内容正文:
必修 第一册
Unit 2 Exploring English
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Period 5 Writing
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内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
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单元写作 能力提升
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单元写作任务:故事类短文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇故事类短文,体裁为记叙文。有时是根据所提供的一幅或几幅图的信息写短文,有时是根据所提供的文字信息写短文。
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[常用开头]
1.There was an interesting experience/story happening in 2023,which I still remember now.
2.I still remember one interesting/funny/embarrassing thing that happened several years ago.
3.It happened...I still remember when...It impressed me most because...
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[主体部分]
1.We were quite confused when he told us to...
2.When I told my friend about it,she said I was pulling my legs.
3.I was really surprised when...
4.Only when he explained this term could I understand that...
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[常用结尾]
1.It turned out that the word meant “nice” rather than “bad”.
2.Since then I have paid more attention to the use of English idioms.
3.I finally understood what he really meant.
4.I decided to work hard to improve my English.
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[写作要求]
假定你是李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇因为语言误解引发的趣味故事。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 记叙文
话题 食物名称引发的趣味故事
时态 一般过去时
人称 第一人称
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①英国寄宿家庭 __________________________
②打算让某人做某事 _______________________
③情绪紧张,心里发慌 ______________________________
④对……感到困惑 _________________________
⑤结果是,原来是____________
a British host family
intend sb. to do sth.
butterflies in one’s stomach
be confused about
turn out
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①去年夏天,我住在一个英国寄宿家庭。
Last summer,I _______________________________.
②有一天,我真的很惊讶,因为他们家的儿子詹尼尔打算让我吃“洞里的蟾蜍”当晚餐。
One day,I was really surprised when Janier,the son of the family, ________________ have “a toad in the hole” for dinner.
stayed with a British host family
intended me to
③当我加入他们的行列时,我心里七上八下。
I ___________________________ when I joined them.
④我对于我们将要吃什么感到困惑。
I _______________________ what we would eat.
⑤令我惊讶的是,桌上摆着一盘用约克郡布丁(尝起来有点像煎饼的混合物)煮的香肠。
_________________,a dish of sausages cooked in Yorkshire pudding (a mix that tastes a bit like pancakes) was on the table.
had butterflies in my stomach
was confused about
To my surprise
⑥事实证明,“洞里的蟾蜍”是英国晚餐的典型菜肴,但没有
蟾蜍!
__________________ toad-in-the-hole is a typical dish for a British dinner,but there’s no toad!
⑦这不仅是一次奇妙的经历,而且尝试这种名字奇怪的美味食物也很有趣。
It was _____________________________ but also it was interesting to try such yummy food with a strange name.
It turned out that
not only an amazing experience
(2)句式升级
⑧用the reason why...was that...合并句③和句④
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⑨用全部倒装升级句⑤
To my surprise, ______________________________ cooked in Yorkshire pudding (a mix that tastes a bit like pancakes).
The reason why I had butterflies in my stomach when I joined them was that I was confused about what we would eat.
on the table was a dish of sausages
用not only置于句首引起的部分倒装句升级句⑦
_________________________________ but also it was interesting to try such yummy food with a strange name.
Not only was it an amazing experience
[妙笔成篇]
Last summer,I stayed with a British host family.One day,I was really surprised when Janier,the son of the family,intended me to have “a toad in the hole” for dinner.The reason why I had butterflies in my stomach when I joined them was that I was confused about what we would eat.To my surprise,on the table was a dish of sausages cooked in Yorkshire pudding (a mix that tastes a bit like pancakes).It turned out that toad-in-the-hole is a typical dish for a British dinner,but there’s no toad! Finally,not only was it an amazing experience but also it was interesting to try such yummy food with a strange name.
假定你是李华,去年你的英国朋友汤姆在你所在的中国城市做交换生,你邀请他到你家参加生日聚会,并告诉他你家在一楼。请你根据以下内容写一个小故事。
1.汤姆上了“一楼”之后按门铃,被告知该楼层没有叫李华的人;
2.接到你的电话,得知详情;
3.你们的感悟。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Last year,my British friend Tom studied in China as an exchange student.One day I invited him to join in my birthday party.I told him I lived on the first floor.
However,when he reached the first floor,a man told him there wasn’t a Li Hua on the floor.He was so confused that he went downstairs,when he received a call from me.To his surprise,I just lived downstairs.Then I showed him into my flat.
Finally we were aware that “the first floor” I talked about means “the ground floor” in British English.
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