UNIT 2 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（外研版2019）
Section Ⅳ Writing
[对应学生用书P48]
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1．写作词汇再现 ①recall回想起 ②remind使想起 ③depressed沮丧的 ④gradually逐渐地 ⑤regain重新获得 ⑥upon (my) arrival (我)一到达 ⑦lose interest in对……失去兴趣 ⑧turn down拒绝 ⑨make a difference有影响，有关系 ⑩benefit from受益于 ⑪be full of/be filled with充满 ⑫feel ashamed感到羞愧的 ⑬go up to走上前 2．精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①I engaged actively in helping my parents with housework. ②Lori gets embarrassed(embarrass) if we ask her to sing. ③As my mother likes reading，I made a bookshelf for her by myself. ④Tiring(tire) and laborious as the work was，I was alive to the value of labor and the joy of working. ⑤Doing(do) housework helps me become more independent and responsible. ⑥最近我和妈妈去购物了。 Recently I went shopping with my mother． ⑦试了一件又一件连衣裙后，妈妈还是拿不定主意买哪一件。 After trying on one dress after another，my mother still couldn't decide which one to buy. ⑧我们一边爬山，一边高声歌唱。 We sang loudly as we climbed the mountain． |
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Ⅰ 描述个人经历
[对应学生用书P48]
►文体感知
描述个人经历属于记叙文范畴，主要讲述给自己留下深刻印象的一次有趣、悲伤或有意义的经历。记叙文的写作要注意交代清楚六大要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。
►写作技巧
描述经历一般包括以下三个部分：
1．开头——引出话题，讲述个人的什么经历。
2．主体——具体过程，最困难的事情是什么，你又是如何克服的。/最有趣的事情是什么，你为此做了什么。
3．结尾——收获和感想，从这次经历中学到了什么。
►典例展示
假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。要点如下：
1．做家务的理由；
2．做家务的过程；
3．你的感受。
注意：开头部分已写好。
I am Li Hua，a 17yearold middle school student.
[审题谋篇]
确定体裁、话题 | 体裁：记叙文 话题：描述个人经历 |
确定时态、人称 | 时态：一般过去时 人称：第一人称为主 |
布局文章架构 | 首段：讲述做家务的经历 中段：做家务的过程 |
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| 尾段：做家务的感受 |
列出核心要点 | 1.因忙于学习而未能帮父母做家务 2．打扫房间 3．虽然累，但很快乐 |
[实践应用]
1．完成句子
①我一直忙于学习，很少帮助父母做家务。(be busy with，seldom)
I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.
②我对此感到非常抱歉，开始考虑该怎么做才能帮上忙。(并列句；特殊疑问词＋动词不定式)
I feel quite sorry for that and I begin to think about what to do to help．
③上个星期天我父母出去购物时，我突然想到一个主意。(idea)
Last Sunday when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea．
④我为什么不彻底打扫一下房间呢？(Why don't ...)
Why don't I give the rooms a thorough cleaning?
⑤我把所有的书、报纸和其他东西都有条理地放好了。(put ...in place)
I put all the books，newspapers and other things in place．
⑥我把家具上的灰尘都擦掉了。(wipe off)
I wiped the dust off all the furniture．
⑦我打扫了地板。我发现打扫地板很辛苦。(sweep；it作形式宾语)
I swept the floor and I found it hard to clean the floor．
⑧我父母回来后很惊讶。
My parents came back and were quite surprised．
⑨我妈妈给了我一个大大的拥抱。妈妈的眼神里流露出开心和欣慰。
My mother gave me a big hug and I could see joy and gratification in her eyes．
⑩虽然我很累，但我从来没有感到如此快乐。(让步状语从句)
Although I was tired，I had never felt so happy．
2．句式升级
⑪用非谓语动词作状语升级句②
Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.
⑫用“Why not＋do ...”升级句④
Why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?
3．靓化成篇
结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
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