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建议信复习学案
1、 概念
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。建议信主要是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等提出意见或建议。写建议信时,时态以一般现在时为主,人称多用第二人称。另外,提出的建议要合理,有说服力,语气要礼貌委婉。
二、写作架构
Para1: ________________________
Para2: ________________________
Para3: ________________________
三、单元知识巩固迁移 必修一U1
A.来源书本的词句翻译(加部分拓展)
1. 一个大的挑战 ________________________ 对…感到困惑 ________________________
我在这儿想就新生如何适应高中生活的给大家一些建议。
Here I'd like to offer you some advice on how freshmen should ___________________________.
2. 选择课程
学校指导老师 ________________________ 建议某人应该做某事 ________________________
适合 ________________________ 报名注册 ________________________
我建议你们应该选择适合自己的课程,因为兴趣使最好的老师。
I recommend that students should choose_____________________ because interest is always the finest /best teacher.
学习一门外语很有用, 是学习国外先进知识技术的必须。(It is of great help /helpful to do sth.)
________________________ learn a foreign language, which is__________________ to learn all advanced foreign knowledge and scientific technology.
只有通过不断的练习,你才能说一口流利的英语。(Only by/through…)
________________________________________________ speak English fluently.
3. 参加课外活动
课外活动________________________ 参加志愿者俱乐部________________________
参加课外活动是很有必要的,因为他们不仅能丰富你们的生活而且还能使你们放松并消除压力。
It's necessary for freshmen to join ________________________ because they________________________________________________.
4.学习方面
与….保持同步________________________ 为….做好充分的准备 ________________________习惯 ________________________ 适合 ________________________
我知道作为一名高中生,我必须更加努力地学习,并习惯对更多的事情负责。
I know I’ll have to study harder as a senior high school student and ______________________________________________________________________.
我有点担心在我的高级课程中跟上其他学生的水平,要习惯所有的作业会相当困难。
I’m a bit worried about __________________________ in my advanced course,and it’ll be quite difficult to get used to all the homework.
作为一名高中生,你应该更努力学习。一方面,使你不落后于别人,另一方面,你能为将来做好充分的准备。(for one thing…, for another…)
You are supposed to study harder as senior high school students. For one thing, you can keep up with other classmates. For another, you can ________________________________________________.
四、必备话题句型及表达
Para1:
1. I have received your letter asking me to give you some advice/suggestions …. The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you.
2. I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice.
Para2:
1. It’s +形容词/名词(important/necessary/helpful)+for sb to do sth.
It’s important for you to study in a relaxing way.
2.Doing sth is+形容词/名词(important/necessary/helpful /a good idea/of great importance/of great help)
在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。
Reading some books about these places before you come to see them ________________________ is necessary for you.
3. From my point of view/As far as I am concerned/Personally speaking/In my opinion, you had better do…../you may as well do(不妨)…./you are supposed to….
在我看来,你最好停止玩电脑游戏,更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。
From my point of view, you __________________________ and concentrate more on school and family life.
在我看来,我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。
As far as I am concerned, I think you’re supposed to communicate with your classmates actively.
5. Only by doing sth can you..../ It is only by doing/through sth that you can....
只有通过沟通你才能找到支持。
___________________ communicating can you find support./___________________ through communication ______________ you can find support.
6. If I were you, I would…
如果我是你,我会好好沟通,这对你们都有益,
If I were you/____________________, I would communicate first, which will be beneficial to both of you.
7. You may consider doing…
你也可以考虑和朋友交换意见,互相鼓励。
You may consider ________________________ your friends and encourage each other.
para3.
1.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations useful/helpful.
2. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
四、高考真题链接
(2023·新高考I卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内1.说明问题2.提出建议。注意:写作词数应为80左右。 [好词 ]①further vt.促进;增进 ②pair vt.使成对;配对 ③polish up改善;改进;使完美④serve one's purpose达到……的目的
Dear Ryan,
I appreciate your idea of polishing up our oral English,but pairing us randomly may have some problems.(写信背景)
Personally,though fair,random pairing may not necessarily serve its purpose.(省略句+高级词汇,说明随机分组存在的问题)Specifically,if neither speaks fluently,they might lack the motivation to participate,failing to reach the desired goal.(条件句+分词作状语,拓展说明该问题的结果)Thus,I wonder if students with more fluency can be grouped with less fluent ones.Were it possible,it couldn't be better if students are allowed to choose their own partners,which can further their shared learning more efficiently.(用虚拟语气+条件句+定语从句,补充说明建议及其理由)(说明问题十提出建议) Your understanding and consideration of my advice would be greatly appreciated.(希望采纳建议)
Yours,
Li Hua
五、【2019·北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。
注意: 1.词数不少于50; 2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
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建议信复习学案(教师版)
一、概念
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。建议信主要是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人,就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等提出意见或建议。写建议信时,时态以一般现在时为主,人称多用第二人称。另外,提出的建议要合理,有说服力,语气要礼貌委婉。
二、建议信写作架构:
Para1: 需要表明写信意图建议信
Para2: 给出具体的建议及理由用文。
Para3: 其他(如指出采纳建议的好处,表达祝愿等)
三、单元知识巩固迁移
A.来源书本的词句翻译(加部分拓展)
1. 一个大的挑战 a really big challenge 对…感到困惑 be confused about
我在这儿想就新生如何适应高中生活的给大家一些建议。
Here I'd like to offer you some advice on how freshmen should adapt yourself to senior high school life.
2. 选择课程
学校指导老师 school adviser 建议某人应该做某事 recommend that sb. (should) do
适合 be suitable for 报名注册 sign up for
我知道汉语是一种非常难的语言,但我希望毕业时能说得很流利。
I know that Chinese is a very difficult language,but I hope to be fluent when I graduate.
因为我喜欢英语而且成绩不错,我的指导老师建议我选修高级文学。
My adviser recommends that I should sign up for advanced literature because I like English and I’m good at it.
我建议你们应该选择适合自己的课程,因为兴趣使最好的老师。
I recommend that students should choose what you enjoy because interest is always the finest /best teacher.
学习一门外语很有用, 是学习国外先进知识技术的必须。(It is of great help /helpful to do sth.)
It is of great help to learn a foreign language, which is a must to learn all advanced foreign knowledge and scientific technology.
只有通过不断的练习,你才能说一口流利的英语。(Only by/through…)
Only by practicing continuously/Only through continuous practice can you speak English fluently.
3. 参加课外活动
课外活动extra-curricular activities 参加志愿者俱乐部join a volunteer club
参加课外活动是很有必要的,因为他们不仅能丰富你们的生活而且还能使你们放松并消除压力。
It's necessary for freshmen to join extra-curriculum activities because they not only can enrich your life but also relax yourselves and release your stress.
4.学习方面
与….保持同步keep up with 为….做好充分的准备 get well prepared for
习惯 get used to 适合 be suitable for
我知道作为一名高中生,我必须更加努力地学习,并习惯对更多的事情负责。
I know I’ll have to study harder as a senior high school student and get used to being responsible for a lot more.
我有点担心在我的高级课程中跟上其他学生的水平,要习惯所有的作业会相当困难。
I’m a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course,and it’ll be quite difficult to get used to all the homework.
作为一名高中生,你应该更努力学习。一方面,使你不落后于别人,另一方面,你能为将来做好充分的准备。(for one thing…, for another…)
You are supposed to study harder as senior high school students. For one thing, you can keep up with other classmates. For another, you can get well-prepared for the approaching future.
四、必备话题句型及表达
Para1:
1. 已收到你寻求…建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议,我希望它们对你有帮助。
I have received your letter asking me to give you some advice/suggestions …. The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you.
2. 听到你在…上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议,情况很容易改善。
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice.
Para2:
1. 对某人而言做…是重要的/必要的/有益的
It’s +形容词/名词(important/necessary/helpful)+for sb to do sth.
对你而言,放松地学习是重要的
It’s important for you to study in a relaxing way.
2. 做某事是重要的/必要的/有益的/好主意。
Doing sth is+形容词/名词(important/necessary/helpful /a good idea/of great importance/of great help)
在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。
Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you.
3. 我建议你应该做…
I suggest/recommend that you should…..
我建议你酒他的行为和你朋友聊一聊。
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior.
4. 在我看来,你最好做…/你应该做…
From my point of view/As far as I am concerned/Personally speaking/In my opinion, you had better do…../you may as well do(不妨)…./you are supposed to….
在我看来,你最好停止玩电脑游戏,更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。
From my point of view, you had better quit playing computer games and concentrate more on school and family life.
在我看来,我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。
As far as I am concerned, I think you’re supposed to communicate with your classmates actively.
5. 只有以这种方式,你才能…
Only by doing sth can you..../ It is only by doing/through sth that you can....
只有通过沟通你才能找到支持。
Only by communicating can you find support./It is only through communication that you can find support.
6. 如果我是你,我会…
If I were you, I would…
如果我是你,我会好好沟通,这对你们都有益,
If I were you, I would communicate first, which will be beneficial to both of you.
7. 你也可以考虑…
You may consider doing…
你也可以考虑和朋友交换意见,互相鼓励。
You may consider exchanging your ideas with your friends and encourage each other.
para3.
1.我希望你觉得这些建议有用。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations useful/helpful.
2. 如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
五、【2019·北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。 注意: 1.词数不少于50; 2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Learning that you’ll pay a visit to Beijing, Tianjin and Shanghai this summer, I am overjoyed to offer you some advice, hoping that they will contribute to a smooth tour.
First, it is highly recommended that you (should) begin from Beijing as it’s convenient for me to show you around. Beijing will definitely live up to your expectation. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. Take high-speed trains to both cities is a wise choice, which will greatly reduce your time on the road. Considering that summer in these cities is hot and rainy, you’re advised to take summer wear plus an umbrella
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
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