03 第二章 微技巧一 动作描写（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第二章 写作微技巧 启航 英语 微技巧一　动作描写 在续写任务过程中，常常需要对主线人物的行为、动作、神态进行刻画，进而正面或侧面反映主线人物的感受、情绪、品质、个性、心理活动及心理变化，从而推动故事的发展。生动形象的动作描写可以使文章具有可读性，给读者、阅卷老师营造故事的画面感，细腻的人物形象刻画更使续写内容增色，也能够获得高分数。 一、精准使用动作词汇——如何表达“说”与“叫” 动作描写 单词 短语 说 talk谈话；speak说话；persuade劝说；whisper私语说；claim宣称；state陈述；announce宣布；inform通知；remark评论；praise表扬；admit承认；explain解释；reply回复；argue争论，争辩；complain抱怨；quarrel争吵；note指出；scream尖叫；mutter嘟囔着说；mumble含糊着说 speak in a low voice低声说话；raise one's voice 提高声音； ask/question/reply with curiosity 好奇地问/回答；lower one's voice降低声音说；exclaim with joy忍不住而惊呼 动作描写 单词 短语 叫 scream尖叫；shout呼喊；yell大叫；call 呼叫；cheer 欢呼，喝彩，加油 scream with fear惊叫；call out大声喊 1．The boys screamed as they dived into the cold water. 男生们跳进冰冷的水时，尖叫了起来。 2．He argued that they needed more time to finish the project. 他争辩说，他们还需要一些时间才能够完成这个项目。 3．The crowd yelled at the players. 人群大声喊叫着给运动员加油。 4．He whispered a hurried good-bye to his host and rushed toward the door. 他匆匆向主人轻声道别，冲向门口。 5．They lowered their voice, trying to leave without being noticed. 他们压低了声音，试图偷偷离开。 6．The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother. 小男孩垂着头，含糊着向他母亲道歉。 7．She opened her eyes and exclaimed in delight at the scene. 她睁开眼睛，看到这情景，高兴得叫出声来。 8．She screamed my name with anger, “What did you do？” 她愤怒地喊着我的名字，问：“你干了什么？” 9．“They have asked us to leave，” he noted with amusement. “他们已经请求我们离开了”，他乐不可支地说。 二、精准使用动作词汇——如何表达“笑”与“哭” 动作描写 单词 短语 笑 smile微笑； laugh大笑； please使……高兴；amuse使……发笑；delight使……快乐；cheer欢呼 smile broadly大笑；cheer up欢呼雀跃；a bright/shy smile阳光/害羞；burst into laughter(＝burst out laughing)突然大笑；give sb.a smile莞尔一笑；light up with喜形于色；laugh heartily开怀大笑；brighten up露出喜色；smile brightly笑得灿烂；wear a bright smile面带微笑；roar with laughter哈哈大笑；dance/shine with joy闪耀着喜悦的光芒 动作描写 单词 短语 哭 cry哭泣；weep哭泣；whimper呜咽；sob啜泣；moan呻吟；howl哀号 fill with tears满是泪水；hold back one's tears忍住眼泪；cry one's heart out号啕大哭；be in floods of tears失声痛哭；burst into tears(＝burst out crying)突然大哭起来；with tears满眼泪水；roll down泪水滚落；be drowned in沉浸在……中；wipe (away) the tears擦掉眼泪；be close to tears差点哭了 1．She laughed, her eyes shining/sparkling with excitement. 她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 2．Her eyes sparked/twinkled with pleasure. 她的眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。 3．His eyes danced with joy and sweetness. 他的眼睛闪烁着喜悦与甜蜜的光芒。 4．Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held a steady smile. 令人难忘的是，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴唇上挂着坚定的微笑。 5．He brightened up when his eyes fell on Tim. 当他的目光落在蒂姆身上时，他高兴起来了。 6．Her face lit up/glowed with pleasure when I gave her the present. 我给她礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。 7．Tears of happiness flowed down her face. 幸福的泪水顺着她的脸流下来。 8．His mouth widened to a smile. 他的嘴上露出一丝笑意。 9．She turned aside quietly, wiping away tears silently. 她安静地转身，偷偷擦去泪水。 10．Her face turned pale, her tears falling down along the cheeks. 她的脸变得苍白，眼泪滚落脸颊。 11．She bit her lips and cried even harder. 她咬着嘴唇，哭得更厉害了。 12．She sobbed, hiding/burying her face into hands. 她掩面啜泣着。 13．The girl has a very pleasant smile and she always has a twinkle in her big eyes. 这个小女孩时常灿烂地微笑，眨着她的大眼睛。 三、精准使用动作词汇——如何表达“走”与“跑” 动作描写 单词 短语 走 walk走；pace踱步；slip溜走；march快速走；wander漫步；tiptoe踮脚走；stagger蹒跚；sneak溜走；stalk跟踪 take a walk散步；storm out冲出去；wander around徘徊； pace aimlessly/restlessly无目的地/不安地走动 动作描写 单词 短语 跑 run跑；dash冲出；jog慢跑；dash猛冲；rush冲进；chase追赶；skip跳跃 out of breath上气不接下气；break into闯入；catch up with赶上；dash back冲回来；make a running step back跑着后退；bound into蹦蹦跳跳地进入 1．She walked gracefully like a proud swan. 她走路姿态优雅，好像一只骄傲的天鹅。 2．Two girls are holding hands, bounding into the room with smiles. 两个女孩手牵手，笑着蹦蹦跳跳地走进屋子。 3．After dinner, Bruce left the hotel to wander the park nearby. 晚饭之后，布鲁斯离开了酒店到附近的公园逛逛。 4．The sheep ran away/off in fright. 羊受惊跑掉了。 5．We must hurry off in case we should miss the bus. 我们得赶快些以防赶不上公交车。 6．I've been rushing around all day trying to get everything done. 我一整天忙个不停，想把所有的事都做完。 7．She dashed straight into the office and demanded an apology. 她直接冲进办公室，要求对方道歉。 8．Somehow the boys had slipped away to the back lot with their kites. 男孩子们不知怎么地带着风筝溜到后院去了。 9．“I'll never forgive you for this，” Jane added and marched off without a backward glance. “这件事我永远不会原谅你。”简说道,然后头也不回地快步离开了。 四、精准使用动作词汇——如何表达“看”与“听” 动作描写 单词 短语 看 look看；see看到；watch照看；witness目睹，见证；spot认出；observe观察；glare怒目而视；glance瞥见；gaze凝视；stare凝视；notice注意；peek偷看；glimpse短促的看一眼 lose sight of看不见；catch sight of看见；catch a glimpse of瞥见；fade out渐渐消失；see/watch/catch sb.doing sth.看到某人在做某事；blink at sb.朝某人眨眼；cast a look toward朝……看了一眼 动作描写 单词 短语 听 listen听；hear听到 listen with care认真听；give ear to倾听 1．I hate to see you unhappy. 我不愿见到你不高兴。 2．He looked at her with a soft smile on his lips. 他看着她，嘴唇上露出温柔的笑意。 3．I watched helplessly as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless. 我无助地看着那个女人变得越来越沮丧和绝望。 4．The police have appealed for anyone who witnessed the incident to contact them. 警方呼吁任何目击事件的人与他们联系。 5．Meg spotted someone coming out of the building. 梅格看到有个人从大楼里出来。 6．He had glimpsed her through the window as he passed. 他经过时透过窗户瞥见了她。 7．The policeman observed a man enter the bank. 警察注意到一个男人走进了银行。 8．Again she cast a look toward the window. 她又朝窗户看了一眼。 9．The boy glared around the house as if expecting a challenge. 那位男孩子怒目环视房子，好像在等待挑战。 10．The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to make a conversation. 这个女人看着女孩，渴望能和她说话。 11．I was taking my time, strolling in the park and appreciating shop windows. 我悠闲地在公园里散步，欣赏着商店的橱窗。 五、精准使用头部动作与面部表情 动作描写 单词 短语 眉毛 frown皱眉 raise one's eyebrows扬起眉毛 眼睛 wink眨眼； scan细看 eye contact目光接触；对视；eye be wide with honor吓得睁大眼睛；squeeze one's eyes shut紧紧闭上眼睛；look sb.straight in the eye直视某人的眼睛；eyes shine/spark/sparkle/glow with excitement 眼睛闪烁着兴奋的光；eyes filled with tears眼里噙满泪水；with one's eyes fixed on眼睛盯着……；stare at凝视；盯住 动作描写 单词 短语 鼻子 nose嗅，闻 sniff out嗅出；找出；blow one's nose擤鼻子 嘴部 yawn打哈欠； grin咧嘴笑； chew咀嚼； swallow吞咽； sigh叹气 stick one's tongue out at向……吐舌头； have/take a bite (of) 咬一口； call out大声呼叫 脸颊 cheek厚着脸皮说；厚颜无耻地做 cheeks burn with shame脸颊羞得发烫；cheeks flush red脸颊发红；cheeks flame with rage气得脸颊通红 动作描写 单词 短语 面部 face面对 face be pale with fright吓得脸色发白； make a face/make faces做鬼脸； face lights up/brightens/glows with脸上露出……； face suddenly grows serious 脸色突然变得严肃起来 头部 nod点头 give a nod点头；hang/drop/lower/bend/bow one's head低头；shake one's head摇头；scratch one's head挠头；turn one's head away 扭头；bury one's head in 把头埋在 1．He told us the message and then frowned. 他告诉了我们那个消息，然后皱了皱眉。 2．He raised his questioning eyebrows. 他扬起眉毛表示怀疑。 3．She was nervous and kept scanning the crowd for Peter. 她很紧张，一直在人群中寻找彼得。 4．He avoids any eye contact and quickly looks away when anyone approaches. 他避免任何目光接触，任何人接近他时，他都会迅速转移视线。 5．The little girl was so frightened that she squeezed her eyes shut. 那个小女孩吓坏了，紧紧地闭上了眼睛。 6．She looked her mother straight in the eye and answered her question truthfully. 她直视母亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了她的问题。 7．Jane said nothing, with her eyes fixed on the floor. 简的眼睛盯着地板，一言不发。 8．She sniffed out a smell of burning. 她闻到一股糊味。 9．She grinned, delighted at the memory. 想起往事，她咧嘴笑了。 10．She felt her cheeks burning with shame. 她因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烫。 11．His face was ghostly pale with fright. 他吓得面色惨白。 12．He gave a nod and said, “I see.” 他点了点头说：“我明白了。” 13．The boys lowered their heads in shame. 男孩子们羞愧地低下了头。 14．She scratched her head, not understanding a word. 她挠了挠头，表示一个字也没听懂。 15．He buried his head in the pillow. 他把头埋在枕头里。 六、精准使用肢体动作词汇 动作描写 单词 短语 手/手臂 grab抓起；seize抓住；shake握手；applaud鼓掌；pet抚摸(宠物)；drag拖；sew缝制；缝补；dig掘(地)；凿(洞)；挖(土); steal偷，窃取；shave剃；roast烘，烤，焙；mount爬上 raise a thumb竖起大拇指；hand in hand手拉手；make one's hands into a fist握拳；wave (sb.) goodbye挥手(向某人)告别；reach/stretch out one's hand(s)伸手；arm in arm互挽着手臂；cross/fold one's arms双臂交叉 动作描写 单词 短语 肩部 shoulder肩；肩膀；推；搡；挤 shrug (one's shoulders)耸肩； shoulder to shoulder肩并肩 膝盖 knee膝盖；(用膝盖)顶，撞，轻推 go/be/feel weak at the knees双膝发软； on one's knees双膝跪地 腿/脚 slip滑倒； sneak偷偷摸摸；蹑手蹑脚； stamp跺脚(声)； mount爬上，登上 jump to one's feet跳了起来； on tiptoe(s)踮着脚；蹑手蹑脚； kick one's leg(s)踢腿； sit cross-legged盘腿坐 动作描写 单词 短语 其他 struggle搏斗；扭打；挣扎脱身；doze打盹儿；restore恢复；encounter遭遇，遇到(尤指令人不快或困难的事)；stretch伸展 rush into仓促行事；drive away赶走；settle down安歇；burst in/into突然闯进；break out in a sweat浑身冒汗 1．She managed to grab my hand. 她设法抓住了我的手。 2．She started to applaud and the others joined in. 她开始鼓掌，其他人也跟着鼓起掌来。 3．She got up and dragged her chair toward the table. 她站起来，把椅子拖向桌子。 4．She smiled and raised a thumb in greeting. 她笑了笑，竖起大拇指打招呼。 5．I saw them making their way, hand in hand, down the road. 我看到他们手拉手沿着路朝前走。 6．It's time to wave goodbye. 是挥手告别的时候了。 7．Please stretch out your hands and make a fist. 请伸出你的双手然后握拳。 8．We went skipping down the path arm in arm. 我们互挽着手臂蹦蹦跳跳地沿小路走着。 9．Whenever my mother gets angry with me, she will fold her arms and look at me seriously. 每当妈妈生我的气时，她都会双臂交叉，严肃地看着我。 10．I shrugged and thought，“Why not？” 我耸了耸肩，心想：“为什么不呢？” 11．They fell into step, walking shoulder to shoulder with their heads bent against the rain. 他们步伐一致，肩并肩低着头冒雨往前走。 12．He fell to the ground on his knees and said nothing. 他跪在地上，什么都没说。 13．He sneaked up the stairs. 他蹑手蹑脚地上了楼。 14．She stamps her feet when she's angry. 她生气的时候会跺脚。 15．I slowly mounted the steps. 我慢慢地爬上台阶。 16．She had to stand on tiptoes to reach the top shelf. 她得踮着脚才能够到顶层搁架。 17．He struggled and screamed for help. 他挣扎着，高声呼救。 18．The old man is now fully restored to health. 这位老人现在完全恢复了健康。 一、词汇训练。请根据汉语提示写出下面词汇。 1．突然说 ______________ 2．快速地回答__________________________________ 3．低声说________________ 4．窥视_______ 5．害羞地笑着_____________ 6．开怀大笑________________ say suddenly answer quickly/snap a quick answer in a low voice spy on smile shyly laugh heartily 二、小语境训练。根据汉语提示完成下面的句子。 1．James ___________________________________________________ ___________(没有理会其他人), leaving without words. 2．In the supermarket, a girl _____________________________(被说偷东西) products. 3．The smile faded away from his lips,____________________________ ____________(脸色苍白，双手颤抖)． 4．Kelly passed the test and even won the scholarship.She ___________ _____________________ (跑回) back home, and _______________ (高兴地告诉) her family the good news. didn't talk with anyone/ignored others/didn't bother to care for others was accused of stealing his face turned pale and his hands trembled rushed/ran hurriedly/hastily told with joy 5．When the students ____________________(走下) off the bus, James's eyes _______________________________ (惊讶地睁大了)． 6．Swallowing hard, I _______________________(看着) Meghan's eyes for a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it. 7．She ran in _____________ (高兴地), but was told there was no parcel of hers.She looked disappointed, leaving without words. 8．He ________________________ (走来走去) not knowing what to do, hesitating whether to tell his parents the truth. stepped/walked/got widened in surprise/opened widely stared at/looked into with delight walked/wandered around 9．It was so dark in the cave that they had to _____________________ (摸索着前进)． 10．Her tears seemed to grieve the kindhearted others, for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs and ____________________ (开始哭了), too. feel their way forward began to cry/weep 三、翻译下面的句子。 1．玛丽皱着眉头，摇了摇头。 ___________________________________________________________ 2．她冲他眨了眨眼，他便知道她的想法和他一样。 _____________________________________________________ 3．男孩冲他做了个鬼脸，又吐了吐舌头。 ____________________________________________ 4．他点头表示同意。 ____________________________________ Mary shook her head and frowned.(或：Mary shook her head, frowning.) She winked at him and he knew she was thinking the same. The boy made a face and stuck out his tongue at him. He nodded his head in agreement. 5．她笑得合不拢嘴。 ______________________________________ 6．听说她的文章获得了一等奖，她面露喜色。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．泪水噙满我的双眼，顺着脸颊流了下来。 ________________________________________________ She was grinning from ear to ear. Her face lit up with pleasure when news came that her essay had won the first prize.(或：Her face brightened with joy when she heard that her article had won the first prize.)(或：Her face glowed with happiness when she heard that her article had won the first prize.) My eyes filled with tears which ran down my cheeks. 8．杰克迎面冲向她，眼里闪着自豪和兴奋的光芒。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．她盯着家庭相册，想起了和祖父母住在一起时的快乐时光。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．她低下头想掩饰她的羡慕。 ___________________________________________________________ Jack rushed up to her, eyes shining/sparking/sparkling/glistening/glowing with pride and excitement. With her eyes fixed on the family album, she thought of the fun she had when she lived with her grandparents.(或：She stared at the family album and remembered the happy time she had when she lived with her grandparents.) She hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed her head to hide her admiration. 11．他正要伸手抓我。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ 12．如果时间允许，你可以站起来到走廊走一会儿，伸伸胳膊，踢踢腿。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ He was reaching out his hand to catch me.(或：He was about to stretch out his hand to grab me.) If time permits, you can stand up and walk in the hallway for a while to stretch your arms and kick your legs.(或Time permitting, you can stand up and walk in the hallway for a while to stretch your arms and kick your legs.) 13．他看到一个小男孩踮着脚按门铃。 _________________________________________ 14．他突然笑了笑，这让她双膝发软。 ________________________________________ 15．他一想到飞行就浑身冒汗。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ He saw a little boy ringing a doorbell on tiptoes. His sudden smile made her go weak at the knees. He broke out in a sweat when he thought of flying.(或：He broke out in a sweat just at the thought of flying.) 16．母亲因为害怕我们走丢，不准我们逛太远。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．卡拉躺在沙发上，一边看电视，一边抚摸着她的猫。 ___________________________________________________________ 18．我试着跺脚想暖和暖和。 ___________________________________________ Because Mother was afraid we would get lost, we weren't allowed to wander far.(或：Mother forbade us to wander far for fear that we might get lost.) Carla lay on the sofa, watching TV and petting her cat. I tried stamping my feet to keep warm. 19．有时候这只狗会在深夜偷偷溜出家去陪伴它的朋友。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．看着这对上年纪的夫妻手拉手走在沙滩上，我有一种幸福的感觉。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sometimes the dog would sneak out of the house late at night to be with his friends.(或：Sometimes the dog would sneak out of the house late at night to keep his friends company.) Watching the old couple walking along the beach hand in hand gives me a sense of happiness. 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$