高考题型逐个击破31 读后续写提分之情绪表达（惊讶）（必备素材，写作思路，写作训练）-2025届高三英语一轮复习闯关攻略

情绪表达-惊讶 必备素材 词汇能力提升表达 1. surprise v./n. 使惊讶/ 惊讶 2. astonish / amaze v. 使惊讶 3. shock v./n 使震惊 / 震惊 shocked 感到震惊的 shocking 令人震惊的 4.open-mouthed adj . 目瞪口呆的的、惊愕的 5.to one’s astonishment/ surprise/ amazement 令某人惊讶的是 6. speechless adj. 无语的，说不出话来的 7. freeze with shock 由于震惊呆住了 8.unable to speak a single word 说不出一句话来 9.take one’s breath away 让某人喘不过气来 10.tongue-tied 瞠目结舌的 11. let out a cry 大叫一声 12.try to find sth to lean against 试图找个东西靠着 13. one’s jaw dropped in amazement 惊掉下巴 14. stand motionless 动弹不得 15.be glued/rooted to the spot with shock 被惊呆了 句式能力提升表达 Upon seeing his peculiar behaviours , I was numb with shock and stood there tongue - tied . 看到他奇怪的行为，我震惊到麻木了，站在那里张口结舌 Raising her eyebrows in surprise , she froze , as if rooted to the ground . 吃惊地扬起眉毛，她僵住了，仿佛被固定住了。 He was speechless in amazement /surprise. 他惊讶得说不出话来。 With her mouth / eyes wide open , she looked at me. 她张着嘴巴/ 睁大眼睛看着我。 Father’s eyes were wide with astonishment. 爸爸一脸惊愕地睁大了眼睛。 Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech.（无灵主语） 我惊讶得说不出话来。 What astonished us most was that his actions contrasted sharply with his promises . 最让我们惊讶的是，他的行动与他的承诺形成了鲜明对比。 She stood there , open-mouthed , unable to believe what she had just heard . 她站在那里，目瞪口呆，不敢相信她刚刚听到的话。 The news left her completely speechless , unable to utter a single word . 这个消息让她完全无语，一句话也说不出来。 The news of his sudden death left us all completely shocked . 他突然去世的消息让我们全都震惊了。 He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed/ with his mouth opening widely. 他站起身来，目瞪口呆地看着我。 I couldn ' t believe my ears , just like a thunderbolt on a sunny day . My whole body was numb in an instant . 我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵，好似晴天霹雳当头一击。我顿时全身麻木。 It seems that his soul has flown away from his body , which makes his stand there without moving for a long time. 他的灵魂似乎已经飞离了他的身体，这使得他在那里站了很长时间，一动不动。 Suddenly he stopped talking , fixed his feet on the ground with two hands hanging in the air , as if he was frozen. 突然，他停止了说话，双脚着地，双手举在空中，仿佛已经凝固。 He opened his mouth as if there were billions of words that would flood out at once , but actually no voice was made. 他张开嘴，仿佛有几十亿个字马上涌了出来，但实际上却没有说话。 His sight was glued to what he had seen , and his eyeballs were likely to fall down. 他目不转睛地盯着他所看到的东西，眼球都可能掉下来。 写作思路 掌握表示惊讶的高分表达 1.at a loss困惑 2.look blank一脸茫然 3.scratch one’s head挠头 4.feel numb with shock惊呆了 5.be speechless with shock吓得说不出话来 6.come as a shock to sb.让某人很震惊 7.look at sb.in confusion困惑地看着某人 8.one’s jaw drops/falls in astonishment目瞪口呆 9.raise one’s eyebrows in surprise惊讶地扬起眉毛 10.have a confused/puzzled look on one’s face脸上带着困惑的神情 I caught a flash of surprise in his eyes. 我看到到他眼中闪过一丝惊讶。 2.A look of surprise spread over her face. 她脸上露出了惊讶的神情。 3.The little boy was speechless with shock. 这个小男孩被吓得说不出话来。 4.He scratched his head, having on idea what to do. 他挠了挠头，不知道该做什么。 5.When I saw him make that amazing shot, my jaw dropped/fell in astonishment. 当我看到他那记精彩的投篮时，我目瞪口呆。 6.The moment I opened the gift, my eyes grew wide in great surprise/astonishment. 我一打开礼物，就惊讶得睁大了眼睛。 7.When Mary heard the unexpected news, her eyes widened further and her mouth opened. 当Mary听到这个意外的消息时，她的眼睛睁得更大，嘴也张着。 8.He looked at his children in confusion, wondering what had happened. 他困惑地看着自己的孩子，想知道发生了什么事。 尝试一下 一、根据提示，完成下列句子。 1.I’m ___________(困惑) what to do next. 2.The news that I had won the competition __________(让我很震惊). 3.He __________(困惑地看着我) and did not answer the question. 4.___________(我们目瞪口呆) when we found out how much they were paying in rent. 二、翻译下列句子。 1.John一脸茫然，说他不知道我在说什么。 _____________________________________________ 2.当他出现在我面前时，我惊呆了。 _____________________________________________ 3.他脸上带着困惑的神情，不知道该如何安慰小女孩。（用with复合结构） _____________________________________________ 4.当我看到观众的人数时，我惊讶地扬起了眉。 _____________________________________________ . 写作训练 （一） （2024·河南信阳·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was 40 years ago. One day, Emma came back to their apartment from work and realized that her husband, David, was extremely ill. He was throwing up and slurring (发音不清) his words. Immediately, Emma grabbed her purse and took him by taxi to the nearest hospital, on the Lower East Side of New York City. The minutes slowly passed as they waited to see a doctor. They sat there for a couple of hours, and it was pretty clear that nobody was going to pay attention to David. So they rushed to a second hospital, where they were also ignored. Emma knew something was very wrong with David, so they went to a third hospital. As she told the receptionist what was happening, Emma sensed the person wasn’t going to treat their case with urgency. Emma was on the edge of a breakdown. After three failed attempts to get help, she had reached her limit. She started to shout in the lobby (大厅). That’s when her unsung hero appeared. That person was a young man with dark hair and a white physician’s coat. He came to Emma and said, “How can I help you? What’s going on here?” Emma explained what was happening to David, and that she was afraid it was serious. The young man said, “You know, I just got done with my neurological residency (神经系统的实习期) up at Lenox Hill Hospital. I’ll take him in the back and look.” Within two or three minutes, the young man came out and said, “You are absolutely right. Something is very seriously wrong with your husband.” The man told Emma to take her husband to Lenox Hill Hospital, and that he had called the doctor with whom he had done his residency. “He’ll be waiting for you,” said the young man. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But Emma began to cry, realizing she had no way of getting there, because she didn’t have any more cash for a taxi. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Soon Emma and her husband arrived at the hospital. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2024·黑龙江·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When John was in Grade 9, his class went on a canoeing (划独木舟) trip. Canoeing is a water sport practiced in a light narrow boat with a paddle. It can be very dangerous, especially if the river has rapids, a fast-flowing part of a river. Since it requires strength, balance and a lot of skills, all the students are trained hard. To qualify for the trip, the whole class had to be able to swim. However, John had a problem. He weighed over 180 pounds. He had never learned to swim before, so he took swimming lessons and worked hard for many weeks. He eventually graduated with a certificate saying that he could swim. John’s classmates were all glad to have him along—all except one person, Nicky. She didn’t like him. In fact, she seemed not to like many. She was on the school water polo team. She was a swimming star and extremely proud of herself too. The trip went well and everyone enjoyed the day. That is, until the end of the trip when they were heading down some rapids. Nicky had been warned over and over to wear her life jacket, but she did not listen to others. When they arrived at a steep valley, the speed of the water picked up. They entered some dangerous rapids. All of a sudden, their canoes turned over. They were all thrown into the water—all except John! He was heavy enough and somehow was not thrown into the water. They all swam back to the canoe where John quickly pulled them in. Then, they saw Nicky’s life jacket floating on the water. She was not wearing it when the accident happened. When they spotted her floating on the water, she was barely conscious. She was in serious danger. It seemed like she had hit her head on a rock. As they were approaching her, their canoes broke loose from the tree branches they were stuck to and sent them farther away from Nicky. Everyone in the canoes looked in horror as the current dragged Nicky away from them. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Someone exclaimed, “we’ve got to help her!” ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finding Nicky opening her eyes, everyone sighed with relief. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2024高三·河南·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Bonnie raised her granddaughter alone after the girl’s parents died. She hated her granddaughter’s art and wanted her to stop drawing. But everything changed when Mr. Henderson, a famous cartoonist, appeared at her doorstep. One day, Bonnie called out to Amy as she took the chicken out. “Dinner is ready, honey! Come soon!” But Amy didn’t answer. Bonnie finished setting the table and served them dinner, but she still didn’t hear a response from Amy. “Amy? Honey, your dinner is getting cold! Are you coming?” she asked her 10-year-old granddaughter again. When Amy didn’t respond, Bonnie climbed the stairs to the girl’s room and pushed the door open. Amy sat at her desk, with her headphones on. At first, Bonnie thought Amy was studying, but then she noticed the drawing sheet on the table in front of Amy. Bonnie frowned (皱眉) in anger. “Amy!” Bonnie screamed, and the girl turned around and removed her headphones. “Granny? I… I was just…” Amy said. Bonnie stormed up to Amy’s desk, and the little girl tried to cover the drawing, but it was too late. “Did you finish your math homework, little girl? Mrs. Warren called me today. And she told me you’ve been ignoring her assignments!” Bonnie said angrily. “I’ll finish the homework,” Amy said. “I was planning on doing it once I finished the sketch (素描) I was working on, Granny.” “I’m tired of that hobby of yours, Amy! You’re no longer doing those drawings!” Bonnie went on. “Those things you draw are not going to help you in the future! You finish your dinner, and then you’ll be doing your homework. You’re not leaving the house to play with your friends until you finish your homework. Am I clear?” Bonnie said and stormed out of Amy’s room. Minutes later, Amy walked into the kitchen and quietly sat at the table. They began eating dinner in silence. Bonnie was already in a terrible mood, so she didn’t ask about Amy’s day like she usually did. Suddenly, the doorbell rang. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr. Henderson. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs. Warren for advice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （2024·湖南岳阳·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Sai Baba! Sai Baba! Hahahaha!” Rani’s cheeks burned with shame and tears welled up in her eyes as she pushed her way to the exit through the crowd of laughing boys in the packed school bus. It wasn’t the first time she’d been called Sai Baba, after the famous Hindu holy man she’d seen on TV with his trademark afro (非洲式卷发) towering over his head. But this time was the worst. Rani jumped off the school bus and landed hard in the muddy rainwater. It had been a Friday full of disasters! Angry thoughts ran inside Rani’s head as she marched home in the drizzling rain. Why did the rain have to come pouring down so hard just at the end of the school day? Why did she have to forget her raincoat back home? Why did her hair have to be like a giant cotton candy balloon just when she wanted it to behave? Why, why, why, Rani grew angrier as she turned the back door key. “Rani, is that you?” Papa called from the family room. “I hate my hair!” Rani cried as tears of anger and shame streamed down her cheeks. “Why, your hair’s beautiful!” “Then why does everyone make fun of it al the time? The boys teased me about my hair on the bus ride back home…” She paused and then tore at her hair and pulled out a couple of paper balls stuck in it. “Look, they even shot paper balls at my hair.” Papa went up to Rani, hugging her tightly in his arms. “Listen! Those boys are bullies. They did so only to get an emotional response from you. What you need to do is either ignore them or speak up for yourself.” Rani nodded uncertainly, remembering the hours, days and weeks she had spent trying to bring her hair under control. “Papa?” she murmured, “I don’t want to participate in the speech competition on Monday.” “Why?” Papa sounded puzzled. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next Monday morning dawned bright and it was time for the competition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2024高三·安徽蚌埠·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Though traveling is not a big deal for me today, before my trip to the mountains, I used to be a homebody. I had friends to hang out with, several hobbies, and I felt completely comfortable spending weeks or even months in my hometown — or sometimes even on my block — without going anywhere. All my demands of novelty were satisfied by the Discovery and National Geographic channels, and I seriously thought there was no difference between seeing something on the TV and with one’s own eyes. The situation changed when one day David, my best friend who always has a couple of colorful bugs in his head (or, in other words, was always carrying out several crazy plans at once), walked into my room and declared his disgust (厌恶) for civilization. I will not describe how he managed to persuade me to join him on his journey to the Rocky Mountains; all I will say is that we departed in five days. This was my first time in the mountains, so I was turning my head in all directions. Unfortunately, the weather was foggy most of the time, and the higher we got into the mountains, the worse the visibility was. Even despite this fact, I still enjoyed the hike — I felt like I was Bear Grylls, whose show I used to watch with excitement: in the wild, with food and water in my backpack, carrying a flashlight and a knife. On the first day, we were making our way along the foothills; but the next day, we started to climb on one of the peaks. Though it was not that steep and high, I was still excited. I regularly hastened, and because of that, I ran out of energy long before we got to the top; David, on the other hand, was more well-paced. When we finally got to the top, nothing had changed. The same fog was covering the surroundings, and even though I was filled with positive emotions, I felt disappointed, because I counted on seeing the view from above and perhaps being able to take some photos. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We spent a couple of hours on the top, and decided to turn back. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing all this scenery with my own eyes was truly an eye-opening experience for me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2024·江西景德镇·三模）读后续写 Ridoy, a 12-year-old boy, lived a carefree life under good care of his mom and dad. Just like any other boy of his age, he often lost his temper with his parents. Sometimes he obeyed what they said, but sometimes he would completely ignore them. For example, one day, Ridoy’s mom needed to go shopping for some ingredients for cooking and she asked Ridoy to help look after his one-year-old sister. But Ridoy just blurted “no way”, slapped the door and locked himself into his bedroom. There was another time when Ridoy’s dad urgently needed Ridoy to fetch a pair of fliers for him when he was fixing his bike. Ridoy just refused without thinking. But Ridoy’s parents did not worry a lot since this was very common in kids. It was an unexpected holiday announced by the school of Ridoy and he had a five-day holiday. For the first two days, he spent a good time with his mother. She took him for outings. They went to the beach and amusement parks, and had delicious dining. She cooked his favorite foods and played with him. Three days were left and Ridoy’s mother wanted to clean the house, which she intended to involve Ridoy in. To her surprise, he accepted without hesitation. With the help of Ridoy, the house instantly became very tidy and the floor shone like a mirror. Everything she asked him to do during the three days was done to perfection. Although she was astonished by his behavior, a delicious sweetness well up in Ridoy’s mom’s heart. While she was cooking the dinner meal on the fifth day, Ridoy gave her a piece of paper written by him. Since his mom was busy cooking, she asked him to place the paper on the dining table. After cooking the meals, she took the paper left by his son. The piece of paper contained the following list: Cutting grass in the garden -$2 Cleaning the house -$3; Taking care of my sister -$3; Removing the garbage -$ 2; … In total, you owe me $20 She was literally shocked, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The boy was in tears when reading the paper. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·福建南平·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kelly is a nurse. Her kidney (肾脏) proved to be a perfect match for her cousin, Dana, who is a teacher. Her kidney had worsened to the point where she required a transplant (移植). As Kelly told Dana, “I’m in good health and I almost never get sick or ill. It seems that I can be a donor for you.” Dana was wild with joy. Later on a Thursday afternoon, after spending the first of two days undergoing tests to confirm her kidney was a match for Dana, Kelly got a call from a Cleveland Clinic caregiver. They were canceling the second day of her tests. A CT scan revealed the presence of a tumor (肿瘤) on Kelly’s right kidney. Kelly was shocked about the discovery and concerned she might no longer be a donor available for Dana. That meant that Kelly had to have an operation to remove the tumor, unable to donate her kidney. Meanwhile Dana had to wait for some other donors for a matchable kidney, which was really hard to find. Dana was thrown back to desperation. The cousins were at a loss. But their doctors wouldn’t give up. They tried every possible means to find a solution that could satisfy both sides, treating Kelly’s illness and offering Dana transplanting. But the bad news was that there had been few such reported cases. Determined to solve this difficult problem, Dr. Wee, director of the Kidney Transplant Program, held meetings with a team of specialists to discuss over details of the case and best steps to move forward. They worked day and night to search for related information and make analysis. Seeing the devotion of the experts, Kelly and Dana felt the flame of hope returning to their hearts. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After many meetings, the medical team felt confident to treat the two patients at the same time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The cousins recovered from their surgeries. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2024·江西新余·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Everything went according to plan, until it didn’t. The night before my first marathon, I ate the classic runner’ s dinner. That morning, I woke up before my alarm, tiptoed downstairs to toast three waffles and slathered them in peanut butter. I had slept eight hours, my unreliable left knee wasn’t bothering me, my stomach was full. I was ready. Then my girlfriend, Louisa, knocked on the door asking: “Have you checked your email?” The Twin Cities Marathon in Minneapolis and St. Paul had been canceled. Race officials sent an email at 5: 16 a. m. announcing the race had been called off due to “black flag conditions”-- record-breaking heat. While I understood why the race organizers didn’t want to put runners at risk, I also knew that I had trained in the baking and humid Washington, D．C． all summer. If I started early and finished around noon, I’d miss the worst heat of the day. Louisa offered to bike alongside me, with water, snacks and salt pills in tow. I quickly called my friends to figure out what to do. About 40minutes later, we were heading for starting line in downtown Minneapolis, drinking a gallon of water, ready to run our own marathon. There is a psychological difference between running 42. 2 kilometers and running an organized marathon. The distance becomes a shared challenge when you’re running with thousands of others. That gives a runner confidence they can finish the race as well. “When you’re in that marathon setting, having people on the sidelines, having people running alongside you, maybe running in a new location, there are so many other external things to help keep you focused, “my friend Samson said. The sights and sounds “give you a little of a break from the internal reflection that can happen when you start to struggle.” Indeed, it is a mental race. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On our way to the starting line, we were wondering if anybody else would show up despite the cancellation. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The last 8 kilometers of the Twin Cities Marathon route are largely uphill. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 情绪表达-惊讶 必备素材 词汇能力提升表达 1. surprise v./n. 使惊讶/ 惊讶 2. astonish / amaze v. 使惊讶 3. shock v./n 使震惊 / 震惊 shocked 感到震惊的 shocking 令人震惊的 4.open-mouthed adj . 目瞪口呆的的、惊愕的 5.to one’s astonishment/ surprise/ amazement 令某人惊讶的是 6. speechless adj. 无语的，说不出话来的 7. freeze with shock 由于震惊呆住了 8.unable to speak a single word 说不出一句话来 9.take one’s breath away 让某人喘不过气来 10.tongue-tied 瞠目结舌的 11. let out a cry 大叫一声 12.try to find sth to lean against 试图找个东西靠着 13. one’s jaw dropped in amazement 惊掉下巴 14. stand motionless 动弹不得 15.be glued/rooted to the spot with shock 被惊呆了 句式能力提升表达 Upon seeing his peculiar behaviours , I was numb with shock and stood there tongue - tied . 看到他奇怪的行为，我震惊到麻木了，站在那里张口结舌 Raising her eyebrows in surprise , she froze , as if rooted to the ground . 吃惊地扬起眉毛，她僵住了，仿佛被固定住了。 He was speechless in amazement /surprise. 他惊讶得说不出话来。 With her mouth / eyes wide open , she looked at me. 她张着嘴巴/ 睁大眼睛看着我。 Father’s eyes were wide with astonishment. 爸爸一脸惊愕地睁大了眼睛。 Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech.（无灵主语） 我惊讶得说不出话来。 What astonished us most was that his actions contrasted sharply with his promises . 最让我们惊讶的是，他的行动与他的承诺形成了鲜明对比。 She stood there , open-mouthed , unable to believe what she had just heard . 她站在那里，目瞪口呆，不敢相信她刚刚听到的话。 The news left her completely speechless , unable to utter a single word . 这个消息让她完全无语，一句话也说不出来。 The news of his sudden death left us all completely shocked . 他突然去世的消息让我们全都震惊了。 He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed/ with his mouth opening widely. 他站起身来，目瞪口呆地看着我。 I couldn ' t believe my ears , just like a thunderbolt on a sunny day . My whole body was numb in an instant . 我简直不敢相信自己的耳朵，好似晴天霹雳当头一击。我顿时全身麻木。 It seems that his soul has flown away from his body , which makes his stand there without moving for a long time. 他的灵魂似乎已经飞离了他的身体，这使得他在那里站了很长时间，一动不动。 Suddenly he stopped talking , fixed his feet on the ground with two hands hanging in the air , as if he was frozen. 突然，他停止了说话，双脚着地，双手举在空中，仿佛已经凝固。 He opened his mouth as if there were billions of words that would flood out at once , but actually no voice was made. 他张开嘴，仿佛有几十亿个字马上涌了出来，但实际上却没有说话。 His sight was glued to what he had seen , and his eyeballs were likely to fall down. 他目不转睛地盯着他所看到的东西，眼球都可能掉下来。 写作思路 掌握表示惊讶的高分表达 1.at a loss困惑 2.look blank一脸茫然 3.scratch one’s head挠头 4.feel numb with shock惊呆了 5.be speechless with shock吓得说不出话来 6.come as a shock to sb.让某人很震惊 7.look at sb.in confusion困惑地看着某人 8.one’s jaw drops/falls in astonishment目瞪口呆 9.raise one’s eyebrows in surprise惊讶地扬起眉毛 10.have a confused/puzzled look on one’s face脸上带着困惑的神情 I caught a flash of surprise in his eyes. 我看到到他眼中闪过一丝惊讶。 2.A look of surprise spread over her face. 她脸上露出了惊讶的神情。 3.The little boy was speechless with shock. 这个小男孩被吓得说不出话来。 4.He scratched his head, having on idea what to do. 他挠了挠头，不知道该做什么。 5.When I saw him make that amazing shot, my jaw dropped/fell in astonishment. 当我看到他那记精彩的投篮时，我目瞪口呆。 6.The moment I opened the gift, my eyes grew wide in great surprise/astonishment. 我一打开礼物，就惊讶得睁大了眼睛。 7.When Mary heard the unexpected news, her eyes widened further and her mouth opened. 当Mary听到这个意外的消息时，她的眼睛睁得更大，嘴也张着。 8.He looked at his children in confusion, wondering what had happened. 他困惑地看着自己的孩子，想知道发生了什么事。 尝试一下 一、根据提示，完成下列句子。 1.I’m ___________(困惑) what to do next. 2.The news that I had won the competition __________(让我很震惊). 3.He __________(困惑地看着我) and did not answer the question. 4.___________(我们目瞪口呆) when we found out how much they were paying in rent. 二、翻译下列句子。 1.John一脸茫然，说他不知道我在说什么。 _____________________________________________ 2.当他出现在我面前时，我惊呆了。 _____________________________________________ 3.他脸上带着困惑的神情，不知道该如何安慰小女孩。（用with复合结构） _____________________________________________ 4.当我看到观众的人数时，我惊讶地扬起了眉。 _____________________________________________ Keys 一、 1.at a loss 2.came as a shock to me 3.looked at me in confusion 4.Our jaws dropped/fell in astonishment 二、 1.John looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about. 2.When he appeared in front of me, I felt numb with shock. 3.With a confused look on his face, he had no idea how to comfort the little girl. 4.I raised my eyebrows in surprise when I saw the size of the audience. 写作训练 （一） （2024·河南信阳·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was 40 years ago. One day, Emma came back to their apartment from work and realized that her husband, David, was extremely ill. He was throwing up and slurring (发音不清) his words. Immediately, Emma grabbed her purse and took him by taxi to the nearest hospital, on the Lower East Side of New York City. The minutes slowly passed as they waited to see a doctor. They sat there for a couple of hours, and it was pretty clear that nobody was going to pay attention to David. So they rushed to a second hospital, where they were also ignored. Emma knew something was very wrong with David, so they went to a third hospital. As she told the receptionist what was happening, Emma sensed the person wasn’t going to treat their case with urgency. Emma was on the edge of a breakdown. After three failed attempts to get help, she had reached her limit. She started to shout in the lobby (大厅). That’s when her unsung hero appeared. That person was a young man with dark hair and a white physician’s coat. He came to Emma and said, “How can I help you? What’s going on here?” Emma explained what was happening to David, and that she was afraid it was serious. The young man said, “You know, I just got done with my neurological residency (神经系统的实习期) up at Lenox Hill Hospital. I’ll take him in the back and look.” Within two or three minutes, the young man came out and said, “You are absolutely right. Something is very seriously wrong with your husband.” The man told Emma to take her husband to Lenox Hill Hospital, and that he had called the doctor with whom he had done his residency. “He’ll be waiting for you,” said the young man. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But Emma began to cry, realizing she had no way of getting there, because she didn’t have any more cash for a taxi. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Soon Emma and her husband arrived at the hospital. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 But Emma began to cry, realizing she had no way of getting there, because she didn’t have any more cash for a taxi. The young doctor quickly noticed her distress and offered to arrange for a taxi, ensuring her that it would be paid for. “Don’t worry, I’ll make sure you get there safely,” he said with kindness. Emma felt a wave of relief wash over her, knowing that her husband would finally receive the medical attention he desperately needed. Soon Emma and her husband arrived at the hospital. The doctor who had been waiting for them immediately began to examine David thoroughly. Emma watched anxiously as the doctor conducted various tests and questioned David. After a few tense moments, the doctor turned to Emma with a serious expression. “Your husband has suffered a stroke,” he said. “We’ll need to get him into surgery immediately.” Emma nodded, grateful for the doctor’s quick action and expertise. She knew that without the help of the young doctor who had intervened, her husband’s condition could have been much worse. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。四十多年前，艾玛下班回家发现丈夫大卫病重。艾玛立即带他去了最近的医院，但没有得到及时诊治，接连换了两家医院情况依旧。艾玛心急如焚，决定不再等待。在第三家医院的大厅里，她情绪崩溃大声呼救，这时一位年轻的神经科实习医生出现了。他主动提出帮忙检查大卫，并确认病情严重，随即安排他们前往伦诺克斯山医院，自己已联系好医生等候。这位无名英雄的及时出现，为大卫争取到了宝贵的救治时间。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“但是艾玛开始哭了起来，她意识到她没有办法去那里，因为她没有更多的钱打车了。”可知，第一段可以描写这位医生帮她打车并付钱，以便让她顺利到达了想去的医院。 ②由第二段句首内容“不久，艾玛和她的丈夫来到了医院。”可知，第二段可以描写到达医院后一生的救治和她的感受。 2.续写线索：没钱打车—医生找车并付钱—到医院—救治—感激 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①注意到：notice/perceive ②确保：ensure/guarantee ③接收到：receive/get 情绪类 ①感到如释重负：feel a wave of relief/feel relieved ②焦急地，忧虑地：anxiously/worriedly 【点睛】【高分句型1】The young doctor quickly noticed her distress and offered to arrange for a taxi, ensuring her that it would be paid for. ( 运用了现在分词ensuring作状语、that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Emma felt a wave of relief wash over her, knowing that her husband would finally receive the medical attention he desperately needed.( 运用了现在分词knowing作状语、that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型3】The doctor who had been waiting for them immediately began to examine David thoroughly.(运用了who引导的定语从句) （二） （2024·黑龙江·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When John was in Grade 9, his class went on a canoeing (划独木舟) trip. Canoeing is a water sport practiced in a light narrow boat with a paddle. It can be very dangerous, especially if the river has rapids, a fast-flowing part of a river. Since it requires strength, balance and a lot of skills, all the students are trained hard. To qualify for the trip, the whole class had to be able to swim. However, John had a problem. He weighed over 180 pounds. He had never learned to swim before, so he took swimming lessons and worked hard for many weeks. He eventually graduated with a certificate saying that he could swim. John’s classmates were all glad to have him along—all except one person, Nicky. She didn’t like him. In fact, she seemed not to like many. She was on the school water polo team. She was a swimming star and extremely proud of herself too. The trip went well and everyone enjoyed the day. That is, until the end of the trip when they were heading down some rapids. Nicky had been warned over and over to wear her life jacket, but she did not listen to others. When they arrived at a steep valley, the speed of the water picked up. They entered some dangerous rapids. All of a sudden, their canoes turned over. They were all thrown into the water—all except John! He was heavy enough and somehow was not thrown into the water. They all swam back to the canoe where John quickly pulled them in. Then, they saw Nicky’s life jacket floating on the water. She was not wearing it when the accident happened. When they spotted her floating on the water, she was barely conscious. She was in serious danger. It seemed like she had hit her head on a rock. As they were approaching her, their canoes broke loose from the tree branches they were stuck to and sent them farther away from Nicky. Everyone in the canoes looked in horror as the current dragged Nicky away from them. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Someone exclaimed, “we’ve got to help her!” ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finding Nicky opening her eyes, everyone sighed with relief. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Someone exclaimed, “We’ve got to help her!” Before anyone could react, a figure with a life jacket had already jumped into the turbulent water. “It was John!” a boy shouted. He was carried along by the rapid flow, floating up and down. He struggled against the fierce current. Thanks to his weight and exquisite swimming skills, he managed to keep his balance. He went all out to swim toward Nicky. Cold as the water was, John didn’t care. As the water became faster, John felt himself being pulled under by the strong current. But he didn’t give up. With all his might, he tried to reach out and grab Nicky’s arm. Fortunately, he made it. He clutched onto her tightly while putting a life jacket on her. Meanwhile, other students paddled hard to reach them. Eventually, Nicky was dragged back to the canoe. They started to perform CPR on Nicky. All the class looked at her with anxiety. Finding Nicky opening her eyes, everyone sighed with relief. “Are you okay?” one of them asked gently. Nicky nodded slowly and said, “Yeah, thank you all for saving me.” Suddenly, a voice exclaimed, “John saved all of us!” Nicky turned to look at John with deep gratitude and said, “Thank you, John! I don’t know what would have happened to me without you. Could you forgive me for being so rude to you?” John smiled and said, “Of course, I just did what anyone else would have done.” At that time, Nicky realized that John wasn’t the big, slow and clumsy guy she had always thought him to be. Actually, he was the real hero, brave and strong. It was the unlikely hero in her eyes that saved her life. From that day on, Nicky and John became friends. Nicky was no longer the proud and self-centered swimmer that she had been. Instead, she changed into an easy-going girl. It was kindness and forgiveness that broke down the barrier. 【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。John的班级要去划独木舟，为了能够参加这次旅行，John学会了游泳。班上有个叫Nicky的女孩，她是个傲慢并以自我为中心的游泳运动员，她不喜欢John。在划独木舟的过程中，他们遭遇了事故，所有人都掉进了水里，除了John。John把大家救了上来。但Nicky因为不愿意穿救生衣，在水中失去了意识，John奋不顾身把她救了上来。这件事让Nicky对John印象改观，她后来也改变了性格。 【详解】1. 续写线索： ①由续写第一段首句“有人惊呼：“我们得帮帮她！””可知，第一段可以描写John跳入水中把Nicky救上来的过程。 ②由续写第二段首句“看到Nicky睁开眼睛，大家都松了一口气。”可知，第二段可以描写Nicky得知John救了自己后非常感激，她改变了对John的看法，也改变了自己以前的傲慢、目中无人的态度。 2. 段落续写：有人惊呼要帮助Nicky——John跳入水中把Nicky救了上来——大家看到Nicky苏醒后松了一口气——Nicky得知John救了自己后非常感动——Nicky改变了自己 3. 词汇激活： 行为类 ①全力以赴：go all out to do…/spare no effort to do… ②放弃：give up/quit ③抓紧：clutch onto/hold tightly 情绪类 ①焦急地：with anxiety/in anxiety/anxiously/impatiently ②感激：gratitude/appreciation/thankfulness 【点睛】【高分句型1】At that time, Nicky realized that John wasn’t the big, slow and clumsy guy she had always thought him to be.(使用了that引导宾语从句、省略关系词的定语从句、不定式作宾补) 【高分句型2】It was the unlikely hero in her eyes that saved her life. (使用了强调句) （三） （2024高三·河南·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Bonnie raised her granddaughter alone after the girl’s parents died. She hated her granddaughter’s art and wanted her to stop drawing. But everything changed when Mr. Henderson, a famous cartoonist, appeared at her doorstep. One day, Bonnie called out to Amy as she took the chicken out. “Dinner is ready, honey! Come soon!” But Amy didn’t answer. Bonnie finished setting the table and served them dinner, but she still didn’t hear a response from Amy. “Amy? Honey, your dinner is getting cold! Are you coming?” she asked her 10-year-old granddaughter again. When Amy didn’t respond, Bonnie climbed the stairs to the girl’s room and pushed the door open. Amy sat at her desk, with her headphones on. At first, Bonnie thought Amy was studying, but then she noticed the drawing sheet on the table in front of Amy. Bonnie frowned (皱眉) in anger. “Amy!” Bonnie screamed, and the girl turned around and removed her headphones. “Granny? I… I was just…” Amy said. Bonnie stormed up to Amy’s desk, and the little girl tried to cover the drawing, but it was too late. “Did you finish your math homework, little girl? Mrs. Warren called me today. And she told me you’ve been ignoring her assignments!” Bonnie said angrily. “I’ll finish the homework,” Amy said. “I was planning on doing it once I finished the sketch (素描) I was working on, Granny.” “I’m tired of that hobby of yours, Amy! You’re no longer doing those drawings!” Bonnie went on. “Those things you draw are not going to help you in the future! You finish your dinner, and then you’ll be doing your homework. You’re not leaving the house to play with your friends until you finish your homework. Am I clear?” Bonnie said and stormed out of Amy’s room. Minutes later, Amy walked into the kitchen and quietly sat at the table. They began eating dinner in silence. Bonnie was already in a terrible mood, so she didn’t ask about Amy’s day like she usually did. Suddenly, the doorbell rang. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr. Henderson. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs. Warren for advice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Amy answered the door and was surprised to see Mr. Henderson. His kind eyes and warm smile instantly put her at ease. "Hello there, young artist," he greeted her. Amy blushed, feeling a mix of excitement and nervousness. "Is everything alright, dear?" Bonnie appeared behind Amy, her expression wary. Mr. Henderson introduced himself and explained how he had seen Amy's artwork at a local exhibition. He praised her talent and encouraged her to keep drawing. Bonnie hesitated for a long time and decided to ask Mrs. Warren for advice. After a thoughtful conversation, Mrs. Warren helped Bonnie see the value in Amy's passion for art. She suggested that nurturing Amy's creativity could lead to a bright future. With newfound understanding, Bonnie returned home and found Amy in her room, lost in another drawing. This time, Bonnie sat beside her, watching in awe as Amy's imagination unfolded on the paper. She realized that, perhaps, supporting Amy's artistic journey was the best way to honor her daughter's memory and ensure a fulfilling future for her granddaughter. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了邦妮反对外孙女艾米学习绘画，认为外孙女画的那些东西对她的未来毫无帮助。但这一切都在著名漫画家亨德森先生出现在她家门口时发生了变化。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“艾米打开门，惊讶地发现是亨德森先生。”可知，亨德森先生上门来鼓励艾米继续绘画。 ②由第二段首句内容“邦妮犹豫了很长时间，最终决定向艾米的老师沃伦夫人寻求建议。”可知，第二段可描写沃伦夫人给邦妮的建议，让她意识到，也许支持艾米的艺术之旅是确保外孙女拥有光明未来的最佳方式。 2.续写线索：打开门——发现是亨德森先生——亨德森先生鼓励艾米继续绘画——邦妮犹豫——邦妮向艾米的老师沃伦夫人寻求建议——邦妮支持艾米的艺术之旅 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①.鼓励她继续画画：encourage her to keep drawing / motivate her to keep drawing / inspire her to keep drawing ②.通向光明的未来：lead to a bright future /result in a bright future /head for a bright future 情绪类 ①.惊讶的：surprised/amazed/astonished ②.深思熟虑的：thoughtful/deliberate 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Mr. Henderson introduced himself and explained how he had seen Amy's artwork at a local exhibition.(how引导的宾语从句作explain的宾语。) [高分句型2]. This time, Bonnie sat beside her, watching in awe as Amy's imagination unfolded on the paper.(现在分词watching作伴随状语。) （四） （2024·湖南岳阳·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Sai Baba! Sai Baba! Hahahaha!” Rani’s cheeks burned with shame and tears welled up in her eyes as she pushed her way to the exit through the crowd of laughing boys in the packed school bus. It wasn’t the first time she’d been called Sai Baba, after the famous Hindu holy man she’d seen on TV with his trademark afro (非洲式卷发) towering over his head. But this time was the worst. Rani jumped off the school bus and landed hard in the muddy rainwater. It had been a Friday full of disasters! Angry thoughts ran inside Rani’s head as she marched home in the drizzling rain. Why did the rain have to come pouring down so hard just at the end of the school day? Why did she have to forget her raincoat back home? Why did her hair have to be like a giant cotton candy balloon just when she wanted it to behave? Why, why, why, Rani grew angrier as she turned the back door key. “Rani, is that you?” Papa called from the family room. “I hate my hair!” Rani cried as tears of anger and shame streamed down her cheeks. “Why, your hair’s beautiful!” “Then why does everyone make fun of it al the time? The boys teased me about my hair on the bus ride back home…” She paused and then tore at her hair and pulled out a couple of paper balls stuck in it. “Look, they even shot paper balls at my hair.” Papa went up to Rani, hugging her tightly in his arms. “Listen! Those boys are bullies. They did so only to get an emotional response from you. What you need to do is either ignore them or speak up for yourself.” Rani nodded uncertainly, remembering the hours, days and weeks she had spent trying to bring her hair under control. “Papa?” she murmured, “I don’t want to participate in the speech competition on Monday.” “Why?” Papa sounded puzzled. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next Monday morning dawned bright and it was time for the competition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 “Why?” Papa sounded puzzled. “You’ve put your heart and soul into practicing for it all these past months.” Yes, Rani wanted to say. Instead, she murmured, “But my hair…” Seeing the sad expression on his daughter’s face, Papa was quiet for several moments and finally said “It is not your hair that makes you who you are.” Papa slowed down, touching her hair softly and gently, “You’re better and smarter than all of them put together. Go and show them who you really are!” Hearing Papa’s words, Rani was filled with a surge of strength and courage. The next Monday morning dawned bright and it was time for the competition. “Sai Baba, Rani! Hahahaha!” was what Rani heard when she was approaching the stage for the speech. Different from what she used to be, Rani threw back her shoulders and held her head high as she walked past the boys, leaving the boys in awe behind. She stepped onto the stage and took her place. “Where the mind is without fear…” Rani started her speech. Her voice rang out strong and clear, her face shining and her eyes glittering. And right then, she knew she’d won. 【导语】本文属于记叙文，本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了女孩Rani因她标志性的非洲卷发被同学嘲笑而愤怒，她的爸爸在得知原因后安慰她，告诉她她的头发很美。Rani还是不自信，不想参加下周的演讲比赛。在爸爸的进一步开导下，Rani意识到不需要受到别人评价的影响，一个人的内在美和内心强大更重要，于是，她在第二周周一的演讲比赛过程中，不再受别人的负面言语所影响，自信大方展现自己。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容““为什么？”爸爸听起来很困惑。”可知，第一段可描写Rani不想参加比赛的原因，爸爸开导Rani，Rani解开心结。 ②由第二段首句内容“第二个星期一的早晨天刚亮，比赛时间到了。”可知，第二段可描写Rani参加演讲比赛，不再畏惧别人的嘲笑，实现个人成长。 2.续写线索：父亲询问原因——Rani道出担心——父亲开导——Rani解开心结——Rani参加演讲比赛——Rani得到成长 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①走近：approach/step close to ②开始：start/begin ③知道：know/be aware of 情绪类 ①悲伤的：sad/sorrowful ②勇气：courage/bravery 【点睛】【高分句型1】Go and show them who you really are! (运用了who引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】“Sai Baba, Rani! Hahahaha!” was what Rani heard when she was approaching the stage for the speech.(运用了what引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句) （五） （2024高三·安徽蚌埠·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Though traveling is not a big deal for me today, before my trip to the mountains, I used to be a homebody. I had friends to hang out with, several hobbies, and I felt completely comfortable spending weeks or even months in my hometown — or sometimes even on my block — without going anywhere. All my demands of novelty were satisfied by the Discovery and National Geographic channels, and I seriously thought there was no difference between seeing something on the TV and with one’s own eyes. The situation changed when one day David, my best friend who always has a couple of colorful bugs in his head (or, in other words, was always carrying out several crazy plans at once), walked into my room and declared his disgust (厌恶) for civilization. I will not describe how he managed to persuade me to join him on his journey to the Rocky Mountains; all I will say is that we departed in five days. This was my first time in the mountains, so I was turning my head in all directions. Unfortunately, the weather was foggy most of the time, and the higher we got into the mountains, the worse the visibility was. Even despite this fact, I still enjoyed the hike — I felt like I was Bear Grylls, whose show I used to watch with excitement: in the wild, with food and water in my backpack, carrying a flashlight and a knife. On the first day, we were making our way along the foothills; but the next day, we started to climb on one of the peaks. Though it was not that steep and high, I was still excited. I regularly hastened, and because of that, I ran out of energy long before we got to the top; David, on the other hand, was more well-paced. When we finally got to the top, nothing had changed. The same fog was covering the surroundings, and even though I was filled with positive emotions, I felt disappointed, because I counted on seeing the view from above and perhaps being able to take some photos. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We spent a couple of hours on the top, and decided to turn back. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing all this scenery with my own eyes was truly an eye-opening experience for me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】We spent a couple of hours on the top, and decided to turn back. As the fog began to lift slightly, we caught glimpses of the breathtaking landscape that had been hidden from us. The sight of the rugged terrain and the distant peaks, even partially obscured, was more than I could have imagined. The reality of the mountains was far more profound and awe-inspiring than any TV show could convey. It was a moment of realization that the world was much bigger and more magnificent than the confines of my hometown. Seeing all this scenery with my own eyes was truly an eye-opening experience for me. It was a stark contrast to the comfort of my home and the familiarity of my daily routine. The fresh air, the sounds of nature, and the challenge of the climb all contributed to a sense of adventure and discovery that I had never felt before. It was then that I understood the difference between experiencing something through a screen and immersing oneself in it. The disappointment of the foggy view was replaced by the satisfaction of having stepped out of my comfort zone and into the unknown. This trip was not just a physical journey; it was a personal one that changed my perspective on life and the world around me. 【导语】本文讲述了作者原本是宅家一族，后被好友David说服，第一次去洛基山脉徒步旅行，尽管天气多雾，但作者依然享受了这次探险，意识到亲身体验与电视观看的差别。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ① 第一段首句“我们花了几个小时在山顶，决定返回。”表明作者和David在山顶停留并决定下山，可以描写他们在山顶的体验和决定返回的原因。 ② 第二段首句“看到所有这些景色用我自己的双眼，对我来说真是一次开阔眼界的经历。”说明作者通过这次旅行获得了新的视角和认识，可以描写作者的感悟和内心变化。 2. 续写线索：停留山顶——决定返回——体验——感悟——内心变化 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ① 决定做某事：decide to do/determine to do ② 返回：turn back/return ③ 走出：step out of/walk away from 情绪类 ① 失望：disappointment/despair ② 满足：satisfaction/contentment 【点睛】[高分句型1]. As the fog began to lift slightly, we caught glimpses of the breathtaking landscape that had been hidden from us.（由as引导的时间状语从句，由that引导的定语从句） [高分句型2]. Seeing all this scenery with my own eyes was truly an eye-opening experience for me.（动名词作主语） [高分句型3]. This trip was not just a physical journey; it was a personal one that changed my perspective on life and the world around me.（that引导的定语从句） （六） （2024·江西景德镇·三模）读后续写 Ridoy, a 12-year-old boy, lived a carefree life under good care of his mom and dad. Just like any other boy of his age, he often lost his temper with his parents. Sometimes he obeyed what they said, but sometimes he would completely ignore them. For example, one day, Ridoy’s mom needed to go shopping for some ingredients for cooking and she asked Ridoy to help look after his one-year-old sister. But Ridoy just blurted “no way”, slapped the door and locked himself into his bedroom. There was another time when Ridoy’s dad urgently needed Ridoy to fetch a pair of fliers for him when he was fixing his bike. Ridoy just refused without thinking. But Ridoy’s parents did not worry a lot since this was very common in kids. It was an unexpected holiday announced by the school of Ridoy and he had a five-day holiday. For the first two days, he spent a good time with his mother. She took him for outings. They went to the beach and amusement parks, and had delicious dining. She cooked his favorite foods and played with him. Three days were left and Ridoy’s mother wanted to clean the house, which she intended to involve Ridoy in. To her surprise, he accepted without hesitation. With the help of Ridoy, the house instantly became very tidy and the floor shone like a mirror. Everything she asked him to do during the three days was done to perfection. Although she was astonished by his behavior, a delicious sweetness well up in Ridoy’s mom’s heart. While she was cooking the dinner meal on the fifth day, Ridoy gave her a piece of paper written by him. Since his mom was busy cooking, she asked him to place the paper on the dining table. After cooking the meals, she took the paper left by his son. The piece of paper contained the following list: Cutting grass in the garden -$2 Cleaning the house -$3; Taking care of my sister -$3; Removing the garbage -$ 2; … In total, you owe me $20 She was literally shocked, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The boy was in tears when reading the paper. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】She was literally shocked! She thought back the days and nights spent on her son, to whom she dedicated all her time and energy. Speechless, she took out a piece of paper and wrote: Before you were born, I carried you day and night for nine whole months. Whenever you were sick, I spent sleepless nights taking care of you. Whenever you were down, I did what I can to cheer you up. For so many years, I have been caring for you like a precious gift. So, my dear son, how much do you owe me? The boy was in tears when reading the paper. How ridiculous he was to charge his mom for doing such tiny things. He rushed to his mom and gave a tight hug that he had never done before. Ridoy murmured, “Mom, I’m sorry for everything!” She took him in her arm and kissed him on the forehead, a warm smile spreading across her face. That day, Ridoy learned his mom’s unconditional love for him. Since then, he has changed a lot, taking his share in housework as a member of the family. 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“她真的被震惊了”可知，第一段可描写妈妈用一张纸条回应儿子，列出自己为儿子所做的事，让儿子明白母爱的无价。 ②由第二段首句内容“男孩读着那张纸条，泪流满面。”可知，第二段可描写男孩读完妈妈的回复后的反应，他意识到自己的荒谬，并向妈妈道歉，从此改变，学会了分担家务，懂得了家庭成员的责任。 2.续写线索：震惊——回忆付出——列出母爱——男孩反应——道歉改变——学会分担 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①回忆：recall/reflect on ②列出：enumerate/list down ③拥抱：hug/clasp 情绪类 ①感动：touched/moved ②抱歉：apologetic/ self-deprecating 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Whenever you were sick, I spent sleepless nights taking care of you. （使用了由whenever引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2]. Since then, he has changed a lot, taking his share in housework as a member of the family.（使用了现在分词作状语） （七） （2024·福建南平·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kelly is a nurse. Her kidney (肾脏) proved to be a perfect match for her cousin, Dana, who is a teacher. Her kidney had worsened to the point where she required a transplant (移植). As Kelly told Dana, “I’m in good health and I almost never get sick or ill. It seems that I can be a donor for you.” Dana was wild with joy. Later on a Thursday afternoon, after spending the first of two days undergoing tests to confirm her kidney was a match for Dana, Kelly got a call from a Cleveland Clinic caregiver. They were canceling the second day of her tests. A CT scan revealed the presence of a tumor (肿瘤) on Kelly’s right kidney. Kelly was shocked about the discovery and concerned she might no longer be a donor available for Dana. That meant that Kelly had to have an operation to remove the tumor, unable to donate her kidney. Meanwhile Dana had to wait for some other donors for a matchable kidney, which was really hard to find. Dana was thrown back to desperation. The cousins were at a loss. But their doctors wouldn’t give up. They tried every possible means to find a solution that could satisfy both sides, treating Kelly’s illness and offering Dana transplanting. But the bad news was that there had been few such reported cases. Determined to solve this difficult problem, Dr. Wee, director of the Kidney Transplant Program, held meetings with a team of specialists to discuss over details of the case and best steps to move forward. They worked day and night to search for related information and make analysis. Seeing the devotion of the experts, Kelly and Dana felt the flame of hope returning to their hearts. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After many meetings, the medical team felt confident to treat the two patients at the same time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The cousins recovered from their surgeries. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 After many meetings, the medical team felt confident to treat the two patients at the same time. Dr. Wee told the cousins that with their expertise they could deal with their situations at the same time. First, they safely removed Kelley’s right kidney with the tumor in it. Then they removed the tumor from the kidney. After the repair and reconstruction, and with more than 95% of the healthy kidney remaining. Dr. Wee transplanted it into Dana. It turned out the win-win practice, a breakthrough in similar medical cases. The cousins recovered from their surgeries. “I have an overwhelming sense of gratitude to Kelly and all the doctors and thankfulness for the opportunity I’ve been given.” said Dana. “Now I have the opportunity to see my three sons marry, and have their children. Those are what I might not have been able to look forward to before.” Dana, with a perfectly functioning kidney, planned to return to her teaching job in the next spring. Kelly felt blessed to have had her tumor removed while helping her cousin to recover with a transplant. 【导语】本文以Kelly为线索展开，讲述了她作为一名护士，发现自己的肾脏与表亲Dana匹配，决定为其捐献。然而，在捐献前的检查中，医生发现Kelly的肾脏上长有肿瘤，导致她可能无法捐献。这个消息让Kelly和急需肾脏移植的Dana都陷入了困境。医生和专家们面临难题，但他们并没有放弃，而是努力寻找解决方案。最终，肾脏移植项目主任Dr. Wee领导专家团队，夜以继日地寻找相关信息，为解决问题而努力。看到专家们的奉献，Kelly和Dana重新燃起了希望。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“经过多次会议，医疗团队有信心同时治疗两名患者。”可知，第一段可描写医生们怎么同时拯救了他们两人。 ②由第二段首句内容“这对表兄弟从手术中恢复过来。”可知，第二段可描写Dana对Kelly和医生的感谢，以及Kelly的感受。 2. 续写线索：多次会议——有信心救两人——开始手术——手术成功——感谢。 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①处理：deal with/handle ②修理：repair/restore ③计划重返：plan to return/intend to go back 情绪类 ①感激：gratitude/appreciation ②好运的：blessed/lucky 【点睛】[高分句型1]Dr. Wee told the cousins that with their expertise they could deal with their situations at the same time.(that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Those are what I might not have been able to look forward to before.(what引导的表语从句) （八） （2024·江西新余·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Everything went according to plan, until it didn’t. The night before my first marathon, I ate the classic runner’ s dinner. That morning, I woke up before my alarm, tiptoed downstairs to toast three waffles and slathered them in peanut butter. I had slept eight hours, my unreliable left knee wasn’t bothering me, my stomach was full. I was ready. Then my girlfriend, Louisa, knocked on the door asking: “Have you checked your email?” The Twin Cities Marathon in Minneapolis and St. Paul had been canceled. Race officials sent an email at 5: 16 a. m. announcing the race had been called off due to “black flag conditions”-- record-breaking heat. While I understood why the race organizers didn’t want to put runners at risk, I also knew that I had trained in the baking and humid Washington, D．C． all summer. If I started early and finished around noon, I’d miss the worst heat of the day. Louisa offered to bike alongside me, with water, snacks and salt pills in tow. I quickly called my friends to figure out what to do. About 40minutes later, we were heading for starting line in downtown Minneapolis, drinking a gallon of water, ready to run our own marathon. There is a psychological difference between running 42. 2 kilometers and running an organized marathon. The distance becomes a shared challenge when you’re running with thousands of others. That gives a runner confidence they can finish the race as well. “When you’re in that marathon setting, having people on the sidelines, having people running alongside you, maybe running in a new location, there are so many other external things to help keep you focused, “my friend Samson said. The sights and sounds “give you a little of a break from the internal reflection that can happen when you start to struggle.” Indeed, it is a mental race. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On our way to the starting line, we were wondering if anybody else would show up despite the cancellation. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The last 8 kilometers of the Twin Cities Marathon route are largely uphill. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】On our way to the starting line, we were wondering if anybody else would show up despite the cancellation. To our surprise, there were still spectators along the course, often neighbors gathered outside of their houses handing out bottles of water as they watched runners go by. With hot air constantly hitting us, bystanders passed me one ice-cold sponge and a wet rag to cool my body down. Somewhere around half of the route, I was also offered a handful of orange slices and a banana from a stranger on the side of the road but I politely declined. Their inspiration and kindness were what kept me running all the way forward. The last 8 kilometers of the Twin Cities Marathon route are largely uphill. By that point in the race, my thighs felt like jells and my leg muscles were rubber bands. The finish line sat at the bottom of the hill. No finish banner this time, I could still see dozens of supporters cheering runners home. I kept glancing at my Apple Watch, counting down the meters until it ticked to “42.2” kilometers. I called out “I’m done” to Louisa, who had been delivering much-needed encouragement along the way. I let out a dry sob (or two) and gave hugs to people around. Despite the race getting canceled, it felt just like a real victory. 【导语】本文以故事情节的发展为线索展开，讲述了作者第一次参加的马拉松比赛由于高温被迫取消，但是作者和朋友们仍旧决定前往马拉松的起跑点，去完成自己的马拉松比赛，虽然这与正式的马拉松比赛有很大不同，但作者还是完成了第一次马拉松比赛的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在去起跑线的路上，我们还在想，尽管比赛取消了，还会不会有人来。”可知，第一段可描写有很多观众来观看并帮助运动员比赛的场景。 ②由第二段首句内容“双子城马拉松赛的最后8公里大部分是上坡。”可知，第二段可描写作者此刻的身体状况以及完成比赛后的感受。 2.续写线索：站在起跑线——观众热心帮助——继续前行——最后8公里——完成比赛——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①集合：gather/assemble ②分发：hand out/distribute ③递给：pass/hand 情绪类 ①惊讶：surprise/amazement 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Their inspiration and kindness were what kept me running all the way forward.（运用了what引导的表语从句） [高分句型2]. I kept glancing at my Apple Watch, counting down the meters until it ticked to “42.2” kilometers.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） [高分句型3]. I called out “I’m done” to Louisa, who had been delivering much-needed encouragement along the way.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$