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Section Ⅳ Writing
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that are widely acknowledged
is the most influential in my opinion
Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty
He made great contributions to society
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to make his country rich and
powerful
had a farreaching influence on the Chinese educational system
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What impresses me most
that he always encourages me to be a
man of noble character
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Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhong
yan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.
He spared no efforts to carry out a series of reforms to make his country rich and powerful.
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He proposed the establishment of a national school system,which had a farreaching influence on the Chinese educational system.
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谢谢观看
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人物描写
人物描写属于记叙文的范畴,它以写人、记事为主,以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。
人物描写一般分为三大部分,即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定,若写人物的过去就用过去时态,若写人物的现在就用现在时态。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
1.背景
①be born in...出生于……
②Chinese nationality中国国籍
③at the age of在……岁时
④during/in his childhood在他童年时
2.经历
①graduate from...从……毕业
②be admitted to...被……录取;考入
3.评价
①be regarded/acknowledged as被认为是
②have a gift for...在……方面有天赋
③devote one's life to...致力于……
④be honored for...因……而受到尊敬
⑤make (great) contributions to...对……作出(巨大)贡献
⑥be awarded...for...因……而被授予……
4.性格与特征
friendly友好的, humorous幽默的,selfless无私的, responsible负责任的,ambitious 有雄心壮志的, respectable值得尊重的, optimistic乐观的,independent独立的, outgoing外向的, enthusiastic热心的,capable 有能力的, 有才能的, competent 能胜任的
[必备句型]
①Born on Dec.10th,1960,Lang Ping is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
出生于1960年12月10日,郎平是公认的非凡的排球教练。
②He had a gift for writing and made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up.
他有写作的天赋,并决心长大后要成为一名作家。
③After graduating from Xi'an Jiaotong University,he received a doctor's degree in computer science.
从西安交通大学毕业后,他获得了计算机科学博士学位。
④Madam Curie made great contributions to the development of science,which paved the way for further research.
居里夫人对科学的发展作出了巨大的贡献,这为进一步的研究铺平了道路。
⑤She devoted her whole life to scientific research and her scientific findings benefited people all over the world.
她毕生致力于科学研究,她的科学成果造福了全世界的人民。
⑥Such is Wang Xiaoping,a simple man who has made great achievements in the field of medicine.
这就是王小平,一个在医学领域取得巨大成就的普通人。
⑦She will live in the hearts of us forever.
她将永远活在我们心中。
(2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2.意义或启示。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
The Historical Figure in China
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[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.在被广泛认可的中国历史人物中,我认为范仲淹是最有影响力的。
Among the Chinese historical figures ____________________________,Fan Zhongyan _____________________________________.
2.作为中国宋代著名的作家和政治家,范仲淹因其对社会的巨大贡献而受到高度赞赏。
______________________________________________________,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated.____________________________________.
3.他不遗余力地进行了一系列改革,使他的国家富强起来。
He tried to carry out a series of reforms ________________________ _________.
4.他提出建立国家学制,对中国的教育制度产生了深远的影响。
He proposed the establishment of a national school system.It ________________________________________________________.
5.给我印象最深的是他那著名的人生观。
_______________________ is his famous philosophy of life.
6.范仲淹是这样一个榜样,他总是鼓励我做一个高尚的人。
Fan Zhongyan is such a role model _______________________________ ________________________.
第三步 词句升级
7.把句2合并升级为原因状语从句
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8.升级句3加黑词
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9.把句4升级为定语从句
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第四步 妙笔成篇
The Historical Figure in China
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【参考范文】
The Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged,Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion.
Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.He spared no efforts to carry out a series of reforms to make his country rich and powerful.Besides,he proposed the establishment of a national school system,which had a farreaching influence on the Chinese educational system.
What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life.Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣, 并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物, 请你给Jim回信, 内容包括:
1.该人物是谁;
2.该人物的主要贡献;
3.该人物对你的影响。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? Knowing you are interested in Chinese history,I'd like to introduce a remarkable Chinese to you.
The hero I want to introduce is an extraordinary writer—Lu Xun,who wrote many remarkable novels.He was committed to fighting against the enemy with his articles,arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China.He was acknowledged as a hero of his time.
Not only does he help me obtain a better knowledge of China but I have learnt the importance of insistence.
In conclusion,he is a great hero in the history of China.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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