13 Week 2 Saturday 读后续写话题训练（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

启航 英语 Week 2 传统文化类应用文写作& 关爱动物类读后续写 Saturday——读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Dora is a seven-year-old girl.One day, when she visited her friend Alice, she saw a beautiful bird in a cage on the balcony of the house.Alice told her it was her new pet.“How beautiful it is！” said Dora.“I also want to have such a bird as my pet.” That day when Dora returned home, she told her mother about Alice's bird.Then she asked, “Mom, can I also get a bird？” “Of course, you can，” said her mother.“But you need to wait because I've no time to visit a pet store these days.” Dora agreed.One day, when Dora was back home from school, she saw a cage in the living room.In the cage was a beautiful blue bird.Her mother was standing next to the cage, smiling.“Oh, a bird！” Dora shouted happily.She ran to it and looked at it happily.“It's a birthday gift for you，” said her mother. “Thank you, Mom.I love it so much！” said Dora excitedly. The following day, Dora invited her friends to come over to see her bird.All of her friends said it was a really beautiful bird and Dora was very glad to hear that.She and her friends played with the bird for a long time that day.Her friends all wished they could have such a bird as their pet. Sadly, a few weeks later, Dora became sick.The doctor told her parents that she got the flu and had to stay at home.In order not to make her friends sick, her parents asked her friends not to come to play with her.Dora felt very sad.How she wished her friends would come and visit her! But she knew her parents were right.She'd better stay alone.Since Dora had no one to play with, she could only play with her bird.However, she felt that her bird didn't seem to be happy either. 注意　1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dora watched her bird in silence. ______________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When her mother came inside, Dora told her mother about her decision. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [语篇解读]　本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了七岁女孩Dora收到了一只鸟作为生日礼物，她邀请朋友来看这只鸟，所有的朋友都说很漂亮，Dora非常开心，不幸的是，几周后Dora生病了，为了不传染给朋友，父母要求她在家待着，Dora感到很难过，只能和小鸟玩，但她发现小鸟似乎也不快乐。 [段落续写]　①由第一段首句内容“Dora默默地看着她的小鸟。”可知，第一段可描写Dora看到鸟玩耍的场景意识到小鸟也需要自由。②由第二段首句内容“妈妈进来后，Dora把自己的决定告诉了妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写Dora将小鸟放生及再次看到树上的小鸟时的感悟。 [范文] Dora watched her bird in silence. She found her bird kept looking out of the window. In the trees outside, many birds were playing gladly. She thought that perhaps her bird didn't like to be kept in the cage at all. Just as she missed staying with her friends, it also wanted to go out to play like other birds. But before she got sick, she didn't think a lot about her bird. Now Dora realized she shouldn't selfishly take away its freedom for her own enjoyment. When her mother came inside, Dora told her mother about her decision. She said, “Mom, can you set my bird free？” Her mother was surprised and asked why. “I'm sure it also wants friends，” said Dora. Her mother agreed. She opened the cage and the bird cheerfully flew out of the window and disappeared soon. A few days later, Dora could play with her friends again. How excited she was! And when she looked out at the birds in the trees, she knew her bird must be very happy at that moment. —————————— 高分亮点 —————————— 高分词汇：①get sick生病　②gladly adv.高兴地　③selfishly adv.自私地　④freedom n．(状态)自由，自主　⑤cheerfully adv.高高兴兴地　⑥disappear v．消失，不见 高分句型：(句型1)She thought that perhaps her bird didn't like to be kept in the cage at all.(由连接词that引导的宾语从句) (句型2)And when she looked out at the birds in the trees, she knew her bird must be very happy at that moment.(由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句) 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$