内容正文:
祝贺信
必备素材
首段提升表达
1.And I feel very happy for you.
我为你感到非常高兴。
2.I have learned with delight that you...
我很高兴地得知你...
3.You must be very proud of your...
你必须为你感到非常自豪...
4.I would like to show to you my sincere congratulations on...
我谨向您表示衷心的祝贺...
5.Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
请接受我的真诚、衷心、热烈的祝贺。
6.It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
我很高兴能向你表示祝贺。
正文提升表达
1. You are really...
你真的...
2. I know this is surely owing to...
我知道这肯定是由于...
3. ...is a very exciting news!
....是一个非常令人兴奋的消息!
4. Without your perseverance, you wouldn’t have made such a great success!
如果没有你的毅力,你就不会取得如此大的成功!
5. It was a splendid performance / a great triumph.
这是一场精彩的表演/一场伟大的胜利。
6. I know that… This shows that…
我知道......的。这表明了一点。
尾段提升表达
1. With your..., I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.
与你…我相信你无论做什么都会成功的。
2. Kindly let me know when you...
当你……时,请告诉我。
3. I hope...
我希望...
4. My best wishes for your further success.
祝你取得更大的成功。
5. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
祝未来和事业更加成功!
6. May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
愿未来的每一年都能给你带来巨大的幸福和繁荣。
写作模版
(一)
Dear____(称呼),
It is with great pleasure that I hear of____(祝贺的事情).On behalf of____(代表的群体)and in my own name,I am writing to express my heartfelt congratulations.
I was not surprised to hear the exciting news as I know how hard you have worked to achieve the goal.Everybody says that you deserve the honor and this shows your____(能力或特长).You had overcome a variety of obstacles before finally taking the first step to____(实施行动).Also,it is really encouraging for me to see your efforts rewarded.I have complete confidence that in the near future you will____(预祝成功).
Congratulations again.I wish to share your honor and joy.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
(二)
Dear______,
I have learned with delight that you ________(祝贺事由).l would like to show to You my since congratulations on________. You must be________. And I feel very happy for you.
________(对方获得所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to________ (对方过去的努力).It is a reward you richly deserve for your________(对方的优点)。
Kindly let me know when you________(咨询对方何时有空).I hope_________(表达自己的愿望).My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作训练
(一)
(2024·山西运城·三模)假定你是李华,交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖,请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1.向他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)
(2024·江西·三模)假定你是李华,你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 祝贺;
2. 回顾;
3. 期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试,取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 请教学习方法;
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(2024·河南·模拟预测)自“国球进校园”活动开展以来,你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛,你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示诚挚的祝贺;
2.回顾他的努力;
3.向他学习。
注意:
1.词数80左右,邮件开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2024·云南昆明·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校留学生Ethan组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功,你观看时也深受感动,请给他写封邮件,要点如下:
1.表述祝贺;
2.你的感受:
3.其他。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ethan,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(2024高三·云南·一模)假设你是李华,刚得知你校的新西兰交换生Tony在你市组织的相声比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给Tony写一封电子邮件,向他表示祝贺。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(七)
(2024·湖南·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来,你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的祝福;
2. 简要介绍你的礼物;
3. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(2024高三·全国·模拟)假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖,你为他感到骄傲,给他写一封祝贺信,
参考词汇:
“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Speech Contest
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(九)
(2024高三·全国·模拟)假如你是学生会主席李华,你校美国交换生Peter在全市机器人大赛中获得了第一名。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封信,向他表示祝贺。要点如下:
1. 恭喜他获奖;
2. 对他的努力与成功进行积极评价;
3. 准备为他庆祝的方式。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(十)
(2024高三·山东菏泽·三模)假定你是李华,你校交换生Mary在市古筝比赛中获得了一等奖,请你给她写一封邮件,祝贺她取得好成绩。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十一)
(2024高三·河南信阳·三模)假如你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Eric在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他为此付出的努力;
3.表达对他未来的祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为100左右;
参考词汇:汉语演讲比赛 the Chinese Speech Contest
Dear Eric,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十二)
(2024高三·湖南长沙·二模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛,并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。
要求如下:
1.表达祝贺;
2.肯定努力;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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祝贺信
必备素材
首段提升表达
1.And I feel very happy for you.
我为你感到非常高兴。
2.I have learned with delight that you...
我很高兴地得知你...
3.You must be very proud of your...
你必须为你感到非常自豪...
4.I would like to show to you my sincere congratulations on...
我谨向您表示衷心的祝贺...
5.Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
请接受我的真诚、衷心、热烈的祝贺。
6.It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
我很高兴能向你表示祝贺。
正文提升表达
1. You are really...
你真的...
2. I know this is surely owing to...
我知道这肯定是由于...
3. ...is a very exciting news!
....是一个非常令人兴奋的消息!
4. Without your perseverance, you wouldn’t have made such a great success!
如果没有你的毅力,你就不会取得如此大的成功!
5. It was a splendid performance / a great triumph.
这是一场精彩的表演/一场伟大的胜利。
6. I know that… This shows that…
我知道......的。这表明了一点。
尾段提升表达
1. With your..., I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.
与你…我相信你无论做什么都会成功的。
2. Kindly let me know when you...
当你……时,请告诉我。
3. I hope...
我希望...
4. My best wishes for your further success.
祝你取得更大的成功。
5. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
祝未来和事业更加成功!
6. May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
愿未来的每一年都能给你带来巨大的幸福和繁荣。
写作模版
(一)
Dear____(称呼),
It is with great pleasure that I hear of____(祝贺的事情).On behalf of____(代表的群体)and in my own name,I am writing to express my heartfelt congratulations.
I was not surprised to hear the exciting news as I know how hard you have worked to achieve the goal.Everybody says that you deserve the honor and this shows your____(能力或特长).You had overcome a variety of obstacles before finally taking the first step to____(实施行动).Also,it is really encouraging for me to see your efforts rewarded.I have complete confidence that in the near future you will____(预祝成功).
Congratulations again.I wish to share your honor and joy.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
(二)
Dear______,
I have learned with delight that you ________(祝贺事由).l would like to show to You my since congratulations on________. You must be________. And I feel very happy for you.
________(对方获得所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to________ (对方过去的努力).It is a reward you richly deserve for your________(对方的优点)。
Kindly let me know when you________(咨询对方何时有空).I hope_________(表达自己的愿望).My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作训练
(一)
(2024·山西运城·三模)假定你是李华,交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖,请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1.向他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear Terry,
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition! Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment!
Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again, congratulations!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Terry写一封祝贺信,祝贺他在校成语闯关比赛中获得二等奖,内容包括:向他表示祝贺,肯定他的付出。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
非凡的:remarkable→extraordinary
全身心投入:dedication→commitment
证明:testament→proof
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
拓展句:Not only is this achievement a credit to you but it also is a proud moment for our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. (使用了祈使句、that引导宾语从句)
(二)
(2024·江西·三模)假定你是李华,你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 祝贺;
2. 回顾;
3. 期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖这件事写一封信,表达祝愿,回顾过程并表示期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传达:extend→convey
对……感兴趣:be interested in→have an interest in
充裕的:abundant→sufficient
致力于:devote oneself to→commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句:Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. (运用了not only…but also句型、部分倒装句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
(三)
(2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试,取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 请教学习方法;
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success.
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me? Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am?
Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试,取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的:glad→pleased
获得:obtain→gain
鼓励:encourage→motivate
表达:express→extend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
拓展句:Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(四)
(2024·河南·模拟预测)自“国球进校园”活动开展以来,你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛,你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示诚挚的祝贺;
2.回顾他的努力;
3.向他学习。
注意:
1.词数80左右,邮件开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.
As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor. You really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their minds to take up playing table tennis.
Best wishes! Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 James写一封邮件,告诉他在学校举办的第一届乒乓球比赛中取得了第三名的好成绩。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的:sincere →genuine
比赛:match →competition
压力:stress →pressure
激励:inspire →encourage
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress.
拓展句:As you know, not only can the table tennis build up our body but also it can help relieve our stress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.(运用了“so…that…”句型,其中that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor.(运用了现在分词短语作状语,where引导的定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
(五)
(2024·云南昆明·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校留学生Ethan组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功,你观看时也深受感动,请给他写封邮件,要点如下:
1.表述祝贺;
2.你的感受:
3.其他。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ethan,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ethan,
Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches. Not only did the event make a positive difference , but also brought our school community together. Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.
Congratulations on your achievement again. May you continue to touch lives with your kindness and generosity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。要求考生给留学生Ethan写封邮件,祝贺其组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:extend→ express
积极的:positive → optimistic
无疑地:undoubtedly → without doubt
激励:inspire→ encourage
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
拓展句:After witnessing your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches.(运用了as引导的状语从句、what引导的主语从句和how引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.(运用了强调句型)
(六)
(2024高三·云南·一模)假设你是李华,刚得知你校的新西兰交换生Tony在你市组织的相声比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给Tony写一封电子邮件,向他表示祝贺。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tony,
Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the cross-talk competition organized by our city recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have a talent in this area and practice hard. It is your devotion, persistence and efforts that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress. Your success is also an encouragement for me to work hard.
Congratulations again on your success.
yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰交换生Tony写一封电子邮件,祝贺他在你市组织的相声比赛中获得了一等奖。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得到:receive→get
消息:news→information
给予:offer→give
最终:eventually→finally
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the cross-talk competition organized by our city recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句:Because I have received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the cross-talk competition organized by our city recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have a talent in this area and practice hard. (运用了that引导的主语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】It is your devotion, persistence and efforts that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress. (运用了强调句型)
(七)
(2024·湖南·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来,你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的祝福;
2. 简要介绍你的礼物;
3. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
With your birthday approaching, I sincerely wish you a happy birthday!
To convey my sincere wishes, I’ve made some paper cuttings for you. One piece is designed with four Chinese characters that mean “happy birthday”. Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy. There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.
The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来,你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物,要求你给她写一封邮件,表达你的祝福,简要介绍你的礼物以及表达期望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
来临:approach→come near
真诚地:sincerely→heartfelt
代表:stand for→represent
展示:show→display
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
拓展句:The paper cuttings, which I expect to be delivered to you within seven days, are crafted with the hope that they will bring you joy.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.(运用了现在分词作定语,in which引导的定语从句)
(八)
(2024高三·全国·模拟)假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖,你为他感到骄傲,给他写一封祝贺信,
参考词汇:
“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Speech Contest
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Hearing that you have won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to extend my warmest/sincerest congratulations to you on your success.
I understand for sure that it is your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Your fluent Chinese left a deep impression on me. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. I know this is surely owing to your hard work, persistence as well as your determination to achieve your dream. So I firmly believe that if you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国笔友Peter写封信,祝贺他获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:extend→convey
当然:surely→certainly
毅力:persistence→perseverance
因为:owing to→due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your fluent Chinese left a deep impression on me.
拓展句:What left a deep impression on me was your fluent Chinese.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you have won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to extend my warmest/sincerest congratulations to you on your success. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I understand for sure that it is your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和强调句)
(九)
(2024高三·全国·模拟)假如你是学生会主席李华,你校美国交换生Peter在全市机器人大赛中获得了第一名。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封信,向他表示祝贺。要点如下:
1. 恭喜他获奖;
2. 对他的努力与成功进行积极评价;
3. 准备为他庆祝的方式。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I am much delighted to learn that you have come in first in the city’s robot contest. I am writing to offer you my sincere congratulations.
It is quite inspiring and worth celebrating, as no one from our school has ever won the contest before. It is a challenging competition but you made it. I know how talented you are in designing robots and how hard you have worked to achieve this goal. Undoubtedly, your success is a great honor for both you and our school. We are all proud of you.
By the way, a celebration party will be held for you this Sunday. Looking forward to your coming.
I wish you a further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以学生会主席李华的身份,向在全市机器人大赛中获得了第一名的交换生Peter写一封祝贺信,需表示祝贺,给予他积极评价,并介绍为他准备的庆祝方式。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
给予:offer→give, provide
真诚的:sincere→genuine
鼓舞人心的:inspiring→encouraging, inspirational
实现:achieve→realize, fulfill
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, your success is a great honor for both you and our school.
拓展句:There is no doubt that your success is a great honor for both you and our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am much delighted to learn that you have come in first in the city’s robot contest. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is quite inspiring and worth celebrating, as no one from our school has ever won the contest before. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
(十)
(2024高三·山东菏泽·三模)假定你是李华,你校交换生Mary在市古筝比赛中获得了一等奖,请你给她写一封邮件,祝贺她取得好成绩。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I’m thrilled to hear that you won the first prize in the Guzheng competition held in the city. Congratulations! Your dedication and hard work have truly paid off. I am so proud of you for achieving such an outstanding result.
Your performance was truly wonderful, and your passion for music was evident in every note you played. You have not only brought honour to our school but also inspired many of us with your talent and perseverance.
Once again, congratulations on your well-deserved victory. Keep up the good work, and I am sure you will continue to achieve great things in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作,你校交换生Mary在市古筝比赛中获得了一等奖,请你给她写一封邮件,祝贺她取得好成绩。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
对……感到骄傲:be proud of→take pride in
激励:inspire→motivate
实现:achieve→accomplish
2.句式拓展
变为倒装句
原句:You have not only brought honour to our school but also inspired many of us with your talent and perseverance.
拓展句:Not only have you brought honour to our school but also inspired many of us with your talent and perseverance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Your performance was truly wonderful, and your passion for music was evident in every note you played. (运用了省略that的定语从句)
【高分句型2】You have not only brought honour to our school but also inspired many of us with your talent and perseverance. (运用了 not only...but also...引导句子)
(十一)
(2024高三·河南信阳·三模)假如你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Eric在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他为此付出的努力;
3.表达对他未来的祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为100左右;
参考词汇:汉语演讲比赛 the Chinese Speech Contest
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you on your first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.
How excited I was when I heard the good news! I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese, which must have taken you countless hours to practice. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window.
Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰笔友Eric写一封祝贺信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:extend→express
意识到:be well aware→realize
无数的:countless→innumerable
方法:methods→approach
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window.
拓展句:If you want to see the world through a new window, having a good command of Chinese will do the trick.
【点睛】[高分句型1] How excited I was when I heard the good news! (运用了感叹句及when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese, which must have taken you countless hours to practice. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
(十二)
(2024高三·湖南长沙·二模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛,并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。
要求如下:
1.表达祝贺;
2.肯定努力;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. Please accept my sincerest congratulations!
But indeed no one could have been more deserving of the champion than you because I know how hard you have been learning Chinese. It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture.
Wish you future success in Chinese study. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Chris写一封回信,祝贺他比赛获得冠军。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
快乐:happy→merry
以……为骄傲:be proud of→take pride in
取得回报:pay off→get in return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you.
拓展句:This is a special and happy moment for you, when I’m very proud of you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句)
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