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慰问信 必备素材 首句提升表达 1 We are very sorry to learn that... 我们非常遗憾地得知····· 2 I was deeply concerned when I learned that... 当我听说···.·.,我非常担心。 3 I am so sorry to hear the news about... 听到······的消息我很难过。 4 I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in... 听闻······地震的消息我很震惊。 5 I just heard that you've been on the sickness last week. 我刚刚听说你上星期病了。 6 I am deeply sorry to hear that... 听到······我深感难过。 7 I just can't tell you how sorry I am to hear that... 听到······,我都无法告诉你我有多么的难过。 8 I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 得知你身患肺癌并且给你带来了巨大痛苦，我感到非常遗憾。 正文提升表达 1 Please extend our deep sympathy to your family. 请向你的家人转达我们深切的同情。 2 I couldn't believe that... 我无法相信··. 3 I am sure you will succeed in... 我相信你将会在·····取得成功。 4 We are filled with deep sorrow. 我们感到很悲痛。 5 I just want to let you know how concerned I am. 我只是想让你知道我有多么的担心。 6 We hope our caring will make your sorrow easier to bear. 我们希望我们的关心会让你的悲伤更容易承受。 7 If we can be of any help, please don't hesitate to let us know. 如果我们能有所帮助，请不要犹豫，让我们知道。 8 I shall be very much delighted if I can be of any service to you. 如果我能为你做点事的话，我将非常高兴。 9 Our thoughts are with you in this time of sorrow. 在这个悲伤的时刻，我们的心与你在一起。 10 So, stand up and fight against the disease! 因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧！ 11 Please don't be too worried, everything will be fine. 请不要太担心，一切都会好起来的。 12 Only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster. 我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。 13 I hope you are getting some relief from the pain. 我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。 14 There is no doubt that it is your health that really matters. 毫无疑问，健康是最重要的。 尾句提升表达 1 If there is anything I can do to help you, please let me know. 如果需要我的帮助，请告知我。 2 We are looking forward to your speedy and full recovery. 我们希望你能尽快完全康复。 3 Best wishes for your speedy recovery. 祝你很快康复。 4 We are all hoping you will be back soon. 大家都希望你早日归来。 5 I'd like to send you my best wishes for your quiek return to good health. 衷心地祝愿您早日康复。 6 Your many friends are hoping for your quick return to health early recovery. 你的诸位好友真心希望你早日康复。 写作模板 Dear, __________（称呼） I am__________（姓名）I am so sorry to hear the news that__________（对方的遭遇）I am sure it won't be long before you__________（希望） Thinking about your present situation, we can't stand by and do nothing. So, __________.（帮助或建议一）Besides, __________.（帮助或建议二） In the end, I do hope that__________.（鼓励对方）。 Good luck and best wishes to you! Yours sincerely, __________（署名） 写作训练 （一） （2024·湖北襄阳·三模）假如你是李华，你校外教 Victor 最近生病了，请给他写封电子邮件表示安慰，并分享你校最近举办的师生国画作品展活动，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.展览时间、地点； 3.观展感受和收获。 注意： 1.写作字数应为80个左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Victor, I hope this letter finds you in a better state of health. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2024·湖南长沙·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alice进入了新学校学习，因难以适应新环境而感到苦恼，发邮件来向你求助。请给她回一封信，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.提出建议； 3.祝愿顺利。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alice, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua （三） （2024·云南曲靖·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Julia发来邮件，说一个同学的恶作剧（prank）让她的自尊心受到了伤害，而且对自我产生了怀疑。请你给她回一封邮件安慰她。注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （2024·浙江宁波·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你，最近他参加汉语书法比赛没有获奖，心情不好，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 表示理解并安慰；2. 给予鼓励和建议；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Alex, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （五） （2024·四川成都·三模）假定你是李华，你在美国友好学校交流期间认识的朋友Smith因为家乡遭遇了飓风，心情低落。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括： 1. 表示关心; 2. 介绍同学们可以提供给灾区的帮助; 3. 鼓励他振作起来重建家园 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Smith, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （六） （2024·广西·一模）假定你是李华，你班交换生Peter为了保持健康每天做体育运动，但最近囚为运动过量而拉伤了腿部肌肉。请你给他写一封邮件，表示关心，内容包括： 1．表示安慰; 2．提出建议并表示祝愿。 注意：1．词数80左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：拉伤肌肉strain a muscle ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·青海西宁·三模）假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信，内容包括： 1. 你所了解的灾情； 2. 你的担忧； 3. 你的帮助。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2024·河南安阳·二模）假定你是李华，你校交换生 Ryan 在骑车上学的途中受伤。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示慰问； 2. 骑行安全建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （九） （2024·江西九江·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael最近要参加伦敦举办的中国文化节，现因难以确定选题而烦恼。为此，请你写一封慰问信，内容包括： 1.表达宽慰；2.推荐主题；3.表示祝愿。 注意: 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯， 2.词数80左右。 Dear Michael, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十） （2024内蒙古二模）假定你是某国际学校的校学生会主席，你校将举行“校园汉服秀”活动，请你代表学校在开幕式上用英语致开幕辞。具体内容如下： 1、表达欢迎； 2、简介内容； 3、预祝活动成功。 请注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇: Campus Hanfu Show 校园汉服秀 Dear friends, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十一） （2024·山东烟台·二模）假设你是高一学生李华，你从新闻上得知你的好友Peter的家乡发生了地震，请你给他写一封英文慰问信。 要点如下： 1. 对其表示关心和安慰； 2. 使其增加重建家园的信心。 注意： 1. 词数80-100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十二） （2024·北京·二模）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim给你发来邮件，提到他申请2024年巴黎奥运会志愿者落选，请你给他回一封邮件， 内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 建议以其它方式关注奥运会。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 慰问信 必备素材 首句提升表达 1 We are very sorry to learn that... 我们非常遗憾地得知····· 2 I was deeply concerned when I learned that... 当我听说···.·.,我非常担心。 3 I am so sorry to hear the news about... 听到······的消息我很难过。 4 I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in... 听闻······地震的消息我很震惊。 5 I just heard that you've been on the sickness last week. 我刚刚听说你上星期病了。 6 I am deeply sorry to hear that... 听到······我深感难过。 7 I just can't tell you how sorry I am to hear that... 听到······,我都无法告诉你我有多么的难过。 8 I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 得知你身患肺癌并且给你带来了巨大痛苦，我感到非常遗憾。 正文提升表达 1 Please extend our deep sympathy to your family. 请向你的家人转达我们深切的同情。 2 I couldn't believe that... 我无法相信··. 3 I am sure you will succeed in... 我相信你将会在·····取得成功。 4 We are filled with deep sorrow. 我们感到很悲痛。 5 I just want to let you know how concerned I am. 我只是想让你知道我有多么的担心。 6 We hope our caring will make your sorrow easier to bear. 我们希望我们的关心会让你的悲伤更容易承受。 7 If we can be of any help, please don't hesitate to let us know. 如果我们能有所帮助，请不要犹豫，让我们知道。 8 I shall be very much delighted if I can be of any service to you. 如果我能为你做点事的话，我将非常高兴。 9 Our thoughts are with you in this time of sorrow. 在这个悲伤的时刻，我们的心与你在一起。 10 So, stand up and fight against the disease! 因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧！ 11 Please don't be too worried, everything will be fine. 请不要太担心，一切都会好起来的。 12 Only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster. 我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。 13 I hope you are getting some relief from the pain. 我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。 14 There is no doubt that it is your health that really matters. 毫无疑问，健康是最重要的。 尾句提升表达 1 If there is anything I can do to help you, please let me know. 如果需要我的帮助，请告知我。 2 We are looking forward to your speedy and full recovery. 我们希望你能尽快完全康复。 3 Best wishes for your speedy recovery. 祝你很快康复。 4 We are all hoping you will be back soon. 大家都希望你早日归来。 5 I'd like to send you my best wishes for your quiek return to good health. 衷心地祝愿您早日康复。 6 Your many friends are hoping for your quick return to health early recovery. 你的诸位好友真心希望你早日康复。 写作模板 Dear, __________（称呼） I am__________（姓名）I am so sorry to hear the news that__________（对方的遭遇）I am sure it won't be long before you__________（希望） Thinking about your present situation, we can't stand by and do nothing. So, __________.（帮助或建议一）Besides, __________.（帮助或建议二） In the end, I do hope that__________.（鼓励对方）。 Good luck and best wishes to you! Yours sincerely, __________（署名） 写作训练 （一） （2024·湖北襄阳·三模）假如你是李华，你校外教 Victor 最近生病了，请给他写封电子邮件表示安慰，并分享你校最近举办的师生国画作品展活动，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.展览时间、地点； 3.观展感受和收获。 注意： 1.写作字数应为80个左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Victor, I hope this letter finds you in a better state of health. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Victor, I hope this letter finds you in a better state of health. Upon hearing of your illness, I am really concerned and send you my best wishes for a speedy recovery. I think it might cheer you up a little to know the updates here at school. In your absence, the school has been buzzing with activities. Last week witnessed a wonderful exhibition of traditional Chinese painting both by teachers and students in the school's gallery. Some of the paintings are of exceptional beauty and quality. I found myself particularly drawn to relaxing landscape paintings, which temporarily freed me from the daily routines. Hopefully you can make it to the one-month exhibition after your recovery. Take care of yourself and get better. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给最近生病的外教Victor写电子邮件表示安慰，并分享学校最近举办的师生国画作品展活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 希望：hope→ wish 担忧的：concerned→ worried 非凡的：exceptional→ extraordinary 照顾：take care of→ look after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Upon hearing of your illness, I am really concerned and send you my best wishes for a speedy recovery. 拓展句：I am really concerned and send you my best wishes for a speedy recovery as soon as I hear of your illness. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope this letter finds you in a better state of health.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】I found myself particularly drawn to relaxing landscape paintings, which temporarily freed me from the daily routines.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) （二） （2024·湖南长沙·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alice进入了新学校学习，因难以适应新环境而感到苦恼，发邮件来向你求助。请给她回一封信，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.提出建议； 3.祝愿顺利。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alice, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】Dear Alice,     I’m sorry to hear that you find it difficult to fit into the new environment since you entered a new senior high school. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. Actually, it is not unusual for teenagers like you to meet with such problems. Perhaps the following suggestions will be helpful to you. First of all, I recommend that you exchange ideas with your classmates as often as possible. Only in this way can you know each other better. Besides, it is also a good idea to take an active part in school activities, where you can get more help and make more friends. Finally, faced with challenges or awkward problems, why not turn to your teachers for help? I’m sure they will be always there for you. In my eyes, you are confident, courageous, and cannot be defeated! I do believe that you will get through the hard time and embrace a brighter future. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生英国笔友Alice写封回信，帮助她走出因为刚刚转学导致的困境。 【详解】1.词汇积累 适应：fit into→ adapt to 焦虑的：anxious→ tense 首先：first of all→to begin with 此外：besides→ what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Finally, faced with challenges or awkward problems, why not turn to your teachers for help? 拓展句：Finally, when you are faced with challenges or awkward problems, why not turn to your teachers for help? 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you find it difficult to fit into the new environment since you entered a new senior high school.（运用了that引导宾语从句，since引导时间状语从句） [高分句型2]Only in this way can you know each other better.（运用了部分倒装） （三） （2024·云南曲靖·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Julia发来邮件，说一个同学的恶作剧（prank）让她的自尊心受到了伤害，而且对自我产生了怀疑。请你给她回一封邮件安慰她。注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Julia, I’m really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-esteem and made you doubt yourself. Please remember that your worth is not determined by others’ actions or words. You are a strong and incredible person, full of unique qualities and strengths. Don’t let this incident define you. Surround yourself with people who truly appreciate and support you. Take some time to reflect on the things that make you special, and focus on nurturing your self-confidence. If there’s anything I can do to support you, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生回复英国笔友Julia的邮件，对她在邮件中描述的因恶作剧而受到伤害的情况给予安慰。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 伤害：hurt→injure 决定：determine→decide 了不起的：incredible→remarkable, extraordinary 专注于：focus on→concentrate on 培养：nurture→develop, cultivate 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：You are a strong and incredible person, full of unique qualities and strengths. 拓展句：You are a strong and incredible person, who is full of unique qualities and strengths. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-esteem and made you doubt yourself. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Please remember that your worth is not determined by others’ actions or words. (运用了that引导宾语从句) （四） （2024·浙江宁波·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你，最近他参加汉语书法比赛没有获奖，心情不好，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 表示理解并安慰；2. 给予鼓励和建议；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Alex, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Alex, Learning that you didn’t win the Chinese calligraphy contest, I understand how disappointing it can be and please accept my sincere sympathies. However, you should be proud of yourself for even participating in such a challenging event. It takes dedication to learn a new skill like Chinese calligraphy. Try to find a good teacher who can give you constructive feedback and keep practicing. Every failure is a stepping stone to success. Hope you’ll continue to pursue your passion for Chinese calligraphy and wish you all the best in your future endeavors. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生给英国朋友Alex发邮件，安慰他因参加汉语书法比赛没有获奖而心情不好。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 追求：pursue→chase 比赛：contest→competition/game 真诚的：sincere→genuine 建议：feedback→suggestion/proposal 2.句式拓展： 简单句变复杂句 原句：However, you should be proud of yourself for even participating in such a challenging event. 拓展句：However, you should be proud of yourself for even participating in such an event, which is so challenging. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Learning that you didn’t win the Chinese calligraphy contest, I understand how disappointing it can be and please accept my sincere sympathies.(运用了现在分词作状语和how引导宾语从句。) 【高分句型2】 Try to find a good teacher who can give you constructive feedback and keep practicing.(运用了who引导定语从句。) （五） （2024·四川成都·三模）假定你是李华，你在美国友好学校交流期间认识的朋友Smith因为家乡遭遇了飓风，心情低落。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括： 1. 表示关心; 2. 介绍同学们可以提供给灾区的帮助; 3. 鼓励他振作起来重建家园 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Smith, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, I was shocked at the news about the hurricane in your hometown. It’s understandable that you sink into sadness. Upon hearing the news, all the students in our school volunteer to lend a helping hand. We have raised some money, which will be put into your bank account. Besides, we have also collected some basic necessities, such as clothes and tents for the victims. We hope our small deeds can be of some help. Great damage as the hurricane has caused, I firmly believe things will get better. Cheer up and pick up your courage to restore peace and harmony to your family. Anyway, there will always be a silver tint in the clouds of grief! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。现要求考生给美国友好学校交流期间认识的朋友Smith写一封电子邮件，就他家乡遭遇了飓风表示关心。 【详解】1.词汇积累 悲伤：sadness →sorrow 而且：besides→ moreover 帮助：help→ assistance 勇气：courage → bravery 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Upon hearing the news, all the students in our school volunteer to lend a helping hand. 拓展句：when we heard the news, all the students in our school volunteered to lend a helping hand. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 It’s understandable that you sink into sadness.（运用了that引导的主语从句） 【高分句型2】We have raised some money, which will be put into your bank account. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） （六） （2024·广西·一模）假定你是李华，你班交换生Peter为了保持健康每天做体育运动，但最近囚为运动过量而拉伤了腿部肌肉。请你给他写一封邮件，表示关心，内容包括： 1．表示安慰; 2．提出建议并表示祝愿。 注意：1．词数80左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：拉伤肌肉strain a muscle ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Peter, I hope this email finds you well. I was sorry to hear that you’ve strained your leg muscle due to excessive exercise. Your dedication to staying fit is admirable, but it’s crucial to strike a balance to avoid such injuries. Rest assured, a minor setback like this won’t keep you down for long. I suggest taking adequate rest, applying ice packs to reduce swelling, and consulting a physiotherapist for professional advice. Remember, we’re all here to support you. I wish you a speedy recovery and hope to see you back in action soon, but this time, with a little more caution. Take care! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你班交换生Peter为了保持健康每天做体育运动，但最近囚为运动过量而拉伤了腿部肌肉，要求考生给他写一封邮件，表示关心。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 关键的：crucial→essential 建议：suggest→advise 足够的：adequate→enough 小心：caution→carefulness 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Your dedication to staying fit is admirable, but it’s crucial to strike a balance to avoid such injuries. 拓展句：While your dedication to staying fit is admirable, it is also crucial that you strike a balance to avoid sustaining such injuries. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I was sorry to hear that you’ve strained your leg muscle due to excessive exercise.(that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]I suggest taking adequate rest, applying ice packs to reduce swelling, and consulting a physiotherapist for professional advice.(动名词作宾语) （七） （2024·青海西宁·三模）假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信，内容包括： 1. 你所了解的灾情； 2. 你的担忧； 3. 你的帮助。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Mike, How are you doing? I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. I’m really worried about you, your family and all your friends there. I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe. I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty. Best wishes to you all! Your sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给家乡最近发生大地震的笔友Mike写一封慰问信，需描述自己所了解的灾情，表达担忧，并说明自己的帮助。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 难过的：sorry→sad, sorrowful 糟糕的：terrible→dreadful, awful, horrible 发生：happen→occur, take place 困难的：difficult→hard, tough 为……担心：be worried about→be concerned about 一定程度上：to some extent→in some way, to a certain extent, to some degree 克服：get over→conquer, overcome 困难：difficulty→obstacle, barrier 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty. 拓展句：I’ve collected some donations from my classmates, which, to some extent, may help you get over the difficulty. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hear的宾语) [高分句型2] I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. (运用了连接副词how引导名词性从句作imagine的宾语) [高分句型3] I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hope的同位语) （八） （2024·河南安阳·二模）假定你是李华，你校交换生 Ryan 在骑车上学的途中受伤。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示慰问； 2. 骑行安全建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Ryan, I'm sorry to hear that you got injured when riding to school. I am worried about you. How are you feeling now? If you need any help, please don't hesitate to let me know. Now, I want to share some safety tips for cycling. First of all, obey traffic rules just like you expect cars to. A lot of cycling accidents result from cyclists riding through red lights and stop signs. In addition, it is necessary to watch out for opening car doors, which poses a significant danger. The most important is to avoid texting, phone calls, or listening to music while riding your bike. With every good wish for your swift and full recovery. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校交换生Ryan在骑车上学的途中受伤这一情况，给他写一封邮件表示慰问并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 担心的：worried→concerned 此外：in addition → what’s more 安全：safety→security 当心：watch out for → look out for 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A lot of cycling accidents result from cyclists riding through red lights and stop signs. 拓展句：Because of the fact that cyclists often ride through red lights and stop signs, a significant number of cycling accidents occur. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm sorry to hear that you got injured when riding to school. (运用了that引导宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句的省略) 【高分句型2】In addition, it is necessary to watch out for opening car doors, which poses a significant danger. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) （九） （2024·江西九江·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael最近要参加伦敦举办的中国文化节，现因难以确定选题而烦恼。为此，请你写一封慰问信，内容包括： 1.表达宽慰；2.推荐主题；3.表示祝愿。 注意: 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯， 2.词数80左右。 Dear Michael, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Michael, So delighted to learn that your school is going to hold the annual “Chinese Culture Festival”, I’m here sharing some of my advice with you. Firstly, it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese poetry recitation, through which students can taste the charm of the Chinese language. Additionally, a speech concerning Chinese traditional festivals is highly recommended, as unique customs and traditions behind each festival will undoubtedly attract students. I’m fully convinced that your festival will be a joyful and fruitful activity, which will spread brilliant Chinese culture to a larger extent. Best wishes. Yours , Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Michael写信，推荐其参加伦敦举办的中国文化节的选题。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：advice→suggestion 首先：firstly→to begin with 吸引：attract→appeal to 毫无疑问：undoubtedly→out of question 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Additionally, a speech concerning Chinese traditional festivals is highly recommended, as unique customs and traditions behind each festival will undoubtedly attract students. 拓展句：Additionally, a speech which concerns Chinese traditional festivals is highly recommended, as unique customs and traditions behind each festival will undoubtedly attract students. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese poetry recitation, through which students can taste the charm of the Chinese language.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] I’m fully convinced that your festival will be a joyful and fruitful activity, which will spread brilliant Chinese culture to a larger extent.（运用了that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句） （十） （2024内蒙古二模）假定你是某国际学校的校学生会主席，你校将举行“校园汉服秀”活动，请你代表学校在开幕式上用英语致开幕辞。具体内容如下： 1、表达欢迎； 2、简介内容； 3、预祝活动成功。 请注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇: Campus Hanfu Show 校园汉服秀 Dear friends, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Sample 1 Dear friends, At the very beginning, I’d like to extend our warmest welcome to your active engagement in this “Campus Hanfu Show”. As is universally acknowledged, Hanfu is the characteristic clothing for the Han ethnic group for more than three millennia. To promote our better understanding of it, an authoritative expert in this field is invited to give us a wonderful lecture regarding its origin, development and its far-reaching influence. Afterwards, a Q&A session will be followed for us to interact with the professor. Apart from that, as the highlight of the activity, everyone can experience the unparalleled appeal of Hanfu in person by trying it on or even designing Hanfu, which will undoubtedly bring us a strong sense of national identity. I bet you are bound to have a pleasant and rewarding time here. Wish this event a resounding success! Sample 2 Dear friends, It’s great honor to represent my school to deliver the opening speech. First, I would like to extend a warm welcome to your arrival and participation in this “Campus Hanfu Show”. As we know, as one of traditional costumes in China, Hanfu not only carries rich cultural connotation but also has far-reaching historical significance. Therefore, we invite a famous professor in this field to make a wonderful lecture about its origin and development, hoping you can have a better understanding of Hanfu and Chinese culture. Besides, during this activity, you can also experience the charm of Hanfu by trying it on and taking photos and I believe you will have a pleasant time. Finally, wish this event a success and may you be happy once again! Sample 3 Dear friends, Welcome to attend Campus Hanfu Show! As we all know, Hanfu is the traditional costume of the Han nationality, which has a long and splendid history. Therefore, the purpose of this activity is to let students have a good knowledge of Hanfu, and jointly inherit and carry forward the traditional Chinese culture. Here, various style s of Hanfu designed by students will be displayed. Trying it on helps you immerse yourselves in it. I believe your participation will inject new vitality and strength into the ancient Chinese culture. Finally, I wish this event a complete success. May you have fun here! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为学校将举行的“校园汉服秀”活动写一篇英语开幕辞，具体内容如下：1、表达欢迎；2、简介内容；3、预祝活动成功。 【详解】1.词汇积累 促进：promote→boost 影响：influence→impact 无与伦比的：unparalleled→unrivalled 令人愉快的：pleasant→enjoyable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To promote our better understanding of it, an authoritative expert in this field is invited to give us a wonderful lecture regarding its origin, development and its far-reaching influence. 拓展句：To promote our better understanding of it, we have invited an authoritative expert in this field to give us a wonderful lecture, which will cover its origin, development, and its far-reaching influence. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As is universally acknowledged, Hanfu is the characteristic clothing for the Han ethnic group for more than three millennia. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Apart from that, as the highlight of the activity, everyone can experience the unparalleled appeal of Hanfu in person by trying it on or even designing Hanfu, which will undoubtedly bring us a strong sense of national identity. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) （十一） （2024·山东烟台·二模）假设你是高一学生李华，你从新闻上得知你的好友Peter的家乡发生了地震，请你给他写一封英文慰问信。 要点如下： 1. 对其表示关心和安慰； 2. 使其增加重建家园的信心。 注意： 1. 词数80-100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I was shocked at the news that an earthquake hit your hometown. I’m really worried about you and your family. Are you all right? Luckily, the earthquake wasn’t so serious and no buildings collapsed. It’s reported that the local government has already taken measures to help people rebuild their homes. I hope everything will return to normal soon. Please don’t lose heart and keep on working hard. With joint efforts, we can surely overcome any difficulty. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, LiHua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给家乡发生地震的好友Peter写一封慰问信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 袭击：hit→strike 担心的：worried→concerned 幸运的是：luckily→fortunately 克服：overcome→get over 2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：It’s reported that the local government has already taken measures to help people rebuild their homes. 拓展句：The local government is reported to have already taken measures to help people rebuild their homes. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I was shocked at the news that an earthquake hit your hometown. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】It’s reported that the local government has already taken measures to help people rebuild their homes. (运用了that引导的主语从句) （十二） （2024·北京·二模）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim给你发来邮件，提到他申请2024年巴黎奥运会志愿者落选，请你给他回一封邮件， 内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 建议以其它方式关注奥运会。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m really sorry to hear that you didn’t make it. It is natural to feel disappointed. However, there is no need to worry, as there are various ways to get involved. Even if you can’t come in person, you can log onto the official website or apps to enjoy live or recorded broadcasts, which allows you to follow the events almost in real time. Also you can find reports on everyday life of the athletes in Paris. What’s more, the audience are encouraged to share their comments on social media while enjoying the games. I think it might be interesting to share your thoughts online and meanwhile interact with both fans and athletes. I believe you will enjoy yourself, so have fun in a new way! Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回邮件安慰他巴黎奥运会志愿者落选并建议其它方式让他关注奥运会。 【详解】1.词汇积累 各种各样的：various→all kinds of 亲自：in person→in the flesh 同时：meanwhile→at the same time 玩得开心：have fun→have a good time 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m really sorry to hear that you didn’t make it. 拓展句：Hearing that you didn’t make it, I am really sorry. 【点睛】[高分句型1] However, there is no need to worry, as there are various ways to get involved.（运用了as引导原因状语从句） [高分句型2] Even if you can’t come in person, you can log onto the official website or apps to enjoy live or recorded broadcasts, which allows you to follow the events almost in real time.（运用了even if引导让步状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句） 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$