18 Week 3 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能3（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

启航 英语 Week 3 人物介绍类应用文写作& 挑战自我类读后续写 Thursday——新作文基本功提高微技能3 用好亮点词汇　提高应用文写作档次 一份高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！ 一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法 1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。 ①The students chosen from every class took part in the competition. →The students selected from every class took part in the competition. ②Obviously, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. →Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. ③I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems. →I am more than delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems. ④A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will take part. →A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate. 2．更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 ①There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as different kinds of animals. →There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals. ②The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. →The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. 3．单词与短语巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。 ①Quite a few things caused the traffic problem. →Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem. ②We can look at this problem in many ways. →We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵) 4．用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇 ①Second, I am trying my best to get the important knowledge and skills concerning my position. →Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position. ②In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative effects on people and society. →In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. 二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇   普通词汇 亮点词汇 名词 chance opportunity choice alternative idea opinion people individuals result consequence effect influence 动词 have possess develop promote replace substitute bear put up with consider take into account understand make sense of   普通词汇 亮点词汇 形容词 enough adequate rich abundant difficult challenging proper appropriate important vital/significant interesting absorbing/appealing 副词 finally eventually hardly barely immediately in a flash nowadays currently 连词 so therefore and as well as ①We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us. →We'll try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us. ②Finally your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult. →Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult. 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$