选择性必修第一册Unit 4 Body Language (说明文）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019）

Unit 4 Body Language (说明文）（人教版2019） Write a description of body language（说明文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 说明文 2020年全国高考卷 “身势语”属于课程标准中“人与社会”的人际沟通的主题语境。本单元涉及不同文化背景下身势语的差异和如何使用身势语的话题；身势语是一个民族文化的组成部分，在当今跨文化交际越来越频繁的世界里，了解其他国家的无声语言有助于促进交流和有效沟通，避免误解和尴尬。 1.To have a good understanding of the body language in a classroom. 2.To figure out the basic structure of the text. 3.Master some useful expression about body language. 4.To write a passage to describe the body language. （2020·全国·高考真题）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 本单元的写作项目是描述肢体语言，肢体语言是一种无声的语言，写作的关键有以下两点： 1．准确的描写：要对人的动作进行形象的描绘，以传达出动作所代表的具体含义，即先绘其“状”； 2．合理的想象：要对动作传达出的意图和情感进行解释和阐发，即再明其“意”。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 概要介绍所描写的肢体语言 1．They are...as... 2．It varies from...to... 主体 介绍其含义 3．In some countries，people prefer to...rather than... 4．Some people like...while other people... 5．It is important to...that... 6．Knowing these can help you... 结尾 表达自己看法 7．When...，it is best to... 8．There are also some differences... 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．frown v．　　　　　　　　 皱眉 2．stare v. 凝视 3．glare v. 怒视 4．pose n. 姿势；姿态 5．body language 肢体语言 6．be lost in thought 陷入沉思 7．cover one's mouth and nose 遮住口鼻 8．get along with 与……相处 9．leave alone 不管；让……一个人待着 10．have a strong interest in 对……有浓厚兴趣 11.to nod one’s head点头 12.to nod one’s farewell点头表示告别 13.to nod as a sign of agreement or as a familiar greeting表示赞同或打招呼 14.to hold one’s head high昂首挺胸（一般表示趾高气扬） 15.to shake one’s fist挥动拳头（一般表示威胁） 16.to shake one’s head摇头（一般表示不知道） 17.to wink at sb. 向某人眨眼睛 18.to shrug one’s shoulders耸耸肩膀（一般表示冷淡或怀疑） 19.to make a face面部露出厌恶的表情 20.to keep/have one’s fingers crossed把中指叠在食指上交叉着，作十字状。这一般是暗中希望上帝保佑自己正在做的事成功。 更有趣的是英美人用大拇指（thumb）做出许多不同的表示。 21.to thumb one’s nose以大拇指按鼻，其余四指张开，表示轻视。在英美等国家，你会看到这种手势经常用在调皮的孩子们中间。他们用大拇指点着自己的鼻子，而其他四指张开不停地摇动，表示轻蔑或嘲弄。 22.thumbs down大拇指朝下，一般表示反对或拒绝的手势 23.thumbs up翘起大拇指，一般表示赞成或夸奖。但值得一提的是在英美等西方国家，有时会看到有人站在马路边，朝驶过来的车辆伸出一只翘起大拇指的拳头。这是请求搭便车的表示。所以搭车也可以说“to thumb a lift”。 【句式积累】: 1．The naughty boy often makes faces in class, which makes his teacher angry.那个调皮的男孩经常在课堂上做鬼脸，这使他的老师非常生气。 2．While there are many different interpretations of our body language, some gestures seem to be universal. 尽管对于肢体语言有很多不同的解释，但某些手势语似乎是全球通用的。 3．An actor's body language plays an important part in telling the audience about the character they are playing. 一个演员的肢体语言在告诉观众他们表演的角色时起到很重要的作用。 4．There are actually seven universal expressions of emotions on the face：happiness, sadness, anger, fear, surprise, contempt and disgust. 实际上，人的面部有7种共同表情：快乐、悲伤、生气、恐惧、惊讶、轻蔑和厌恶。 5．We wave our hands to say “hello” or “goodbye”． 我们挥手说“你好”或“再见”。 6．Some people may nod and smile instead of shaking hands when they meet. 一些人相遇时可能会点头微笑而不是握手。 7．When you are introduced to a Chinese group, they may greet you by clapping their hands. 当你被介绍给一些中国人时，他们可能会鼓掌欢迎你。 8．Sometimes, we bow to show great respect and thanks to others. 有时候，我们鞠躬是为了表示对他人极大的尊重和感谢。 9. Facial expressions are a type of body language that can convey emotions such as happiness, sadness, anger, and surprise. 面部表情是一种肢体语言，可以传达快乐、悲伤、愤怒和惊讶等情感。 10. Posture is another form of body language that can communicate confidence, insecurity, and even boredom. 姿势是另一种肢体语言形式，可以传达自信、不安甚至无聊。 11. Eye contact is a powerful form of body language that can convey interest, trust, and respect. 眼神交流是一种强大的肢体语言形式，可以传达兴趣、信任和尊重。 12. Gestures such as pointing, waving, and nodding can also be used to communicate non-verbally. 指向、挥手和点头等手势也可以用于非语言交流。 13 . Body language can be used to show agreement, disagreement, and even deception. 肢体语言可以用于表达同意、不同意甚至欺骗。 14. It is important to be aware of your own body language and how it may be perceived by others. 意识到自己的肢体语言及其可能被他人感知的方式是很重要的。 15. Paying attention to the body language of others can help you better understand their thoughts and feelings. 注意他人的肢体语言可以帮助你更好地理解他们的想法和感受。 16. Using positive body language, such as smiling and maintaining eye contact, can help build rapport and establish trust. 使用积极的肢体语言，如微笑和保持眼神交流，可以建立融洽关系和建立信任。 17. In some cultures, certain forms of body language may be considered rude or disrespectful. 在某些文化中，某些形式的肢体语言可能被认为是粗鲁或不尊重的。 18. Overall, body language is an important aspect of communication and can greatly impact how we are perceived by others. 总的来说，肢体语言是沟通的重要方面，可以极大地影响我们被他人感知的方式。 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 　What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物） 　　Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, __________________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三） 　　All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议） 假定你是王兵，你和你的美国笔友John对中美身势语的差异做了一个简单的对比。请你根据以下表格中的内容完成一个关于中美身势语差异的英文报告，同时提醒人们在和外国朋友交际时，注意正确使用身势语。 身势语 美国 中国 身体接触 保持距离，较少接触，尤其是同性之间 身体接触较多，例如女性之间可以手拉手等 伸舌头 一种粗鲁的表现 一种尴尬的表现 拍小孩的头 给予安慰或鼓励 表示喜爱 注意：1.短文应包括表格所示的全部内容，可适当发挥； 2．词数100左右，文章开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：轻拍pat；安慰comfort As we have more communication with foreigners, we should pay more attention to the differences in our body language. [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于图表作文，故要用第三人称来写；文章的主题内容是介绍中美身势语的差异，故时态用__________。 第二步　确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　开门见山，提出主题； Para.2　详细介绍__________； Para.3　概括总结。 第三步　核心词汇 1．____________________手拉手 2．____________________拍某人的头 3．____________________了解所有的差异 4．____________________伸舌头 5．____________________实现恰当的沟通 第四步　句式升级 1．美国人认为伸舌头是不礼貌的，而中国人在感到尴尬时经常使用这个姿势。 (一般表达) Americans think it rude to put out one's tongue. The Chinese often use this gesture when they are embarrassed. (高级表达)Americans think it rude to put out one's tongue, __________ the Chinese often use this gesture when they are embarrassed. 2.只有充分理解肢体语言的所有差异，我们才能期望实现恰当的沟通。 (一般表达)We can expect to achieve proper communication only by fully understanding all the differences in body language. (高级表达)Only by fully understanding all the differences in body language __________to achieve proper communication. [连句成篇] As we have more communication with foreigners, we should pay more attention to the differences in our body language. 一、单句或语篇写作 1.眼神交流是一种身势语，在交际中不仅重要，而且必要。（a form of, not only…but also） _________________________________________________________________ 2.首先，人们更愿意相信直视他们眼睛的人说的话。（to begin with） _________________________________________________________________ 3.此外，如果你在谈话的时候看着别人的眼睛，你会看起来非常自信。（in addition） _________________________________________________________________ 4.倾听你说话的人会更认真对待你所说的话。（take...seriously） _________________________________________________________________ 5.最后，在和别人交谈时，眼神交流是尊重的表示。（a sign of） _________________________________________________________________ 6.当你直视别人时，他知道你的注意力全在他身上。（look sb. in the eye） _________________________________________________________________ 7.总之，在和别人交流时要进行眼神交流。（communicate with） _________________________________________________________________ 语段翻译 请根据以下提示，以“The Importance of Making Eye Contact”为题写一篇英语短文。 1. 人们更愿意相信直视他们眼睛的人说的话； 2. 讲话时看着别人的眼睛会让你看起来很自信； 3. 讲话时看着别人的眼睛是尊重的表示。 注意: 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右。 The Importance of Making Eye Contact _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2． 书面表达 1．（23-24高二上·福建龙岩·期中）假定你是班长李华，你将在主题班会上发言，谈谈肢体语言在交际中的重要性，并就如何使用肢体语言提出一些合理的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Boys and girls, It’s my great honor/privilege to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高二上·福建福州·期中）假定你要参加你校英语俱乐部的写作比赛，请你按如下要求用英语写一篇短文参赛。 1. 下面三幅图中的肢体语言代表什么意思； 2. 你对肢体语言的认识与看法； 1)我们可以同时用话语和肢体语言来表达我们的思想和想法以及与他人交流； 2)在不同的文化中，一个手势可能有不同的含义； 3)读懂一个人的肢体语言对人们相处是非常重要的。 注意 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25高二上·浙江·单元测试）根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。 人们通常使用口头语言进行交流，但是在日常生活中，人们也会广泛地使用肢体语言。你认为肢体语言重要吗？ 常生活中你会使用它与其他人进行交流吗？ 1.肢体语言贯穿人类历史，人们都会使用肢体语言进行交流。肢体语言像口头语言一样重要。 2.当你的朋友伤心的时候，一个微笑或许比语言更有用。 3.在嘈杂的环境中，使用肢体语言去交流会更加容易。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（2020·全国·高考真题）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 题目:My Weekend ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2020·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括: 1. 参加人员: 2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下: 3. 活动反响。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Cross-Country Running Race ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 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language in a classroom. 2.To figure out the basic structure of the text. 3.Master some useful expression about body language. 4.To write a passage to describe the body language. （2020·全国·高考真题）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 本单元的写作项目是描述肢体语言，肢体语言是一种无声的语言，写作的关键有以下两点： 1．准确的描写：要对人的动作进行形象的描绘，以传达出动作所代表的具体含义，即先绘其“状”； 2．合理的想象：要对动作传达出的意图和情感进行解释和阐发，即再明其“意”。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 概要介绍所描写的肢体语言 1．They are...as... 2．It varies from...to... 主体 介绍其含义 3．In some countries，people prefer to...rather than... 4．Some people like...while other people... 5．It is important to...that... 6．Knowing these can help you... 结尾 表达自己看法 7．When...，it is best to... 8．There are also some differences... 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．frown v．　　　　　　　　 皱眉 2．stare v. 凝视 3．glare v. 怒视 4．pose n. 姿势；姿态 5．body language 肢体语言 6．be lost in thought 陷入沉思 7．cover one's mouth and nose 遮住口鼻 8．get along with 与……相处 9．leave alone 不管；让……一个人待着 10．have a strong interest in 对……有浓厚兴趣 11.to nod one’s head点头 12.to nod one’s farewell点头表示告别 13.to nod as a sign of agreement or as a familiar greeting表示赞同或打招呼 14.to hold one’s head high昂首挺胸（一般表示趾高气扬） 15.to shake one’s fist挥动拳头（一般表示威胁） 16.to shake one’s head摇头（一般表示不知道） 17.to wink at sb. 向某人眨眼睛 18.to shrug one’s shoulders耸耸肩膀（一般表示冷淡或怀疑） 19.to make a face面部露出厌恶的表情 20.to keep/have one’s fingers crossed把中指叠在食指上交叉着，作十字状。这一般是暗中希望上帝保佑自己正在做的事成功。 更有趣的是英美人用大拇指（thumb）做出许多不同的表示。 21.to thumb one’s nose以大拇指按鼻，其余四指张开，表示轻视。在英美等国家，你会看到这种手势经常用在调皮的孩子们中间。他们用大拇指点着自己的鼻子，而其他四指张开不停地摇动，表示轻蔑或嘲弄。 22.thumbs down大拇指朝下，一般表示反对或拒绝的手势 23.thumbs up翘起大拇指，一般表示赞成或夸奖。但值得一提的是在英美等西方国家，有时会看到有人站在马路边，朝驶过来的车辆伸出一只翘起大拇指的拳头。这是请求搭便车的表示。所以搭车也可以说“to thumb a lift”。 【句式积累】: 1．The naughty boy often makes faces in class, which makes his teacher angry.那个调皮的男孩经常在课堂上做鬼脸，这使他的老师非常生气。 2．While there are many different interpretations of our body language, some gestures seem to be universal. 尽管对于肢体语言有很多不同的解释，但某些手势语似乎是全球通用的。 3．An actor's body language plays an important part in telling the audience about the character they are playing. 一个演员的肢体语言在告诉观众他们表演的角色时起到很重要的作用。 4．There are actually seven universal expressions of emotions on the face：happiness, sadness, anger, fear, surprise, contempt and disgust. 实际上，人的面部有7种共同表情：快乐、悲伤、生气、恐惧、惊讶、轻蔑和厌恶。 5．We wave our hands to say “hello” or “goodbye”． 我们挥手说“你好”或“再见”。 6．Some people may nod and smile instead of shaking hands when they meet. 一些人相遇时可能会点头微笑而不是握手。 7．When you are introduced to a Chinese group, they may greet you by clapping their hands. 当你被介绍给一些中国人时，他们可能会鼓掌欢迎你。 8．Sometimes, we bow to show great respect and thanks to others. 有时候，我们鞠躬是为了表示对他人极大的尊重和感谢。 9. Facial expressions are a type of body language that can convey emotions such as happiness, sadness, anger, and surprise. 面部表情是一种肢体语言，可以传达快乐、悲伤、愤怒和惊讶等情感。 10. Posture is another form of body language that can communicate confidence, insecurity, and even boredom. 姿势是另一种肢体语言形式，可以传达自信、不安甚至无聊。 11. Eye contact is a powerful form of body language that can convey interest, trust, and respect. 眼神交流是一种强大的肢体语言形式，可以传达兴趣、信任和尊重。 12. Gestures such as pointing, waving, and nodding can also be used to communicate non-verbally. 指向、挥手和点头等手势也可以用于非语言交流。 13 . Body language can be used to show agreement, disagreement, and even deception. 肢体语言可以用于表达同意、不同意甚至欺骗。 14. It is important to be aware of your own body language and how it may be perceived by others. 意识到自己的肢体语言及其可能被他人感知的方式是很重要的。 15. Paying attention to the body language of others can help you better understand their thoughts and feelings. 注意他人的肢体语言可以帮助你更好地理解他们的想法和感受。 16. Using positive body language, such as smiling and maintaining eye contact, can help build rapport and establish trust. 使用积极的肢体语言，如微笑和保持眼神交流，可以建立融洽关系和建立信任。 17. In some cultures, certain forms of body language may be considered rude or disrespectful. 在某些文化中，某些形式的肢体语言可能被认为是粗鲁或不尊重的。 18. Overall, body language is an important aspect of communication and can greatly impact how we are perceived by others. 总的来说，肢体语言是沟通的重要方面，可以极大地影响我们被他人感知的方式。 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 　What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物） 　　Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, __________________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三） 　　All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议） 假定你是王兵，你和你的美国笔友John对中美身势语的差异做了一个简单的对比。请你根据以下表格中的内容完成一个关于中美身势语差异的英文报告，同时提醒人们在和外国朋友交际时，注意正确使用身势语。 身势语 美国 中国 身体接触 保持距离，较少接触，尤其是同性之间 身体接触较多，例如女性之间可以手拉手等 伸舌头 一种粗鲁的表现 一种尴尬的表现 拍小孩的头 给予安慰或鼓励 表示喜爱 注意：1.短文应包括表格所示的全部内容，可适当发挥； 2．词数100左右，文章开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：轻拍pat；安慰comfort As we have more communication with foreigners, we should pay more attention to the differences in our body language. [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于图表作文，故要用第三人称来写；文章的主题内容是介绍中美身势语的差异，故时态用一般现在时。 第二步　确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　开门见山，提出主题； Para.2　详细介绍中美身势语在三个方面的差异； Para.3　概括总结。 第三步　核心词汇 1．hand­in­hand手拉手 2．pat sb. on the head拍某人的头 3．understand all the differences了解所有的差异 4．put out one's tongue伸舌头 5．achieve proper communication实现恰当的沟通 第四步　句式升级 1．美国人认为伸舌头是不礼貌的，而中国人在感到尴尬时经常使用这个姿势。 (一般表达) Americans think it rude to put out one's tongue. The Chinese often use this gesture when they are embarrassed. (高级表达)Americans think it rude to put out one's tongue, while the Chinese often use this gesture when they are embarrassed. 2.只有充分理解肢体语言的所有差异，我们才能期望实现恰当的沟通。 (一般表达)We can expect to achieve proper communication only by fully understanding all the differences in body language. (高级表达)Only by fully understanding all the differences in body language can we expect to achieve proper communication. [连句成篇] As we have more communication with foreigners, we should pay more attention to the differences in our body language. [参考范文] As we have more communication with foreigners, we should pay more attention to the differences in our body language. As we see from the table, many differences exist between Chinese and American body language. For example, there are more touching gestures in China than in America. Women or girls in China often walk hand­in­hand, which is very rare in America. Also, Americans think it rude to put out one's tongue, while the Chinese often use this gesture when they are embarrassed. Furthermore, Chinese people will pat children on the head if they like them, while the Americans do so to offer comfort or encouragement. In a word, only by fully understanding all the differences in body language can we expect to achieve proper communication. [亮点点评] 该范文结构完整，作者首先开门见山，提出主题；然后详细介绍中美身势语在三个方面的差异； 最后概括总结。要点齐全，语言规范地道。使用了as we see from the table, for example, furthermore, also, in a word 等过渡衔接语，句式上，作者巧妙地使用了定语从句、倒装句等高级句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。总之，该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文，值得学习。 一、单句或语篇写作 1.眼神交流是一种身势语，在交际中不仅重要，而且必要。（a form of, not only…but also） _________________________________________________________________ 2.首先，人们更愿意相信直视他们眼睛的人说的话。（to begin with） _________________________________________________________________ 3.此外，如果你在谈话的时候看着别人的眼睛，你会看起来非常自信。（in addition） _________________________________________________________________ 4.倾听你说话的人会更认真对待你所说的话。（take...seriously） _________________________________________________________________ 5.最后，在和别人交谈时，眼神交流是尊重的表示。（a sign of） _________________________________________________________________ 6.当你直视别人时，他知道你的注意力全在他身上。（look sb. in the eye） _________________________________________________________________ 7.总之，在和别人交流时要进行眼神交流。（communicate with） _________________________________________________________________ 答案: 1. Eye contact is a form of body language, which is not only important but also necessary in communication. 2. To begin with, people prefer to believe the words of people who look them in the eye. 3. In addition, you look very confident if you look others in the eye while talking. 4. People who are listening to you will take what you say more seriously. 5. Finally, making eye contact while talking with others is a sign of respect. 6. When you are looking someone in the eye, he knows he has your full attention. 7. In a word, make eye contact when communicating with others. 语段翻译 请根据以下提示，以“The Importance of Making Eye Contact”为题写一篇英语短文。 1. 人们更愿意相信直视他们眼睛的人说的话； 2. 讲话时看着别人的眼睛会让你看起来很自信； 3. 讲话时看着别人的眼睛是尊重的表示。 注意: 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右。 The Importance of Making Eye Contact __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 思路导引 （一审、二定、三明确、四分段） 1. 一审，确定写作体裁和主题 体裁：议论文 主题：眼神交流的重要性 2. 二定，确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关） 时态：一般现在时（介绍眼神交流的重要性） 人称：以第二人称（you）为主 3. 三明确 明确写作要点：眼神交流是一种身势语→眼神交流的作用→呼吁注重眼神交流 4. 四分段（与写作要点息息相关） 结合写作要点分为三个段落 佳作展示  The Importance of Making Eye Contact Eye contact is a form of body language, which is not only important but also necessary in communication. To begin with, people prefer to believe the words of people who look them in the eye. In addition, you look very confident if you look others in the eye while talking. People who are listening to you will take what you say more seriously. Finally, making eye contact while talking with others is a sign of respect. When you are looking someone in the eye, he knows he has your full attention. In a word, make eye contact when communicating with others. 2． 书面表达 1．（23-24高二上·福建龙岩·期中）假定你是班长李华，你将在主题班会上发言，谈谈肢体语言在交际中的重要性，并就如何使用肢体语言提出一些合理的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Boys and girls, It’s my great honor/privilege to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Boys and girls, It’s my great honor/privilege to be here to give/deliver a speech about body language. Body language plays an important role in people’s daily interaction with others. Not only can it help you make yourself more easily understood but it also makes you adjust to new environment as soon as possible. How do we put body language to good use? First and foremost, when communicating with others, you need to keep smile and maintain eye contact. This will show others that you are a good listener and in turn they will listen to you. What’s more, while listening to others, you need to nod your head from time to time to demonstrate that you’re paying attention. Last but not least, you’re encouraged to use gestures to express your thoughts. Hopefully, you can realize the importance of body language and the above-mentioned tips will go a long way towards your interaction with others. Thank you. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。假定你是班长李华，你将在主题班会上发言，谈谈肢体语言在交际中的重要性，并就如何使用肢体语言提出一些合理的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 适应：adjust to→adapt to 表达：express→convey 重要性：importance→significance 演讲：speech→lecture 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：First and foremost, when communicating with others, you need to keep smile and maintain eye contact. This will show others that you are a good listener and in turn they will listen to you. 拓展句：First and foremost, when communicating with others, you need to keep smile and maintain eye contact, which will show others that you are a good listener and in turn they will listen to you. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only can it help you make yourself more easily understood but it also makes you adjust to new environment as soon as possible. (运用了部分倒装句) [高分句型2] First and foremost, when communicating with others, you need to keep smile and maintain eye contact. (运用了省略句) 2．（23-24高二上·福建福州·期中）假定你要参加你校英语俱乐部的写作比赛，请你按如下要求用英语写一篇短文参赛。 1. 下面三幅图中的肢体语言代表什么意思； 2. 你对肢体语言的认识与看法； 1)我们可以同时用话语和肢体语言来表达我们的思想和想法以及与他人交流； 2)在不同的文化中，一个手势可能有不同的含义； 3)读懂一个人的肢体语言对人们相处是非常重要的。 注意 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    We all know that we can use both words and body language to express our thoughts and opinions and to communicate with other people in our daily life. And body language will surely make our words come to life.     Different body language has different meanings. For example, the thumbs-up gesture means “great” or “good job”, shaking one’s head means “no”, while nodding means “yes”. However, a gesture may have different meanings in different cultures.     So we ought to use them properly according to the country where we stay. Or we will be misunderstood by the native people. In order to use body language correctly and properly, we should firstly learn the culture and custom of the country as much as we can. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。假定你要参加你校英语俱乐部的写作比赛，请你按如下要求用英语写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：opinion→perspective 为了：in order to→so as to 例如：for example→for instance 肯定地：surely→certainly 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：In order to use body language correctly and properly, we should firstly learn the culture and custom of the country as much as we can. 拓展句：We should firstly learn the culture and custom of the country as much as we can so that we can use body language correctly and properly. 【点睛】[高分句型1] We all know that we can use both words and body language to express our thoughts and opinions and to communicate with other people in our daily life. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] In order to use body language correctly and properly, we should firstly learn the culture and custom of the country as much as we can. (运用了不定式作目的状语) 3．（24-25高二上·浙江·单元测试）根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。 人们通常使用口头语言进行交流，但是在日常生活中，人们也会广泛地使用肢体语言。你认为肢体语言重要吗？ 常生活中你会使用它与其他人进行交流吗？ 1.肢体语言贯穿人类历史，人们都会使用肢体语言进行交流。肢体语言像口头语言一样重要。 2.当你的朋友伤心的时候，一个微笑或许比语言更有用。 3.在嘈杂的环境中，使用肢体语言去交流会更加容易。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: People usually communicate with others by spoken words. However, body language is widely used in our daily life. Have you ever used body language to communicate with others? I think the answer is definitely sure. You must have smiled to your friend when you meet him again after a long time. Smile is body language. And it is obvious that through human being’s history, people used body language to communicate with others frequently. For example, when you find your friend is depressed, you give him a smile to cheer him up and at that moment the smile is better than any words, I think. When you are surrounded by noises, and you cannot make yourself understood by word of mouth, then you use gestures which are body language to express your ideas. As a conclusion, body language is as important as spoken language. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，说明肢体语言的重要性。 【详解】1.词汇积累 交流：communicate→interact 明显的：obvious→apparent 抑郁的：depressed→frustrated 表达：convey→express 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As a conclusion, body language is as important as spoken language. 拓展句：As a conclusion, body language is as important as spoken language, playing an important role in our daily life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】And it is obvious that through human being’s history, people used body language to communicate with others frequently.（运用了that引导的主语从句） 【高分句型2】When you are surrounded by noises, and you cannot make yourself understood by word of mouth, then you use gestures which are body language to express your ideas.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的定语从句） 1．（2020·全国·高考真题）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 题目:My Weekend ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏1】 【答案】My Weekend Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals. On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat. I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness! 【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。 第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness. 第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。 第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not only…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 5．（2020·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括: 1. 参加人员: 2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下: 3. 活动反响。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Cross-Country Running Race ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏2】 【答案】A Cross-Country Running Race Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions. The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive. 【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。 【详解】体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主 结构:总分总 要求: 1. 参加人员 2. 跑步路线 3. 活动反响 第二步:列提纲(重点词组) attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb. 第三步:连词成句 1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition. 3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. 4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. 5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions. 6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive. 第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句) 表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so… 状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although… 定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where… 第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语) 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。 ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$