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专题03 书面表达15篇
(河南中考真题+名校模拟)
1.(2024·河南·中考真题)在日常学习中,有的学生喜欢独自学习,有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式?校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种学习方式中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你的理由,向专栏投稿。
Studying alone
Studying with a group
solve problems on my own
get help from others
keep my mind on schoolwork
share ideas with group members
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Studying alone or studying with a group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2023·河南·中考真题)为了丰富学校大课间活动内容,学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间,强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议,请写出理由;
3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shuttlecock exercises 毽子操;badminton 羽毛球;rope skipping 跳绳
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
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3.(2022·河南·中考真题)阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息,以“How reading improves my English”为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
写作要求:
1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:improve 提高
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2024·河南郑州·三模)在繁忙的学习生活中,你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢?有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心,给你带来乐趣和自信呢?请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己空闲时间经常做的一件事。
要点:
1)你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事;
2)你为什么喜欢做这件事;
3)你从这件事中收获了什么。
要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右。
One thing I always do in my free time
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5.(2024·河南洛阳·二模)假如你是李华,是校报的一名记者。以下是上周你对全校学生最喜欢的运动的调查结果。请写一篇短文给校英文报投稿。
写作要求:
1)简述调查结果:
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6.(2024·河南驻马店·三模)学校校刊进行了一次“最合适的倾诉对象”的问卷调查,统计了同学们在遇到烦恼时,最愿意向谁倾诉,下面的统计图就是调查结果。请你根据以下写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求:
1)描述统计图,可适当发挥;
2)说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由;
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Our school magazine did a survey among students on “the most suitable listeners”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2024·河南省直辖县级单位·一模)生活中总有一些事在不经意间带给我们启迪,促使我们成长,改变了我们的行为处事方式,改变了我们对世界的认知,让我们受益良深。校刊以“One thing that changed my life”为题向全校学生开展征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1.内容包括:
1)哪件事改变了你;
2)它是如何改变你的;
3)你的感悟。
2.要求:
1)必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4)词数100左右。
One thing that changed my life
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8.(2024·河南信阳·三模)近年来,随着科技的发展,电子产品越来越多,学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长,请根据以下要点及要求,用英文写一封倡议书,号召同学们重视书写。
要点:
1.减少对电子产品的依赖,多动手记笔记;
2.养成练书法和写信的习惯。
要求:
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:calligraphy n.书法
Dear fellow students,
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Calligraphy Association
9.(2024·河南周口·三模)英语有句俗语:“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们可以深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性。请你分享一次团队协作的经历,如:体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等,谈谈你对团队协作的看法。
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
2. 100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Teamwork
There is a famous saying, “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”
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10.(2024·河南濮阳·三模)尝试是一种积极的生活态度。它让我们在面对困难时不退缩,不逃避,而是积极地去寻找解决问题的方法。只有敢于尝试,我们才能突破自我,实现更大的成就。请你结合自身体验并根据下面提示及要求,写一篇英语短文,描述一次挑战自我的经历。
1.内容:
1)你曾经尝试过做什么?
2)你是如何突破自我的?
3)这次尝试给你的启示是什么?
2.要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右(已给出的短文开头,不计入总词数)。
Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try.
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11.(2024·河南周口·二模)你们学校将组织题为“Important life skills for teenagers”的英语演讲活动。假如你是李华,请根据下面的思维导图,结合自己的实际情况,用英语写一篇演讲稿,讲述青少年应该具备哪些重要的生活技能及原因。
要求:
1)补全图表中空格信息;
2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good afternoon. It’s my great pleasure to share with you my ideas about important life skills for teenagers. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.(2024·河南新乡·三模)初中生活即将结束,在最后一节英语口语课上,老师让每位同学发言,说一说对三年初中生活的美好回忆,表达感想。请根据以下要点和要求,结合自己的实际情况,写一篇英语短文,为你的发言做准备。
要点:
1.感谢学校:拥有良好的学习环境,优美的风景,丰富的课外活动等;
2.感谢老师:不仅教会你如何学习,也教会你如何做人等;
3.感谢同学:互帮互助,鼓励和支持等;
4.你对中学生活的感想。
要求:
1.文章需包含所有提示要点;
2.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
3.100词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! We’ll leave our junior high school soon.
Looking back on these three years, I really learned a lot. I want to say “thanks”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(2023·河南郑州·三模)在成长过程中,总有一些事情让我们感到恐惧:或害怕昆虫,或害怕猛兽,或害怕黑夜……逃避不是长久之计,只有战胜它才是最好的办法。请根据你的经历谈谈你曾经恐惧什么及原因,你是如何战胜恐惧的,以及你战胜恐惧后的感想。
要求:
1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称 (名人除外);
3.80~100词。
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14.(2024·河南周口·三模)成长不可能一帆风顺,但在成长的道路上,总有一盏明灯,为我们照亮前进的方向。也许是生活中烦恼迷茫时亲人的指点,也许是学习中有问题困惑时老师和同学的帮助。请你以“A light in my life”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向我们介绍一下曾经为你照亮的一盏灯。
1.要点:
1)指引你的一盏灯是什么?
2)你的感悟或收获。
2.要求:
1)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3)词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A light in my life
In the journey of growing up, we may meet some difficulties and challenges. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(2024·河南周口·二模)生命在于运动。如今越来越多的人开始参加各种体育锻炼,有的跑步,有的游泳,有的打篮球,有的甚至参加马拉松比赛。请你结合自己的实际情况谈谈你经常参与的运动项目以及它给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求:1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数100左右。
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参考答案:
1.Possible version 1:
Studying alone or studying with a group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
Possible version 2:
Studying alone or studying with a group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.” With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
【详解】以Possible version 1为例
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式;
第二步,具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①solve problems on my own 自己解决问题
②at the same time 同时
③keep my mind on... 集中注意力在……
④develop a good learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing.(when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句)
②I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.(省略that的宾语从句和并列句)
2.例文
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.
Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
第三步,介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议,请写出理由。
[亮点词汇]
①walk out of走出
②in my opinion依我来看
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句)
3.例文:
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English.
In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How reading improves my English”为题,结合提示内容介绍自己是如何提高英语的,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段从口语、写作和思维能力等方面介绍自己是如何提高英语的;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
4.例文
One thing I always do in my free time
Different people like doing different things in their free time.
As for me, I like swimming when I am free. I began to learn swimming at the age of eight. I was a quick learner. After three weeks, I could swim very well. Swimming is so cool as well as relaxing that I often go swimming in my free time. With the help of swimming, I do more exercise. As a result, I become stronger. What’s more, swimming can reduce my pressure. I feel less stressed after swimming. Swimming can also help me to make more friends.
Swimming is the thing I always do in my free time. I hope everyone can enjoy the fun swimming brings to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要介绍自己从这件事中收获了什么,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍每个人在空闲时间都有喜欢做的事;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢游泳以及原因,并介绍自己从游泳中得到的收获;
第三步,书写结语,表达“每个人都能享受游泳带给我们的乐趣”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for sb就某人而言
②at the age of在……岁时
③as well as和
④with the help of在……的帮助下
⑤as a result最终,结果
[高分句型]
①As for me, I like swimming when I am free. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can enjoy the fun swimming brings to us.(省略引导词that的宾语从句)
5.One possible version:
Last week I did a survey on students’ favorite sports. The result shows that basketball is the most popular among students. Besides, 28% of students like running best. There are 21% of students whose favorite sport is table tennis and only 17% of students enjoy playing football.
As we know, sports play an important role in keeping us healthy. What’s more, they can bring us a lot of fun in daily life. Last but not least, playing sports with classmates can help us develop team spirit.
Therefore, I call on every student to do sports regularly. Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给图片完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简述调查结果;
第二步,介绍运动的好处;
第三步,书写结语,号召学生们做运动。
[亮点词汇]
①do a survey on…对……进行调查
②play an important role发挥重要作用
③daily life日常生活
④last but not least最后但同样重要的是
⑤team spirit团队精神
⑥keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life.(倒装句)
6.One possible version:
Our school magazine did a survey among students on “the most suitable listeners”. The result shows that half of the students would like to talk to friends when they have problems. A quarter of the students think their parents are the best listeners. 20% of the students would turn to teachers and 5% of the students would talk to other people when meeting problems.
For most students, friends know them better. However, as for me, parents are the most suitable persons to talk to. For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents. They can give me some advice through their experiences. They can make me relaxed and have confidence in myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据写作要点介绍调查的结果,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体指出要介绍调查的结果;
第二步,根据统计图分别介绍不同的倾诉对象所占的比例;
第三步,介绍自己的倾诉对象以及原因,并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to sb与某人交谈
②for example例如
③communicate with sb和某人交流
[高分句型]
①The result shows that half of the students would like to talk to friends when they have problems.(that引导的宾语从句,when引导的时间状语从句)
②20% of the students would turn to teachers and 5% of the students would talk to other people when meeting problems.(and连接的并列句)
7.例文
One thing that changed my life
After our school had a policy of reducing the burden of the students and their family, my life changed a lot.
In the past, I still had too much homework to do after school. Even worse, I had to stay at home to study at weekends. And I didn’t have time to get some exercise and I couldn’t do my favourite things. But now, I live a different life. I can finish my homework at school and I can join my favourite club. In my free time, I often do exercise with my friends. We usually play football or tennis together. I think the changes in our life are very good. I’m sure we will have a happy life in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明哪件事改变了你;
第二步,介绍它是如何改变你的;
第三步,介绍你的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home待在家
②in the past在过去
[高分句型]
And I didn’t have time to get some exercise and I couldn’t do my favourite things.(并列结构)
8.例文
Dear fellow students,
With the development of science and technology, more and more students prefer to use electronic products for taking notes and sending messages instead of writing on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as follows.
First, we should use electronic products less often when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practicing calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is of great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off!
Calligraphy Association
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封倡议书;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给要点及要求完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,陈述学生的汉字书写能力大大降低的现状;
第二步,根据所给要点,陈述自己的倡议;
第三步,书写结语,鼓励大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to更喜欢
②instead of而不是
③opportunity机会
④form the habit of…养成……的习惯
⑤take action采取行动
⑥pay off取得成功
[高分句型]
I’m sure our efforts will pay off!(省略that的宾语从句)
9.例文
Teamwork
There is a famous saying, “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” Teamwork plays an important part in our daily life.
I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn’t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates’ help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:本文主要是分享一次团队协作的经历,并谈谈你对团队协作的看法,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,分享一次团队协作的经历;
第三步,谈谈你对团队协作的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①feel stressed out感到压力大
②for the first time第一次
③be worried about担心
[高分句型]
①I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. (动名词作主语,动词不定式作定语)
10. 例文
Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try.
Last term, there was a speech competition in our school. I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. With encouragement from my parents, I decided to give it a try. To prepare for the competition, I studied some speech videos carefully. Then I wrote my speech, and practiced delivering it again and again. Finally, I gave an excellent performance and won the third place. From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. It can help us find and develop our hidden talents and become more confident as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“尝试是一种积极的人生态度。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——尝试的事、如何突破以及启示等均要一一阐述;
第三步:书写结语。表达尝试新事物可以帮助我们发现和发展我们隐藏的才能,同时也让我们变得更加自信。
[亮点词汇]
①have a try试一试
②prepare for为……做准备
③more confident更自信
[高分句型]
①I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. (宾语从句)
11.例文
Good afternoon. It’s my great pleasure to share with you my ideas about important life skills for teenagers.
Managing time properly is very important. It allows us to balance our study and fun. We are expected to stay healthy, as being healthy is important for everything. Besides, managing to solve problems independently means we can rely on ourselves rather than others. Cooking can help us let go of pressure and share in the housework. Being able to communicate with others is important as well, and it can help us to get along well with others and share our thoughts.
Personally, I’m excited to improve my cooking skills, since usually I order food online when I’m alone and I rarely cook. Hopefully, all of us will find our weak points and work on them to become better people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作开头以及要点已给出,考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全表格信息;
第二步,具体介绍青少年应该具备的重要的生活技能及原因;
第三步,书写结尾,表达自己的祝福与愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①rather than而不是
②get along well with相处得好
[高分句型]
①Besides, managing to solve problems independently means we can rely on ourselves rather than others.(宾语从句)
②Personally, I’m excited to improve my cooking skills, since usually I order food online when I’m alone and I rarely cook.(when引导的时间状语从句)
12.例文
Hello everyone, we will leave our junior high school soon.
Looking back at these three days, I really learn a lot. I want to say “thanks”. First, I want to thank our school. It has provided me with a beautiful learning environment. It isn’t big but it is very nice. I enjoy the green trees and beautiful flowers that are everywhere. I studied happily here. Second, I want to thank you, my classmates. You have told me to trust, help and support one another. Third, I want to thank our teachers. Thanks to them, I learned to learn from mistakes and never give up. I did my best and my exam scores are becoming higher and higher.
In short, because of you, my junior high school life has been meaningful. It will leave sweet memories in my heart forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;写作时需包括三年初中生活的美好回忆,对同学,老师表达感想、感恩并适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步,第一段已给出;
第二步,介绍要感谢的人及感谢的事——感恩学校,老师和同学;
第三步,总结对中学生活的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①provided sb with sth为某人提供某物
②learn from从……学习
③In short总之
[高分句型]
①I enjoy the green trees and beautiful flowers that are everywhere.(定语从句)
②I did my best and my exam scores are becoming higher and higher.(比较级)
13.例文:
Everyone has his or her own fear, no matter how big or small it is. Learning how to overcome it is especially important. As for me, running 800 meters has been my biggest fear for the past two years.
The PE course’s final examination requirement is to finish an 800-meter race in 3 minutes and 28 seconds. I was so scared and unconfident as my best record was five minutes. With the pressure, every time I started to run, my legs were so heavy. But thanks to my PE teacher’s help, he made a training plan for me. From then on, I kept running every day, whether it was sunny or rainy. Gradually, I got used to it and developed it into my regular habit.
Now my fear of running has gone. As the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” There is nothing to fear if we put our hearts into it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:题干所给写作要点不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题说明自己的恐惧是什么;
第二步,详细阐述恐惧的原因以及战胜恐惧的经历;
第三步,表达自己的感想和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①no matter不管怎么样
②as for me至于我
③from then on从那时起
④get used to习惯;开始习惯于
[高分句型]
①Everyone has his or her own fear, no matter how big or small it is.(no matter how引导让步状语从句)
②There is nothing to fear if we put our hearts into it.(if引导条件状语从句)
14.
A light in my life
In the journey of growing up, we may meet some difficulties and challenges. For me, the light which helps me go through the dark moments is the love from my parents, teachers and classmates.
Speaking of schoolwork, I used to be bad at math. When I got poor grades, my parents always encouraged me. My teachers and classmates were always ready to lend me a helping hand. What’s more, they offered me lots of useful advice. With their help, I was full of confidence and had courage to face the problems. Now I have made great progress and got good grades in math.
All in all, the light of love from my parents, teachers and classmates is of great importance to me in my life. It has made me stronger and more confident.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:一般过去时和现在完成时;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生不可遗漏要点,不要存在语法错误,注意上下文的衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己生活中的明灯是父母、老师和同学的爱;
第二步,他们对自己的帮助以及自己从他们那里获得了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②encourage鼓励
③What’s more而且
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
Speaking of schoolwork, I used to be bad at math. (非谓语结构)
15.One possible version:
As an old saying goes, life lies in sports. Nowadays more and more people start to take part in all kinds of sports. Sports play an important role in people’s daily life.
As for me, I like playing basketball. I usually play basketball with my friends in my spare time. It’s not only good for my health but also for my mood. By playing basketball, I make a lot of friends who have the same hobby with me. We often support and encourage each other. Playing basketball makes my life colorful and meaningful.
In a word, sports benefit us a lot and let’s play sports regularly.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏材料中的内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。强调“生命在于运动”;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。结合自己的实际情况谈谈你经常参与的运动项目以及它给你带来了哪些好处;
第三步:书写结语。总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② all kinds of各种各样的
③ play an important role in扮演重要角色
④ not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① By playing basketball, I make a lot of friends who have the same hobby with me.(who引导的定语从句)
② Playing basketball makes my life colorful and meaningful.(动名词作主语)
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