2025届高考英语作文实战提分讲义

英语作文实效提分——高级词汇弃旧用新 阅卷老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词,因为用学得较晚的单词,能体现“学以致用”的意识。如:表“美丽的”形容词少用初中词汇 beautiful,多用高中词汇 appealing, attractive, charming和 fascinating等,能给文章增加亮点。其他如 carefully-attentively,get→ obtain/acquire,have→ possess, improve→ promote/strengthen等。 With your birthday coming, I'd like to send you one Chinese painting as a gift.你的生日快到了,我想送你一幅中国画作为礼物。(coming升级为 approaching) There will be many activities to mark this unforgettable occasion.将会有很多活动来纪念这个难忘的时刻。(many升级为 various) 　 一、高级词汇用于应用文写作 利用高级词汇升级下面回复信中的加黑体词语,并背诵成文。 Dear Jim, As for your last letter asking about the sports activities in our school, I'd like to share with you some details. Our PE subject is well received because many 1.various sports courses are offered. Besides 2. Moreover/Additionally ,there are sports clubs available for us to develop 3.foster athletic skills after class. Also 4.Furthermore some sports events are held regularly such as the sports meet in September, where everyone can experience the spirit of sports Al these sports events have benefited us greatly. Not only have they encouraged us to exercise actively but improved 5. strengthened our sense of teamwork. What about your school's sports activities? 　　 Yours, 　　 Li Hua 二、高级词汇用于读后续写 利用高级词汇升级下面读后续写中的加黑体词语,并体会动作和细节描写。 My heart beating rapidly, I headed for the register. I paid the dollar for the three things1.items and was about to leave when I felt a heavy tap on my shoulder. It was a big detective.“You stole something. You will be searched,”he announced. Afraid ②Terrified/Frightened,I slid the book out from inside the shirt and handed it over. "An encyclopedia?"he asked, somewhat surprised.“Yes," whispered, trembling,“Why didn't' you ask your parents to buy ③purchase it?”“1　did, but they didn't' have the money.” With sigh, he made me promise to tell my parents about my wrongdoing and then let me leave. Back home. I told my mother what I had promised the detective. Unexpectedly, she didn't explode as usual. She fell silent, looking very④ extremely anxious. Filled ⑤Consumed with guilt, gathered my courage, apologized and promised that it would never happen again. "All will be OK! said my mother, wrapping me in her arms. My mother then asked me to play outside for while and happily I went out. Hours later, when returned home, noticed a bag inside which was the World Book Encyclopedia. 高考英语实效提分——with结构和否定词 with/without复合结构With/Without+名词/代词+ doing/done/todo/adj.结构,在句中可作定语或状语,提高作文得分档次。否定意义的词的运用否定词 no, nor, never, nothing等可与比较级连用。 With time going by, more and more people are beginning to realize the importance of protecting the environment. 随着时间的推移,越来越多的人开始意识到保护环境的重要性。 With all the factors taken into consideration, I believe that you are certain to catch up with others soon. 考虑所有因素,我相信不久你就会赶上别人。 Of course, no tourists will miss the local food in Xi'an, nor will we.当然,游客都不会错过西安当地的食物,我们也不例外 Relations between the two countries have never been better.两国关系从未这么好过。 一、with结构和否定词用于应用文写作 用with结构或含否定词的句式升级下面倡议书中的加黑体部分,并背诵成文。 Dear fellow students, As plogging combines jogging with picking up litter1.With plogging combining jogging with picking up litter, the new fitness trend has swept across the world since it was created. 　 It has been acknowledged that plogging has lots o advantages. Firstly, more calories can be consumed while plogging, thus improving exercise efficiency. Additionally, whatever age you are, you can easily adopt the sports style.Special training as well as extra costs isn't required 2 No special training is required, nor are extra costs. Most importantly, the environment can benefit from such a sport. In short, plogging not only benefits our health but also does good to our environment, Let's spare no effort to take action. Li Hua 二、with结构和否定词用于读后续写 　　按汉语提示用with结构或含否定词的句式填空或用with结构或含否定词的句式升级下面读后续写中的加黑体部分。 　　As Roman was in farther from the snake, he jumped to the window. At the same time Roman grabbed the curtain and so hard did he pull it that the curtain ended up landing in his hand. Then without waiting a second, he threw the curtain over the snake. 1.With the snake covered by the curtain (蛇被窗帘盖住), he grabbed the two kids by their hands and brought them out of the room The kids ran for their life and reached at the front yard within a second. He again went inside taking his mom to the front yard. As Mom was shaking like a leaf and the kids were sweating hard 2.With Mom shaking like a leaf and the kids sweating hard.he could hardly calm down. 　　 Later, he called the rescue team from his cellphone. As soon as the rescue team arrived, they caught the snake and took it along with them, so they could hand over the snake to the concerned organization. Mom got to normal as the snake was caught③with the snake caught but the kids were still scared.④Roman had never felt angrier with himself(罗曼从未这么生自己的气), His heart beat fast⑤With his heart beating fast, and he said to himself,“What an unusual day!” 　　 高考英语作文实效提分——被动句和感叹句 被动句:用英语思维地道表达在概要写作中可利用被动句转换句式或在读后续写和应用文写作中使表达更地道。感叹句:适时感叹,必要强调在写作中利用what/how引导的感叹句,可恰当地表达心情和感受。　　 1. There is no doubt that attention should be paid to the problem of overusing mobile phones. 　 毫无疑问,我们应该关注过度使用手机的问题。 2. How delighted I was to be one of the members in the warm family! This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory. 成为这个温暖的大家庭的一员,我是多么高兴啊!这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。 一、被动句和感叹句用于应用文写作 　　根据汉语提示用被动句或感叹句补全下面的劝慰信,并背诵成文。 Dear Jamie, I'm sorry to learn you have difficulty in your Chinese learning. To be honest,1.Chinese characters and essays are never easy to learn.(汉字和汉语文章从来不容易学). However you don't have to feel upset. Firstly, it would be wise to turn to the Internet for help when②.You are faced with a problem(你面对问题), where you can learn how to read and write. Additionally,③You are advised to join Chinese clubs(建议你加入汉语俱乐部) to practice oral Chinese with others. Finally, learn some relevant courses on relevant apps,and④your comprehension will be improved (你的理解力将得以提高) 　　 If there exist further problems, please don't hesitate to contact me. Yours, 　　 Li Hua 二、被动句和感叹句用于读后续写 　　用被动句转换下面读后续写中的加黑体部分,或根据汉语提示用感叹句填空。 　　 He thought for a moment and realized that they just would not follow a human. He said to himself, "How can I possibly save them? The only way would be for me to become like those swans. If only I could become like one of them. Then I could save them①they could be saved by me.They would follow me and I would lead them to safety. "He realized it was clear that these swans were afraid of human beings and every time he got close to them, they would fl away. He thought he should come up with a good idea. Just then, a good idea occurred to his mind. He thought of his geese that he raised on his farm 2. that were raised on his farm. After all, they were relatives. Maybe they were much easier to get along with. He rushed to his geese and drove them to the front of the barn. Then he went back to his: house, observing through the window. The cold soon drove his geese into the barn 3.His geese were driven into the barn by the cold soon. followed by the swans. His method worked!_ The swans were safe now! 4.How delighted he was.(他是多么高兴啊)! 高考英语作文实效提分——特殊句式 强调句和倒装句 强调句型“It is/was+被强调成分+that/who+其他成分”可以加强语气,突出某些人物或事件的重要性;运用部分/全部倒装句以示强调。虚拟语气和省略句用虚拟语气可使语气委婉,常用于请求和建议的情景;用省略句可避免不必要的重复。 1.It is your detailed explanation on the topic that will appeal to me most. 就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。 2.Following the speech is a one-hour lecture on the history Chinese music.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。 3.If it had not been for your assistance, would not have made such rapid progress.要不是你的帮助,我就不会取得如此快的进步 4. When asked about happiness, we usually think of something extraordinary, an absolute delight.当被问及幸福时,我们通常会想到一些不同寻常的事,一种绝对的喜悦。　　 1、 特殊句式用于应用文写作 按照所给汉语提示,利用特殊句式补全或升级下面道歉信中的加黑体句子,并背诵成文。 Dear Nancy, I'm sorry to tell you I cannot go to the show with you next Saturday. I am writing to apologize to you. The reason why I am not available is that we volunteers are to launch a campaign at that time1.It is at that time that we volunteers are to launch a campaign.(用强调句升级).registered volunteer, it is my responsibility to participate in public welfare activities. 2.I do hope you can forgive me.(我真的希望你能原谅我,用助动词强调动词). Meanwhile, if it is convenient for you, 3. I suggest we fix another date.(我建议我们另安排日期). If it is not4.If not (用省略句升级), let me know what time suits you Sorry again for any inconvenience caused. Yours, 　　 Li Hua　　 2、 特殊句式用于读后续写 按照所给汉语提示,利用特殊句式补全或升级下面读后续写中的加黑体句子,并体会细节描写。 Some time later, he woke up under a tree in the same valley. He was alone, worried about his dog and he knew he was going to get into more trouble with his wife. Then he noticed a curious thing-his hair was over his shoulders and his beard was over a foot long! He was so surprised that he decided immediately to get back to the village1.So surprised was he that he decided immediately to get back to the village. (用倒装句升级), It was on arriving there that he realized that everything was different and2.There stood lots of new houses(那里矗立着许多新房,倒装句). To his surprise, he didn't recognize the people in the village. When he got to his house, he saw it was old and abandoned. To his sorrow, his wife died two years ago 3.It was two years ago that his wife died(用强调句强调two years ago升级) and the two children had left away. Despite the argument with his wife, he was regretful of the past. Facing this sharp change, Rip was determined to change his way of living and never be a lazy man. He not only became a diligent farmer, but he also kept pace with the new society4.Not only did he become a diligent farmer but he also kept pace with the new society.(用倒装句升级). In his spare time, he would still went to the old inn that had been rebuilt to tell some stories about his adventure in the valley which appealed to the children a lot. 高考英语作文实战提分——三大从句 运用定语从句,让表述更丰满在概要写作中可利用定语从句合并关键信息或转换句式。 运用名词性从句,让表达更多样在概要写作中可利用名词性从句合并关键信息或转换句式。 运用状语从句,让逻辑更清晰在概要写作中可利用状语从句转换并列句或合并关键信息。 1. This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students, each of which appeals to many students.这学期我校为学生们开设了许多选修课,每门课都吸引了很多学生。 2.It is known that table tennis is national ball in my country, so that you should know what my favorite sports is.正如你所知,乒乓球是中国的国球,因此你应该知道我最喜欢的运动是什么。 3.However tough the task is, there. is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.不管任务多么艰巨,毫无疑问,我们将克服所有的困难并取得成功。 一、三大从句运用于应用文写作 利用三大从句升级下面感谢信中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空,并背诵成文。 Dear Bill, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to your whole family for①what you did for me when i studied in London.(当我在伦敦学习时你为我所做的事,宾语从句+状语从句) as an exchange student. Your kindness and consideration made my stay so enjoyable②What made my stay so enjoyable is your kindness and consideration.(用主语从句升级) The beautiful scenery, well protected environment and kind local people impressed me so much Not only did I learn a lot about your rich culture, but I practiced my spoken English.③There is no doubt that the time when i stayed with you and your family(毫无疑问,我和你及你的家人在一起的时光,同位语从句+定语从句) left me so warm and deep impression. Thanks again for your kindness. Yours, 　　 Li Hua 二、三大从句运用于读后续写 利用三大从句升级下面读后续写中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空,并体会动作描写。 　When he arrived at his father’s house　(当他到了父亲的房子时), sudden sadness and regret filled his heart.He began to search through his father's important papers and saw the still new Bible, just as he had left it years ago. With tears, he opened the Bible and began to turn the pages.As /When/While he was reading(当他在读时,状语从句),a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. It had a tag with the name of the dealer, and he had the sports car he had desired③who had the sports car he had desired(用定语从句升级). On the tag was the date of his graduation, and the words...“PAID IN FULL” How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected? Do not spoil what you have by desiring④what you don’t have(你所没有的,宾语从句);but remember that what you now have was once among the things⑤that you only hoped for(你希望得到的,定语从句 ) Sometimes we don't realize the good fortune we have or we could have⑥because we expect “the packaging” to be different(因为我们期望包装是不同的,状语从句).⑦What may appear as bad fortune(看起来是坏运气的事,主语从句) may in fact be the door⑧which is waiting to be opened(正等待被打开的,定语从句) 作文实战提分——短语优先 短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满,应巧妙利用短语 表达文义,增加文采。如, realize→be aware(of); attract →appeal to; value→attach importance to; cause-→contribute to; choose→pick out; visit→ pay a visit to等。 1. Bear in mind that you should avoid getting hurt during th training.(bear in mind代替普通词汇 remember)记住:在训练中你应该避免受伤 2. I'd like to share with you some details related to our school's' music festival.(related to代替普通词汇 about)我想和你介绍我们学校音乐节的相关细节。 3. Take advantage of the opportunity to show off your talent(take advantage of代替普通词汇use)利用这次机会展示你的才能。 一、高级词汇用于应用文写作 利用高级单词和短语升级下面推荐信中的加黑体词语,并背诵成文 Dear Terry, 　 Learning you're coming to China to experience 1.have a taste of the Chinese traditional folk arts, I'd like to recommend you choose paper-cutting as there are many2.various/abundant/a variety of forms of folk arts throughout China. The themes of paper-cutting usually include 3.involve everything in local people's daily life. Paper-cutting not only shows 4. represent the wisdom of Chinese people but is also useful 5.of use Traditionally, people paste them on doors or windows when celebrating important occasions, especially for the Spring Festival. Besides6. Additionally/ furthermore/ moreover / in addition, it enjoys increasingly high popularity, and that is why it is an ideal gift for friends I sincerely hope you can consider my recommendation. Yours, 　　 Li Hua 二、高级词汇用于读后续写 　　利用高级单词和短语升级下面读后续写中的加黑体词语。 　　Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand. He chose1.picked out a red flower and put it on our table.“Merry Christmas!”he greeted us in a cheerful voice. Before we could say "Thank you!, he went to other tables. Immediately2.in an instant everyone in the room was given 3.presented with flowers In the bright light, the flowers were glowing in full bloom. These magical flowers melted our frustrated hearts and blew away all the unpleasant moods. The piano player came alive and pleasant music filled the whole room. A festival atmosphere drowned all of us. We happily danced to the joyful music, singing laughing and wishing each other good luck. The old flower woman also joined us, unable to 4.failing to hide her excitement and thanks 5.gratitude /appreciation The spirit of Christmas came back to us again. It brought all of us together in this small restaurant on a foreign land. All this was thanks to a young American sailor, who, through his kindness and generosity, brightened6 .lit up our paths. 　　 　　 作文实战提分——活用非谓语 利用非谓语动词对两个甚至两个以上的简单句进行整合,使其成为高级的表达方式。应用文写作中利用非谓语动词巧妙表达写作要点。用非谓语动词简化复合句,使语言简练在概要写作中可利用非谓语动词将要点句中的定语从句简化为非谓语动词作定语,或将状语从句转换为非谓语动词作状语。 1. George's mother saw the wild strawberries, so she was very glad, and tears ran down her face. →Seeing the wild strawberries, George's mother was very glad, tears running down her face. 2. We will hold a large photography exhibition which reflects the development of our school. → We will hold a large photography exhibition reflecting the development of our school. 　　 一、非谓语动词用于应用文写作 根据汉语提示用非谓语动词补全下面的投诉信或按要求用非谓语动词升级或简化加黑体部分,并背诵成文 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, and am writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website 1.writing to complain about the jacket bought from your website.(用非谓语动词简化)2.On/Upon receiving the jacket(一收到夹克),I was annoyed to find there was something wrong with it. The moment the mail box arrived, couldn't' wait to open it,3.only to find a red one(结果却发现一件红色的). Even worse, need size170 while you sent me a size 175. Additionally, its zipper doesn't work at all! My concern is whether you will return me the money or replace the jacket4.have the jacket replaced(用非谓语动词作宾补升级) Looking forward to your early reply. 二、非谓语动词用于读后续写 按照所给汉语提示用非谓语补全或用非谓语动词升级下面读后续写中的加黑体句子,并体会细节描写。 Immediately, the class became excited. Some could hardly wait to tell their seatmates about their holiday trips, and their eyes were shining and faces were glowing with joy1.eyes shining and face glowing with joy(用独立主格升级)Those who hadn't been anywhere bombarded them with inquiring questions. Enormous joy welled up in every corner of the classroom. Obviously he was confused at the sudden noisy situation2.Obviously confused at the sudden noisy situation(用分词作状语升级), Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face.“Any volunteer to share your story?" asked Ms Sullivan, whose words I set down on paper for Rafael. Then Rafael rose and walked onto the platform.3.Greeting us with a confident smile(用自信的微笑迎接我们,分词作状语), Rafael shared his story in magnetic voice, which left me stunned. I felt more ashamed to learn that he ran a website to help children with hearing problems than guilty about4.thinking disabled people couldn’t be intelligent(认为残疾人不聪明,非谓语动词作宾语)Then his voice was lost in a thunderous burst of applause. Feeling a lump in the throat, clapped my hands even more loudly,5.determined never to judge a book by its cover.(决定不再以貌取人，分词作状语)　 　　 高考英语作文实效提分 高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于应用文写作 1.按要求升级下面的演讲稿中的加黑体部分,并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇,最后背诵成文。 Ladies and gentlemen, 　 It's my great honor to be here on behalf of our school and I'd like to offer you my warmest welcome. Now, allow me to share with you the arrangements for your stay here. 1. Firstly/To begin with , we will show you around our school, during which you can get to know about the history of our school.A one-week seminar then follows 2.Then follows a one-week seminar(用倒装句升级), where both parties can have a deep understanding of each other. 3. Last but not least, we will show you some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy, paintings and Peking opera 4.some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy, painting and Peking opera will be shown to you (用被动句升级)⑤Hopefully, you can enjoy your stay. 　　 Thank you. 2.高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于读后续写 　按要求升级下面的读后续写中的加黑体部分,并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇。 　　 When we arrived home, we found father was lying on the floor, bleeding. Though we were very surprised 1.Though very surprised(用省略句升级), we sent him to hospital at once. With the help of doctors, my father came back to life on Christmas Eve, and it made our family pleased.2.which made our family pleased(用非限制性定语从句升级). My parents loved each other very much, so my mother kept my father company day and night3.My parents loved each other so much that my mother kept my father company day and night(用状语从句升级), completely forgetting the trip to Florida. After my father woke up, he said sorry to us④and told us everything that happened to him. 　　 After we left for the airport to buy tickets, a man limbed into our house to steal money. My father caught him and bravely fought with him, 5. but unfortunately the man hurt my father. When we heard the news 6.Hearing the news(用非谓语动词作状语升级), we were proud of him. On Christmas Eve, we held a party in hospital for my father. Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.7.singing Christmas songs to him .(用非谓语动词作状语升级) That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful. I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital 8.Never will I forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital . 高考英语作文实效提分 综合练习二 应用文写作用高级词汇或高级句式升级下面的启示中的加黑体的部分,并背诵成文。 Lost and Found I'm Mike, who is an exchange student from America① an exchange student from America(用名词短语作同位语升级). It's really a pity that on my way to school at 7 am on November 15th, I lost my schoolbag on No. 98 bus from Dongdaqiao to Shuangjin. My schoolbag is a new black one that has a Chinese knot on the top②with a Chinese knot on the top(用with结构作定语升级). In the bag, you can find various textbooks, my student card and ID card, and they are important to me③which are of great importance to me (用非限制性定语从句十介词短语升级). 　 I'd appreciate it if you find my schoolbag and return it to me. Please contact me at 12345678900. Thanks!　　 Ⅱ.读后续写 　用高级词汇或高级句式升级下面读后续写中的加黑体的部分。 　 Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. Our campsite was in the depth of the forest, really far away from the highway. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, as our supplies were burnt into ashes①with our supplies burnt into ashes(用with结构升级), including our cellphones Even Steve was unsure what to do next. The only thing we could do was just sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest. Suddenly②All of a sudden, we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. A forester had spotted the light from the fire and had come to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station, and there we were given clothes and were able to call our parents③where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents (用非限制性定语从句升级). Steve and I had many④a great many/a variety of camping adventures from then on, but on this trip Steve began to treat me more like a friend5.it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend.(用强调句升级) rather than younger cousin. Our friendship continues to this day. 　　 高考英语写作不可不背的高级表达 写作高级词汇 写作词汇升级 1. a way to do sth =→ an approach to doing sth做某事的方法 We are supposed to adopt an appropriate approach to protecting us from the terrible virus. 2. all kinds of =→ a variety of/various/a wide range of各种各样的 ①There is a wide range of local operas around China，such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera. ②What’s more, a variety of activities will be involved, including taking photos, recording videos, writing graduation wishes, giving away souvenirs and so on. (2021·昆明市“三诊一模”高考模拟) 3. good =→ rewarding，worthwhile，beneficial，be of great benefit 有益的 In conclusion, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I believe the long running for love is the most beneficial one to me. (2021·临川一中高三模拟) 4. very =→ more than非常 Once accepted, I will be more than delighted to work harder for my academic performance. (2021·重庆高三全真模拟3) 5. free =→ available有空的 Please make sure you are available at that time and join us. (2021·东北三省四市二模) 6. be busy with =→ be absorbed in/be occupied with/be engaged in 忙于 Receiving your e-mail is such a refreshing thing since I am fully occupied with making good preparations for the coming exam. 7. important =→ of vital/great importance/significance重要的 That was a very good opportunity for me to improve my English and know more about the environmental protection which is of great importance to us human beings. 8. realize =→ raise awareness of/be aware of意识到 The activity aims at raising students’ environmental protection awareness and urging students to take effective measures to protect our earth. 9. affect/work =→ make a difference有影响；起作用 I do hope these suggestions make a great difference to you. (2021·福州市毕业班适应性检测) 10. join in/take part in =→ participate in/get involved in/compete in 参加 It is really my honor to participate in the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. 11. consider =→ take sth into account/consideration考虑 I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your approval. 12. master =→ have an excellent command of对……掌握熟练 Having an excellent command of English allows me to participate in various contests and activities both at home and abroad, making me a more confident individual. 13. thank =→ express one’s sincere gratitude to 感谢 Student representatives will express our sincere gratitude to the teachers’ efforts, parents’ support and peers’ help. 14. use =→ make full use of/take full advantage of利用 ①I will make full use of this opportunity to practise my speaking skills and get more experience. (浙江6月卷) ②With the final examination approaching，we must take full advantage of every minute to go over our lessons. 15. know =→ be familiar with知道，了解 For this event，being familiar with Chinese culture is a must. Luckily, I’m the very one. I have been learning English for 9 years and get the hang of both spoken and written English. (2021·江西省石城中学高三下学期检测) 16. remember =→ keep/bear in mind记住 As far as I am concerned，it is acceptable to light a limited number of fireworks on Chinese New Year as long as we bear safety in mind. (2021·九江市第二次模拟) 17. try to do =→ make more effort/spare no effort尽力 During the summer vocation, my classmates and I volunteered to spend a day cleaning up our neighborhood and spared no effort to strengthen the awareness of loving our home and community. 18. understand =→ have a better understanding of/figure out/make sense of 理解 ①Besides, through this activity children will have a better understanding of the customs of the Spring Festival. ②If you don’t understand something，you may research，study，and talk to other people until you figure it out. (北京卷单选改编) 19. like =→ have a taste for/be fond of/be crazy about喜欢 From your letter I know you have a taste for Chinese culture，which is of great benefit to you. (2021·贵阳市第二次统考) 20. value =→ attach importance to重视 We should attach great importance to protecting ourselves from the virus. What’s more，we are supposed to avoid going outside，especially going to the crowded places. (2021·云南省毕业班统一检查) 21. help =→ lend a helping hand/do sb a favour帮助 I’d appreciate it if you can do me a favour and I promise to bring some delicious food for you when I come back. 22. make sb do sth =→ enable sb to do sth让某人做某事 The old man donated a lot of money to the school，enabling the students to return to their classroom. 写作高频词组 1. devote oneself/one’s life to 献身于，致力于 The villagers all show respect for the old man because he has devoted all his life to the education in the remote mountain village. 2. sign up for报名参加 You can go to your monitor to sign up for the competition before April 20th. 3. be addicted to 痴迷于 Many students are addicted to playing video games and can’t concentrate on their studies，which has become the focus of media attention. 4. take on a new look呈现新的面貌 In recent years，with the rapid development of economy，my hometown has taken on a new look. 5. enrich sb’s life/enrich the life of sb丰富某人的生活 It is aimed at enriching our school life and spreading traditional Chinese culture. 6. broaden one’s horizons开阔视野 Furthermore，it is helpful to broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world. 7. be faced with 面对 Faced with difficulties，they never give up and try their best to find a way out. 8. leave/make a good/deep/bad impression on sb给某人留下好的/深刻的/坏的印象 So charming are the sights of Jiuzhaigou that they leave a deep impression on visitors from home and abroad. 写作高频衔接词 1. first =→ to start with/to begin with/in the first place/first of all首先 In my opinion，to begin with, we should try to listen to others’ opinions. If they make mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way. Besides, never force your ideas on others. Last but not least, appreciate their gifts, efforts, and sacrifices, whether they are big or small. (2021·南昌市二模) 2. besides =→ what’s more/in addition/furthermore 此外 What’s more，I consider it a gold chance to enjoy the wonderful scenery and taste the delicious food here and there. 3. as a result =→ as a consequence 因此 As a consequence，I need your advice on where to go and what to do during my stay in Australia. (2021·绵阳市第三次诊断) 4. in my opinion/view =→ as far as I’m concerned As far as I’m concerned，when parents fail to meet our demands, we should put ourselves in their shoes, for they might have good reasons for their refusal. (2021·江西省萍乡市高三二模) 5. I believe that...... =→ I hold the firm belief that...... 我相信 I hold the firm belief that our environment will be improved as long as we keep working together. (2021·郑州市高中毕业年级第二次质量预测) 写作高级句式 1. It goes without saying that...... “毫无疑问/不言而喻……” It goes without saying that a good campus environment is of great importance to our growth. 不言而喻，一个良好的校园环境对我们的成长非常重要。 2. There is no denying that...... “不可否认……” There is no denying that I am capable of helping foreigners learn about Chinese culture well. 不可否认，我有能力帮助外国人更好地了解中国文化。 3. As the old saying goes，...... “常言道，……” Just as the saying goes，“One tree doesn’t make a forest. ” Our success is based on cooperating with others. 正如谚语所言，独木难成林。我们的成功是建立在与别人合作的基础上的。 4. There is no doubt that...... “毫无疑问……” To be honest，I have just won the first prize in the Spoken English Competition，so there is no doubt that there is not any problem for me to communicate with foreigners. (浙江6月卷写作) 实话说，在英语口语比赛中我获得了一等奖，因此毫无疑问，与外国人交流对我来说没有困难。 5. There is a famous saying that...... “有句名言说……” There is a famous saying that “Good habits lead to good endings. ”，which shows the importance of habits. 有句名言说：“好习惯带来好结果。”这表明了习惯的重要性。 6. No one can deny the fact that...... “没有人能否认……的事实” No one can deny the fact that exercising regularly is of great benefit to us，so we should change our mind and spend some time exercising every day. (2021·贵阳市适应性考试一) 没有人能否认这个事实，定期锻炼对我们有很大的好处，所以我们应该改变我们的想法，每天花一些时间锻炼。 7. It is (high/about) time that＋主语＋did/should do...... “该是……的时候了” It is time that we human beings took/should take proper steps/measures to keep the balance of nature. 该是我们人类采取适当的措施来维护生态平衡的时候了。 8. It is strongly recommended that...... “强烈建议……” It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities. 强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间来参加体育活动。 9. I sincerely hope that...... “我真诚地希望……” I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. (2021·成都市第二次质量检测) 如果方便的话，我真诚地希望您能接受我们的邀请。 10. ·What impresses/excites/disappoints...... me most is (that)...... 最令我印象深刻/兴奋/失望……的是…… ·What I want to tell you is that...... 我想告诉你的是…… ·What I learnt from...... is that...... . 我从……学到的是…… What I learnt from this experience is that it is our duty to love and protect our community. (2021·重庆高三全真模拟) 我从这次经历中学到的是，爱和保护我们的社区是我们的责任。 11. 强调句型 It is with a sincere heart that I hope everyone can give a helping hand at this critical moment. 我是怀着一颗真诚的心，希望每个人都能在这关键时刻伸出援助之手。 12. not only...... . but also...... 的倒装结构 Not only did it offer me a precious chance to get close to nature but also gave me relaxation from heavy school work. (2021·新余市高三二模) 它不仅为我提供了一个接近自然的宝贵机会，而且也使我从繁重的学业中得到放松。 13. as引导倒装句，意为“尽管” Tiring and laborious as the work is, I find the value of labor and the joy of working. (2021·南昌市高三第一次模拟) 虽然工作很累，很辛苦，但我发现了劳动的价值和工作的乐趣。 14. only位于句首的倒装结构 Only by making greater efforts can he make greater progress in his career. 只有通过更加努力，他才能在事业中取得更大的进步。 15. without引导虚拟语气 Without their help and encouragement, I couldn’t have overcome so many difficulties. (2021·九江市第二次模拟) 没有他们的帮助和鼓励，我不可能克服这么多的困难。 续写出彩词句(1) 笼统词VS具体词 笼统词 具体词 good amazing adj. 令人大为惊奇的；terrific adj. 极好的，绝妙的；outstanding adj. 出色的；fabulous adj. 极好的；fantastic adj. 极好的；incredible adj. 难以置信的；brilliant adj. 极好的 bad awful adj. 糟糕的，可怕的；unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；terrible adj. 糟糕的，可怕的；evil adj. 邪恶的；disgusting adj. 令人作呕的 happy cheerful adj. 兴高采烈的；delighted adj. 快乐的；pleased adj. 高兴；满意；joyful adj. 快乐的；高兴的；content adj. 满意的；thrilled adj. 非常兴奋的；overjoyed adj. 大喜过望的 sad depressed/blue/down adj. 沮丧的，抑郁的；gloomy adj. 悲观的，沮丧的；upset adj. 不高兴的，失望，沮丧的；fearful adj. 可怕的；忧虑的；担心的；frustrated adj. 挫败的，失意的 beautiful appealing adj. 有吸引力的；cute adj. 可爱的，机灵的；elegant adj. 优雅的；charming adj. 美丽的；迷人的；attractive adj. 吸引人的，有魅力的；inviting/fascinating adj. 迷人的，有吸引力的 like admire v. 欣赏，仰慕；cherish v. 珍爱；treasure/value v. 珍视；fancy v. 爱慕；desire v. 渴望； appreciate v. 欣赏，感谢；enjoy v. 喜爱，欣赏，享受；be fond of/be keen on/be crazy about喜欢 run rush v. 冲向，迅速移动；race v. 快速移动；dash v. 猛冲；急驰；speed v. 快速前行；hurry v. 匆忙；jog v. 慢跑 walk wander/stroll v. 闲逛，漫步；pace v. 踱步； tiptoe v. 踮着脚走，蹑手蹑脚地走；skip v. 边走边跳；march v. 行军，走过 续写出彩词句(2) 人物情绪之“高兴” 用笑来体现“高兴” 1. a pleasant/cheerful smile 愉快的微笑 2. a pleased smile 满意的微笑 3. a sweet smile 甜蜜的微笑 4. burst into laughter/burst out laughing 突然大笑起来 5. smile brightly 笑得灿烂 6. force a smile 强颜欢笑 7. She grinned at me，her eyes sparkling. 她对我咧嘴一笑，眼里闪烁着光芒。 8. Their father laughed heartily and told her the twins had prepared breakfast for her. (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) 他们的父亲开怀大笑，告诉她双胞胎为她准备了早餐。 9. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) 他脸上闪过理解的微笑。 描写“高兴”的词块和句式 1. a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心 2. in high/cheerful spirits 情绪高涨 3. with a light heart 心情放松 4. brighten sb’s heart 使某人心情愉快 5. Hearing this，everybody was wild with joy/on the top of the world. 听到这个，大家都欣喜若狂。 6. They said “Happy Mother’s Day”，with their eyes twinkling with excitement. (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) 他们说“母亲节快乐”，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 7. Hearing the words，so glad was she that her face beamed and her bright smile lit up the room. (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) 听到这话，她高兴得满脸笑容，她灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。 8. Holding the money I earned through two-week hard work，I couldn’t contain my joy. (2021· 浙江6月卷满分作文) 拿着两周辛苦挣来的钱，我抑制不住心中的喜悦。 人物情绪之“悲伤与消沉” 用哭来体现“悲伤与消沉” 1. with tears streaming down one’s face　泪流满面 2. sob with one’s face buried in hands 掩面啜泣 3. She started to weep uncontrollably. 她不由自主地哭了起来。 4. She stood silently，(with)tears rolling/streaming down her cheeks. 她静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。 5. Her hands were shaking，with her eyes filled with tears. 她手在颤抖，眼里满含着泪水。 6. Mary sobbed，hiding her face in her hands. 她掩面啜泣。 7. Turning around，she burst into tears. 转过身去，她大哭起来。 8. Her eyes are flooded with tears. 她眼里满含泪水。 9. She sobbed out the story of her son’s unfortunate experiences. 她哭诉着说自己儿子的不幸遭遇。 10. Tears welled up as I was chewing. (2021·八省市联考满分作文) 我一边咀嚼，一边泪流满面。 描写“悲伤与消沉”的词块和句式 1. a flash of grief come upon sb　感到一阵悲伤 2. be down/low in spirits 情绪低落 3. fall into despair 陷入绝望 4. put him into a sentimental mood 让他很伤感 5. make one’s heart bleed 使某人悲痛 6. cry one’s heart out 悲痛欲绝 7. with a heavy/sinking heart 怀着沉重的心情 8. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 9. Daniel has his arms crossed，looking upset. 丹尼尔双臂交叉抱在胸前，神情沮丧。 10. Arriving at his father’s house，suddenly sadness and regret filled his heart. 当来到他父亲的家时，他突然感到悲伤和懊悔。 11. Hearing this，a ripple of sadness welled up inside him. 听到这一点，他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。 12. Hearing the news，so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine. 听到这个消息，他绝望地借酒浇愁。 续写出彩词句(3) 人物情绪之“怨怒” 描写人物“怨怒”的高级词块 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. get/annoyed irritated at　对某人生气 2. get mad/cross at sb 对某人勃然大怒 3. be speechless with anger 气得说不出话 4. rage at sb 对某人大发脾气 5. flame with anger 气得满脸通红 6. be displeased at one’s conduct 对某人的行为感到不满 7. be easily annoyed at trifles 易为琐事而恼火 8. express/voice a complaint about 对……表示不满 9. dash out of the room in a burst of anger 怒气冲冲地跑出房间 10. stamp one’s foot in anger 愤怒地跺脚 描写人物“怨怒”的精彩句式 1. Robert slammed the door angrily on his way out. 罗伯特愤然摔门而去。 2. “Shut your mouth！” exclaimed Tom angrily. “闭上你的嘴！”汤姆生气地大叫道。 3. Meg was annoyed with me because I forgot to buy bread on my way home. 梅格生我的气，因为我回家时忘了去买面包。 4. Randle looked in annoyance at the flight attendant. 兰德尔懊恼地望着乘务员。 5. Stacy got so frustrated that she stood up and walked out of the room. 斯泰西非常恼火，站起来就走出房间。 6. As the argument escalated，Mason lost his temper completely. 辩论越来越激烈起来了，梅森大发脾气。 7. Angrily，he raised his voice to his father and said，“With all your money you give me a Bible？” 他怒气冲冲地向父亲大喊道：“你有那么多钱，却只给我一本《圣经》 ？” 8. When we accused him of lying，he flew into a rage. 我们说他撒谎，他气得跳了起来。 9. Filled with fury，Sheldon was unable to utter a single word. 谢尔登气得说不出话。 10. Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed/dashed out of the room. 谢尔登感到如此生气以至于夺门而出。 人物情绪之“紧张、尴尬、羞愧与胆怯” 描写人物“紧张、尴尬、羞愧与胆怯”的高级词汇 1. nervous adj. 紧张的 2. tension n. 紧张 3. uneasy adj. 不安的 4. shy adj. 害羞的 5. shame n. 羞愧；耻辱 6. embarrassed adj. 尴尬的 7. uncomfortable adj. 不自在的；尴尬的 8. awkward adj. 令人尴尬的；紧张的 9. mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope 混合着焦虑与希望的情绪 10. blush/turn red (因尴尬而)脸红 11. one’s face turns pale with fear 吓得脸色苍白 12. be on edge 紧张不安 13. be restless with anxiety 焦虑不安 14. tremble from head to toe 全身颤抖 15. too scared to move an inch 吓得寸步难行 描写人物“紧张、尴尬、羞愧与胆怯”的精彩句式 1. Bill looked nervous，and I could see his hands were shaking. 比尔看上去很紧张，我看到他的手都在发抖。 2. He was pacing nervously up and down the room. 他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。 3. She tried to hide her nervousness，but it was clear she wasn’t comfortable making the speech. 她试图掩饰自己的紧张，但是她发表讲话的时候明显很不自在。 4. Everyone waited tensely for the winner’s name to be announced. 每个人都紧张地等待着宣布胜出者的名字。 5. He felt his cheeks burning with shame. 他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。 6. There’s something I don’t trust about him. He makes me feel very uneasy. 我对他有不信任的地方，他让我感到非常不安。 7. For one awkward moment I thought I had said something terribly wrong. 那一刻我感到很尴尬，我想我是说了很不该说的话。 8. Embarrassed and a little annoyed，I fled to my room，but Mom stopped me. (2021· 浙江1月卷满分作文) 我又尴尬又有点恼火，就逃到房间里去了，但妈妈拦住了我。 续写出彩词句(4) 肢体类动作描写 肢体类动作描写高级词汇 1. 抓、握：catch，grab，grasp，seize，hold 2. 投、抛、掷：cast，throw 3. 拖、拉、拽： drag，draw，pull，stretch 4. 手的动作：clap one’s hands(拍手)，raise one’s hand(举手)， stretch out one’s hand(伸手)，wave one’s hand(摆手)等 5. rush off 急着走 6. hang one’s head in shame 羞愧地低着头 7. wave one’s arm 挥舞手臂 8. drag behind 慢悠悠地跟在后面 9. walk/wander aimlessly 漫无目的地走着 10. put one’s arms around sb 伸出双臂搂着某人 肢体类动作描写精彩佳句 1. He gave her an encouraging pat on the shoulder. 他轻拍她的肩膀，以给她鼓励。 2. She marched over to me and demanded an apology. 她毅然走过来要我向她道歉。 3. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) 母亲拥抱双胞胎，表示感谢。 4. Seeing what I was doing，Dad froze there for a moment but soon he gathered me into his arms. (2021·浙江6月卷满分作文) 看到我在做什么，爸爸愣住了一会儿，但很快他就把我抱到怀里。 5. When the boy caught sight of Poppy，he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. 当男孩看到波比时，他冲到狗跟前，弯下腰来给她一个大大的拥抱。 6. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. (2021· 浙江1月卷满分作文) 波比看到小狗高兴得跳了起来。她低下头好奇地看着。 7. Meanwhile，my horse got frightened，jumped up，and ran around wildly. (浙江卷满分作文) 与此同时，我的马吓了一跳，狂奔起来。 8. I jumped off the bus before it stopped and began walking down the street. 在车没停稳前我就跳下了车，沿着马路溜达。 各种“看”的动作表达 表示“看”的高级词汇 1. look　看(指注意或有意识地看) 2. see 看(强调看的结果) 3. watch 观察；聚精会神地看 4. glance 一瞥，看一眼 5. gaze at 凝视 6. stare at 盯住 7. glare at 怒目而视 8. peep at 偷窥 9. glimpse/glance at 瞥一眼 10. gape at 吃惊地看 11. look out of the window 望向窗外 12. watch a movie/TV/a game 观看电影/电视/比赛 13. browse the web page 浏览网页 14. catch a glimpse of 偷瞄一眼 15. one’s eyes fall on some place 某人的目光停留在某处 表示“看”的精彩句式 1. We all gather in front of the television，praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face. 我们都围在电视机前，祈祷能看到他的脸庞。 2. Seeing no other people notice us，I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell. 看到没有人注意到我们，我把圣诞礼物放下，按下门铃。 3. I watched helplessly，as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless. 我无助地看着，这时这个女士感到越来越灰心和无助。 4. Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party. 在我四岁的生日晚会上，她看到了她和我的照片。 5. Singing happily，she gazed at her surroundings with large，innocent eyes. 欢快地唱着，她睁大天真无邪的眼睛盯着她的周围。 6. The puppy was sniffing at the carpet. 这条小狗在嗅地毯。 7. He didn’t shout，and he just glared at me silently. 他没有叫喊，只是默默怒视着我。 8. He turned to her with a frightened air. 他害怕地看着她。 9. He was glaring down at me again，his black eyes full of disgust. 他又盯着我看，黑眼睛里充满了厌恶。 10. Deeply touched by these words，I looked at the direction they left. (2021·八省市联考满分作文) 这些话深深地打动了我，我看着他们离开的方向。 各种“说”的动作表达 1. say 说 =→ say excitedly /angrily /disappointedly /delightedly /surprisedly /regretfully /unwillingly =→ say in a low/soft/loud voice =→ say with satisfaction/delight “I didn’t know what I was doing，” she said regretfully，laughing at the memory. 2. smile 微笑着说 /laugh 笑着说 “It’s good to have you back，” she smiled. 3. beg 恳求 “Please don’t leave me，” he begged. 4. promise 承诺道 “I’ll be back by 10：00，” Mum promised. 5. emphasize/stress 强调 “You need more practice，” the teacher emphasized. 6. warn 警告 “Be careful，the rocks are slippery，” Alex warned. 7. add 补充道 “And I don’t care what you think，” she added. 8. explain 解释道；辩解道 “My mother was ill，and I had to send her to the hospital，” he explained. 9. admit 承认 “Okay，so maybe I was a little bit scared，” Jenny admitted. 10. complain 抱怨 “You never ask my opinion about anything，” Rod complained. 11. whisper/murmur 悄声说；低语道 Then the twins whispered/murmured to her that they loved her so much and they were eager to see her smile every day. (2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) 12. scream/shout/yell/cry/exclaim喊，大叫 They yelled “Happy Mother’s Day，darling mummy! A big surprise for you！”(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文) “Come here，son. ” Dad exclaimed，wearing an accessible expression. (2021· 浙江6月卷满分作文) 读后续写之6个小情境背诵 表示“感到……情绪与情感” A wave of pride swept over him as he watched his children. =→ He felt a wave of pride as he watched his children. 当他看着自己孩子的时候，一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头(十分自豪)。 表示“某人想到/明白……；某人有了……主意” It suddenly occurred to/ hit /struck/ dawned on me that I didn’t really need these things to be happy. 我突然意识到，我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。 表示“迫不及待……；毫不犹豫” ①He could hardly wait to get back home and tell his parents everything. 他迫不及待地要赶回家将一切告诉他的父母。 ②Without delay/hesitation，he climbed up the tree quickly to reach for the leaf. 他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘那片树叶。 表示“一……，就……” ①Upon hearing the funny story，everybody burst into laughter. 听了这个滑稽的故事，大家都哈哈大笑。 ②The instant /moment /second I saw him，I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box. 我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。 表示“感到欣慰，放下心来” I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely. =→ A wave of relief flooded through me as the plane landed safely. =→ To my relief，the plane landed safely. 飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。 表示“经历与教训” Down deep in his heart，he knew he would remember what a valuable lesson Mr. Green taught him forever. =→ The valuable lesson Mr. Green taught him will be rooted in his memory forever. 在他的内心深处，他知道他会永远记住格林先生给他上的那么宝贵的一课。 $$