内容正文:
必修 第一册
Unit 1 A new start
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Period 5 Writing
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内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
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单元写作 能力提升
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单元写作任务:日记
本单元的写作任务是写一篇英文日记。日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所感为内容的一种文体。
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[常用开头]
1.How time flies! It’s already a week since my first day at senior high.
2.I had an unforgettable experience in my new school this week.
3.This afternoon I took part in an organised activity with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum.
4.Today,our science teacher taught us how to make paper lanterns.
5.My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work.
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[主体部分]
1.The foreign visitors were very surprised to see that we spoke English so excellently and we talked a lot about the Great Wall’s history.
2.I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast.Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room.
3.Although we had several falls,none of us gave up.
4.We watched the teacher attentively and then we started to have a try by ourselves.
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[常用结尾]
1.It was not only an experience,but also a helpful class!
2.All in all,I benefited a lot from today’s activity.
3.Now that the training is over,I have learned a lot which can benefit my life in the future.
4.Although we felt tired,we had a good time by helping others make a good day.
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5.What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
6.Although everyone was very tired,we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job.
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[写作要求]
假定你是李华,刚上高中一周,请你写一篇日记记录一周以来自己印象最深刻的事情,要点如下:
1.第一节英语课老师要求每个学生作简短的演讲;
2.第一天放学后去英语俱乐部。
注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 日记
话题 开学一周印象最深刻的事
时态 一般过去时
人称 第一人称
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①尤其,特别 ________________________
②给……留下深刻印象 __________________________________
__________
③高中 ________________
④情绪紧张,心里发慌 ______________________________
particularly/in particular
have/leave/make a deep impression
on/upon
senior high
butterflies in one’s stomach
⑤好像,似乎 _____________
⑥惊慌地 __________
⑦把……看作…… _____________
⑧说服某人做某事 ___________________________
⑨热切地 ___________________________
⑩期待,盼望 ___________________
as if/though
in panic
view...as...
argue sb.into doing sth.
eagerly/with eagerness
look forward to
⑪提高 __________
⑫与某人交换某物 ____________________________
⑬参考书 _____________________
⑭对……有信心 _______________________
⑮专注于 _____________________
⑯学习方法 ______________________
improve
exchange sth. with sb.
reference book
be confident that...
apply oneself to
learning methods
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①一切都很顺利,有两件事给我留下了特别深刻的印象。
Things are going well and there’re two things that ________________
__________________________________________________.
②在第一节英语课上,我们被要求就高中第一天作一个简短的演讲。
During the first English class,we were asked to give a short speech
about the first day ________________.
particularly/in
particular had/made/left a deep impression on/upon me
at senior high
③我心里七上八下,感觉如坐针毡。
I had _________________________ and I __________ I were on pins and needles.
④当老师叫我的名字时,我站起来,惊恐地双腿发抖。
When the teacher called my name,I stood up and my legs trembled __________.
⑤你可以把我们都看成南瓜。
You can __________________ pumpkins.
butterflies in my stomach
felt as if
in panic
view all of us as
⑥老师用幽默的语言说服我说英语。
The teacher __________________________________ with his humorous words.
⑦放学后,我迫不及待地来到英语俱乐部,我一直期待着提高我的英语。
After school I reached the English Club _______________ and I’ve been _________________________________________.
argued me into speaking English
with eagerness
looking forward to improving my English
(2)句式升级
⑧用with复合结构改写句④
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When the teacher called my name,I stood up with my legs trembling in panic.
[妙笔成篇]
How time flies! Things are going well and there’re two things that particularly left a deep impression on me.
During the first English class,we were asked to give a short speech about the first day at senior high.I had butterflies in my stomach and I felt as if I were on pins and needles.When the teacher called my name,I stood up with my legs trembling in panic.“Don’t be shy.You can view all of us as pumpkins.” The teacher argued me into speaking English with his humorous words.
After school I reached the English Club with eagerness and I’ve been looking forward to improving my English.There I exchanged English learning methods with others and recommended some good reference books to them.
The first week of senior high has been exciting and I am confident that I can make more progress if I apply myself to learning.
假定你是李华,你正在英国某高中参加你们学校的“交换生项目”,请你用英语写一篇日记,叙述你在新学校第一周的学习生活。内容包括:
1.学校印象;
2.同学印象;
3.个人感受。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
September 12th,Saturday Sunny
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__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
September 12th,Saturday Sunny
One week has passed since I came to this school as an exchange student.
It is the first time that I have been away from my parents alone,so I felt homesick.However,I soon got used to the new environment.To begin with,the campus is quite different from my school at home.It lies at the foot of a mountain where there is natural scenery all around.My classmates are so friendly that they make me less homesick.
I think I’ll spend this period of studying here happily and I can surely benefit much from my stay here.
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