07 Week 1 Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练（课件PPT）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 1 学校生活类应用文写作& 学校生活类读后续写 启航 英语 Sunday——周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假如你是李华，你校刚刚举办了2024新年晚会，请给你的英国朋友Jack写一封信， 讲述这段美好时光。内容包括：1.问候Jack；2.介绍新年晚会；3.你的感受。 注意 1.词数80个左右；格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi, Jack， _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [范文] Hi，Jack， How is everything going? I am writing to tell you something about the 2024 New Year Party held in the No. 2 Lecture Hall of our school on January 22nd. There were a variety of performances, including mine. I showed my talents in singing a Chinese song and reciting a Tang poem. I had had enough time to prepare for it, so that I won the first prize among so many brilliant performers. I felt so proud of the wonderful party and the excellent shows we made. Not only did we celebrate our traditional festival, but also we enjoyed ourselves. Yours， Li Hua —————————— 高分亮点 —————————— 高分词汇：①a variety of 许多　②performance n．表演　③talent n．天赋，才能　④brilliant adj.巧妙的；使人印象深的　⑤performer n．演奏者；演员　⑥traditional adj.传统的，习俗的 高分句型：(句型1)I am writing to tell you something about the 2024 New Year Party held in the No.2 Lecture Hall of our school on January 22nd.(held为过去分词作后置定语) (句型2)I had had enough time to prepare for it, so that I won the first prize among so many brilliant performers.(运用了so that引导的结果状语从句) (句型3)Not only did we celebrate our traditional festival, but also we enjoyed ourselves.(运用了部分倒装)　 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As I was walking home from school, I came across a wallet lying on the path.I picked it up, checking on its contents.Five $20 notes inside! Wow, that's a big money! I couldn't believe my eyes.I looked around.No one in sight, I quickly put the wallet into my schoolbag and rushed home. My mum was busy in the kitchen.I secretly slid into my room, carefully placed the wallet into my treasure box and locked it away.All that night, I was lost in thought and kept thinking about the money inside, twisting and turning.The thought of buying myself a bike with the 100 dollars flashed across my mind.I had wanted a bike for a long time, but each time my mom always said we couldn't afford one.But how could I explain to my mum where I got the money? Suddenly I remembered an upcoming school science competition would offer a $100 prize to the winner.“Why couldn't I tell my mum that I have won the prize？” A perfect excuse indeed! I got out of bed and took out the wallet from the treasure box again.This time I noticed there was an old photo inside besides the money.The woman in the photo looked like Mara, my science teacher! I was sleepless all night to wait for the sunrise. 注意 1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The early morning, I put the wallet back to my schoolbag and hurried to school._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Soon, the day of science competition came._________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [语篇解读]　本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在回家的路上发现了一个装满钱的钱包。这个钱包是他的科学老师的。他幻想着用这些钱来谋取私利，但最终还是坦白了并归还了钱包，在这个过程中，他学到了诚实和正直的宝贵一课。 [段落续写]　①由第一段首句内容“一大早，我把钱包放回书包，匆匆赶往学校。”可知，第一段可描写作者归还钱包的尴尬场面以及老师对他的感谢。②由第二段首句内容“很快，科学竞赛的日子来了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在科学竞赛中明白诚实的道理，以及给妈妈带来的骄傲。 [范文] The early morning, I put the wallet back to my schoolbag and hurried to school. I approached my science teacher before the competition, clutching the wallet tightly, and waited for the right moment. As soon as I saw her alone, I rushed forward. “Mara，” I stammered awkwardly, “I found this wallet on my way home and I think it might be yours. I saw your picture inside.” Her eyes widened with surprise. Although she was a bit taken aback, she thanked me profusely and told me it was her mother's old photo in the wallet, which was very important to her. I apologized for not telling her sooner and she smiled, saying she was proud of me. Soon, the day of science competition came. On the day of the competition, I did my best and even though I didn't win, I felt like a winner. My mom was proud of me, not because I had brought home a prize, but because of my honesty. I realized it's not the possessions we have, but our actions that define us. And from that day on, I promised myself that I would always choose to do the right thing, even when no one was watching. —————————— 高分亮点 —————————— 高分词汇：①approach v．接近　②clutch tightly紧紧地抓住　③thank profusely 不胜感激　④with surprise 惊讶　⑤stammer v．结巴地说出　⑥awkwardly adv.笨拙地；尴尬地 高分句型：(句型1)Although she was a bit taken aback, she thanked me profusely and told me it was her mother's old photo in the wallet, which was very important to her.(由连词although引导让步状语从句以及which引导非限制性定语从句) (句型2)And from that day on, I promised myself that I would always choose to do the right thing, even when no one was watching.(由that引导宾语从句) 谢谢观看 Thank you for watching $$