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启航 英语 Week 3 邀请信& 慈善助人类读后续写 Friday——读后续写示例指导3 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My baby Reese started screaming and I struggled to hold him in my arms as we pushed our way through the crowd to the side of the taekwondo (跆拳道) studio, where I would send my boy for the training. I looked up, and that is when I saw the photo on a poster, a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters.“OUR MOM NEEDS A KIDNEY (肾脏)，” it said above the photo.“My name is Vonchelle Knight, and I have polycystic kidney disease，” it said below.“I am a single mother of two girls and have been on the transplant waitlist for eight years.” As I continued to read, I thought about how desperately this momma needed a kidney.And then the idea struck me.I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met. On the drive home, I told my husband I wanted to donate my kidney to a stranger.By the look on his face, he clearly thought I had lost my mind.I was a busy mom of two boys working a full-time job as a sales account manager.I had a calendar filled with sporting events, group fitness and volunteer church hours. “Where is this coming from？” he asked.I was excited and slightly terrified as I explained the poster.I told him I wanted to at least call Vonchelle's nurse and get more information. Several weeks later, the results were in.We were a perfect match! The nervous excitement filled my body.Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life.Vonchelle had already waited eight years and obviously didn't have any family members who could donate. I told my husband that the doctor could do the transplant on January twenty-fifth in the hospital.His eyes filled with tears, he stared at me and nodded.Vonchelle's daughter worked at my son's taekwondo studio, so I shared the news with her. One day before the donation, the doctors scheduled me to meet Vonchelle in the hospital. 注意　1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 As she walked through the door of the meeting room, I walked up to her, my heart beating wildly.___________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ After the successful transplant, Vonchelle was recovering well._________ __________________________________________________________ 本文是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”主题语境下的“做人与做事”主题群。文章讲述了作者在带孩子去跆拳道赛场现场比赛的时候，无意间看到了一个肾脏捐赠的传单。一位名叫Vonchelle Knight的单身母亲患有肾病，已经在等待移植的名单上等待了八年。读完她的经历后，作者决定为这个陌生人捐赠自己的肾脏。虽然丈夫一开始不理解，但是作者依旧下了这个决定，联系医护人员，得到匹配成功的结果。医生安排好移植手术后，作者的丈夫最终同意。手术前的一天，作者与Vonchelle在医院会面。 1．读文本 (1)Elements： Who: Vonchelle, my husband and me. Where: taekwondo studio, home, hospital When: When I sent my boy to the taekwondo studio. What: As I continued to read, I thought about how desperately this momma needed a kidney.And then the idea struck me.I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met. Why: Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life. (2)Details： ①My baby Reese started screaming and I struggled to hold him in my arms as we pushed our way through the crowd to the side of the taekwondo studio, where I would send my boy for the training. 我的孩子Reese 开始尖叫起来，我努力着把他抱在怀里，我们穿过人群，挤到跆拳道工作室那里，我将送我的儿子去那里训练。 本句为动作描写，主句运用了and连接的并列句，从句运用了as引导的时间状语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句。该句表达了我在送孩子去跆拳道训练时的忙碌状态。 ②I looked up, and that is when I saw the photo on a poster, a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters. 我抬起头，看到了一张海报上的照片，一个带着灿烂笑容的女人被她的女儿们包围着。 本句为人物描写，运用了连词and引导并列句，surrounded过去分词为后置定语，表达出这个女人的幸福状态。 ③I was excited and slightly terrified as I explained the poster. 当我解释海报时，我既兴奋又有点害怕。 本句为心理描写，句中运用了as引导的时间状语从句。 ④Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life. 当我意识到我有能力让这位妈妈重获新生时，思绪在我的脑海里盘旋。 本句为心理描写，表达我当时意识到那位妈妈会因为我的帮助而重获新生时的激动心情。 ⑤His eyes filled with tears, he stared at me and nodded. 他盯着我，点了点头，眼里充满了泪水。 本句为动作描写，运用stared和nodded两个并列动词以及独立主格结构表现出丈夫在得知我做手术时的担忧的状态。 2．找线索 (1)根据第二段中的“‘I am a single mother of two girls and have been on the transplant waitlist for eight years.’”和第六段中的“Thoughts swirled in my head as I realized I had the ability to give this momma a new lease on life.”可知，要捐助的对象是一个快乐幸福的女士，而我又是一个心地善良的人，会为能让对方重生而激动，在续写的第一段中可呈现出这些内容。 (2)根据第二段中的“I looked up, and that is when I saw the photo on a poster, a woman with a bright white smile surrounded by her daughters.”和第三段中的“I wanted to donate my kidney to the woman whom I had never met.”可知，病人在手术后一定会恢复往日的活力和健康，而作为一个陌生人，作者所做的这一切体现了她无私奉献的高尚品质，凸显了人与人之间美好的互助力量这个主题。 3．定思路 (1)由续写第一段首句“As she walked through the door of the meeting room, I walked up to her, my heart beating wildly.”可知，第一段可描写作者见到Vonchelle的印象和感受，两人会面的表现和交流。 (2)由续写第二段首句“After the successful transplant, Vonchelle was recovering well.”可知，第二段可描写作者去看望Vonchelle恢复的情况，作者内心的体会和感悟。 4．形成文 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体　争抢满分作文 As she walked through the door of the meeting room, I walked up to her, my heart beating wildly. __________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Her pale but bright smile was infectious, and I couldn't help but feel a sense of admiration at the woman before me. Here was the person who had been waiting eight long years for a kidney, and now because of my decision to donate, she had a chance at a new life. We hugged tightly, tears streaming down both our faces as we exchanged words of gratitude and hope. In that moment, I knew I had made the right decision, and that the bond between us would be unbreakable. After the successful transplant, Vonchelle was recovering well. ___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I visited her in the hospital, watching as she slowly regained her strength and vitality. Her daughters were by her side, holding her hand and smiling through their tears. As I looked at them, I felt a sense of fulfillment that I had never experienced before. In giving Vonchelle the gift of life, I had also given myself a gift—the knowledge that even in the darkest of times, there is always hope, always a chance for something beautiful to emerge. And as I left the hospital that day, I knew that the experience would stay with me forever, a reminder of the power of human connection and the beauty of selfless giving. 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$