专题03 书信写作15篇(高考真题+广东名校模拟)-备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(广东专用)

专题03 书信写作15篇(高考真题+广东名校模拟) 近年高考真题 1．（2024年新高考I卷高考真题）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 决定：decide→determine 整个的：entire→whole 提供：offer→provide 总之：in a word→in short 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. 拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers. 【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句) 2．（2023年新高考I卷高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） 3．（2022年新高考I卷高考真题）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Caroline, This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：attend→participate in 建立：establish→set up 帮助：aid→assistance 许多：plenty of→a lot of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. 拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构) 2024年高考模拟真题 1．（2024·广东汕头·二模）你校英文报五月份的主题是“新时代青年”，请你写一篇短文投稿， 内容包括： 1.新时代青年的品格; 2.如何成为新时代好青年。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Teens In The New Era ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·广东·二模）正值你校社团招新，学校英文报发起“My Club”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍并推荐你参加的一个社团。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Club ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·广东佛山·二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，正在筹划下周六的校园音乐会。请写一封邮件邀请外籍教师Alex参加，并欢迎他参与表演。 注意： 1. 词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alex, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 4．（2024·广东·二模）假定你是李华，学校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期学生社会实践活动的建议。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 活动建议； 2. 活动意义； 3. 你的期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 5．（2024·广东惠州·一模）假定你是李华。你的外国笔友Tom得知你的作品在“市文旅资源短视频比赛”中获高中组一等奖，来信祝贺并询问，请你给予回复，内容包括： 1. 作品简介； 2. 参赛感想。 参考词汇：文旅资源 cultural tourism resources 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．（2024·广东茂名·二模）假定你是学校英语阅读俱乐部的主席李华。你注意到学校同学们很少进行英语文学阅读。请用英语给全校同学写一份倡议书，倡导大家多阅读英语文学作品。内容包括： 1. 介绍现状； 2. 你对英语文学阅读的看法； 3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear schoolmates, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ English Reading Club 7．（2024·广东深圳·模拟预测）随着科技的快速发展，人工智能产品开始走进校园。校英文网站正在就“AI and Study”这一话题发起讨论，请你在该网站上发一篇帖子，内容包括： 1.你的观点； 2.说明理由。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 AI and Study _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·广东东莞·三模）假定你是李华，正在参加一个文化交流营（Cultural Exchange Camp），因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧，如室友经常在晚上举办派对。向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰，内容包括： 1. 描述情况； 2. 个人建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Committee Office, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·广东广州·模拟预测）英国一所友好学校的师生将到你校访问。你将作为学生代表在欢迎晚会上致辞，并赠送学生们自制的文创礼物。请你用英语写一篇欢迎辞，包括以下内容： 1．表示欢迎； 2．介绍礼物。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good evening, dear friends! … _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·广东·二模）你校将以“Enhancing Social Skills in Students”为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 社交能力的重要性； 2. 提高学生社交能力的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Enhancing Social Skills in Students _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．（2024·广东广州·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友William写信告知你，他计划申请来中国支教，但有些担忧。请你写一封回信鼓励他。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear William, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．Teens In The New Era In the new era, youths are expected to possess virtues such as responsibility, innovation, and resilience. They are the driving force behind social progress, constantly challenging traditional boundaries and pushing forward with novel ideas. To be a good youth in this era, one must continuously learn and adapt to the changing world. Active participation in community activities, fostering a positive mindset, and contributing to society through one's talents and efforts are crucial. By doing so, we can shape a better future for ourselves and for generations to come. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，主题是“新时代青年”。 【详解】1.词汇积累 具备：possess→be equipped with 适应：adapt to→adjust to 重要：crucial→vital 培养：foster→develop 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：They are the driving force behind social progress, constantly challenging traditional boundaries and pushing forward with novel ideas. 拓展句：They are the driving force behind social progress, who constantly challenge traditional boundaries and push forward with novel ideas. 【点睛】[高分句型1] They are the driving force behind social progress, constantly challenging traditional boundaries and pushing forward with novel ideas. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] By doing so, we can shape a better future for ourselves and for generations to come. (运用了动名词作宾语) 2．One possible version: My Club The Debate Club has been a vital part of my school life, offering a platform to explore and appreciate the art of debate. If you are interested in improving your critical thinking and public speaking skills, I heartily recommend joining this club. Through weekly meetings and competitions, we learn how to construct persuasive arguments, express our opinions clearly, and think independently. Not only have I proved my communication skills, but I have also made friends through this club. Joining the Debate Club is one of the best decisions I’ve made in school, and I encourage you to give it a try as well! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿, 参加学校英文报发起“My Club”主题征文活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 欣赏：appreciate →enjoy 对……感兴趣：be interested in →be keen on 表达：express →convey 观点：opinion →view 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The Debate Club has been a vital part of my school life, offering a platform to explore and appreciate the art of debate. 拓展句：The Debate Club has been a vital part of my school life, which offers a platform to explore and appreciate the art of debate. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only have I proved my communication skills, but I have also made friends through this club.（运用了not only…but also…连接并列句以及not only位于句首引出的部分倒装） 【高分句型2】Joining the Debate Club is one of the best decisions I’ve made in school, and I encourage you to give it a try as well!（运用了动名词短语作主语和省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词decisions） 3．Dear Alex, How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Saturday in the school hall to enrich students’ after-school life. As an organizer, I’m writing to invite you to join us. The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 a.m., and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Following the speech is a one-hour lecture with the title of “A Brief History of Chinese Music” by Professor Guo, after which there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are particularly welcome to show up onstage, which will add color and fun to our festival. Looking forward to your early reply. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外籍教师Alex参加下周六的校园音乐会，并欢迎他参与表演。 【详解】1.词汇积累 开始：start→begin 主题：title→theme 各种各样的：various→a variety of 尤其：particularly→in particular 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Following the speech is a one-hour lecture with the title of “A Brief History of Chinese Music” by Professor Guo, after which there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. 拓展句：Following the speech is a one-hour lecture with the title of “A Brief History of Chinese Music” by Professor Guo, after which there will be various fantastic performances that will be played by talented students. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Following the speech is a one-hour lecture with the title of “A Brief History of Chinese Music” by Professor Guo, after which there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. (运用了after which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】You are particularly welcome to show up onstage, which will add color and fun to our festival.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 4．One possible version: Social practice activities offer high school students chances to strengthen their sense of social responsibility. Here I would like to propose an activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking”. To get immersed in the beauty of nature, students can form groups to go hiking during the holidays, which can not only promote their physical health but also help alleviate study stress. This eco-friendly hike will definitely raise students’ awareness of environment conservation, further strengthening their sense of duty as essential members of society. I eagerly anticipate this initiative becoming a feasible program. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份给学校的英文报投稿，就暑期学生社会实践活动提出建议，并阐述活动的意义和个人的期待。 【详解】词汇积累 加强：strengthen → enhance 意识：awareness → consciousness 期待：anticipate → look forward to 环保的：eco-friendly → environmentally protective 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I eagerly anticipate this initiative becoming a feasible program. 拓展句：I ardently look forward to the potential realization of this initiative as a viable program. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Here I would like to propose an activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking”.（运用了过去分词短语做后置定语） 【高分句型2】To get immersed in the beauty of nature, students can form groups to go hiking during the holidays, which can not only promote their physical health but also help alleviate study stress.（运用了动词不定式短语作目的状语、关系代词which引导的定语从句） 5．Dear Tom,      Thank you for your congratulations! My video showcases our city’s cultural tourism resources, focusing on hidden historical sites, traditional markets, and local crafts. It aims to reveal the unique charm and cultural richness of our city. Participating in the contest was a fantastic experience. I developed a deeper appreciation for our heritage and enhanced my filming and storytelling skills. Winning first prize in the high school group was incredibly rewarding and has inspired me to continue exploring our culture. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友Tom朋友写一封回信，介绍“市文旅资源短视频比赛”获奖作品简介和参赛感想。 【详解】1.词汇积累 揭露：reveal→uncover 参加：participate in→take part in 增强：enhance→strengthen 鼓励：inspire→encourage 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：My video showcases our city’s cultural tourism resources, focusing on hidden historical sites, traditional markets, and local crafts. It aims to reveal the unique charm and cultural richness of our city. 拓展句：My video showcases our city’s cultural tourism resources, focusing on hidden historical sites, traditional markets, and local crafts, which aims to reveal the unique charm and cultural richness of our city. 【点睛】【高分句型1】My video showcases our city’s cultural tourism resources, focusing on hidden historical sites, traditional markets, and local crafts.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语） 【高分句型2】Participating in the contest was a fantastic experience.（运用了动名词作主语） 6．Dear schoolmates, As the president of our English Reading Club, I feel it regretful that English literature is always gathering dust on the shelf, left unexplored. English literature is a gateway to different cultures, histories, and perspectives. Reading it can not only improve our language skills but also broaden our horizons. It introduces us to diverse cultures and ideas, thus stimulating creativity and empathy. However, seldom do we dip into these works. We all should explore English literature, through which we will find ourselves entranced by the beauty of words and the power of literature can also enrich and transform our lives. English Reading Club 【导语】这是一封倡议信。要求考生以学校英语阅读俱乐部主席的身份，向全校同学发出倡议，鼓励大家多阅读英语文学作品，并表达自己对英语文学阅读的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遗憾的：regretful→ sorry 拓宽：broaden→ widen 视野：horizons→ views 沉浸：entranced→ lost 丰富：enrich→ colorful 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：I feel it regretful that English literature is always gathering dust on the shelf, left unexplored. 拓展句：I deeply regret observing that English literature persistently relegated to the shelves, remaining unexplored. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Reading it can not only improve our language skills but also broaden our horizons.（使用了动名词短语做主语） 【高分句型2】We all should explore English literature, through which we will find ourselves entranced by the beauty of words and the power of literature can also enrich and transform our lives.（使用了以English literature为先行词、以“介词+关系代词”结构即“through which”引导的定语从句） 7．范文 AI and Study In my opinion, the integration of AI into the academic sphere is a welcome development. Firstly, AI-powered tools like smart assistants and learning platforms can personalize learning experiences, catering to each student's unique needs and abilities. Secondly, AI's data-driven insights help teachers track progress and identify areas for improvement, enhancing teaching effectiveness. However, it's crucial to strike a balance, ensuring AI complements rather than replaces human interaction in the learning process. Overall, AI has the potential to revolutionize education, making it more accessible, efficient, and tailored to individual learners. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“AI and Study”这一话题写一篇帖子。 【详解】1.词汇积累 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I can see 重要：crucial→vital 提高：enhance→strengthen 满足：cater→satisfy 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, AI-powered tools like smart assistants and learning platforms can personalize learning experiences, catering to each student's unique needs and abilities. 拓展句：Firstly, AI-powered tools like smart assistants and learning platforms can personalize learning experiences because it can cater to each student's unique needs and abilities. 【点睛】[高分句型1] However, it's crucial to strike a balance, ensuring AI complements rather than replaces human interaction in the learning process. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2] Overall, AI has the potential to revolutionize education, making it more accessible, efficient, and tailored to individual learners. (运用了现在分词作状语) 8．Dear Committee Office, I, Li Hua, am writing due to a challenge I face with my foreign roommate. There are significant lifestyle differences causing some disagreements. Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles. If you could take my opinion into account, I would be grateful. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰。 【详解】1.词汇积累 明显的：significant→obvious 具体来说：specifically→to be specific 建议：suggest→advise 考虑：take into account→take into consideration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. 拓展句：Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, which disrupts my sleep and daily schedule. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles. (运用了动名词作宾语) 9．示例 (1) Good evening, dear friends! I feel privileged to extend the warmest welcome to teachers and students from our partner school in Britain as the student representative. We are delighted to have you here with us, sharing in the spirit of friendship and cultural exchange. As a token of our appreciation, we have prepared unique gifts for you, such as Chinese calligraphy bookmarks, cloth pandas, and paper-cutting artworks, to name just a few. These are handmade cultural products crafted by our students with much dedication and creativity, not only representing the essence of Chinese culture, but also embodying our traditions and values. We hope the gifts will serve as a reminder of your wonderful time here. Once again, welcome to our school and may your stay be filled with joy, learning, and newfound friendships. (2) Good evening, dear friends! Welcome to our school for this enriching cultural exchange. We are thrilled to have you here as we learn from each other and strengthen our friendship. As the student representative, I am honored to present the unique handmade cultural gifts by our students, each blending traditional Chinese symbolism with Western artistic techniques. Allow me to introduce my favorite, the panda backpack, which features playful shapes and colorful illustrations that appeal to both Chinese and Western sensibilities. There are still many other interesting gifts for you to explore. These gifts symbolize our heartfelt hospitality and desire for lasting connections between our schools. May this exchange deepen our cultural understanding and pave the way for lasting friendships. Once again, a warm welcome to you all! We hope you enjoy your stay here! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就英国一所友好学校的师生将到学校访问写一篇欢迎辞。 【详解】1.词汇积累 荣幸的：privileged→honored 高兴的：delighted→glad 礼物：gift→present 充满：be filled with→be full of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As a token of our appreciation, we have prepared unique gifts for you, such as Chinese calligraphy bookmarks, cloth pandas, and paper-cutting artworks, to name just a few. 拓展句：As a token of our appreciation, we have prepared unique gifts for you, which include Chinese calligraphy bookmarks, cloth pandas, and paper-cutting artworks, to name just a few. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We are delighted to have you here with us, sharing in the spirit of friendship and cultural exchange.（运用了非谓语动词作状语） 【高分句型2】These are handmade cultural products crafted by our students with much dedication and creativity, not only representing the essence of Chinese culture, but also embodying our traditions and values.（运用了非谓语动词作状语和not only…but also连接的并列结构） 10．参考范文 Enhancing Social Skills in Students Good social skills are essential for personal and professional success. They enable effective communication and help form strong relationships. To enhance these skills in students, schools should focus on group activities. Participating in team sports or collaborative projects can improve team work and communication abilities. Additionally, incorporating classes on effective communication, including listening and expressing oneself clearly, would be beneficial. Hosting social events and encouraging involvement in community services can also provide practical experience in diverse social settings. Developing these skills is crucial for students to navigate life’s challenges and build a supportive community. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇投稿，要求考生以“Enhancing Social Skills in Students”为题，写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 集中于：focus on→concentrate on 此外：additionally→in addition 鼓励：encourage→inspire 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Good social skills are essential for personal and professional success. They enable effective communication and help form strong relationships. 拓展句：Good social skills are essential for personal and professional success, which enables effective communication and help form strong relationships. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To enhance these skills in students, schools should focus on group activities.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） [高分句型2] Developing these skills is crucial for students to navigate life’s challenges and build a supportive community.（运用了现在分词短语作主语） 11．Dear Mike, Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers. May your entry stand out in the competition! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：idea →opinion 安全：security →safety 因此：therefore →thus 确信：convinced →sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语） 12．Dear William, I’m excited to hear about your intention to teach in China! It’s a wonderful chance to immerse yourself in a rich cultural environment and make a meaningful impact. Rest assured, China is a welcoming country full of friendly people. Your enthusiasm and dedication will be highly valued. You’ll learn so much from the children and the experience itself. Don’t hesitate, seize this opportunity, and I’m confident you’ll have an unforgettable journey. Looking forward to hearing more about your adventures! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给William写一封回信鼓励他，他计划申请来中国支教，但有些担忧。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：excited→thrilled 机会：chance→opportunity 奉献：dedication→devotion 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Your enthusiasm and dedication will be highly valued. You’ll learn so much from the children and the experience itself. 拓展句：Not only will your enthusiasm and dedication be highly valued, but also you’ll learn so much from the children and the experience itself. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to hear about your intention to teach in China! (运用了不定式作后置定语) [高分句型2] Don’t hesitate, seize this opportunity, and I’m confident you’ll have an unforgettable journey. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$