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Week 2
申请信& 关爱动物类读后续写
启航
英语
Saturday——读后续写话题训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I found the kitten sitting on the front step of our house.He was black and white and looked quite weak.Where did he come from? I noticed he had no collar around his neck.Who would be so irresponsible?
I went inside and opened a can of fish.After I placed the can in the doorway, the kitten hungrily lapped it up and then walked right inside the house.Later, after jumping onto a bunch of pillows on the couch, he began to groom his hair.
I bet his last owners didn't love him at all! I thought.If someone can't take care of their kitten, they deserve to lose him! Our family never owned pets, but I had always wanted one.It's a good thing I found that kitten and took him in.Thank goodness he found me!
The kitten kept meowing quite a lot.And then, it started trying to bite my hand.
“Hey, kitten! I'm not food!” I said.But the kitten tried again to bite my finger.I knew I had to get him some proper cat food.“You stay put, kitten!” I told him.“I'm going to get you food!” Then I grabbed my keys and headed out to the pet store nearest to our house.
On my way to the store, I spotted a sign on the telephone pole:
LOST KITTEN—Black and White, very friendly.If you find him, please call us.
“If you were so worried about your kitten,” I thought, “maybe you should have taken better care of him!”
When I walked into the pet store, I found that the place was packed with kids handing out flyers about the same cat to customers inside.In the back of the store, I saw a boy under 10 years old, crying in his wheelchair.“I can't believe I lost my kitten!” he said to his parents.
注意 1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
I looked at the flyers on the wall carefully this time—it was definitely the cat I had back at home!___________________________________________
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The little boy began to cry with laughter.__________________________
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[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者捡到了一只猫,本来想自己收养,结果在去宠物店的路上发现了寻猫启事。作者在宠物店发现了猫的主人是一个坐轮椅的男孩,经过一番内心挣扎,作者最后还是把猫还给了男孩。
[段落续写] ①由续写第一段首句内容“这次我仔细看了墙上的传单——它绝对是在我家里的那只猫!”可知,第一段可描写作者纠结要不要把猫还给男孩以及决定把猫还给男孩。②由续写第二段首句内容“小男孩笑着哭了起来。”可知,第二段可描写男孩解释为什么弄丢了猫,以及猫和男孩最终团聚。
[范文]
I looked at the flyers on the wall carefully this time—it was definitely the cat I had back at home!So much did I love the cat that I really wanted to keep it myself. I tried to justify why I should keep the kitten by convincing myself the owners deserved to lose him. However, what I witnessed didn't allow me to do so. I approached the little boy in the wheelchair. He blew his nose and looked up at me. “I have your kitten,” I told him. “I'm sorry. I just found him and fed him. He's at my house.”
The little boy began to cry with laughter.He held his arms out and gave me a big hug. “Thank you so much! I was just about to put a new collar on him when he ran out of the door. I couldn't chase him because of my legs...” I then ran home to get the kitten and reunited the owner and his pet finally. Despite not keeping the kitten, I felt relieved and delighted seeing their reunion.
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高分词汇:①justify v.对……做出解释;为……辩解 ②convince v.说服 ③give sb.a hug拥抱 ④chase v.追逐,追赶 ⑤deserve v.值得;应受
高分句型:(句型1)I tried to justify why I should keep the kitten by convincing myself the owners deserved to lose him.(运用了why引导的宾语从句)
(句型2)I was just about to put a new collar on him when he ran out of the door.(运用了be about to do sth....when句型)
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