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启航 英语 Week 2 传统文化类应用文写作& 关爱动物类读后续写 Friday——读后续写示例指导2 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2023·1月浙江卷)I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still, she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move.I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment, all were speechless.Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意　1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. _______________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ____________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 本文为记叙文，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一所房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了。当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自然”中的“人与环境、人与动植物”，写作要用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图   维度 原文 文意 阅读任务 点题 (事件) 1.I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington. 2．She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. 1.我被邀请去华盛顿西部一个老朋友的农场野餐。 2．我一把她抱起来，她就停止了挣扎。   维度 原文 文意 阅读任务 进程 (发展) 1.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. 2．When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away. 3．I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. 4．She turned from person to person until she came to me. 1.我把一块布塞进洞里，把她带到外面，在我身后安全地关上了门。 2．当我张开手时，那只鸟并没有飞走。 3．我停了下来，她很快就起飞了，但并没有立即飞走。 4．她从一个人转向另一个人，直到她来找我。   维度 原文 文意 阅读任务 冲突 (矛盾点) I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. 我正站在汽车旁边，这时一只蜂鸟飞到我们队伍的中心，开始盘旋。 评议 (议论) Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty？ 也许她在窗户上挣扎了太久了，太累了？还是太渴了？   维度 原文 文意 阅读任务 结局 (结果) 结局1(第1段)： 我想再去看看那只蜂鸟，了解它现在过的如何。 结局2(第2段)： 蜂鸟和我道别，表达对我感激。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：可怜并拯救绝境的蜂鸟——蜂鸟迟迟不愿离去——蜂鸟和我告别——我记挂蜂鸟——蜂鸟对我的感激——我的感想 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体　争抢满分作文 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. _____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider's web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn't help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive？ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ______________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A flash of movement caught my attention.I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me; its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the harmonious memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$