内容正文:
How to Write A Report
板书
Watch a video and answer the following questions:
1. What are these creatures made from?
2. What is the cause of this phenomenon?
Lead-in
太长了,一分半钟
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What are these creatures made from?
Lead-in
tyre(轮胎)
flip-flops
buble wrap
plastic bags
plastic bottle
What is the result of these stuff?
pollution
一开始这个问题学生没有方向
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当今,我们周围的空气环境变得越来越差,为了加强学生们的环保意识,学校打算开展以“为广州空气污染问题出谋献策”为主题的征文活动,警示人们要保护环境。请你写一篇报告,内容要点如下:
1. 写明空气污染的原因;
2. 建议采取什么措施;
3. 展望。
其他要求:注意使用本单元所学的语言表达和写作要点。
(参考课本文章结构Book P32)
1. STRUCTURE
Para.1 : introduction and analysis of the problem
Para.2 : measures to solve the problem
Para.3 : further expectation
2. TENSE: simple present tense and simple future tense
3. PERSON PRONOUN: the first person pronoun
板书,
What is the current situation of air pollution in Guangzhou?
随着经济的发展,广州这几年经历了严重的空气污染。
With the development of economy, Guangzhou has experienced severe air pollution for several years.
这几年如何处理空气污染是广州的巨大挑战。
It is a serious challenge for Guangzhou to deal with air pollution these years.
How to deal with air pollution is a serious challenge to Guangzhou these years.
Introduction
一起翻译
What do you think are the factors(因素) of air pollution in Guangzhou?
massive car emission
exhaust gas from factories
burning household waste
板书
Original sentence 1:
Previously, water quality in the Li River had suffered greatly from an increasing volume of tourists, many of whom frequently threw garbage into the river. (Book P32)
Stucture 1:
suffered from , who / which .
an increasing volume of 越来越多的...
Imitative writing 1:
越来越多私家车排放尾气,严重影响了广州的空气质量。
The air quality in Guangzhou suffered greatly from an increasing volume of private cars, which released massive car emission.
Imitative Writing---Cause and Effect
一起回答,三十秒思考,越来越多
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Original sentence2:
Water pollution levels increased, with more household and commercial waste ending up in the river.(Book P32)
Stucture2: pollution levels increased, with +O+OC
Imitative writing2:
工厂直接排放废气到大气中导致空气污染加重。
Imitative Writing---Cause and Effect
Air pollution level increased, with factories directly emiting exhaust gas into the air.
请同学翻译
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Original sentence 3:
These chemicals led to severe water quality issues, causing a decrease in the number of fish species.(Book P32)
Structure 3: led to severe , causing .
Imitative writing3 :
生活垃圾的焚烧带来了空气污染,导致有害气体的增加。
Burning household waste led to air quality issues, causing an increase in the harmful gas.
Imitative Writing---Cause and Effect
12分钟
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What measures can we take to solve this problem?
Please write the body part with two-three points in your own words.
use reusable bags
raise awareness of protecting environment
高级词汇
非谓语动词
倒装句式
强调句
名从、定从、状从
with复合结构
被动语态
take sustainable transportation
recycle household waste
implement regulations
欣赏句子,问题在哪,展示中等的让高等学生去改,上台改语病或者高级句子,两篇 ,时间7min,5min,图片,讨论措施,exchange draft with deskmate,
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To tackle the problem, the local authorities should take urgent steps. Not only should the government carry out strict regulations, but also fine industrial factories for fuel abuse. Besides, it is better to promote the public transportation using new clean energy, which reduces the carbon footprint. Most importantly, it is the government’s measures that call on people to get involved in reducing the source of air pollution, such as using reusable bags or recycling household waste.
Para.2 Solutions
非谓语表目的
高级词汇
倒装
非谓语
定从
强调句
学生朗读
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Let’s spare no effort to make contributions to solving the air pollution problem in our hometown!
让我们不遗余力地为解决我们家乡的空气污染问题做出贡献吧!
If only everyone would make contributions to reducing the air pollution problem in our hometown!
如果每个人都能为减少我们家乡的空气污染问题做出贡献就好了!
With these measures, it is believed that the blue sky in Guangzhou will be preserved for generations to enjoy.
有了这些措施,相信广州的蓝天将得到保护并世代相传。
Para.3 Further expectation
可读?
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With the development of economy, Guangzhou has suffered so much pain for several years, with cars and factories directly emiting pollutants into the air, causing severe air pollution.
To tackle the problem, the local authorities should take urgent steps. Not only should the government carry out strict regulations, but also fine industrial factories for fuel abuses. Besides, it is better to promote the public transportation using new clean energy, which reduce the carbon footprint. Most importantly, it is the government’s measures that call on people to get involved in reducing the source of air pollution, such as using reusable bags or recycling household waste.
With these measures, it is believed that the blue sky in Guangzhou will be preserved for generations to enjoy.
Sample
太长了?原因要不只写两点?原因with factories and car, which 从句,小结一下,今天学了什么,剩一分钟学生小结,胜三分
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你是肇庆龙外的一名小记者,为了美化环境,肇庆龙外举办了环保宣传活动,请就此写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 班级垃圾的现状和不良影响
2. 建议采取的措施
3. 提出倡议
Homework
太长了?原因要不只写两点?原因with factories and car, which 从句,小结一下,今天学了什么,剩一分钟学生小结,胜三分
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