UNIT 5 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（外研版2019）
Section Ⅳ Writing
[对应学生用书P114]
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1．写作词汇再现 (1)描写植物的词汇 ①rose/sunflower玫瑰花/向日葵 ②green leaves绿叶 ③stem茎 ④a beautiful flower 一朵美丽的花 (2)描写人的行为的一些词汇 ①behaviour行为 ②perform/behave 表现 ③strange奇怪的 ④elegant优雅的 ⑤walk as slowly as possible尽可能慢慢地走 2．精彩句式再练 完成句子 ①它长到10到40英尺高，有宽阔的绿叶。 It grows 10 to 40 feet high and has broad green leaves． ②另一根茎，长在中空的茎上，结出花朵和果实。 Another stem，which grows through the hollow stem，bears the flowers and the fruit． ③随着它的生长，它慢慢地展开，开出大约100朵小花。 As it grows，it slowly unfolds and shows about 100 small blossoms. ④每个茎上有两片叶子，又长又窄，质地如蜡。 On each stem are two leaves，which are long and narrow with a waxy texture. ⑤每一串香蕉都被称为一只“手”，因为它看起来就像一只手，分开的香蕉就像手指一样。 Each bunch is called a “hand” because it looks almost like a hand with the separate bananas like fingers. |
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写一篇观察日记
[对应学生用书P114]
►文体感知
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1．写观察日记要抓住特点，突出重点，观察景物必须看清楚，看仔细，把特殊的地方写下来。
2．写观察日记要有顺序，从上到下、从左到右、从内到外都可以。
►写作技巧
按照植物生长的前、中、后三个生长周期分三段来写作。
第一段：植物的前段生长周期所见或所做；
第二段：植物的中段生长周期所见或所做；
第三段：植物的后段生长周期所见或所做。
►典例展示
仔细观察下列有关竹子种植的图画，写一篇有关竹子三个生长周期成长的观察日记。
[审题谋篇]
确定体裁、 话题 | 体裁：观察日记 话题：竹子种植 |
确定时态、人称 | 时态：现在完成时和一般现在时 人称：第三人称为主 |
布局文章架构 | 首段：第一周观察情况 中段：第五周观察情况 尾段：第八周观察情况 |
列出核心要点 | 1.在每个花盆的中央种上种子，并加水，把花盆放置在间接日照12～16小时的地方。 2．每个花盆每天都浇水。茎上有几片叶子，叶子又长又窄。 3．它的茎已经长到大约30厘米高，每个茎上都有许多绿叶。 4．竹子已经从花盆中移植到开阔的土壤中。 |
[实践应用]
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1．完成句子
①在每个花盆的中央种上一颗种子。
A single seed has been planted in the center of each pot．
②加水，把花盆放置在间接日照12至16小时的地方。
Water has been added and the pots were put in a spot with 1216 hours of indirect sunlight．
③这样做的目的是防止种子被晒伤。
The purpose of it is to protect the seeds from getting burnt．
④茎上有几片叶子，叶子又长又窄。
Several leaves are on the stems，which are long and narrow．
⑤花盆被放置在间接日照至少6小时的地方。
The pots have been placed in a location with at least 6 hours of indirect sunlight.
⑥直接照射的阳光会灼伤竹子幼苗。
Direct sun will burn the bamboo seedlings．
⑦它的茎已经长到大约30厘米高，每个茎上都有许多绿叶。
The stems have grown to around 30 centimetres tall and each has a number of green leaves.
⑧竹子已经从花盆中移植到开阔的土壤中。
The bamboo plants have been transplanted from pots to open soil．
2．句式升级
⑨用定语从句把句②和句③合并成一个句子
Water has been added and the pots were put in a spot with 1216 hours of indirect sunlight，the purpose of which is to protect the seeds from getting burnt.
把句④改写成倒装句
On the stems are several leaves，which are long and narrow.
3．靓化成篇
结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
[参考范文]
Week 1
A single seed has been planted in the center of each pot.Water has been added and the pots were put in a spot with 1216 hours of indirect sunlight，the purpose of which is to protect the seeds from getting burnt.The seeds are watered daily.Before long，the sprouts start to pop out of the soil.
Week 5
To my delight，on the stems are several leaves，which are long and narrow.The pots have been placed in a location with at least 6 hours of indirect sunlight.Direct sun will burn the bamboo seedlings，so make sure that the plants get about half sun，half shade.
Week 8
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