culture of China.　 7．将句3和句4合并为含有定语从句的句子 　It was proved to be the capital city of 13 dynasties, where you can be exposed to countless historic relics, such as the Terracotta Warriors and the Dayan Pagoda.　 [连句成篇] One possible version： Dear Jim，　 I have learnt that you are planning to travel to another city which is testimony to the long history and rich culture of China.Then I want to recommend Xi'an to you. It was proved to be the capital city of 13 dynasties, where you can be exposed to countless historic relics, such as the Terracotta Warriors and the Dayan Pagoda.Xi'an is also a wonderland, which brings the fascinating art and culture of the East to life.You can choose to live someplace near the ancient city wall.What's more, the bustling snack street in the downtown is a must for tourists. I am sure the wonderful and historic Xi'an will strike a chord with you! 　Yours，　 　Li Hua　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$