内容正文:
启航
英语
Week 3
邀请信& 慈善助人类读后续写
Thursday——新作文基本功提高微技能3
运用非谓语动词 提升应用文写作表达
众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味,句子与句子之间的关系显得松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不仅句型多样,句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑,言简意明。
一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句
写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换,使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用以下三步。
第一步:写出两个简单句。
①Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas.
②It led to a slower growth.
第二步:让句①作主句,用非谓语动词改写句②。
第三步:让句②作结果状语,由于其动词lead to与主语it之间为主谓关系,故用现在分词短语作结果状语。
Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.
例1 I hear that you are recruiting some volunteers to welcome the coming foreign students.I am gladly writing to apply for this job.
→Hearing that you are recruiting some volunteers to welcome the coming foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.
例2 Then there will be various fantastic performances and they will be played by talented students.
→Then there will be various fantastic performances to be played by talented students.
二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句
用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些,因为需转换的一般是从句部分,这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词,再把握好时态和语态即可,所以只需以下两步。
第一步:写出一个复合句。
Since you have realised that your time is limited, you'll have to study for your goals without hesitation.
第二步:把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语动词,realise与you之间为主谓关系,且表示完成,故用现在分词的完成时作状语。
Having realised that your time is limited, you'll have to study for your goals without hesitation.
例1 If it is carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress.
→Carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress.
例2 As I have been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.
→Having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.
三、写作中非谓语动词的常用句型
1.remain to be done有待于被……
Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work.我们的教育工作中还有许多问题要解决,还有许多事情要去做。
2.连词when/while/once/unless/although...+doing/done
When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
面对困难和失败时,我必须战胜它们。
When searching for some information, we can operate by touching the screen.
当查找一些信息时,我们可以通过触摸屏来操作。
3.compared with/to...与……比较
Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
与逃逸的司机相比,我为自己所做之事感到自豪。
4.be said/reported/considered...to do...据说/报道/认为……
A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone out of control on a highway south of the city.
据报道,一辆满载乘客的公共汽车在城南的一条公路上失去了控制。
5.with+宾语+宾语补足语
Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.
每位赛跑者都尽最大努力来完成此次任务,他们的同班同学在途中给他们提供必要的帮助和鼓励。
In the picture, a boy in worn clothes sits beside a wooden table with a pile of bamboo books on it.
在画中,一个穿着破旧衣服的男孩坐在木桌旁边,桌上有一堆竹简。
谢谢观看
Thank you for watching
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