内容正文:
Week 1
建议信& 学校生活类读后续写
启航
英语
Monday——如何写好建议信
建议信是考试中常见的一种形式。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,因此一定要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。它是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议。
假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.表达祝愿。
注意 1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming
Step One 审题谋篇
体裁 应用文 时态 一般将来时为主
主题 建议信 人称 以第一人称为主
结构 第一段:引出话题,说明写信目的;第二段:提出具体建议并说明理由;第三段:希望对方接受建议
Step Two 词汇运用
1.更好地掌握____________________________
2.与……分享______________
3.主题_________
4.实用的_____________
5.建议______________
6.参考_____________
7.指导____________
have a better command of
share with
topic
practical
suggestion
reference
guidance
8.一定做成某事_______________________
9.明智的,可取的_____________
10.逼真的_____________
11.有希望地_____________
be bound to do sth.
advisable
authentic
hopefully
Step Three 句式表达
1.完成句子
(1)我知道你想更好地掌握中文。
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(2)我写信给你一些实用的建议,仅供你参考。
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(3)有了适当的指导和足够的练习,你一定能学好汉语。
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I have known that you would like to have a better command of Chinese.
I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well.
(4)首先,建议你定期观看一些汉语学习节目。
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(5)这将使你接触到真实的学习氛围,并帮助你更好地了解中国文化。
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(6)此外,你最好交一些中国朋友,并尽可能多地与他们交流。
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To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs.
This will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Besides, you'd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible.
(7)通过在现实生活中的频繁交流,你最终会提高汉语口语,并感到更加自信。
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(8)希望我上面的建议能有所帮助。
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(9)祝你成功。
_______________________
With frequent communication in real life, you'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.
I hope that my tips above can be of some help.
I wish you success.
2.句式升级
(1)用现在分词作状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。
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(2)用非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(4)和句子(5)。
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Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.
(3)用by doing形式升级句子(7)。
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(4)用副词位于句首升级句子(8)。
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You'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident by practicing frequent communication in real life.
Hopefully, my tips above can be of some help.
Step Four 连句成篇
[范文]
Dear David,
Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I'm writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere
and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, you'd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. You'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident by practicing frequent communication in real life.
Hopefully, my tips above can be of some help. I wish you success.
Yours,
Li Ming
谢谢观看
Thank you for watching
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