UNIT 1 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Section Ⅳ　Writing Ⅰ 人物传记式的语篇写作 介绍自己钦佩的人 ►文体感知 人物传记式的语篇写作以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，并点明为何使你钦佩。介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主，但有时要根据实际情况作出改变。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ►写作技巧 该类语篇的基本结构为： 第一部分：简单介绍人物背景； 第二部分：重点讲述该人物的主要经历和重要成就； 第三部分：你崇拜他/她的原因。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ►典例展示 假如你是高二学生李华，你校下周三将举办一场以“The person I admire most”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： 1．介绍你所敬佩的人； 2．他/她所取得的成就； 3．你从他/她身上学到了什么。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、话题 体裁：演讲稿 话题：介绍自己钦佩的人 确定时态、人称 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时 人称：第三人称为主 布局文章架构 首段：概述人物的基本信息和总体评价 中段：人物的主要经历和重要成就 尾段：描述人物对自己的影响 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 列出核心要点 1.海伦·凯勒于1880年6月出生在美国，是20世纪最伟大的女性之一 2．重病失聪，克服困难，取得成功，帮助他人 3．海伦·凯勒的精神激励着我去努力实现目标 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [话题素材] 1．写作好词再现 ①admire 羡慕；赞美；钦佩 ②intelligence智力；才智 ③respectable值得尊敬的 ④influence影响 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ⑤determined坚决的；坚定的 ⑥responsible负责的 ⑦independent独立的；有主见的 ⑧combine结合 ⑨be born in ...出生于…… ⑩one of the greatest women最伟大的女性之一 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ⑪because of因为 ⑫be devoted/committed to work全身心投入工作 ⑬graduate from ...毕业于…… ⑭achieve one's goal实现目标 ⑮get a degree获得学位 ⑯get over/overcome/conquer the difficulties克服困难 ⑰make tremendous contributions to ...对……作出重大贡献 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ⑱be awarded sth./be presented with sth.被授予…… ⑲be highly thought of 受到高度评价 ⑳set a good example for/to sb.给某人树立一个好榜样 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 2．多彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①In his spare time，__ is he who organizes activities such as outings and parties for us，from which we benefit a lot. ②I show a high sense of team spirit，_____ I think is of great importance for the job. ③You'd better take an active part in class and school activities ________(adapt) yourself to the new surroundings. it which to adapt 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ④我叫李华，一个23岁的女孩，毕业于广东大学。 I am Li Hua，a girl aged 23，__________________ Guangdong University. ⑤亨利出生在一个贫穷的家庭，没有机会上学。 _______________________，Henry had no chance to attend school. ⑥当我在新学期回到学校时，我觉得自己在学习上远远落后于我的同学。 _________________________ in the new term，I felt myself left far behind my classmates in studies. who graduated from Born into a poor family When I returned to school 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①我最敬佩的人是海伦·凯勒。(定语从句) ________________________ is Helen Keller. ②海伦·凯勒于1880年6月出生在美国，是20世纪最伟大的女性之一。(one of the＋形容词最高级＋名词复数) Helen Keller was born in America in June，1880，and ____________________________________________________． The person I admire most she is one of the greatest women in the 20th century 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ③在她19个月大的时候，因为一场重病，她变得又盲又聋。(时间状语从句) ________________________________，she became blind and deaf ____________________________． When she was nineteen months old because of a serious illness 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ④凭着巨大的决心和智慧，再加上老师的技巧和耐心，海伦·凯勒成功地克服了这些挑战。 With great ______________________________，combined with her teacher's skill and patience，Helen Keller managed to _______________________． determination and intelligence overcome the challenges 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ⑤海伦·凯勒从大学毕业并获得了学位。 Helen Keller _________________________________________． ⑥后来，她致力于帮助盲聋儿童，这使她成为一个受人尊敬的人。 __________________________________________________________ and it made her a respectable person. ⑦海伦·凯勒的精神激励我为实现目标而努力工作。 Helen Keller's spirits push me to work hard __________________． graduated from a college and got a degree Later on she devoted all herself to helping the blind and deaf children to achieve my goal 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 2．句式升级 ⑧用分词作状语升级句② ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑨把句⑥改写成含有非限制性定语从句的复合句 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Born in America in June，1880，Helen Keller is one of the greatest women in the 20th century. Later on she devoted all herself to helping the blind and deaf children，which made her a respectable person. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ⑩用强调句式升级句⑦ ___________________________________________________________ It is Helen Keller's spirits that push me to work hard to achieve my goal. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen， The person I admire most is Helen Keller.Born in America in June，1880，Helen Keller is one of the greatest women in the 20th century. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT When she was nineteen months old，she became blind and deaf because of a serious illness.From then on she lived in darkness and silence.When she was seven，her parents called in Miss Sullivan to tutor her.With great determination and intelligence，combined with her teacher's skill and patience，Helen Keller managed to overcome the challenges.Helen Keller graduated from a college and got a degree.Later on she devoted all herself to helping the blind and deaf children，which made her a respectable person. It is Helen Keller's spirits that push me to work hard to achieve my goal. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT ►实战演练 (2020·全国Ⅰ卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： 1．人物简介； 2．尊敬和爱戴的原因； 3．你的感想。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 注意： 1．词数80左右，短文题目不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT The Person I Respect ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 【参考范文】 The Person I Respect My mother is my greatest inspiration.She is 47 years old and works as a cashier in a neighborhood supermarket. I used to think her job was pretty easy，but now that I am older，I realize that my mother deserves respect for doing an amazing job all these years.She works long hours every day for the sake of our family，and she still helps with household chores and spends time with me.My mother takes pride in her work.She faces customers with a smile and works hard even when she is tired. Because of her，I have learned to stay positive even when times are hard. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One of the most pleasant sounds in sports is the whoosh of a basketball moving quickly into the netting.Take away the net and all that is left is the unsatisfying silence of a ball pushing air around as it sails through the rim(篮圈).Did it even go through？Sometimes it's hard to tell. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT So it was really a shame that in a small American town to which Anibal Amador moved from New York，there was no basketball net on any basketball court in any park.The retired worker was a basketball addict and so was his son，Frank，a high school student.When they had time，they would go to the nearby playground in the park and join the players there in playing basketball.However，without the nets，it just didn't feel good and satisfactory.As a matter of fact，no one would like to play that way，for they couldn't shoot the ball to their hearts' content.Anibal often heard the players complain about it from time to time. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT That was really something that bothered Anibal.One evening on their way home，he mentioned the problem to Frank，who suggested they should do something about it.Soon they took action.They took advantage of their spare time and did careful field research into the playgrounds around the neighborhood.Then Anibal visited the website of the town park department which was in charge of the basketball courts，uploaded what they had surveyed and put forward the suggestion that nets should be attached to the rims on basketball courts. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT They waited and waited.After a long time，they finally got the response.The town park department said that nets were non­-durable goods.If they did as suggested，they would have to be putting up nets all the time and maintaining so many basketball courts was a great expense，which they couldn't afford.It wasn't workable to keep nets on all the rims in all the parks，so they were terribly sorry that they couldn't manage it. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Anibal and Frank decided to address the problem on their own.___________________________________________________________ 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Paragraph 2： Everything ready，they came to a nearby basketball court with a stepladder(折梯)．______________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：Anibal Amador(a retired worker)；Frank (Anibal Amador's son)；the players；the town park department Where：in a small American town 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT What：The basketball courts in the town did not have basketball nets on the hoop，and the father and son proposed to the relevant authorities to be equipped with a basketball net on the hoop，but was rejected. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 情感线： 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“Anibal and Frank decided to address the problem on their own.”可推知，第一段可描写阿尼巴尔和弗兰克父子二人决定自己解决这个问题。由续写第二段首句“Everything ready，they came to a nearby basketball court with a stepladder.”可知，他们准备好了一切，带着折梯来到附近的一个篮球场。由此可知第一段要写父子二人想办法做准备的过程。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句提到的“父子二人准备好了一切，带着折梯来到附近的一个篮球场。”可知，该段首先要描述他们安装球筐网的过程；结合上文情节里提到的内容可知，文章结局可描述人们对父子二人热衷公益事业这一善举的肯定与褒扬。 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)Where did they get the solutions? _______________ (2)How did they learn to make nets? _________________ on the Internet/... see videos/... 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT (3)What was the process of making nets like? _________________________________ (4)What was their feeling when all the preparations work were done? ___________ not as simple as they thought/... excited/... 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Paragraph 2： (1)How did they equip the net to the rim? ________________________ (2)What were other people's feelings and behaviors? _____________________ (3)What benefits did the net bring to people? _____________________________________ (4)How did people react to their act? ______________ climbed up ...fasten/... surprised/excited/... produced the most pleasant sounds/... appreciate/... 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1．They gladly found some videos that teach people how to make nets. →_______________________________________________________________ (分词作定语；“疑问词＋动词不定式”作宾语) They gladly found some videos teaching people how to make nets. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 2．They looked at their fruits of labor.They were very overwhelmed with excitement.They couldn't wait to fix them to the rims. →__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (分词作状语；“so ...that ...”句型) Looking at their fruits of labor，they were so overwhelmed with excitement that they couldn't wait to fix them to the rims. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 3．When all the work was done，he was greeted with applauses. →________________________________________________ (独立主格结构) 4．A player ran to shoot his ball，and the ball sailed through the net perfectly and produced a satisfying sound of whoosh. →________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (非限制性定语从句) All the work done，he was greeted with applauses. A player ran to shoot his ball，which sailed through the net perfectly and produced a satisfying sound of whoosh. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT [成美文] Paragraph 1： Anibal and Frank decided to address the problem on their own.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Paragraph 2： Everything ready，they came to a nearby basketball court with a stepladder(折梯)．_______________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： Anibal and Frank decided to address the problem on their own. They surfed the Internet for possible solutions and gladly found some videos teaching people how to make nets.Having bargained with an online shop，they managed to buy many high­-quality cotton strings at a low price.After that，they began making nets as shown in the video.The first one took them great energy，but practice makes perfect and soon they were skilled at it.They worked hard until late into the night.Looking at their fruits of labor，they were so overwhelmed with excitement that they couldn't wait to fix them to the rims. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT Paragraph 2： Everything ready，they came to a nearby basketball court with a stepladder.Frank climbed up the stepladder and carefully balanced atop it，fastening a net to a rim.Many players were attracted there，surprised but excited.All the work done，he was greeted with applauses.A player ran to shoot his ball，which sailed through the net perfectly and produced a satisfying sound of whoosh.It felt so wonderful both for the player and the audience! The people in the town were very grateful for the act of kindness from Anibal and Frank，who were filled with happiness and pride every time they saw people enjoying themselves playing basketball. 返回导航 高中英语　选择性必修 第一册　（人教版） UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT 课时梯级训练（四） 单元综合检测（一） 谢谢观看！ $$