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读后续写动作链/面句式整理和应用
句型1: 主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C (三个并列谓语,时态一致,动作依次发生)。
例如:The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water for fun. 孩子们兴奋地冲向湖边,脱下衣服,跳入水中嬉戏。
练一练:
1.She woke up, ___________out of bed and __________ to the door.
她醒了,溜下了床,踮着脚走到门口。
2.John ___________his finger against his lips, pointed to the cat, and shook his head gently. 约翰把手指放在嘴唇上,指着猫咪,轻轻摇了摇头。
3.He lost his balance, _______ back against the rail and fell over.
他失去了平衡,往后趔趄撞在栏杆上摔倒了。
4.Ben also ran in my direction, ________me into his arms and kept patting my back .本也朝我这个方向跑过来,把我拥入怀中,不停地轻拍我的后背。
5.The twins___________the breakfast tray,___________they had made,and ___________ the kitchen.(2021新高考卷1)
双胞胎准备好早餐托盘,加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片,走出厨房。
6. The teacher_____________,______________,and said softly,”where there is a will, there is a way.”
老师走上前,拍了拍我的肩膀,温柔地说:“有志者,事竟成。”(2023新高考卷1)
句型2. 主语+did,非谓语动词A,and 非谓语动词B/主语+did A and did B,非谓语动词 (非谓语动词doing或done作状语,可置于句首, 句中或句尾)。
例如;Putting his ladder against the wall, he climbed and peered over.
他把梯子靠在墙上,爬上去往外看。
He stood up and walked to the window, thinking hard.
他站起身,走到窗前,苦思冥想。
He patted my head, holding my hands gently and telling me not to worry.
他拍怕我地头,轻轻地握着我地手,告诉我不要担心。
Inspired by the teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering,”i can have a try”. 被老师的话鼓舞,Lucy举起了手,低声说:“我能试试。”
练一练:
1.They ran in bare feet, laughing and ___________他们光着脚跑着,笑着闹着。
2.Using its head, it touched our hands, ___________ that we were to be thanked.它用头碰了碰我们的手,好像在说,它要感谢我们。
3.He laid his fishing pole down and ___________ , moving toward me at a snail's pace.他放下钓鱼竿,像蜗牛一样磨磨蹭蹭地向我走来。
4. Mrs.Cook stood there and_________________,_____________with fear.
库克夫人站在那,一动不敢动,吓得直发抖。
5.____________with pride, the teacher_______________a warm hug.(2023新高考1 )老师满脸自豪地向我表示祝贺,并给了我一个温暖的拥抱。
6.__________,David___________his arms and hugged me, _________ “i can make it!”(2022新高考1)
7.受到我的话的鼓舞,David 伸出双臂并抱住了我,微笑着说:“我可以做到。”
_______________,we stopped at where we were and stuggled to find a way out
(2018浙江卷)又沮丧又累,我们停在我们所在的地方,努力找出去的路。
句型3: 主语 +did,with 复合结构 (with结构也可放句首)
例如:With eyes widening in extreme horror, she fled away , screaming, “Mom,, help!”
她睁大眼睛惊恐万分,转身就跑,一边尖叫着:“妈妈,救命!”
With eyes fixed on the approaching figure, Lily slowly backed away, her heart pounding in her chest. Lily 双眼紧盯着逼近的声影,缓缓后退,心跳在胸中激烈跳动。
练一练:
1. When Karina saw it, she _____________with tears__________ her eyes.
当Karina看到它时,她紧紧地拥抱着它,双眸满是泪水。
2. We all pretty much slept ______________. 我们几乎都不敢睡太熟。
3. He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms _______his chest, glaring at me.
他靠在厨房的操作台上,双臂交叉在胸前,怒视着我。
4.With tears ___________in my eyes, I sobbed “I’m sorry, Dad.”(2021.6浙江卷)
我热泪盈眶,抽泣着说:“对不起,爸爸。”
句型4: 主语+did,独立主格(主语+非谓语动词 )/独立主格, 主语+did
例如:I was too shocked to say a word, my hands clasped behind me.
我震惊得说不出话来,双手紧握在身后。
Linda leapt to her feet, her eyes blazing with anger.
Linda 跳了起来,眼里闪着愤怒的光芒。
练一练:
1. Reaching out, I touched its head , my heart __________ 我心跳加速,伸手去摸它的头。
2.He_________from side to side,his head hot to touch.他辗转反侧,头摸着烫手。
3.He ________ the bus stop, his heart __________ violently.
他飞快地跑到公共汽车站,心怦怦猛跳。
4.My arms aching and knees ____________, I crawled out of the cave and shouted for help. 手臂疼痛、膝盖发抖,我爬出了洞,大喊救命。
5.Eyes ____________it, he fell in love with the shiny red car the instant he saw it.
他一看到那辆闪亮的红汽车就爱上了它,目不转睛地盯着它。
6.________________, Mary felt very shy. 这么多双眼睛望着她,Mary感到很害羞。
句型5: Having done…, 主句(表示先做了某事用having done,再发生核心动作)
例如:Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
在银行排队等了一个小时后,这个女人变得不耐烦,然后离开了。
Having lived in China for many years, I found my colleagues friendly, considering the city as a warm home.
已经在中国生活多年,我发现我的同事都很友好,从而觉得这座城市很温暖。
练一练:
仿写1:After having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.
改写:____________________, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.
仿写2:She wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, then she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
改写:_____________________ in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
仿写3:After he told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.
改写:____________________, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.
4._____________a deep breath, the speaker cleared his throat and launched into a passionate speech.
演讲者深吸一口气,清了清嗓子,开始发表充满激情的演讲。
高考实战片段练习
1. (2023年新高考I卷读后续写片段)
A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest when the news came. To my surprise, I was informed that my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me.______________________________________________(再三仔细检查后,我再也无法控制自己,立即与我的英语老师分享了这个消息。)Without her help, I would never have had the chance to obtain the honor.
2. (2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.I still remembered my friends' promise so I went past the abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken window. To my satisfaction, no other tiny creatures would meet this trouble any more. As I approached the farm, I was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue, urging me to walk faster. We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere, __________________________(享受着精致的美食,谈论着我们的有趣经历,唱着歌直到日落). It was time for us to say goodbye so we went to the parking lot together.
3. (2022年高考全国1卷读后续写片段)
I watched as David moved to the starting line with the other runners. He turned his head around to look at me and I __________________________(我点点头,朝她他起大拇指,为他感到骄傲) He_________________________________________________(笑了笑,深吸一口气,准备比赛,眼里充满决心). With a bang, every runner shot like an arrow. He ran with all his strength, in spite of his abnormal steps. Eventually, he finished the running. As David, the last one, made it to the finishing line, __________________________.(时间像静止了一样) . Thunderous applause broke out, with the name David echoing again and again.
4. (2021年新高考I卷读后续写片段)
In the morning, as scheduled,_____________________________________________________ (双胞胎早早起床,踮着脚走进厨房,从袋子里舀出面粉)Once they set about making bread,they felt confused. At that time,____________________________________________________ (他们的爸爸溜进厨房,轻拍双胞胎的肩膀,柔声安慰道)“Don’t quit. You can overcome the challenge.” The twins made the bread smoothly.Then ____________________________________ _______________________(他们端着早餐,向楼上走去,喊醒他们的妈妈). With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mother was so content that she gathered her children into her arms.
句型1 Keys:1.slipped ,tiptoed 2. pressed 3. staggered 4. gathered
5. prepared, added a beautiful card, stepped out of
6. Stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder
句型2 Keys :1.teasing 2. seemingly saying 3. dragged his feet.
4. didn’t dare to move an inch, trembling
5. Beaming, conglomerated me and gave me
6. . Inspired by my words, held out, saying with a smile
7. Depressed and tired
句型3 Keys :1. hugged it tightly, filling 2. with one eye open
3. folded across 4. welling up
句型4 Keys :1. racing 2. tossed 3. raced to , pounding/beating
4. trembling 5. glued to 6 .So many eyes looking at her
句型5 Keys : 1.Having queued for 3 hours 2. Having wandering aimlessly
3.Having telling the truth 4.Having taken
高考实战练习
1. Having double-checked it, I could no longer contain myself and promptly shared the news with my English teacher.
2. enjoying the delicate cuisines, talking about our interesting experiences and singing songs till the sun set.
3. nodded and thumbed at him, feeling proud of him
smiled, took a deep breath and got ready for the race .eyes brimming with determination
time seemed to stand still
4. the twins got up early, tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.
their father slid into the kitchen, patting the twins’ shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice
they carried the breakfast, advanced upstairs and woke up their mother.
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