Unit 2 单元写作指导与演练-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）

Unit 2  How often do you exercise？ 单元写作指导与演练 【单元话题解读】  单元话题：  本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群,涉及子主题“自我管理”。本单元的话题是“Free time activities”。其话题主要谈论的是生活中常见的一些活动及其发生的时间、地点及频率等，并进一步讨论这些活动与健康的关系及一些影响健康的因素，引导大家养成好的生活习惯。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能恰当地使用频率副词来描述自己或他人的生活习惯，并给出恰当的建议等。常见的写作任务是介绍自己或他人的好习惯和坏习惯,体裁多为说明文或书信等应用文。 命题角度： 此话题常见的写作角度涉及： 本单元的话题是“谈论做事情的频率”，即熟练使用一般现在时时表述做事的频率。此类话题作文主要涉及两个方面，一是能够表达人的健康饮食习惯或者生活习惯。二是能够描述课余活动。内容涉及生活方式，饮食习惯，课外活动等。  【写作目标】 1. 掌握并熟练使用一般现在时； 2.能使用一般现在时造句； 3.能熟练运用频度副词； 4.能根据人们的日常生活及业余活动发生的频次，判断出生活习惯的好坏。 【写作步骤】 总分总结构。 短文通常分为三个部分： 总——第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。 分——第二部分：介绍业余活动及内容；介绍习惯。 总——第三部分：表达感受或者表明决心。 人称：第一人称，第三人称。 时态：一般现在时（注意动词三单）。  【写作思维导图】 【单元素材积累】 ◆相关短语积累  1.watch TV 看电视 2. stay up late 熬夜 3.play sports 做运动 4.go to the dentist 看牙医 5.go online / use the Internet 上网 6.help with housework 帮忙做家务 7.drink milk / coffee 喝牛奶/咖啡 8.eat fruit / vegetables 吃水果/蔬菜 9.have dance lessons / have piano lessons 上舞蹈课/钢琴课 10.go to the movies 去看电影 11.go shopping / swimming 去购物/游泳 ◆单元重点句型  1、I often go to the movies. 我经常看电影。 2、I exercise once a week. 我一周锻炼一次。 3、I never eat junk food. 我从不吃垃圾食品。 4、She eats a healthy breakfast. 她吃健康的早餐。 5、I have a healthy life. 我有一个健康的生活。 6、I watch TV every day. 我每天看电视。 7、It's good to relax by using the Internet or watching game shows,but we think the best way to relax is through exercise. 上网或者看比赛是休闲的好方式，但是我们认为最佳方式是锻炼。 8、It’s healthy for the mind and body. 对头脑和身体都是健康的。 9、Jane has a lot of good habits. 珍妮有很多好的习惯。 10、She hardly ever stay up late. 她从不熬夜。 11、He usually watches TV for more than two hours a day. 他经常一天看超过2个小时的电视。 12、I think it is bad for your health. 我认为对健康有害。 13.牛奶和蔬菜对健康很有益。 Milk and vegetables are good for health. 14.我们询问了一些学生空闲时间的活动，以下是结果。 We asked some students about their free time activities. Here are the results. 15.另外那10%的学生一星期至少用互联网三至四次。 The other 10 percent of the students usethe Internet at least three to four times a week. 16.大部分的同学用手机是为了玩，而不是为了做作业。 Most students use smart phones for fun, not for homework. 17.通过上网来放松是很好的，但是最好的放松方式是做运动。 It is good to relax by using the Internet. However, the best way to relax is through exercise. ◆开头句 ①Now I will tell you how we do exercise. ②It's my pleasure to tell you how we do exercise. ◆中间句 ①It is healthy for the mind and the body. ②Those sports lovers think the best way to relax is through exercise. ③Every one in our class takes an active part in sports because we know exercising is important to our health. ◆结尾句 ①In a word,I should get rid of the bad habits and make my life better. ②We should start exercising before it's too late. ③In my opinion,watching TV is easy and relaxing,but reading and exercising make us a full man. ◆名言积累 ①An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。 ②Old habits die hard.旧习难改。 【实例讲解1】 介绍习惯 ◆写作任务（Section B 3c） 亚里士多德曾说：“总以某种固定方式行事，人便能养成习惯。”假如下周你们班将开一次英文班会，班会的主题是My habits，请你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的习惯，为下周的发言做准备。 ◆审清题目 内容：介绍自己的好习惯和坏习惯。 文体：说明文。 时态：介绍日常习惯时，用一般现在时。 人称：第一人称。 ◆头脑风暴 ◆提供素材 ◆常用单词和短语 在横线上填写短语。 习惯 生活习惯 学习习惯 具体内容 好习惯 ★drink water / milk, eat fruit and vegetables ★go to bed early and get up early, (1)______________(获得充足的睡眠) ★exercise / play sports, go running / do some running ★(2)__________(看牙医), brush teeth, wash hands before a meal ★keep the house clean, keep my desk tidy, (3)_____________(帮忙做家务), throw the rubbish into the bin (把垃圾扔进垃圾桶) ★follow the road safety (安全) rules ★say hello to sb., use words like please, tell the truth (说实话) ★be friendly to animals 坏习惯 ★drink too much cola or coffee, have no breakfast, (4)______________(吃垃圾食品或快餐), eat too much ★stay up late, read in the sun, watch too much TV, (5)______________(长时间玩电脑游戏), leave things everywhere in my room ★ride my bike too fast, cross the street when the traffic light (交通信号灯) is red 好习惯 ★make a study plan (计划) at the beginning of a new term, listen to the teacher carefully (认真地), take notes (做笔记) in class, ask the teachers questions, go over (复习) lessons after class, (6)______________(按时完成作业), go to the library, read books / do some reading 坏习惯 ★be afraid of asking questions, not listen in class, not make full use of (充分利用) time 频率 always, (almost) every day, all day, usually, three / four / ... times a week, often, sometimes, (7)______________(两个多小时), (8)______________(一月一/两次), hardly ever, never Key: 1. get enough sleep   2. go to the dentist   3. help with housework   4. eat junk food or fast food   5. play computer games for a long time   6. finish homework on time   7. over / more than two hours   8. once / twice a month ◆常用句型 • I have some good / bad habits such as ... • I have ... habits. However, I have some bad habits, too. • It's good for ... • It's ... for the mind and the body. • I often / hardly ever / never ... • I ... four times / ... a week. • It's ... to give up (放弃) bad habits. ◆常用俗语和谚语 • It's never too late to learn. • An apple a day keeps the doctor (医生) away. • Time is money. • Time waits for no man. ◆谋篇布局 将括号内的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 引出话题 Good morning, everyone. I'd like to tell you about some of my habits here. 介绍“我”的好习惯 I have some good habits. I exercise almost every morning. (1)_________________(我认为这有益身心健康). I go to bed early and get up early every day so that I can get enough sleep. And I eat an apple a day because as the saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away. Also, (2)______________(我从不害怕提问) because that can help me solve (解决) problems in time. 介绍“我”的坏习惯 However, I have some bad habits, too. (3)_________________(我有时不吃早餐). And I don't make full use of time either. I often watch TV or play computer games for more than two hours after school. What's worse (更糟糕的是), (4)_________________(我几乎不去图书馆), for I dislike reading. 总结 (5)_________________(放弃坏习惯是不容易的), but I will try to do that. As for my good habits, I will go on following them every day. 结束发言并致谢 That's all. Thank you for listening. Key: 1. I think it's healthy for the mind and the body   2. I'm never afraid of asking / to ask questions  3. I sometimes have no breakfast / sometimes I don't have breakfast   4. I hardly ever go to the library   5. It's not easy to give up bad habits 【实例解析2】 积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此,某校开展了关于同学们的课余活动的调查。下表为此次活动中八年级12班的调查结果。请你根据图表和相关文字提示,并结合自身的感受，用英语写一篇80词左右的调查报告。 Activity Survey（Class 12,Grade 8） Activity Every Day Twice a Week Four Times a Week Watch TV 60% 20% 20% Do Sports 15% 60% 25% Read Books 30% 53% 17% ►►审题指导 1.文体：说明文 2.人称：第三人称 3.时态：一般现在时 4.写作要点：明确写作要点，所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分 ►►思路点拨 ►►范文赏析 What do the students in Class 12,Grade 8 do in their free time?Here are the results of the survey. Sixty percent of the students watch TV every day. Twenty percent watch TV twice a week and twenty percent watch TV four times a week. Most of them think that it is good to relax by watching TV.Fifteen percent of the students do sports every day. Sixty percent do sports twice a week and twenty-five percent do sports four times a week.As for reading,although thirty percent of the students read books every day,storybooks are the most popular. More than half of the students read twice a week. And less than twenty percent read books four times a week. It is good to relax by watching TV or reading,but I think students should spend more time doing sports because it is good for the mind and body. We ①asked students in Class 12,Grade 8 about their free time activities. The results are as follows. ②We find that sixty percent of the students watch TV every day.20 percent watch TV twice a week and 20 percent watch TV four times a week. Most students watch it ③for fun.Only 15 percent of the students do sports every day while 60 percent students do sports twice a week. And 25 percent do sports four times a week. Those sports lovers think ④the best way to relax is through exercise.⑤It is healthy for the mind and the body.⑥The answers to the question about reading were also interesting.⑦ We all know that ⑧reading makes us a wise man,but ⑨we are surprised that only 30 percent students read books every day. More than 50 percent read twice a week and only 17 percent read four times a week. In my opinion,watching TV is easy and relaxing,but reading and exercising make us a full man. 点评： ①ask…about，③for fun，④the best way to 和⑥the answers to等短 语的使用让文章的语言 准确且多样化。 that引导的宾语从句② We find that…，⑦We all know that…，⑧谚 语“reading makes us a wise man”和⑨we are surprised that…的使用 让文章的表达更丰富、 高级。 本篇范文语言丰富生 动，同时能够灵活运用 本单元所学知识，如the best way to,“It is healthy for the mind and the body.”等。 【实战演练】 （2023-2024·商丘市虞城县月考）假如你是八年级3班的班长 （monitor）,你班被评为“体育活动先进班级”。学校广播的“英语之声”栏目 邀请你介绍你班学生开展体育活动的情况。请你根据下面的要点和要求写 一篇英语演讲稿。 要点： 1.你班同学重视体育锻炼； 2.你班同学的锻炼情况； 3.你对体育运动的看法。 要求： 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 2.词数100左右。 ►►审题指导 1.文体：________ 2.人称：__________ 3.时态：____________ 4.写作要点：①____________________________________；② ________________；③____________________。 ►►思路点拨 ►►小试身手 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文： Good morning,everyone!As the monitor of Class Three,Grade Eight,it's my pleasure to tell you how we do exercise. Everyone in our class takes an active part in sports. The reason is that it not only builds up our bodies but also helps to develop our good characters. There is no doubt that we can relax ourselves after doing sports. In the early morning，all of us run on the playground for half an hour. It's a regular activity for us to do exercise during the class breaks in the morning. What's more,we play different kinds of sports after school in the afternoon. The boys usually play basketball while the girls choose to play volleyball or badminton. Some do other sports like rope jumping,running，playing ping-pong and so on. Exercising not only keeps us healthy,but also makes us happy. We will keep on exercising in the future. Thank you. 【真题解析】 1．（2022春·八年级单元测试）每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的“运动与健康”栏目正在以Let’s Do Exercise Together为题，向广大中学生征文。 运动的重要性 运动的时间与方式 ● 保持健康 ● 培养个人的性格 ● …… ● 上学时步行或骑自行车 ● 上体育课时做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球……） ● 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等 ● …… Let’s Do Exercise Together    It’s very important for us to do exercise. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Let’s Do Exercise Together It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person’s character. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better. We can do exercise whenever we want. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during vacations. Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together! 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题干要求以“Let’s Do Exercise Together”为题结合所给材料写一篇倡导运动以及提建议的一篇文章。 2.写作指导：人称主要采用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。写作内容围绕运动的重要性以及针对运动的时间和方式提出相关建议。写作时注意主谓一致，无语法和标点错误。 2．（2021秋·八年级课时练习）下面的饼状图为你班同学每天的课外阅读情况。请根据下图及提示内容写一篇短文向你校英语报“Let’s read more”栏目投稿。 提示：1. 描述饼状图； 2. 发表你对你班同学每天的课外阅读情况的看法； 3. 阅读的好处及你的建议。 参考词汇: take part in参加；push督促 要求：1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 词数: 70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 I did a survey about reading after school each day in my class. I found that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version： I did a survey about reading after school each day in my class. I found that 28 percent of the students spent less than one hour reading, that 17 percent read for one to two hours, and that only 5 percent read for within three hours. I was surprised that 50 percent of them didn’t read at all. I think most of the students need to spend more time reading, because reading opens our mind, makes us smarter and smarter, and makes our life colorful. As a student, I think we should join reading clubs and take part in reading competitions to push us to read more. 【详解】1.题干解读：改题目属于记叙文写作。写作时应承接短文开头，第一段叙述描述饼状图，第二段发表你对你班同学每天的课外阅读情况的看法，第三段描述阅读的好处及你的建议。 2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来完成写作；描述饼状图应用一般过去时，发表看法、提出建议应用一般现在时；发表的看法、提出的建议应合情合理，条理清晰。 3．（2022·全国·八年级专题练习）假如你叫李华，你们市将要举行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为主题的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： （1）开篇点明演讲的主题（how to eat in a healthy way）； （2）我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因； （3）描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明； （4）希望大家都有好的饮食习惯。 要求： （1）不得在作文中出现真实的校名和人名； （2）语句连贯，80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to Eat in a Healthy Way Hello, everybody. I'm Hua.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Eat in a Healthy Way Hello, everybody. I’m Li Hua. Today my topic is how I can eat in a healthy way. Firstly, we should never eat fried food and we never eat food with lots of sugar because they are not good for health. Secondly,  try to eat more vegetables and fruit because they can make us become thinner and healthier. My eating habits are good. For example, I often eat healthy food, like whole meal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner. I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据内容提示写一篇演讲稿，谈一谈如何吃得健康，属于材料作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时来叙述。写作时承接开头，要写出喜欢和不喜欢的食物及原因，介绍自己的饮食习惯，最后表达希望。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 4．（2021秋·八年级课时练习）近日，格林中学对本校学生的日常生活习惯做了一次调查。下面是学生刘菲填写的调查信息表。请你根据表格内容，写一篇题为“Liu Fei’s Living Habits”的英语短文，介绍刘菲的日常习惯。 Activities How often Good habits exercise every afternoon eat fruit and vegetables every day help with housework often Bad habits stay up late sometimes eat junk food three to four times a week 要求： 1. 可适当发挥，但必须包含表格里所给信息； 2. 不少于60词。 Liu Fei’s Living Habits ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Liu Fei’s Living Habits Liu Fei is a student in Green School. She has lots of good habits. She loves sports and she exercises for half an hour every afternoon. She eats fruit and vegetables every day. At home she often helps with housework. However, Liu Fei also has some bad habits. Sometimes she stays up late to watch TV or go online. And she eats junk food three to four times a week although she knows it’s bad for her health. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。内容是以“Liu Fei’s Living Habits”为题，结合所给的材料介绍一下刘菲的日常习惯。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作时，应该根据所给的材料从好习惯和坏习惯两个方面着手，介绍一下刘菲的日常习惯。 5．（2022秋·八年级课时练习）假如你是Nick，某英文网站正在对大家的生活方式做调查。请根据下面的提示结合自己的实际情况，写一篇短文介绍一下你的生活方式，向该网站投稿。 提示： 1. How often do you exercise? 2. What sports do you play? 3. What do you often eat? 4. How often do you do housework? 5. When do you usually go to bed? 要求： 1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于60词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My name is Nick. I do exercise four times a week._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My name is Nick. I do exercise four times a week. I like running in the morning. And sometimes I play basketball after school. I often eat vegetables and fish. I hardly ever eat junk food because I dislike it, but I usually drink cola. I do housework three times a week.  I often go to bed at 10 o’clock. I sleep about eight hours every day. I think I have a healthy lifestyle, but I should drink less cola. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据写作要点提示，谈一谈自己喜爱的生活方式，属于给材料作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时展开叙述。写作时承接开头，紧扣要点提示，写明多久锻炼一次、做什么运动，喜欢吃的食物，做家务的频率，晚上睡觉的时间。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 6．（2022·全国·八年级专题练习）请你根据下面班级课余活动调查表，写一篇调查报告。不少于70词。 Class 12, Grade 8: Activity Survey Activity Every Day Twice a Week Four Times a Week Watch TV 60% 20% 20% Have Sports 10% 20% 70% Do homework 100% 0% 0% （All students=100%   Most students=51%-99%    Some students=1%-50%   No students=0%） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Here are the results of the students’ activity survey in Class 12, Grade 8. Most students watch TV every day. Some students watch TV twice a week. Some students watch TV four times a week. Some students have sports every day. Some students have sports twice a week. Most students have sports four times a week. All the students do homework every day. No students do homework twice or four times a week. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕所给的提示内容，写一篇调查报告。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。写作时包含所给的所有提示要点，写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 7．（2022·全国·八年级专题练习）下面是对一个班的学生就几个方面所做的一个调查，请就表格内容写一篇调查报告。开头已给出。 Activity    Survey Activities Every day Once or twice a week Three or four times a week Do homework 90% 0% 10% Exercise 15% 55% 30% Here are the results of the students activity survey. We found that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Here are the results of the students activity survey. We found that only fifteen percent of the students exercise every day. Fifty-five percent exercise once or twice a week. Thirty percent exercise three or four times a week. We all know that our students must do homework, but we were surprised that ninety percent of the students do homework every day. The other ten percent do it three or four times a week. None do homework once or twice a week. 【详解】题干解读：题目要求根据表格内容写一篇调查报告，要求包含表格中的信息。 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时。可采取2段落格式，第一段：主要介绍锻炼的调查结果；第二段：主要介绍做家庭作业的调查结果。 8．（2021秋·八年级课时练习）你的生活和饮食习惯健康吗?请根据下面的提示，以“My Lifestyle”为题写一篇短文介绍你的生活和饮食习惯。 提示： 1. What food do you usually have? How often do you eat it? 2. How many hours do you usually sleep every night? 3. How often do you exercise? What sports do you usually do? 4. If you are unhealthy, what should you do? 要求：不少于80词。 My Lifestyle ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Lifestyle Let me tell you about my lifestyle. I often eat fruit and vegetables. Apples and oranges are my favorites. I love junk food, too, and I eat it three or four times a week. I sleep less than seven hours every day. I often feel sleepy. I brush my teeth once a day. I run in the morning, and play ping-pong after school. In my free time, I enjoy surfing the Internet. On weekends, I often go to the movies with my friends. I think I’m kind of unhealthy. I shouldn’t eat too much junk food. I’ll try to have a balanced diet and sleep more. I should brush my teeth twice a day. I hope I can have a better lifestyle. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，要求根据英文提示，介绍自己的生活方式。写作时，第一段点明主题，引出下文；第二段根据提示，从饮食、睡眠和运动三方面介绍具体的生活习惯；第三段对以上生活方式进行反思并收尾。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来写作；时态以一般现在时为主；进行生活方式的介绍时，注意结合给出的英文提示，详细说明自己的生活习惯，可以适当添加额外细节；结尾反思时，评价自己的生活方式，并表达出今后的期望。 【直击中考】 （2023·云南）【提纲类：体育与健康】 Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life 提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life Cycling is one of my favorite sports. It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once. What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动； 第二步，具体阐述自己运动经历； 第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。 [亮点词汇] ①make sb adj使某人处于……状态 ②get close to接近 ③far from远离 [高分句型] ②Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句） （2023·河南）【提纲类：学校生活】 为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。 写作要求：1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受； 2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由； 3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4) 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：shuttlecock exercises 毽子操；badminton 羽毛球；rope skipping 跳绳 The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger. In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class. Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受； 第三步，介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①walk out of走出 ②in my opinion依我来看 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] ①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$