Unit 3 Section 5 Writing(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册（人教版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing [对应学生用书P76] 健康报告 本单元的写作任务是写一篇健康报告，使用恰当的描述性语言，准确地表达出自己或他人过去及现在的健康状况。 [文章架构] [亮点词汇] 1．green/junk food绿色/垃圾食品 2．have healthy food/diet健康饮食 3．form/develop good living habits养成良好的生活习惯 4．overweight肥胖的 5．build up one's body强身健体 6．have enough sleep有充足的睡眠 7．take exercise regularly定期进行锻炼 8．lose weight减肥 9．put on/gain weight增加体重 10．be of benefit/be beneficial to对……有益处 11．be/go on a diet节食 12．form/get into a．..eating habit养成一个……的饮食习惯 13．be in good/poor health身体健康/不健康 [高级句式] 1．段首句式 (1)I started taking exercise two years ago and have been attracted to it. 我两年前开始锻炼，(现在)已经着迷了。 (2)Since last year，I have been trying to take more exercise on a regular basis. 从去年开始，我一直努力定期进行更多的锻炼。 (3)I fell in to a bad habit of eating junk food three years ago. 三年前我养成了吃垃圾食品的坏习惯。 (4)Unluckily，I find I have been addicted to eating too many desserts. 不幸的是，我发现我一直沉溺于吃太多的甜食。 (5)I have been annoyed about the question that I am overweight. 我一直为我超重的问题而烦恼。 (6)I was anxious that I could not concentrate on my study. 我担心我不能专心学习。 2．主体段落句 (1)I was taken off the school football team because of health problems. 由于我不健康，我被校足球队开除了。 (2)It was time for me to take more exercise. 到了我该多锻炼的时候了。 (3)I prefer to eat too much meat rather than eat more vegetables. ＝Rather than eat more vegetables，I would prefer to eat too much meat. 我愿意吃很多肉而不愿意多吃蔬菜。 (4)I would take more exercise instead of staying at home playing computer games. 我会多做运动，而不是待在家里玩电脑游戏。 (5)If I feel nervous or stressed，I'll listen to music rather than go on studying. 如果我感到紧张或有压力，我会听音乐而不是继续学习。 3．段尾句 (1)Finally，I stopped eating too much junk food. 最后，我不再吃太多的垃圾食品。 (2)At last I became both healthier and happier by working out. 通过锻炼，我终于变得更健康、更快乐了。 (3)I hope I will live a life as healthily and happily as they do. 我希望我能像他们一样健康快乐地生活。 (4)I'm determined not to stay up late any longer. 我决定不再熬夜了。 (5)At present，I have become more confident because I become healthy. 现在，我变得更加自信，因为我变得健康了。 假定你是李华，过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的身体出现了一些问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此次经历写一篇短文，内容包括： 1．之前不健康的生活习惯：经常熬夜，很少锻炼； 2．导致的问题：肥胖，易生病； 3．解决办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起； 4．给其他同学的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步　审题谋篇 第二步　遣词造句 1．过去我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼。 In the past，I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise． 2．我变得很胖，并且经常生病。 I became too fat and often fell ill． 3．我下定决心改变不健康的生活方式。 I made up my mind to change my unhealthy lifestyle. 4．我不仅开始保持均衡饮食，还积极参加各种体育活动。 Not only did I begin to keep a balanced diet，but I also took an active part in various sports activities． 5．我养成了早睡早起的习惯。 I developed/formed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. 6．两个月过去了，我恢复了健康。 With two months passing，I regained my health. 7．我建议你们尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯。没有什么比健康更重要。 I suggest you get out of your unhealthy living habits as soon as possible．Nothing is more important than health. 第三步　词句升级 8．用因果关系连接句1和句2 In the past，I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise.As a result，I became too fat and often fell ill. 9．用because将句7合并升级为原因状语从句 I suggest you get out of your unhealthy living habits as soon as possible，because nothing is more important than health. 第四步　妙笔成篇 In the past，I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise.As a result，I became too fat and often fell ill. Later I made up my mind to change my unhealthy lifestyle.Not only did I begin to keep a balanced diet，but I also took an active part in various sports activities.What's more，I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.With two months passing，I regained my health. I suggest you get out of your unhealthy living habits as soon as possible，because nothing is more important than health. 假定你是李华，因为以前常吃零食并且经常熬夜变得很胖。为了变得苗条健康，你开始改变饮食习惯并锻炼。现在你变得健康并快乐。请为班级健康簿(wellness book)写一篇文章介绍你的变化经历。 注意：1.写作词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] I used to eat snacks and stay up late so I was fat and often felt tired. To become healthy and slim，I decided to change.Firstly，I tried to eat more healthy food for lunch and dinner，and avoided foods that were rich in fats.What's more，instead of sleeping late on weekends，I get up at regular time and go jogging for 30 minutes. Now，because I become healthier，I become much happier and feel better about myself too.This has made me more confident to make new friends and try new things. [对应学生用书P78] Ⅰ.核心词汇 1．There is no doubt that the English contest will be hosted in our school. 2．We prize honour above money. 3．Amy has decided to go on a diet because she hates being laughed at by her classmates for her heavy weight. 4．Compared with those who are always complaining，people with a positive attitude towards life live longer. 5．A thousand audience packed into the stadium to cheer them on. 6．The number of the audience (观众)listening to this program is increasing. 7．In order to win the gold medal (奖牌)，she trained hard day after day and finally made it. 8．I pretended (假装)to rub a fleck of grit from one eye. 9．The rich man offered more than one million (百万)dollars to help the poor people. 10．The problem is rather (相当)difficult and I can't work it out myself. 11．I'm Li Hua，the captain (队长)of our school volleyball team. 12．I hope to be a basketball star so that I can serve my motherland as a basketball athlete (运动员). 13．It is becoming more and more important for us to master(掌握)the skills of computers. 14．It's an honour to be here and be part of such an amazing event(公开活动). 15．Either the Greek or the Australian has won the boxing (拳击)competition. Ⅱ.拓展词汇 1．fitness n．健康；健壮；适合→fit adj.健康的；适合的 2．champion n．冠军；优胜者→championship n．锦标赛；冠军赛；冠军称号 3．determination n．决心；决定→determine vt.决定；确定；下定决心→determined adj.坚决的；有决心的 4．injure vt.使受伤；损害→injured adj.受伤的；有伤的→injury n．伤害；损伤 5．strength n．力量；体力→strengthen vt.加强；巩固→strong adj.强壮的；坚强的 6．failure n．失败；失败的人(或事物)→fail vi.失败 7．compete vi.竞争；对抗→competition n．竞争；竞赛，比赛→competitive adj.竞争的；有竞争力的→competitor n．竞争，竞争者；对手；参赛者 8．stress n．压力；紧张；重音vt.强调；重读；使焦虑不安vi.焦虑不安→stressful adj.产生压力的；紧张的→stressed adj.感到压力的 Ⅲ.重点短语 1．come along 跟随；到达；进步；赶快 2．work out 锻炼；计算出；解决 3．make it 获得成功；准时到达 4．set an example 树立榜样 5．fall apart 破裂；破碎；崩溃 6．lose heart 丧失信心；泄气 7．give up 放弃；投降 8．make sense 有道理；合乎情理；表述清楚 9．pretend to do sth 假装做某事 10．make a difference 有作用或影响 11．rather than 而不是 12．cut...out 停止做(或使用、食用)；剪下 13．now and then 有时；偶尔 14．compare...with/to... 与……比较 Ⅳ.重点句型 1.句型公式：“sb/sth seems/seemed＋不定式”意为“看起来……；好像……” 教材原句：In the final seconds of a game，Jordan always seemed to find a way to win. 仿写1：鲍勃听到这个好消息时似乎很高兴。 Bob seemed to be very happy when he heard the good news. 2.句型公式：“the secret to sth is...”意为“……的秘诀是……” 教材原句：Jordan says that the secret to his success is learning from his failures. 仿写2：他成功的秘诀在于用积极的态度对待失望和失败。 The secret to his success is dealing with disappointment and failure in a positive way. 3.句型公式：even if/though引导让步状语从句 教材原句：A soccer player should not pretend to fall down even if it helps his/her team. 仿写3：即使他犯了一个大错误，他也假装保持冷静。 Even though he made a big mistake，he pretended to keep calm. Ⅴ.单元词汇整合——背诵下面短文(黑色字体为本单元必备词汇) When it comes to the athlete I admire most，it must be the swimmer，Fu Yuanhui，who is always positive and never loses heart.She was weak in her childhood，so in order to build up her strength，she came along with her friends to work out and mastered swimming skills.In common with other swimmers，she wanted to compete in the Olympics and bring honour and glory to China.By training hard，she made it to the Olympics which was hosted by Brazil and won a medal.Actually，it was her determination and lovely expressions rather than her graceful moves in the water that impressed millions of audience in China.When she was interviewed，she said that she sweated her way to the medal and tried hard to avoid errors and getting injured. Compared with pop stars，she is not slim but she has set a good example for me.As for fitness，she thinks cutting out unhealthy food from our diet and jogging can surely make a difference.From her，I have learned that even if we face failures，it will make sense to keep calm and do not be stressed or fall apart.Besides，never pretend to have known what you do not know，which means cheating yourself. ★本单元我学到了哪些语法规则？ ★本单元我学到了什么写作手法？ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$