内容正文:
启航
英语
Week 3
人物介绍类应用文写作&
挑战自我类读后续写
Wednesday——人物介绍类应用文写作跟踪训练
跟踪训练1◆人物介绍
在你成长的过程中,总有那么一个人,他或她对你的思想和行为产生过重大的影响。请写一篇短文给学校广播站投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.如何影响你。
注意 1.词数80个左右,文中不允许出现真实的人名;2.短文题目和开头已给出。
The person who influences me most
Many people do have a great influence on me,____________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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The person who influences me most
Many people do have a great influence on me, but I think no one can be compared with my mother. Her attitude towards life will never stop influencing my thoughts and actions.
She doesn't appear to be extraordinary in any way, but just works faithfully and devotedly; at the same time, she never puts her family aside. It is my mother who teaches me to be curious, kind, optimistic and persistent. Today, when I come across someone in need, I'm willing to give a helping hand within my ability. When I encounter difficulties in life, I always have a positive attitude and constantly seek for approaches to addressing them.
She is not only my mother, but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly.
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高分词汇:①be compared with与……相比 ②extraordinary adj.异乎寻常的;卓越的 ③faithfully adv.忠实地 ④devotedly adv.全心全意地;专心地 ⑤persistent adj.坚持不懈的 ⑥encounter vt.遇到
高分句型:(句型1)It is my mother who teaches me to be curious, kind, optimistic and persistent.(强调句的运用)
(句型2)Today, when I come across someone in need, I'm willing to give a helping hand within my ability.(时间状语从句的运用)
跟踪训练2◆人物介绍
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的中国历史人物”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.该人物及其主要贡献简介;2.该人物对你的影响。
注意 1.词数80个左右;2.短文题目已为你写好。
My favorite figure in Chinese history
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[范文]
My favorite figure in Chinese history
When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Confucius.
As is known to all, he is one of the greatest thinkers and educators in China. He established an educational system, which made an enormous impact on the development of traditional Chinese culture. Furthermore, he made many wise sayings in ancient China that helped many people learn about nature, the world, and the human behavior. To develop friendships with other countries and popularize the Chinese culture, we have set up Confucius Institutes all over the world in recent years.
In fact, his thoughts always inspire me to pursue knowledge and I'd like to be a teacher like him one day.
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高分词汇:①educator n.教师;教育家 ②educational system 教育制度 ③make an enormous impact on 对……产生巨大的影响 ④furthermore adv.此外;而且 ⑤popularize vt.使受欢迎;普及 ⑥set up 建立;设立;创立 ⑦pursue vt.继续;追求
高分句型:(句型1)When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Confucius.(运用了时间状语从句)
(句型2)He established an educational system, which made an enormous impact on the development of traditional Chinese culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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