Unit3 Section4 Writing(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第二册（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing 运动故事类文章 运动故事类文章属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中需要灵活地掌握和运用一些技巧：1.要把握住记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)；2.要把握故事性记叙文的结构。写作时，要有一条线索贯穿全文，使整篇文章逻辑连贯。 写作步骤： 第一步：交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物； 第二步：介绍事件的原因及发展过程； 第三步：描述故事的发展结果并表达感受。 特别提醒：这种文章时态常用一般过去时，以记叙为主。 一、夺人眼球开头句 1．The first time I took part in jogging, I fell in love with the sport. 第一次参加慢跑时，我就爱上了这项运动。 2．Before I knew it, I took up swimming and I found it quite fun. 不知不觉中我开始游泳，并且发现游泳很有趣。 3．The football game was held in our school gym last Friday when we played against the other team. 足球比赛是上周五在我们学校体育馆举行的，当时我们和另一队比赛。 二、亮点出彩篇中句 1．In order to win the competition, I must get fully prepared and practice hard. 为了赢得比赛，我必须做好充分的准备，努力练习。 2．To perform well in the football game, I need to train in the school gym for two hours after school every day. 为了在足球比赛中表现好，我需要每天放学后在学校体育馆训练两个小时。 3．I like yoga, since it helps me to keep fit and calm myself. 我喜欢瑜伽，因为瑜伽帮助我保持健康并且让我平静。 4．Volleyball is my favorite, since it is great fun and good exercise as well. 排球是我的最爱，因为排球很有趣而且是很好的锻炼。 5．I never thought I could win first place in the running race. 我从未想过我能在赛跑中获得第一名。 三、韵味无穷结尾句 1．It is the most exciting moment that I have experienced. 这是我经历的最激动人心的时刻。 2．I really had a great day taking part in the running competition. 参加跑步比赛使我度过了真正愉快的一天。 3．I was really proud when my team won the volleyball competition. 当我的球队赢得排球比赛时，我真的很自豪。 假定你是李华，上周参加了学校运动会。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你此次参加学校运动会的经历。要点包括： 1．你的角色； 2．参与过程； 3．你的感受。 注意：词数80左右。 [审题构思] 1．确定体裁： 应用文 2．确定人称： 第一人称 3．确定时态： 一般过去时 4．确定内容： 首段：你的角色 中段：参与过程 尾段：你的感受 [遣词造句] 1．我一直积极参加学校的体育活动。 I have been actively involved in 　the sports events in my school. 2．上周五，我参加了一年一度的运动会的跑步比赛。 Last Friday, I entered a running race 　during the annual sports meet. 3．当我面对十五个强大的竞争者时，我感到紧张，因为我认为很难赢得第一名。 When I was faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous since I thought it hard to win first place　. 4．一听到起跑信号，所有的赛跑者都跑起来了。 　At the sound of the starting signal all the runners went off. 5．我竭尽全力跟上他们。 I did everything in my power to keep up with them. 6．几分钟后，我不知不觉地成了跑得第二快的人。 Minutes later, before I knew it I became the second fastest runner. 7．凭着坚强的意志，我第一个到达了终点线。 With strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line　. 8．尽管我很累而且满身是汗，但我从未感到如此自豪和开心。 I was tired and sweaty, but I had never felt so proud and happy　. [句式升级] A．用过去分词短语作状语升级句3 Faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous since I thought it hard to win first place. B．用although引导的让步状语从句升级句8 Although I was tired and sweaty, I had never felt so proud and happy.　 [连句成篇] One possible version： I have been actively involved in the sports events in my school.Last Friday, I entered a running race during the annual sports meet. Faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous since I thought it hard to win first place.At the sound of the starting signal all the runners went off.I did everything in my power to keep up with them.Minutes later, before I knew it I became the second fastest runner.With strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line. Although I was tired and sweaty, I had never felt so proud and happy. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$