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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was always afraid of water. This fear could not be explained, but I knew that the moment I stepped near any body of water, my legs would turn to jelly (果冻). I would imagine myself drowning in the water and thrashing around (乱扑腾) helplessly. That was why I had never gone into a swimming pool until swimming became a school requirement. My school wanted all pupils to pass a swimming test, and if they could not, then they would have to attend weekly swimming lessons in school, which made me tremble. Thus, my parents signed me up for swimming lessons at the pool near my house. With great unwillingness, I attended those weekly lessons, and each one was great suffering for me. I was naturally clumsy, and my fear of water did not help at all. Every lesson, I would be spending my time thrashing about in the water, while my classmates would be swimming countless laps effortlessly and even turning over like dolphins in the water. How was I going to pass the test at this rate? In my swimming class, there was an exceptionally athletic girl. Tall and muscular, her name was Kathy. She was the best swimmer in our class and always looked at me with disdain (鄙视), especially when I thrashed about hopelessly in the water. Once, after a particularly long and hard swimming lesson, I spotted Kathy swimming gracefully in the pool. Gathering my courage, I asked gently, “Kathy, can you teach me to swim?” She stared at me coldly. It was as if I stood at the edge of an endless ocean of inadequacy, my fears appearing like dark storm clouds threatening to drown me. Yet, in that moment, a glimmer of hope flashed within me, a desperate longing for guidance and acceptance. Would Kathy’s icy exterior (外表) melt under the warmth of empathy, or would I remain forever thrashing in the sea of my own fears? 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 To my surprise, she nodded after a few moments of silence. _________________________________________________________________________ “Congratulations!” Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test. __________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 文章讲述了一个对水有着无法解释恐惧的人，因为学校要求必须通过游泳测试，不得不参加游泳课程。在课程中，他遇到了班上游泳最好的女孩Kathy，尽管最初她对他不屑一顾，但在主人公鼓起勇气请求帮助后，Kathy最终同意教他游泳。在Kathy的耐心指导下，主人公逐渐克服了对水的恐惧，学会了游泳，并最终通过了学校的游泳测试。这个过程不仅让他掌握了一项新技能，还让他意识到面对和克服恐惧是可能的，并且在这个过程中收获了尊重和友谊。 原文中设置了几处伏笔，并在续写中得到了回应： 主人公对水的恐惧：文章开头提到主人公对水有着天生的恐惧，这种恐惧让他在游泳课程中感到极度不适。在续写中，这种恐惧成为了他需要克服的主要障碍，而Kathy的帮助使他开始面对并最终克服了这一恐惧。 学校的游泳测试要求：学校要求所有学生必须通过游泳测试，这是主人公不得不面对游泳的直接原因。续写中，通过Kathy的帮助，主人公最终通过了测试，满足了学校的要求。 Kathy的游泳技能和态度：Kathy被描述为班上最好的游泳者，但对主人公的挣扎持有鄙视态度。在续写中，当主人公请求帮助时，Kathy的态度发生了变化，她不仅同意帮助他，还成为了他的教练和朋友。 主人公的请求：主人公鼓起勇气向Kathy求助，这是他克服恐惧和学习游泳的转折点。续写中，Kathy的点头同意帮助，标志着主人公得到了他所需要的支持和指导。 Kathy的外表和内心：Kathy给人的第一印象是冷漠和不易接近的，但在续写中，她的内心逐渐展现出温暖和同情，这与她最初的外表形成了对比。 主人公的自我怀疑：在请求帮助时，主人公感到自己站在了不足的无尽海洋边缘，这反映了他的自我怀疑。续写中，通过Kathy的帮助和自己的努力，他证明了自己的能力，克服了自我怀疑。 续写要点： 段落一：Kathy的转变与指导 1. Kathy的同意 - 描述Kathy在沉默后点头同意帮助主人公，这是她态度转变的开始。 2. 指导过程 - 概述Kathy如何耐心地教授主人公游泳技巧，包括基本动作和呼吸技巧。 3. 主人公的进步 - 展示在Kathy的指导下，主人公如何逐渐克服恐惧，提高游泳技能。 段落二：主人公的成就与感悟 1. 通过游泳测试 - 描述主人公在Kathy的帮助下成功通过游泳测试的情景。 2. Kathy的祝贺 - 表达Kathy对主人公成就的认可和祝贺，体现她态度的彻底转变。 3. 主人公的内心成长 - 反思主人公通过这次经历学到的关于勇气、坚持和自我克服的教训。 参考答案 To my surprise, she nodded after a few moments of silence. From then on, Kathy stayed back for about an hour after every swimming lesson to coach me. She taught me how to propel myself forward in the water and I gradually gained confidence in the pool. Slowly but surely, I improved under her guidance and encouragement. Four months later, it was time for me to take my swimming test. I jumped into the pool and followed all of Kathy’s advice. I swam gracefully, just like a fish, and passed the test with flying colours. “Congratulations!” Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test. I threw my arms around her and hugged her tightly. “Thank you! You’re a wonderful friend! If it had not been for you, I would not have done so well!” I exclaimed. Since then, our friendship has blossomed. We met frequently to have fun with each other, sharing both joy and sorrow. Surprisingly, I grew to love the water. A friend like Kathy is hard to come by. She has a heart of gold and I will definitely treasure our precious friendship. 下水文1 To my surprise, she nodded after a few moments of silence. Her expression softened, and she agreed to help me, saying, "Alright, but it won't be easy." From that day on, Kathy became my mentor in the water. She was patient and persistent, teaching me the basics of swimming step by step. Her encouragement and belief in me slowly chipped away at my fear. With each passing lesson, I found myself becoming more confident and less clumsy. The water, which once felt like my enemy, started to feel like a friend. My progress was slow but steady, and I began to see the possibility of overcoming my fear and passing the swimming test. "Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test. Her smile was genuine, and I could see the pride in her eyes. It had been a long journey, filled with struggles and moments of doubt, but with Kathy's help, I had conquered my fear of water. I not only passed the test but also gained a new skill and a friend in the process. The experience taught me that facing our fears can be challenging, but with determination and the right support, we can overcome anything. It was a victory not just for my swimming skills, but for my courage and resilience as well. 下水文2 To my surprise, she nodded after a few moments of silence. Kathy's eyes held a glimmer of something I hadn't seen before—compassion. "Fine," she said, her voice firm yet not unkind, "but you'll have to work hard." From that day forward, Kathy dedicated her spare time to coaching me. She broke down each stroke, each breath, teaching me to synchronize my movements with the rhythm of the water. Her guidance was meticulous, and her support unwavering. With each session, the once paralyzing fear began to recede, replaced by a growing sense of control and mastery. "Congratulations!" Kathy said when she learnt I had passed the swimming test. Her words were simple, but their impact profound. The transformation was not just in my ability to swim but in my character as well. I had faced my deepest fear and emerged victorious. Kathy's initial disdain had given way to respect, and her cold exterior had thawed into a genuine friendship. The journey had been arduous, but the reward was not just the ability to swim; it was the knowledge that I had the strength to confront and overcome my own insecurities. It was a testament to the power of perseverance and the unexpected bonds that can form in the pursuit of personal growth. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$