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Section Ⅳ Writing
介绍一个公园
本单元写作任务是介绍一个主题公园。这类作文需要使用生动的语言对某一主题公园(或景点)进行具体逼真的描绘, 属于说明文。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
①be located位于;坐落于
②with a history of有着……的历史
③be famous for因……而闻名
④be intended for针对
⑤date from/back to...始建于……
⑥one of the most famous parks
最为著名的公园之一
⑦varieties of entertainments各种各样的娱乐活动
⑧advanced technology先进的技术
⑨magical world魔幻世界
⑩enjoy increasing popularity享有越来越高的人气
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1.介绍主题公园
①Disneyland is the most successful theme park in the world,which brings great happiness to children.
迪士尼乐园是世界上最成功的主题乐园, 它为孩子们带来巨大的快乐。
②Hong Kong Disneyland is a resort area located on Hong Kong Disneyland theme park.
香港迪士尼乐园是坐落于香港迪士尼主题公园内的度假区。
③The theme of the park is to help people be aware of the importance of saving resources.
公园的主题是帮助人们意识到节约资源的重要性。
2.介绍交通方式
①You can reach the building by overpass or underpass.
你可以通过过街天桥或地下通道到达这座建筑。
②You can get there a little more quickly by taking Bus 219.
你可以乘坐219路公交更快速地到达那里。
3.介绍注意事项
①You should pay attention to your behavior and take care not to lose your belongings.
注意自己的行为, 并当心不要丢了自己的物品。
②It's better for kids to be accompanied by their parents all the time.
父母最好一直陪着孩子。
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友汤姆(Tom)暑假想来中国游玩,请你给他推荐一个好玩的主题公园。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.听说你暑假要来中国游玩,我很高兴。
I am glad to hear that you will come to visit China in summer vacation.
2.中国有很多著名的主题公园,上海的巧克力开心乐园就是其中之一。
There are many famous theme parks in China,and Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is one of them.
3.上海的巧克力开心乐园是以巧克力为原材料打造的主题公园。
Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is the one made of chocolate.
4.巧克力开心乐园位于上海市世博园区。
Chocolate Happy Land is located in Shanghai Expo zone.
5.据悉,巧克力开心乐园总占地面积达3万多平方米。
It is reported that Chocolate Happy Land covers an area of more than 30,000 square metres.
6.园内设有巧克力王国、甜蜜伊甸园及其他六个景点。
There are chocolate kingdom,sweet Eden and other six scenic spots.
7.如果你觉得不错,那就来上海巧克力主题公园吧!
If you like it,come to Shanghai Chocolate theme park!
第三步 词句升级
8.用过去分词作状语合并句3和句4
Located in Shanghai Expo zone,Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is the one made of chocolate.
第四步 妙笔成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear that you will come to visit China in summer vacation.
In fact,there are many famous theme parks in China,and Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is one of them.Located in Shanghai Expo zone,Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is the one made of chocolate.It is reported that Chocolate Happy Land covers an area of more than 30,000 square metres.There are chocolate kingdom,sweet Eden and other six scenic spots.
If you like it,come to Shanghai Chocolate theme park!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的家乡新建立了一个主题公园,请给你的加拿大朋友Tony写一封邮件,邀请他来该主题公园游玩。邮件的内容包括:
1.写邮件的目的;
2.介绍新建的主题公园的相关内容;
3.期待回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
How is everything going?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
How is everything going? Learning that you are keen to theme parks,I'm writing to invite you to visit the newlybuilt theme park—Folk Culture Park.
Located 12 km south of our city,the park is a combination of culture,entertainment and food.To begin with,it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China.Additionally,the park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite.
Once you make up your mind,don't hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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