UNIT 4 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版2019）

UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND (单元主题语境：人与社会——旅行经历) Section Ⅳ　Writing 1．写作词汇再现 ①fascinating 极有吸引力的；迷人的 ②attract吸引 ③tourist游客 ④excited兴奋的 ⑤flat平坦的 ⑥steep陡峭的 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ⑦scenery风景；景色 ⑧proud骄傲的 ⑨echo回响；发出回声 jungle (热带)丛林，密林 ⑪rough (表面)粗糙的，不平滑的；艰难的 ⑫adventure冒险(经历)；奇遇 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ⑬emerge浮现，出现 ⑭amazing惊人的；令人惊叹的 ⑮share sth.with sb.与某人分享某事/物 ⑯together with与……一起 ⑰one of the greatest wonders of the world世界上最伟大的奇迹之一 ⑱make it获得成功；(尤指在困难情况下)准时到达 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ⑲take one's breath away令人惊叹 ⑳all the way一路上；自始至终 a big smile一个灿烂的笑容 be anxious to do sth.渴望做某事 show sb.around带领某人参观某地 take flight逃离，逃走 be imprinted on one's heart铭刻在某人的心中 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 2．多彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子/句式升级 ①Last week，I paid a visit to a newly-opened riverside park，_____ is located in the southeast of the city. ②Then we went boating，________(enjoy) the beautiful scenery of the lake. ③When I went into her room，I found her _______(read) a book. which enjoying reading UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ④当我们登上山顶时，我们都感到很高兴。 We all felt delighted ___________________________________． ⑤Although we were tired，we really had a good time. →______________，we really had a good time.(状语从句的省略结构) when we were on the top of the hill Although tired UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Ⅰ　应用文写作 写一封关于旅行的电子邮件 ►文体感知 本单元要求写一封关于旅行的电子邮件，即对出行、游览、参观等的记录。在介绍游览经历时，一般按游览的先后顺序，依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物；另外，要选取印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物，进行较为详细的描写；最后可以描写游玩的感受，深化写作主题。 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ►写作技巧 语篇的基本结构： 1．开头——开门见山，点明写信目的； 2．主体——介绍旅游过程，描述个人感受； 3．结尾——表达期待之情。 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ►典例展示 假定你是李华，最近去过长城游玩。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，与爱尔兰笔友Lisa分享此次经历。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、 话题 体裁：记叙文 话题：分享旅游经历 确定时态、 人称 时态：一般过去时为主 人称：第一、二人称 布局文 章架构 首段：说明写信目的 中段：描写个人旅游经历及感受 尾段：表达期待 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 列出核 心要点 1.写信目的是分享爬长城的经历 2．叙述旅游经历 (1)概述经历(时间、人物、长城简介) (2)爬山经历(所见所闻) (3)个人感受(很累，但很自豪) 3．期待下次一起去长城 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①我很高兴与你分享一段美妙的旅游经历。(fascinating) I'm glad to ________________________________________． ②上周六，我和父母一起去爬长城。(together with) Last Saturday，_______________________________________________． share a fascinating travel experience with you together with my parents，I went climbing the Great Wall UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ③长城是世界上最伟大的奇迹之一，每天吸引着成千上万的游客。(wonder；attract) The Great Wall is __________________________________，and __________________________ every day. ④当我们到达那里时，我们非常兴奋，立即开始爬山。(excited) When we arrived there，____________________ and started climbing immediately. one of the greatest wonders of the world attracts thousands of tourists we were very excited UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ⑤台阶有时平坦，但有时陡峭。(flat) _____________________________，but sometimes steep. ⑥经过两个小时的攀登，我们最终到达了山顶。(make it) After two hours of climbing，we finally __________________． ⑦那里美丽的景色使我惊叹不已。(scenery；take sb.'s breath away) ________________________________________________ The steps sometimes were flat made it to the top The beautiful scenery there took my breath away. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ⑧虽然我很累，但我感到很自豪。 Although I was tired，I _________________． ⑨“不到长城非好汉。”这句名言一直回荡在我的脑海里。(echo；all the way) __________________________________________，“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” felt really proud The famous saying echoed in my mind all the way UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 2．句式升级 用非限制性定语从句和分词作状语合并句②和句③ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Last Saturday，together with my parents，I went climbing the Great Wall，which is one of the greatest wonders of the world，attracting thousands of tourists every day. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ⑪用关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句合并句⑥和句⑦ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑫用状语从句的省略结构升级句⑧ ___________________________________ After two hours of climbing，we finally made it to the top，where the beautiful scenery took my breath away. Although tired，I felt really proud. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] Dear Lisa， I'm glad to share a fascinating travel experience with you. Last Saturday，together with my parents，I went climbing the Great Wall，which is one of the greatest wonders of the world，attracting thousands of tourists every day.When we arrived there，we were so excited that we started climbing immediately.The steps sometimes were flat，but sometimes steep.After two hours of climbing，we finally made it to the top，where the beautiful scenery took my UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 breath away.Although tired，I felt really proud.The famous saying echoed in my mind all the way，“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” Looking forward to going to the Great Wall with you next time. Yours， Li Hua UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 ►实战演练 假定你是李华，今年国庆假期你和爸妈一起到南宁旅游。你的美国朋友Peter来信希望了解你此次旅游的情况，请你写一封信介绍此次旅行的所见所闻所感。内容包括： 1．写信目的； 2．你在南宁旅游的经历(第一天：Qingxiu Mountain青秀山；Zhongshan Food Street中山路美食街→第二天：Anthropology Museum of Guangxi广西民族博物馆)； UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 3．你的旅行感受。 参考词汇：the bronze drum铜鼓；the Zhuang culture壮族文化 注意： 1．词数80 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] Dear Peter， How are you getting on? I'm writing to share with you my two-day holiday in Nanning with my family，which was full of surprises. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 On the first day，we visited Qingxiu Mountain，where we spent hours wandering around the beautiful gardens of the park.The air was so fresh and the variety of flowers was amazing.It was a great place to relax，exercise and enjoy nature.In the evening，we went to Zhongshan Food Street，a must-visit attraction for food lovers.The street was lined with stands selling all types of food.We had a great time there.The second day，we visited Anthropology Museum of Guangxi.The exhibits there ranged from bronze drums to clothing，jewelry and a lot more.We learned much about the Zhuang culture. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 All in all，the trip was fun and even educational.We all enjoyed it.Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Ⅱ　读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 For as long as I could remember，I had wanted to travel into the Amazon jungle.During the last summer break at university，I decided to travel there.I didn't have much money.So I found the least expensive flight to Lima，Peru.Once there，I planned on traveling to the town of La Merced.To get there，however，I had to take a taxi for the next fourteen hours. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 By the time I reached La Merced，I found a hotel and asked the man at the front desk if there were any travel routes into the jungle.His simple answer was “no”．In fact，there was no way to go farther into the jungle except by hiring a boat to travel down the Amazon.However，I found that an impossible choice. At that point，I decided to go out and get something to eat.I had walked less than a minute from the hotel when a rainstorm swept across the town.I raced ahead to the closest restaurant to get out of the rain. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 I took a table by myself and ordered a meal.I was very tired.I was also feeling sorry for myself.I had flown down to Peru and then taken a fourteen-hour journey in a taxi only to discover there was no way to get into the jungle. Then，I saw an old man.He headed over to my table.“Hi，my name's Fritz，” he said in English.With a smile，I introduced myself and we talked for half an hour.I told him my story.He could see I was tired and unhappy，and his eyes softened as he listened. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 “Come with me and stay with me and my wife Helga at our home in the jungle.We have a coffee plantation(种植园) there.You can stay as long as you'd like.At six o'clock tomorrow morning，I'll pick you up at the hotel and take you on a trip into the jungle，” Fritz said. “Thank you very much，” I said.“Six o'clock tomorrow morning.” Honestly，I didn't expect he would appear. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 1： At 6：00 the next morning，I heard a car honking(鸣喇叭)outside my hotel._____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： For the next five days，I was treated as a special guest in his home.____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：Fritz，an old man；Helga，Fritz's wife；the author When：during the last summer break at university Where：a hotel in La Merced and a restaurant What：The author wanted to visit the Amazon jungle.There was no way to go farther into the jungle.Luckily，at the restaurant the author met a man who grew coffee in the jungle and was willing to take him there. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： 情感线：eager→sorry→thankful UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“At 6：00 the next morning，I heard a car honking outside my hotel.”可知，作者一大早就听到旅馆外汽车鸣笛。由此可推知，第一段可描写Fritz前来接作者，以及他们一起前往亚马孙丛林途中的情景。续写第二段首句“For the next five days，I was treated as a special guest in his home.”提到，在接下来的五天里，作者在Fritz家里被当作一位特别的客人。因此第一段结尾处要描写作者顺利地到达Fritz的家。 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句“For the next five days，I was treated as a special guest in his home.(在接下来的五天里，我在他家被当作一位特别的客人。)”可知，该段首先要描写作者作为客人在Fritz家如何被招待；结合上文情节可知，文章结局可描述作者经历这一切之后的感受。 UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)What did “I” see when “I” looked out of the window of the hotel? __________________________________________ (2)What did “I” see on the road to Fritz's home? _____________________________________ (3)What was Fritz's home like? ____________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： (1)What did Fritz and his wife do? _________________________________________________________________________________ (2)How did “I” feel? ___________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 (3)How did “I” feel when saying goodbye? ______________________ (4)What did “I” think about the experience? _____________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [雕句式] 　根据提示升级下列句子 1．I looked out and found Fritz was sitting in a truck with a big smile. →____________________________________________________．(动词＋宾语＋宾语补足语) I looked out and found Fritz sitting in a truck with a big smile UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 2．Branches swept over the windows and the birds that was frightened took flight as we drove through the jungle. →___________________________________________________________________________________．(分词作定语) Branches swept over the windows and frightened birds took flight as we drove through the jungle UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 3．I spent the amazing days in their home.I'd never forget the kindness of Fritz and Helga，and the amazing days. →___________________________________________________________________________________．(定语从句) I'd never forget the kindness of Fritz and Helga，and the amazing days I spent in their home UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [成美文] Paragraph 1： At 6：00 the next morning，I heard a car honking(鸣喇叭) outside my hotel._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： For the next five days，I was treated as a special guest in his home.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] Paragraph 1： At 6：00 the next morning，I heard a car honking(鸣喇叭) outside my hotel.I looked out and found Fritz sitting in a truck with a big smile.I hopped into his truck，and we were off.Within minutes，we were out of La Merced and into the jungle.The road quickly became a rough dirt road.Branches swept over the windows and frightened birds took flight as we drove through the jungle.After a two-hour adventure，we emerged into a clearing with a wooden house and a large vegetable garden. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： For the next five days，I was treated as a special guest in his home.Fritz's wife Helga prepared meals for us.Fritz was more than anxious to show me around his coffee plantation.Their warmth and generosity were imprinted on my mind.When it was time to leave，Fritz drove me back to La Merced.As I said goodbye，I felt a wave of sadness washing over me.I realized I'd probably never see them again.I'd never forget the kindness of Fritz and Helga，and the amazing days I spent in their home. UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND 英语　选择性必修　第二册　R 返回导航 课时梯级训练(十六) 单元综合检测(四) 谢 谢 Fritz sat in a truck with a big smile/ ... rough dirt road/frightened birds/ ... a clearing with a wooden house/a large vegetable garden/ ... prepared meals for everyone/showed the author around their coffee plantation/ ... their warmth and generosity were imprinted on my heart/ ... a wave of sadness/ ... never forget their kindness and the amazing days/ ... $$