Unit 1 Section 5 Writing(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册（人教版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing [对应学生用书P39] 建议信 本单元的写作任务是学生建议信。建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。 [文章架构] [亮点词汇] 1．suggestion n．建议 2．overcome v．克服 3．have trouble in 在……方面有困难 4．communicate with 与……交流 5．feel lonely 感到孤独 6．ask for advice on...就……征求建议 7．get along well with 和……相处很好 8．make it 做到 9．make friends 交朋友 10．as far as I am concerned/in my opinion 就我而言/在我看来 [高级句式] 1．开头语 (1)You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei. 你写信说你很担心你的朋友陈磊。 (2)I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有困难，你也可能经常感到孤独。 (3)I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. 很高兴收到你就如何学好汉语征求建议的来信。 (4)Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些建议能帮助你。 2．主体部分 (1)First(ly)，I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. 首先，我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。 (2)Second(ly)，why not join a club? If you do this，you can make friends. 第二，为什么不加入一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。 (3)Third(ly)，it will be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this，you will calm yourself down. 第三，看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。这样做，你会使自己平静下来。 (4)Last but not least，you should talk with her first.最后一点，也是非常重要的一点，你应该先和她谈一谈。 3．结束语 (1)I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend. 我相信他会听你的，因为你是他的好朋友。 (2)I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 (3)As time goes on，people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，愿意和你交朋友。 (4)I believe，with your efforts，you can manage to overcome these difficulties. 我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友安娜(Anna)最近来中国某中学交换学习，她发来邮件说不知道如何跟新同学相处。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括： 1．写信目的； 2．你的建议； 3．表达祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步　审题谋篇 第二步　遣词造句 1．我很高兴得知你在中国学习。 I'm very glad to know that you are studying in China. 2．关于如何与新同学好好相处，我的建议如下。 As to how to get along well with new classmates，my suggestions are as follows． 3．你应该尝试和你的同学交流。 You should try to communicate with your classmates． 4．我认为文化差异是一个很好的话题。 I think the cultural difference is a good topic． 5．关心同学是个好主意。 It is a good idea to show care to your classmates. 6．待人友好是交朋友的好方法。 Being friendly is a good way to make friends. 7．我建议你参加班级活动。你和你的新同学建立亲密的关系。 I suggest you take part in class activities.You can build close relationships with your new classmates． 第三步　词句升级 8．升级句7加黑词，合并升级为so that引导的目的状语从句。 I recommend you take part in class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates. 第四步　妙笔成篇 Dear Anna， I'm very glad to know that you are studying in China.As to how to get along well with new classmates，my suggestions are as follows. Firstly，you should try to communicate with your classmates.And I think the cultural difference is a good topic.Secondly，it is a good idea to show care to your classmates.After all，being friendly is a good way to make friends.Last but not least，I recommend you to take part in class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates. I do hope you will have a good time in your new school. Yours， Li Hua (2023—2024学年福州协作校高一上学期期中) 假定你是李华，你校交换生Saline在电子邮件中向你倾诉自己在新环境下的烦恼：不知如何与新同学相处；无法集中精力学习，希望你能给她一些建议。请你用英文给她回一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示理解，给予安慰； 2．给出建议； 3．表达祝愿并表示愿意随时提供帮助。 注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Saline， Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Saline， I'm sorry to know that you're having difficulty getting used to the new surroundings，which have a bad influence on your life and studies.It's not uncommon for teenagers to have such trouble as you do.I'm writing to give some suggestions. Firstly，why not join a club，where you can make friends with the same hobbies.Secondly，share your experiences with others，which will make you better.Lastly，preview your subjects and you will have a clear understanding of difficult points. I do hope you will find my suggestions helpful and looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua [对应学生用书P41] Ⅰ.核心词汇 1．Actually，my partner didn't like to take notes while listening to the teacher. 2．He wants to finish all his experiments on schedule，so he needs a partner. 3．After quitting smoking，I felt my health improved greatly. 4．I recommend you to apply for Peking University. 5．I think we should not only focus on study，but also join in many social activities. 6．Over the years we have had several debates (讨论) about campus safety. 7．The professor is one of the world's leading experts (专家) in medicine. 8．Skaters score extra (额外的) points for technical complexity. 9．We can't go abroad this year，so we'll have to content (使满足) ourselves with a holiday in Shanghai. 10．As a teenager (青少年)，you should learn to take responsibility for what you say. 11．If not properly dealt with，the generation(一代) gap between our parents and us may tend to become bigger and bigger. 12．He likes the classic Chinese literature (文学) very much and spends much time on it. Ⅱ.拓展词汇 1．volunteer n．志愿者→voluntary adj.志愿的；自愿的 2．prefer vt.较喜欢→preference n．喜爱；偏爱 3．suitable adj.合适的；适用的→suit vt.适合；使适宜；满足需要；合心意 4．challenge n．挑战；艰巨任务vt.怀疑；向……挑战→challenging adj.具有挑战性的 5．confusing adj.难以理解的；不清楚的→confuse vt.使糊涂；使迷惑→confused adj.糊涂的；迷惑的→confusion n．迷惑 6．graduate vi.& vt.毕业；获得学位n.毕业生→graduation n．毕业；毕业典礼 7．advanced adj.高级的；高等的；先进的→advance n．前进；发展vi.前进；发展vt.发展；促进 8．obviously adv.显然；明显地→obvious adj.显而易见的 9．responsible adj.负责的；有责任的→responsibility n．责任；义务 10．solution n．解决办法；答案→solve vt.解决 11．behaviour n．行为；举止→behave vt.& vi.表现 12．attract vt.吸引；引起……的注意(或兴趣)→attraction n．有吸引力的事物；吸引→attractive adj.吸引人的 13．addicted adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的→addict n．对……入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人→addictive adj.令人上瘾的 Ⅲ.重点短语 1．prefer...to... 喜欢……多于…… 2．clean up 打扫(或清除)干净 3．be suitable for 对……适合的 4．sign up (for sth) 报名(参加课程) 5．keep up with 跟上，赶上 6．get used to 习惯于；适应于 7．be responsible for 对……负责 8．be well prepared for 为……做好充分准备 9．try out for 角逐；参加……的选拔 10．be attracted to 被吸引到；迷上 11．focus on 集中；特别关注 12．be addicted to 对……很入迷 Ⅳ.重点句型 1.句型公式：动词­ing形式作主语 教材原句：Going from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challenge. 仿写1：和最好的朋友谈谈你的忧虑确实是一件好事情。 Talking about your worry with your best friend is really a nice thing. 2.句型公式：so that引导目的状语从句，意为“以便，为了” 教材原句：I'll find a way to improve on my own so that I can make the team next year. 仿写2：她早早起床，以便为孩子们准备好早餐。 She got up early so that she could get the breakfast ready for the children． 3.句型公式：It＋be＋adj./n.＋(for/of sb)to do sth 教材原句：I'm a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course，and it'll be quite difficult to get used to all the homework. 仿写3：随着世界变成一个地球村，学好英语非常重要。 With the world becoming a global village，it is very important to learn English well． 4.句型公式：make＋it＋adj./n.＋(for sb)to do sth 教材原句：But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. 仿写4：新建的体育馆使我们有可能参加各种各样的活动。 The newly­built stadium makes it possible for us to take part in all kinds of activities. Ⅴ.单元词汇整合——背诵下面短文(黑色字体为本单元必备词汇) Like many teenagers，Li Hua，a freshman at senior high school got a little confused the first day he entered senior high school. Firstly，living with others in a dormitory is really hard，for he prefers to live alone and thinks one boy's behaviour annoying.Actually，he is quite content to have his own room at home.Besides，as for suitable courses to take，his teacher recommended him to choose an advanced language course as he could speak really fluent English. However，he finds maths a little confusing，and he is debating with his parents whether he should take extra hours to learn it.He focuses on the class and turns to a graduate for advice.Though it may seem to be a big challenge，he will not quit and will find a solution to improving his maths. Since he is attracted to table tennis，he signed up for the school table tennis club.As he is quite expert at it，he is responsible for the training of the club members.At the same time，he is addicted to Chinese literature，so he is accepted as an editor，preparing for the coming movement of the school paper.Besides，he volunteers to help clean up a greenhouse every Sunday afternoon. Obviously，he now has a really tight schedule every day.He will become a responsible adult in his generation. ★本单元我学到了哪些语法规则？ ★本单元我学到了什么写作手法？ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$