内容正文:
启航
英语
Week 3
人物介绍类应用文写作&
挑战自我类读后续写
Monday——如何写好人物介绍类应用文写作
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。
注意 1.词数80个左右;2.题目已为你写好。
Xu Xiake
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Step One 审题谋篇
体裁 说明文 时态 一般过去时和一般现在时
话题 人物描写 人称 以第三人称为主
结构 第一段:基本信息;第二段:主要事迹;第三段:感想
Step Two 词汇运用
1.步行___________
2.探索,考察___________
3.功绩,成就_______________
4.著作_______________
5.自然现象_____________________
6.地理特征________________________
7.发展_______________
8.旅游业_______________________
9.亲自______________
on foot
explore
achievement
masterpiece
natural phenomena
geographical feature
development
travelling industry
in person
Step Three 句式表达
1.完成句子
(1)徐霞客是明代著名的地理学家、旅行家和文学家。
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(2)徐经常徒步旅行,探索大自然。
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(3)他的成就之一是发现了金沙江的源头。
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Xu Xiake was a famous geographer, traveller and writer in the Ming Dynasty.
Xu travelled a lot mainly on foot to explore nature.
One of his achievements was that he discovered the source of the Jinsha River.
(4)他证明了金沙江就是长江的源头。
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(5)他的代表作《徐霞客游记》展示了许多自然现象和地理特征。
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(6)这本书对世界各地的地理学家有很大的帮助。
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He proved Jinsha River was the source of the Yangtze River.
His masterpiece Xu Xiake's Travels shows many natural phenomena and geographical features.
This book is of great help to the geographers around the world.
(7)这本书也是文学上的一大宝藏。
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(8)此外,他的探索精神激发了人们对自然的兴趣。
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(9)这促进了旅游业的发展。
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This book is also a great treasure in literature.
Besides, his spirit of exploration has aroused people's interest in nature.
This promotes the development of travelling industry.
(10)我从徐霞客身上学到了一些东西。
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(11)无论做什么事情,都要亲自去做,勇敢地探索未知。
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I have learned something from Xu Xiake.
Whenever we do things we should do them in person and explore the unknown bravely.
2.句式升级
(1)用非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。
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(2)用not only ...but also句式合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。
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One of his achievements was that he discovered the source of the Jinsha River, which he proved was the source of the Yangtze River.
This book is not only of great help to the geographers around the world but also a great treasure in literature.
(3)用现在分词作结果状语合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。
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(4)用宾语从句合并上题中的句子(10)和句子(11)。
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Besides, his spirit of exploration has aroused people's interest in nature, promoting the development of travelling industry.
I have learned from Xu Xiake that whenever we do things we should do them in person and explore the unknown bravely.
Step Four 连句成篇
[范文]
Xu Xiake
Xu Xiake was a famous geographer, traveller and writer in the Ming Dynasty. Xu travelled a lot mainly on foot to explore nature. One of his achievements was that he discovered the source of the Jinsha River, which he proved was the source of the Yangtze River.
His masterpiece Xu Xiake's Travels shows many natural phenomena and geographical features. This book is not only of great help to the geographers around the world but also a great treasure in literature. Besides, his spirit of exploration has aroused people's interest in nature, promoting the development of travelling industry.
I have learned from Xu Xiake that whenever we do things we should do them in person and explore the unknown bravely.
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