选择性必修第一册Unit 3 Fascinating parks (说明文）【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019）

Unit 3 Fascinating Parks (说明文）（人教版2019） Write an introduction to a park（说明文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 说明文 2021年天津卷 “主题公园”属于课程标准中“人与自然”的主题语境。本单元涉及几个主题公园情况介绍的话题；主题公园将游乐与某种主题结合，是集娱乐活动、休闲要素和服务接待于一体的旅游目的地。我们要关注主题公园发展，同时要保护好自然环境。 Writing：An opinion essay about changes caused by technology：to express ideas of the changes that could be caused by advances in technology and learn to write an essay on your point of view. （2021年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津，我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： (1) 该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)； (2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)； (3)你对该地方的印象和感受。 地点介绍类或旅游景点类的作文属于说明文，写此类文章时应注意以下几点： 1．写作内容通常包括地理位置、面积、人口、气候特征、历史、特产等。也可适当融入人文风貌，简单介绍该地区的民间风俗及人们的生活方式等，但要抓住该地区的主要特征，描写详略得当； 2．写作时要遵循一定的顺序。描写时找准切入点，再由这个点展开(时间或空间顺序)； 3．时态常用一般现在时，人称常用第三人称； 4．注意行文的连贯性，句子之间、段落之间要衔接紧密，过渡自然，可用一些常用关联词或词组来体现这种逻辑性。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 概要介绍公园名字和特征 ①be located/situated in，lie in，in the north of/to the east of ②be just like，look like，as beautiful as a flower，be compared to ③be famous/well­known as/for 主体 介绍公园的景点和活动 ①It covers an area of about ...square kilometers. ②Its area is ...square kilometers. ③It has a population of ... ④Its population is ... ⑤The average temperature is ... ⑥The hottest months are ... ⑦⑨It has many places of interest，such as ... ⑧They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad ... 结尾 表达自己看法或者邀请读者参观 ①It's a wonderful place with ... ②It really deserves the name of ... than advantages. 介绍类说明文要求语言准确，按照被说明事物的实际情况，运用生动形象的词句，恰如其分地进行介绍。写好一篇说明文，总体需要做到以下几点： 1．选择适当的说明材料与内容； 2．确定恰当的表达方式； 3．抓住事物自身的特点； 4．安排好事物的说明顺序； 5．采用恰当的说明方法。 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．____________________________　　　　　　　 主题公园 2．____________________________ 魔力世界 3．____________________________ 迷人的 4．____________________________ 各种各样的 5．____________________________ 表演 6．____________________________ 美味的 7．____________________________ n. 娱乐 8．____________________________ 一个必看的景点 9. ____________________________因为……而出名 10．____________________________ 结合 11.____________________________ 坐落在 12.____________________________ 在北边较远的地方 13.____________________________ 在美国的西南部 14.____________________________ 面积有... 15.____________________________ 面积有… 16.____________________________ 比…大四/五/六/倍 17.____________________________ 比…大俩/三/四/五倍 18.____________________________ 这样一个美丽狂野的地方 19.____________________________ 浩瀚和令人惊叹的美景 20. ____________________________ 各种各样的 21.____________________________ 作为……而出 22.____________________________吸引 21.____________________________对……熟悉 【句式积累】: 1．介绍公园功能或特点 ①The theme of the park is ... ②You will enjoy doing/seeing ... ③It is known/famous for ... ④It is home to ... 2．介绍公园地理位置 ①It is located/situated in the centre of ... ②It lies in/to the south/east of ... ③On the top of ...stands ... 3．介绍公园面积 ①It has/covers an area of ...square kilometers. ②...with an area of ...square kilometers. 4．介绍公园历史 ①It has a long history of ...years. ②...with a history of ...years. ③...has witnessed too much ...in history. ④...dates back to/dates from ... 5．介绍交通方式 ①You can reach the building/museum by ... ②You can get there a little more quickly by ... 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 Located in__________，__________ is one of the world's five famous __________. __________ mainly consists of __________ and their tops are ________,_so they are named “________”. The peaks are heavy with __________ all the year round and __________are surrounded with __________,_making it a famous__________. There are __________ now. There used to be at least __________.__________is not only famous for ______,_but also for __________,___________and__________. It's really a great tourist attraction to visit. 请根据下面的内容提示，以Mount Wutai为题介绍一下五台山。词数100左右。 1．五台山位于山西省东北部，是世界五大佛教圣地之一； 2．五台山主要包括五座山峰，峰顶平坦如台，故称五台； 3．山顶常年积雪，山坡绿树环绕，是一个避暑胜地； 4．寺庙曾经多达300多座，现有58座； 5．五台山不仅以其优美的自然风光闻名，而且还以古建筑、历史文物等著称。 参考词汇：佛教圣地Buddhist Holly Land；历史文物historical relics ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于介绍景点的写作，故要用第____人称来写；文章的主题内容是介绍景点五台山，时态用_____________。 第二步　确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　简要介绍__________________________； Para.2　详细介绍____________________________________________________； Para.3　总结上文：__________________________。 第三步　核心词汇 1．_____________位于 2．_____________由……组成 3．_____________全年 4．_____________环绕 5．_____________因……闻名 第四步　句式升级 1．五台山位于山西省东北部，是世界五大佛教圣地之一。 (一般表达) Mount Wutai is located in the northeast of Shanxi Province and it's one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holly Lands. (高级表达)_______________________________________Shanxi Province, Mount Wutai is one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holly Lands. 2.五台山不仅以其优美的自然风光闻名，而且还以古建筑、历史文物以及丰富的佛教文化著称。 (一般表达) Mount Wutai is famous for its fantastic natural landscape and it is also famous for its ancient buildings, historical relics and rich Buddhist culture. (高级表达) Mount Wutai is _____________famous for its fantastic natural landscape, _____________ for its ancient buildings, historical relics and rich Buddhist culture. [连句成篇] ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、语篇写作 1．（22-23高一·全国·单元测试）假设你是上海迪士尼乐园的志愿者，请根据以下信息给即将入园的孩子们介绍该园的一些情况和游园要求。 上海迪士尼乐园由6个主题公园组成、在园里可以参加活动、欣赏表演、观看烟火、购买礼物。游园时，要讲文明、不乱丢垃圾和保持整洁。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（24-25高二上·全国·课后作业）使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇 ①我呼吁所有学生为创建和谐社会做出贡献。②以下是我们在日常生活中应该做的事情。③禁止我们做任何对祖国有害的事情。④我们应该愉快地帮助处于困境中的人。⑤面对巨大压力, 我认为我们应该采取一种乐观的态度。⑥到了我们开始共同努力节省资源和保护自然环境的时候了。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二．书面表达 3．（22-23高二上·全国·单元测试）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Tom暑假期间要来中国旅游，来信请你为他推荐旅游目的地。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐旅行城市或景点； 2. 推荐的理由； 3. 注意事项。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（23-24高二上·云南昆明·期中）假设你是李华，某外企拟在你市建造一个主题公园，现就相关情况征求市民的意见，请你给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的看法，内容包括： 1.公园的主题； 2.最佳位置及理由； 3.游乐项目。 注意： 1.试数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. White, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 5．（23-24高二上·安徽淮北·阶段练习）以下是临沂王羲之公园（Wang Xizhi park）的简介，请根据以下内容要点写一篇100词左右的短文。 1. 王羲之公园位于临沂市东部； 2. 在王羲之公园中可以领略书圣（calligrapher）的早期生活以及欣赏王羲之的书法； 3. 可以在公园出口处的戏院里欣赏表演； 4. 在戏院后面的美食街（the Eating Street）可品尝各种各样的食品； 5. 入场费为30元，活动费全免。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   （2021年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： (1) 该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)； (2) 该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)； (3) 你对该地方的印象和感受。 注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2． （2021年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意并说明原因； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hu ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Fascinating Parks (说明文）（人教版2019） Write an introduction to a park（说明文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 说明文 2021年天津卷 “主题公园”属于课程标准中“人与自然”的主题语境。本单元涉及几个主题公园情况介绍的话题；主题公园将游乐与某种主题结合，是集娱乐活动、休闲要素和服务接待于一体的旅游目的地。我们要关注主题公园发展，同时要保护好自然环境。 Writing：An opinion essay about changes caused by technology：to express ideas of the changes that could be caused by advances in technology and learn to write an essay on your point of view. （2021年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津，我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： (1) 该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)； (2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)； (3)你对该地方的印象和感受。 地点介绍类或旅游景点类的作文属于说明文，写此类文章时应注意以下几点： 1．写作内容通常包括地理位置、面积、人口、气候特征、历史、特产等。也可适当融入人文风貌，简单介绍该地区的民间风俗及人们的生活方式等，但要抓住该地区的主要特征，描写详略得当； 2．写作时要遵循一定的顺序。描写时找准切入点，再由这个点展开(时间或空间顺序)； 3．时态常用一般现在时，人称常用第三人称； 4．注意行文的连贯性，句子之间、段落之间要衔接紧密，过渡自然，可用一些常用关联词或词组来体现这种逻辑性。 段落 内容 句子设计 开头 概要介绍公园名字和特征 ①be located/situated in，lie in，in the north of/to the east of ②be just like，look like，as beautiful as a flower，be compared to ③be famous/well­known as/for 主体 介绍公园的景点和活动 ①It covers an area of about ...square kilometers. ②Its area is ...square kilometers. ③It has a population of ... ④Its population is ... ⑤The average temperature is ... ⑥The hottest months are ... ⑦⑨It has many places of interest，such as ... ⑧They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad ... 结尾 表达自己看法或者邀请读者参观 ①It's a wonderful place with ... ②It really deserves the name of ... than advantages. 介绍类说明文要求语言准确，按照被说明事物的实际情况，运用生动形象的词句，恰如其分地进行介绍。写好一篇说明文，总体需要做到以下几点： 1．选择适当的说明材料与内容； 2．确定恰当的表达方式； 3．抓住事物自身的特点； 4．安排好事物的说明顺序； 5．采用恰当的说明方法。 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．theme parks　　　　　　　　　 主题公园 2．a magical world 魔力世界 3．fascinating adj. 迷人的 4．a variety of 各种各样的 5．performance n. 表演 6．tasty/delicious adj. 美味的 7．entertainment/amusement n. 娱乐 8．a must-see attraction 一个必看的景点 9. be famous/known/distinguished for 因为……而出名 10．be combined with 结合 11.lie in/be located /situated in … 坐落在 12.in the remote far north of… 在北边较远的地方 13.in southeastern USA 在美国的西南部 14.cover an area of 面积有... 15.Covering… square kilometers 面积有… 16.three/four/five/ times larger than 比…大四/五/六/倍 17.twice/three/four/five times the size of… 比…大俩/三/四/五倍 18.Such a beautiful and wild place 这样一个美丽狂野的地方 19.Vastness and breathtaking beauty 浩瀚和令人惊叹的美景 20. various kinds of/a variety of/varieties of Plenty of 各种各样的 21.be famous/known/distinguished as 作为……而出 22.appeal to 吸引 21.be familiar with 对……熟悉 【句式积累】: 1．介绍公园功能或特点 ①The theme of the park is ... ②You will enjoy doing/seeing ... ③It is known/famous for ... ④It is home to ... 2．介绍公园地理位置 ①It is located/situated in the centre of ... ②It lies in/to the south/east of ... ③On the top of ...stands ... 3．介绍公园面积 ①It has/covers an area of ...square kilometers. ②...with an area of ...square kilometers. 4．介绍公园历史 ①It has a long history of ...years. ②...with a history of ...years. ③...has witnessed too much ...in history. ④...dates back to/dates from ... 5．介绍交通方式 ①You can reach the building/museum by ... ②You can get there a little more quickly by ... 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 Located in__________，__________ is one of the world's five famous __________. __________ mainly consists of __________ and their tops are ________,_so they are named “________”. The peaks are heavy with __________ all the year round and __________are surrounded with __________,_making it a famous__________. There are __________ now. There used to be at least __________.__________is not only famous for ______,_but also for __________,___________and__________. It's really a great tourist attraction to visit. 请根据下面的内容提示，以Mount Wutai为题介绍一下五台山。词数100左右。 1．五台山位于山西省东北部，是世界五大佛教圣地之一； 2．五台山主要包括五座山峰，峰顶平坦如台，故称五台； 3．山顶常年积雪，山坡绿树环绕，是一个避暑胜地； 4．寺庙曾经多达300多座，现有58座； 5．五台山不仅以其优美的自然风光闻名，而且还以古建筑、历史文物等著称。 参考词汇：佛教圣地Buddhist Holly Land；历史文物historical relics ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于介绍景点的写作，故要用第三人称来写；文章的主题内容是介绍景点五台山，时态用一般现在时。 第二步　确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　简要介绍五台山的位置以及与佛教的关系； Para.2　详细介绍五台山名字的由来、地理、气候以及与佛教的渊源等； Para.3　总结上文：五台山值得一看。 第三步　核心词汇 1．be located in位于 2．consist of由……组成 3．all the year round全年 4．be surrounded with环绕 5．be famous for因……闻名 第四步　句式升级 1．五台山位于山西省东北部，是世界五大佛教圣地之一。 (一般表达) Mount Wutai is located in the northeast of Shanxi Province and it's one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holly Lands. (高级表达)Located in the northeast of Shanxi Province, Mount Wutai is one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holly Lands. 2.五台山不仅以其优美的自然风光闻名，而且还以古建筑、历史文物以及丰富的佛教文化著称。 (一般表达) Mount Wutai is famous for its fantastic natural landscape and it is also famous for its ancient buildings, historical relics and rich Buddhist culture. (高级表达) Mount Wutai is not only famous for its fantastic natural landscape, but_also for its ancient buildings, historical relics and rich Buddhist culture. [连句成篇] ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Mount Wutai Located in the northeast of Shanxi Province, Mount Wutai is one of the world's five famous Buddhist Holly Lands. Mount Wutai mainly consists of five peaks and their tops are as flat as a pancake, so they are named “Mount Wutai”. The peaks are heavy with snow all the year round and the slopes are surrounded with trees, making it a famous summer resort. There are fifty­eight temples now. There used to be at least three hundred temples there. Mount Wutai is not only famous for its fantastic natural landscape, but also for its ancient buildings, historical relics and rich Buddhist culture. It's really a great tourist attraction to visit. [亮点点评] 该范文结构完整，作者首先简要介绍了五台山的位置以及与佛教的关系；然后详细介绍了五台山名字的由来、地理、气候以及与佛教的渊源等； 最后写五台山值得一看。要点齐全，语言规范地道。句式上，作者巧妙地使用了非谓语动词、not only...but also等高级句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。总之，该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文，值得学习。 一、语篇写作 1．（22-23高一·全国·单元测试）假设你是上海迪士尼乐园的志愿者，请根据以下信息给即将入园的孩子们介绍该园的一些情况和游园要求。 上海迪士尼乐园由6个主题公园组成、在园里可以参加活动、欣赏表演、观看烟火、购买礼物。游园时，要讲文明、不乱丢垃圾和保持整洁。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Good morning, children! I am one of the volunteers from Shanghai Disneyland and please follow me to keep in mind something about the park and how to behave well. Shanghai Disneyland is made up of six theme parks. It is a wonderful world for children like you. You can join in different kinds of activities such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays, watching fireworks or buying nice presents in the shopping area. However, it is also important to be a well-behaved child in the park. Littering is not allowed and the park requires everybody to keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it is impolite to shout loudly in public. The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以上海迪士尼乐园志愿者的身份，根据给定的材料内容向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。 【详解】1.词汇积累 牢记：keep in mind→ bear in mind 由……组成：be made up of →be composed of 购买：buy→ purchase 大声讲话：shout loudly→ speak in a loud voice 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Shanghai Disneyland is made up of six theme parks. It is a wonderful world for children like you . 拓展句：Made up of six theme parks, Shanghai Disneyland is a wonderful world for children like you . 主动句变为被动句 原句：The park requires everybody to keep the park clean. 拓展句：Everybody is required to keep the park clean. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You can join in different kinds of activities such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays, watching fireworks or buying nice presents in the shopping area.（运用了动名词作宾语） 【高分句型2】Moreover, it is impolite to shout loudly in public.（使用了形式主语） 2．（24-25高二上·全国·课后作业）使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇 ①我呼吁所有学生为创建和谐社会做出贡献。②以下是我们在日常生活中应该做的事情。③禁止我们做任何对祖国有害的事情。④我们应该愉快地帮助处于困境中的人。⑤面对巨大压力, 我认为我们应该采取一种乐观的态度。⑥到了我们开始共同努力节省资源和保护自然环境的时候了。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I make an appeal to all the students to make contributions to building a harmonious society. Here is what we should do in our daily routine. To begin with, we are banned from doing whatever is bad for our motherland. What’s more, we are supposed to help those in need in amusement. In the face of great pressure, I think we should adopt an optimistic attitude. Last but not least, it’s high time for us to set out to work together to save energy and protect our natural environment. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书，呼吁所有学生为创建和谐社会做出贡献。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：to begin with→first of all 禁止：ban→prohibit 此外：What’s more→in addition 积极的：optimistic→positive 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：What’s more, we are supposed to help those in need in amusement. 拓展句：What’s more, we are supposed to help those who are in need of help in amusement. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In the face of great pressure, I think we should adopt an optimistic attitude.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Last but not least, it’s high time for us to set out to work together to save energy and protect our natural environment.（运用了固定句型it’s high time…和不定式作目的状语） 二．书面表达 3．（22-23高二上·全国·单元测试）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Tom暑假期间要来中国旅游，来信请你为他推荐旅游目的地。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐旅行城市或景点； 2. 推荐的理由； 3. 注意事项。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Tom, I’m happy to receive your letter and know that you’re coming to China. I’m writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome. I’d like to tell you something about some places of interest in China. Personally, one of the best is the Great Wall. With a history of over 2,000 years, it runs like a huge dragon across northern China, which now is a world-famous tourist attraction. If you come to visit the Great Wall, you’d better avoid weekends or holidays when it is too crowded with tourists, so that you can enjoy its beauty more peacefully. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于信函类应用文写作，要求考生写一封推荐信，推荐旅行城市或景点，并陈述推荐的理由，还需告知注意事项。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 收到你的来信：receive your letter→hear from you 名胜古迹：places of interest→tourist attractions 就我个人而言：personally→as far as I’m concerned 平静地：peacefully→in peace 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m happy to receive your letter and know that you’re coming to China. 拓展句：I’m happy to receive your letter, knowing that you’re coming to China. 【点睛】【高分句型1】With a history of over 2,000 years, it runs like a huge dragon across northern China, which now is a world-famous tourist attraction.(使用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】If you come to visit the Great Wall, you’d better avoid weekends or holidays when it is too crowded with tourists, so that you can enjoy its beauty more peacefully.(使用了If引导条件状语从句、when引导定语从句和so that引导目的状语从句) 4．（23-24高二上·云南昆明·期中）假设你是李华，某外企拟在你市建造一个主题公园，现就相关情况征求市民的意见，请你给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的看法，内容包括： 1.公园的主题； 2.最佳位置及理由； 3.游乐项目。 注意： 1.试数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. White, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. White, I’m glad to hear that a theme park will be built in our city. I’d like to give my opinions about it. I would expect it to be a water park where we can see the interesting mysteries of the underwater world and do various exciting water activities. Then I suggest locating it in the west of the city, close to both the subway station and train station for convenient access. Moreover, there should also be relaxing shows and thrilling rides for all adventurous people to enjoy. I hope my suggestions are helpful. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。某外企拟在市区建造一个主题公园，现就相关情况征求市民的意见。要求考生给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封电子邮件，谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad → pleased/delighted 看法：opinion → view/perspective 各种各样的：various → a variety of 建议：suggest → suggest/propose 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, there should also be relaxing shows and thrilling rides for all adventurous people to enjoy. 拓展句：Moreover, there should also be relaxing shows and thrilling rides that all adventurous people can enjoy. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to hear that a theme park will be built in our city. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2]I would expect it to be a water park where we can see the interesting mysteries of the underwater world and do various exciting water activities. (运用了关系副词where引导限制性定语从句) 5．（23-24高二上·安徽淮北·阶段练习）以下是临沂王羲之公园（Wang Xizhi park）的简介，请根据以下内容要点写一篇100词左右的短文。 1. 王羲之公园位于临沂市东部； 2. 在王羲之公园中可以领略书圣（calligrapher）的早期生活以及欣赏王羲之的书法； 3. 可以在公园出口处的戏院里欣赏表演； 4. 在戏院后面的美食街（the Eating Street）可品尝各种各样的食品； 5. 入场费为30元，活动费全免。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Wang Xizhi park, which is located in the east of Linyi city, is a good place for relaxation and amusement.      In this park, not only can you learn a lot about the early life of the great calligrapher but also appreciate the different styles of his unique handwriting. Besides, you can appreciate wonderful performances at the theatre, which is near the exit of the park. By the way, walk to the Eating Street and you can treat yourself to the various food of different flavors. Traveling in this park won’t cost you too much, with the admission fee to the park 30 yuan and all the activities in the park free.     Why not come to enjoy yourself at Wang Xizhi park? You are sure to have a great time. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章介绍临沂王羲之公园。 【详解】1.词汇积累 坐落于：be located in→be situated in 除此之外：besides→in addition 各种各样的：various→a variety of 费用：fee→expense 2.句式拓展 句式转换 原句：Besides, you can appreciate wonderful performances at the theatre, which is near the exit of the park. 拓展句：Besides, it is wonderful performances that you can appreciate at the theatre, which is near the exit of the park. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Wang Xizhi park, which is located in the east of Linyi city, is a good place for relaxation and amusement.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】In this park, not only can you learn a lot about the early life of the great calligrapher but also appreciate the different styles of his unique handwriting. （not only放到句首，后面的句子为部分倒装句）   （2021年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括： (1) 该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)； (2) 该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)； (3) 你对该地方的印象和感受。 注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏1】 A Beautiful Place in China March 19, 2021 By Li Jin Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today. I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。 第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态： 一般现在时结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点①四川的地理位置：中国西南部②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程① 九寨沟是自然保护区②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by 第三步：连词成句 (1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. (2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project. (3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. (4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. (5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys. (6) There are many species of rare plants protected here. (7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. (8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago. (9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇1.表递进关系：what is more2.表转折关系：however3.表示列举：such as, like[高分句型1]What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what引导的主语从句）[高分句型2]Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.（现在分词作状语） 2． （2021年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意并说明原因； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hu 【佳作欣赏2】 Dear Jim, I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours,Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$