Unit 3 Teenage problems 重点话题（青少年问题类）满分范文20篇-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津译林版）

Unit 3 Teenage problems 重点话题（青少年问题类）满分范文20篇 一、书面表达 1．（2024·江苏常州·一模）现在越来越多的学生有久坐的习惯。假定你是李华，请你以“Do not sit for a long time”为题给你校英文报写一篇短文，说明久坐的危害并提出解决这一问题的建议。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称： 2. 词数100左右。 Do not sit for a long time ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·江苏常州·二模）很多家长喜欢给孩子挑选衣服，至少会建议孩子该穿什么。随着年龄的增长，孩子们对此会有不同的看法，有的孩子赞同，有的孩子不赞同，对此你有什么看法？ 请用英语写一篇短文表达你的观点。 内容包括： 1. Should parents choose your clothes? 2. Why do you think so? 注意： 1. 词数 100左右; 2.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Should parents choose your clothes? Many parents choose their children's clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. Is it right for them to do so? In my opinion, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）李大钊曾说：“青年者，国家之魂”。一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能兴旺发达。“Live life to the fullest, you only live once”，作为青少年的我们更应该燃烧自己的青春年华，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。请以“Live Life to the Fullest”为题，分享自己应该如何度过充实而有意义的学习生活。 Live Life to the Fullest 健康生活 1. 早睡早起，睡眠充足 2. 健康饮食，坚持锻炼 3. …… 高效学习 1. 制定计划， 合理安排时间； 2. 上课认真听讲，主动请教问题； 3. …… 乐观向上 1. 相信自己，积极迎接挑战； 2. 面对困难，坚持不懈； 3. …… 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）; 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Live Life to the Fullest As teenagers, we should make full use of time and live life to the fullest. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）习主席曾说：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”作为中学生的我们，应该如何对自己、家庭和社会负责呢？请以“How to Be a Responsible (有责任心的) Student?”为题写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 短文须包含所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 How to be a responsible student In the school study hard; At home do some dishes; In public help the elderly cross the road; ... Your hope How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假设你是李华，你的网友王梅也在备战中考。最近她在给你的邮件中提到自己心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你就此给她写一封英文回信，内容包括： comfort (安慰) her It’s quite common… the problems that stress may cause 1.… 2.… suggestions and reasons 1.… 2.… 3.… 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Wang Mei, I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been stressed because of the coming examination.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）美好生活，健康同行。如何丰富校园生活，促进同学们的身心健康？目前，你校英语网站“VOICE OF TEENS”正在征集同学们的建议。请你根据下图提示，以“How to keep healthy”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你的建议。 注意： （1）词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 How to keep healthy Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep healthy? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health. 7．（2023·江苏扬州·三模）成长的历程多姿多彩，但总也伴随着诸多的不解与困惑。每每这时，年少的我们总希望得到别人的帮助与支持。学校心理辅导中心(school psychological service centre)便在这种情况下应运而生。请根据以下的提示，选择一种你更喜欢的交流方式，谈谈理由，并提供1-2种合理的减压方式。 Face-to-face Communication Online Communication     From 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. every day     Face-to-face communication with experienced experts (专家)     Offer a report with the expert’s advice ...     From 6 p.m. to 9 p.m. every day     Online communication with 5 students of your age     No record of your personal information ... 要求：1）观点明确，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；      Our school psychological service centre has been open since last month. I think if I have problems, I prefer_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·江苏苏州·二模）现在社会上存在过度溺爱孩子的现象，导致孩子们不懂关爱，不懂如何与人交往。请根据下图和提示以“Too Much Care Spoils (宠坏) a Child”为题写一篇100词左右的文章。 要点： 1. 简要描写图片内容； 2. 说明图片含义； 3. 表达你的观点。 参考词汇：blooming adj.盛开的      destroy v.摧毁 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2023·江苏苏州·二模）生活处处存在压力, 有来自学校的、家庭的，也有来自个人的。有时压力犹如泰山压顶，对生活的热爱，对命运的豁达态度，应该是我们每个人心头必备的一把伞。请以Learn to Smile when We Are under Much Pressure为题，写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.阐述我们面临的压力； 2.解决压力的方法。 要求： 1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确 Learn to Smile when We Are under Much Pressure. These days, more and more students are living under great pressure. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24九年级上·江苏·周测）初三的生活紧张而又忙碌，相信你的身边一定会有这样的一位好朋友，他/她与你一起学习，一起玩耍，一起分享成长的烦恼与快乐…… 你的好友Millie给你写了封信倾诉她的烦恼，你能帮她分担忧愁，解决问题吗？请结合Millie的问题，给她提供一些建议和方法，写一篇回信。 Dear Sandy, I’m feeling blue these days. The coming exam worries me a lot, so I cannot sleep well. That makes me feel sleepy in class. And my parents are so busy that they usually come back late. They have little time for me. What should I do? Could you offer me some suggestions? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Millie 要求： 1）内容贴切，表达准确，过渡自然，可适当拓展。 2）书写工整，条理清晰。 3）100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Millie, Thank you for telling me your problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,   Sandy 11．（23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期中）忙碌的九年级生活已经开始了，成长就像一次长途旅行，在成长的过程中有收获，也有困惑，请以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在成长过程中的点滴及感受。 写作要点： 收获 变得勤奋、细心。因为失之毫厘谬以千里。 学习到许多名人及他们的事迹。参考人名：Spud Webb，Tan Dun…… 老师教会我要善良，乐于助人，充满爱心。 困惑 学习压力大，睡眠不足，……（其他自拟） 你的感受 学习和业余爱好能够保持平衡。 遇到困难不放弃。 其他（自拟一点） 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；             2.必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数：90左右；                             4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期中）假如你是张伟，你在微信里看到你校交流生 Andy 发的朋友圈。作为他的好友，请你根据 Andy 朋友圈的内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，表示关心并提供帮助。                                Moments                               Andy Chinese is so hard!I can’t find any way to learn it well. Also, questions like “你吃了吗?”“你爸妈是干嘛的呀?”often make me a little uncomfortable. I really don’t know how to answer them. I find it difficult to communicate with my Chinese classmates. I really miss my family and my friends! What should I do? 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数不少于70词(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Andy, I’m sorry to know that you have some problems now._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Zhang Wei 13．（2023·江苏南京·一模）黑发不知勤学早，白首方悔读书迟。请根据以下征稿内容，为校英语广播站写一篇短文。 Welcome to our radio program. This week we invite you to say something about Tangping(躺平): ● what Tangping means for teenagers ● whether you choose Tangping and why ● your advice to teenagers who choose Tangping We hope to hear from you. 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 In my opinion, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2023·江苏无锡·中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 注意事项： （1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； （2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 15．（23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末） 青春期是我们成长的必经之路，往往伴随着各种各样的困扰。Teenagers校刊针对当前青少年面临的问题进行了调查，结果如图所示。请你以“Teenage Problems”为题，写一篇短文，分别介绍你已经解决和依然存在的问题，谈谈具体表现和解决方法。 注意事项： 1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数在100个左右； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末）近日，学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏，你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论，同学们表达了自己的观点，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿，介绍班级讨论的结果，并表明自己的观点。 大部分同学 ●帮助复习所学知识 ●帮助学生学会独立解决问题 ●完成作业是学生的职责，应合理安排好时间 …… 少部分同学 ●作业量大，耗时多，影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情 ●有些作业机械重复，不感兴趣 …… 你自己 …… 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3. 不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 What Do We Think of Our Homework? Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）紧张忙碌的初三学习生活已经过了大半，有喜悦也有失意，我校开展“How to Face Grade Nine”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下： 鼓足信心 努力，一切皆有可能；灰心，则一事无成 勤奋细心 勤奋，终将进步；细心，就会…… 管理时间 合理安排；劳逸结合 适当解压 有烦心事时， ……(分享两点解决方法) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯： 2.必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数：100 词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 How to Face Grade Nine We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for over eight months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we face this term? First of all, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Face the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future! 18．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）你校英语网站以“How to be a teenager with good habits” 为话题开展征文活动，请你根据下图提示介绍自己的做法并加以适当发挥。 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯： 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)， 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 How to be a teenager with good habits As a teenager, I should have some good habits.  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．（2024·江苏南通·二模）为进一步推动教育教学改革，改善学生中出现的不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象，促进学生多元化成长，学校开设了劳动品德教育，对此你表示赞同。请结 合自身的体会及如何培养劳动能力和精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 上劳动课，学习生活技能； 2. 参加课后劳动，如……，丰富真实的劳动体验； 3. 学做家务，如……，培养学生独立生活的能力； 4. 你的想法和建议…… 注意： 1. 内容需涵盖所有要点，并作适当发挥； 2. 词数90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 不得在文中出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．（2024·江苏常州·一模）中考临近，很多同学为了能取得好成绩，经常熬夜复习，这对身体健康产生了较大的影响。请你就“Staying up late”这一话题发表你的看法，内容需包括： （1）除了影响健康，熬夜会对学习带来怎样的影响？ （2）你认为应如何取得好成绩？ 注意：1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2．词数100左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 15 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．例文 Do not sit for a long time Nowadays, more and more students have the habit of sitting for a long time. Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. First, we can go to school on foot or by bike so that we can exercise. Second, we should keep a correct sitting posture when we are in class. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to stand up and take some exercise during break time at school. All in all, sitting for a long time has a bad effect on us, and we should develop good living habits. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求介绍久坐的危害并给出解决问题的建议，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍久坐的危害； 第二步，给出解决问题的建议； 第三步，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①form good living habits养成良好的生活习惯 ②all in all总而言之 ③have a bad effect on对……有不良影响 [高分句型] ①Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. (倒装句) ②To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. (动词不定式作目的状语) 2．例文 Many parents choose their children’s clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. ls it right for them to do so? In my opinion, parents should choose children’s clothes. Their advice is helpful. Parents can help us choose the right clothes because they have more experience. It is part of their job just like making sure we can cat a healthy diet. As they are usually paying, it makes sense that parents should offer advice.If parents don't help us choose clothes, we may not wear things wisely, like a pair of shorts in the cold day. Besides, parents can teach us to dress properly to show respect at some special events.Choosing clothes can be a two-way effort. Children say what they prefer but parents have the final decision. It’s not just about what you wear but how you wear it. 例文 Many parents choose their children’s clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. ls it right for them to do so? In my opinion, parents shouldn’t choose children’s clothes. It's your own decision.You should decide because you're the one wearing the clothes. Parents don’t always understand what children like or how to follow the fashion. What’s more, choosing your own clothes is an important step towards becoming independent and self-confident. Choosing clothes can be fun and creative, and allows you to express yourself and develop your own style. For some people, clothing is a way of showing you belong to a certain group. In addition, if children choose their clothes, they are more likely to wear them, It means less wasted money. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；   ②时态：时态为一般现在时；   ③提示：在写作时注意阅读题目要求，把要点和个人观点写进去，并注意衔接，保证条理清晰。 [写作步骤]   第一步，引出话题，介绍很多家长喜欢给孩子挑选衣服，至少会建议孩子该穿什么； 第二步，表达赞同或不赞同的原因；   第三步，书写结语。   [亮点词汇]   ①at least至少 ②What’s more更重要的是 ③be likely to可能 [高分句型] ①Parents can help us choose the right clothes because they have more experience. (原因状语从句)   ②Choosing clothes can be fun and creative. (动名词作主语) 3．例文： Live Life to the Fullest As teenagers, we should make full use of time and live life to the fullest. First of all, we should have a healthy lifestyle. It’s good for us to get up and go to bed early. Eating healthily and keeping exercising are also important. Besides, we need to relax ourselves after one day’s hard work. Secondly, make plans in advance and manage our time well. In class, we must listen to the teachers carefully. When we have some questions, turn to the teachers for help. Also we should go over what we have learned as often as possible and prepare for the new lessons in time. Last but not least, be confident! Be active to take new challenges. No matter what difficulties we face, don’t give up. We can also develop some hobbies to make our life more interesting. Live life to the fullest so that we can become versatile talents and make our country strong and prosperous.   【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明文章主题，表面青少年应当使自己的生活充实； 第二步，具体阐述在健康生活、高效学习、乐观向上三个方面应当怎样做； 第三步，结尾再次回应主题。 [亮点词汇] ①make full use of 最大程度利用 ②as often as possible 尽可能经常地 [高分句型] It’s good for us to get up and go to bed early.（it作形式主语） No matter what difficulties we face, don’t give up.（no matter what…句型） 4．例文 How to Be a Responsible Student? As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we need to be responsible. What should we do? I think as a good student, we should study hard and have good studying habits. In class, we need to listen to teachers carefully and be active in class. After school, we should finish our homework on time and do some reading. At home, it’s necessary for us to share the housework. We can do the dishes after dinner. Respecting parents is also important. In society, we can do some volunteer work like helping the elderly cross the road. Besides, we should be nice to others and follow the rules. By doing these things, we can make our family and society better. Let’s all be responsible and make a difference! 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，强调青少年作为国家的未来应该有责任心，引出如何做的话题； 第二步，具体提出一些合理的建议； 第三步，书写总结，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ① do some reading 阅读 ② make a difference  产生影响 ［高分句型］ ① At home, it’s necessary for us to share the housework. (it作形式主语) ② Respecting parents is also important. (动名词作主语) 5．例文： Dear Wang Mei,     I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been stressed because of the coming examination.     Cheer up! You’re not alone. It’s quite common for ninth-graders to worry about it. Stress can change our moods and cause many problems. You may not sleep well, get angry easily or even become forgetful.     Here are some ways that can deal with stress. The first thing you can try is to exercise. Exercise like walking or running not only brings energy but also builds confidence. Another way is to change the colours of your bedroom. Painting it blue may make you feel calm. It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener.     Let me know if I can help further. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍压力会带来哪些问题； 第二步，具体阐述缓解压力的方法； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②cheer up振作起来 ③worry about担心 [高分句型] ①Painting it blue may make you feel calm. (动名词作主语) ②It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener.(定语从句) 6．例文 How to keep healthy Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep healthy? Here are some tips. Firstly, it is necessary to have a healthy lifestyle. We should keep away from junk food. We had better eat more fruit and vegetables every day. Secondly, we should do exercise one hour a day in order to keep healthy. Thirdly, we should have a good living habit. At the same time, we should go to bed early and get up early every day. We should also maintain mental health. We can relax ourselves when we are under great pressure to study. Besides, we should think of nice things and stay in a good mood. Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。第一段总述健康的重要性，进而引出保持健康的建议； 第二步，具体介绍如何保持健康。从“饮食、睡眠、运动、心态”等几个方面给出保持健康的方法； 第三步，书写结语。进一步号召同学们重视健康，保持健康。 [亮点词汇] ①keep away from远离 ②had better do sth.最好做某事 ③in order to为了 ④stay in a good mood保持好心情 [高分句型] ①Firstly, it is necessary to have a healthy lifestyle.（It is+形容词+to do sth.） ②We can relax ourselves when we are under great pressure to study.（when引导状语从句） 7．例文 Version1 Our school psychological service centre has been open since last month. I think if I have problems, I prefer the face-to-face communication. The centre provides face-to-face communication service from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m every day. During that time, I am right at school, so I can get enough time to have face-to-face communication with experienced experts and tell them my worries. Before I leave, I can receive a report with their advice. I’m sure it’ll be valuable to me. The suitable time and experienced experts make me feel it is a wise choice when I feel blue. In addition, if I feel stressed, I usually listen to light music or go running. I think music and sports can make me relaxed and calm me down.    (107 words) Version2 Our school psychological service centre has been open since last month. I think if I have problems, I prefer Online Communication. The centre provides Online Communication service from 6 p.m. to 9 p.m. every day. During that time I am right at home, so I can get enough time to have online communication with 5 students of my age and share our worries with each other. And the centre makes sure there is no record of personal information. The suitable time and sharing with 5 students of my age make me feel it is a wise choice when I feel blue. In addition, if I feel stressed, I usually listen to light music or go running. I think music and sports can make me relaxed and calm me down.   (110 words) 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍心理咨询的工作时间； 第二步，介绍自己选择此种方式的理由； 第三步，介绍自己认为能解压的其他方式。 [亮点词汇] ① valuable有用的 ② suitable合适的 ③ feel blue觉得郁闷 [高分句型] ①In addition, if I feel stressed, I usually listen to light music or go running. （条件状语从句） ②The suitable time and experienced experts make me feel it is a wise choice when I feel blue.（时间状语从句） 8．例文   As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different. Such can also be the case with us while we grow up.   To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood, our parents tend to offer us too much care, for example, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us. They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us. As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities. 【详解】总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图片和参考词汇，围绕话题完成写作，注意语句通顺连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写图片内容，说明图片含义； 第二步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be destroyed by被……破坏 ②intention意图 ③hardship困难 ④tend to do sth倾向于做…… ⑤offer sb sth为某人提供某物 ⑥spoil溺爱 ⑦independent独立的 ⑧shoulder one’s due responsibilities承担某人应有的责任 [高分句型] ①As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. (被动语态) ②As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. (what引导主语从句，so that引导目的状语从句) ③Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities. (部分倒装) 9．例文： Learn to when Are Much These days, more and more students are living under great pressure. First of all, our parents often compare ourselves with others. They always think that we are not as good as other people’s children. Second, we sometimes have a lot of pressure on ourselves. We want to improve our grades, but we can’t find the right way to learn and so on. Although there is a lot of pressure, we can find many ways to solve the problem. Firstly, we can be in control of our moods and learn to communicate with others. Secondly, we can dream of a bright future and keep a passion for life. There are more ways than difficulties, so learn to smile. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，语言流畅，表达正确，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述我们面临的压力； 第二步，提出解决压力的方法。 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②as good as和……一样好 ③be in control of控制 ④communicate with sb和某人交流 [高分句型] ①They always think that we are not as good as other people’s children.（that引导的宾语从句） ②Although there is a lot of pressure, we can find many ways to solve the problem.（although引导的让步状语从句） 10．例文 Dear Millie, Thank you for telling me your problems. I understand your feelings. Here are a few suggestions. Firstly, try to establish a study routine that works for you. This will help you stay organized and focused. Secondly, it’s essential to get enough sleep. Try to create a relaxing bedtime routine and avoid using electronic devices before going to bed. Regarding your parents’ busy schedule, it’s necessary to have a conversation with them. Let them know how you’re feeling and express your need for their support and attention. They might not be aware of how much it’s affecting you. Lastly, remember to take care of yourself both physically and mentally. I hope these suggestions will help you in some way. Yours, Sandy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，安慰Millie； 第二步，就她遇到的问题给出建议； 第三步，总结并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ① establish建立 ② electronic devices电子设备 ③ take care of关心，照顾 [高分句型] ①Here are a few suggestions.（倒装句） ②Firstly, try to establish a study routine that works for you. （祈使句） ③Let them know how you’re feeling and express your need for their support and attention.（祈使句） 11．例文 Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. I became hard-working and careful. Because a small mistake leads to a thousand miles. I read many books which helped me open up my mind, gained a lot of knowledge, and learned about many famous people and their deeds such as Spud Webb and Tan Dun. What’s more, the teachers taught me to be kind, helpful, and full of love. On the way, I had my problems. For example, I had a lot of study pressure and didn’t have enough sleep. I also couldn’t achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily. By planning our time well, we can achieve a balance between our studies and hobbies. And hobbies can help us relax ourselves. Growing up is more important than success. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作主题已给出，围绕主题根据表格内要点展开写作，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍成长过程中的收获； 第二步，点出自己在成长过程中遇到的困惑； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①open up one’s mind开拓视野 ②learn about了解 ③what’s more而且 ④achieve a balance取得平衡 ⑤never give up永不言弃 [高分句型] ①I read many books which helped me open up my mind, gained a lot of knowledge, and learned about many famous people and their deeds such as Spud Webb and Tan Dun.（which引导的定语从句） ②I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily.（when引导的时间状语从句） 12．例文 Dear Andy, I’m sorry to know that you have some problems now. I saw your recent post on Moments and I wanted to reach out and offer my support. Learning Chinese can definitely be challenging, but don’t worry, you’re not alone! Many of us have faced similar difficulties. To improve your Chinese, I suggest finding a language exchange partner. You can practice speaking with them and they can help you with any questions you have. As for the uncomfortable questions, it’s okay to simply say “I don’t know” or “I’m not sure”. Your classmates will understand that you are still learning. Don’t be afraid to ask them questions too, as they can provide valuable insights into Chinese culture and customs. I understand that you miss your family and friends, but try to stay positive and make new connections. Remember, learning a new language takes time and patience. Don’t be too hard on yourself. Keep practicing and you’ll gradually improve. All the best, Zhang Wei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。 第二步，安慰并给出建议。 第三步，鼓励并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①reach out伸手 ②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事 ③as for至于 [高分句型] ①Don’t be too hard on yourself. （祈使句） ②I understand that you miss your family and friends, but try to stay positive and make new connections. （宾语从句） 13．例文 In my opinion, Tangping means not studying hard for teenagers. I don’t choose Tangping because it can only give us pleasure for a short time. My friend Tom once chose Tangping during the summer holiday. At first, he had fun playing online games. But later, he failed the exams. He was not happy any more! I have some advice for those who choose Tangping. First, you should have a purpose for your life, such as going to college or being a doctor in the future. Second, stay away from mobile phones. If you feel bored, play sports instead of playing computer games or watching short videos on the Internet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先讲述躺平对青少年意味着什么； 第二步，讲述自己是否会选择躺平及原因； 第三步，谈谈自己对选择躺平的青少年的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①have fun doing sth做某事很有趣 ②such as例如 ③instead of而不是 [高分句型] ①I don’t choose Tangping because it can only give us pleasure for a short time.（原因状语从句） ②I have some advice for those who choose Tangping.（定语从句） 14．例文： Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。 第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。 第三步，书写结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①argue with和某人争吵 ②care about关心 ③take painting lessons上绘画课 [高分句型] ①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作) ② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式) 15．例文： Teenage Problems In our growth process, we will always encounter various problems. I wasn’t very good at sports in the past. Later, with the encouragement of my teacher, I now enjoy sports, especially playing basketball. So I am very slim and healthy. I used to have a lot of homework and finished very late every day. But now I have very little homework. I can complete them at school. However, there are still some problems that we cannot solve very well now. For example, I have almost no friends. Sometimes my relationship with my parents is not very good. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：考生应根据图片中的调查结果，紧扣主题进行写作，介绍已经解决和依然存在的问题，谈谈具体表现和解决方法，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图，介绍青少年的问题； 第二步，详细介绍已经解决的问题； 第三步，具体阐述依然存在的问题。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②with the encouragement of sb.在某人的鼓励下 ③enjoy doing sth.享受做某事 ④used to do sth.过去常常做某事 [高分句型] ①But there are still some problems that we cannot solve very well now. (定语从句) 16．Possible Version: Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it. Most students have positive attitudes towards homework. They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone. Also, they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully. Of course, they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams. However, a few students don’t think so. First, they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like. Second, they have to do the same boring exercises many times. As a result, they have no interest in homework anymore. And sometimes they can’t keep a balance between homework and their hobbies. In my opinion, I think it’s important for us to do our homework on time. Homework can help us consolidate our knowledge. Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明主题； 第二步，分别给出大部分同学和少部分同学的观点； 第三步，给出个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②deal with处理 ③go over复习 ④as a result结果 ⑤keep a balance between在某事与某事间保持平衡 ⑥on time准时 ⑦consolidate巩固 [高分句型] ①They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ②they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ③they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ④they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like.（句型：宾语从句，that省略） ⑤it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like（句型：结果状语从句，so...that引导） ⑥Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests（句型：目的状语从句，so that引导） 17． 例文： How to Face Grade Nine We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for over eight months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we face this year? First of all, be confident. We should believe nothing is impossible. Don’t lose heart, or you can achieve nothing. Second, be hard-working. If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. We should also learn to be careful because a miss is as good as a mile. Carelessness leads to low marks. Third, we should plan our time well. And it’s important to keep a balance between work and play. Finally, we should know how to deal with our stress. When having worries, remember to share them with others or turn to your teachers or your parents for help. Keeping your worries to yourself can make them worse. Face the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格提示中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——鼓足信心、勤奋细心、管理时间、适当解压等方面均要一一阐述。 第三步，书写结语（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①be confident自信 ②make progress取得进步 ③deal with处理 [高分句型] ①If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. (If引导的条件状语从句) ②Keeping your worries to yourself can make them worse. (动名词作主语) ③We should also learn to be careful because a miss is as good as a mile. (原因状语从句) 18．例文 How to be a teenager with good habits    As a teenager, I should have some good habits. In class, I need to listen to the teachers carefully and get involved in the class activities. After school I should finish my homework in time and do some reading. What’s more, a good teenager needs to live a healthy life. It’s good for me to do more exercise in my spare time. Fresh fruits and vegetables are some of the healthiest foods I can eat to improve health. Last but not least, a good teenager must be the one who cares about his manners. For example, I should respect the old. Also, I need to obey traffic rules. Besides, I should keep voice down in public. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为青少年，我应该养成一些良好的习惯。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——学校、家、公共场所的一些好习惯等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“我应该在公共场合小点声”的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①get involved in涉足 ②What’s more而且 ③obey traffic rules遵守交通规则 [高分句型] ①Last but not least, a good teenager must be the one who cares about his manners. (定语从句） ②It’s good for me to do more exercise in my spare time. (It’s good for sb. to do sth.句型) 19．例文 As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. In addition, we need to try to do some housework at home like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍劳动能力和精神的重要性，引出话题：中学生应该如何做； 第二步，结合提示内容，重点介绍我们应该如何做，给出恰当的建议； 第三步，书写总结。 ［亮点词汇］ ① in addition 另外 ② above all 尤其是 ［高分句型］ ① Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. (in order to作目的状语) ② Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. (and连接并列句) 20．例文 With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. Besides, it accounts for the fact that we cannot concentrate in class, thus decreasing efficiency. Furthermore, people who suffer from lack of sleep get angry and impatient easily. So serious is the problem that we have to find effective solutions to it. In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late. Finally, I wish the students get good grades in the high school entrance examination. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：针对“熬夜”这一话题发表看法，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。要涵盖材料中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单描述情况； 第二步，介绍熬夜会对学习带来的影响以及关于如何取得好成绩； 第三步，表达自己的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①lack of sleep缺少睡眠 ②as soon as possible尽快 [高分句型] In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.(it句型以及非限制性定语从句) 6 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 19 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$